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it's my first time to right a fic here. so i wish at least one of the reader of it will like it and the rest would hate it. just kidding.XD


here's the chapter list:



Characters:


Some of the characters will appear in the next chaps.

>>>Anyway, the format of this fic is like h4cksign's fic in yamada ryosuke's group.

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Dozo~!

Van: Ohayou! *smiles*
everyone: ohayou!
Geh: Maki! Have you heard, Inoo Kei's got a girlfriend already!
Van: EEEH?! *the whole school shakes*
Geh: and hsj saw them together, even kissing!
Van: M-M-MAJIDE?! *the whole school shakes again*
Hsj: H-hai..... *controls her giggle*
Van: Ne, i smell something fishy here...
Geh and Hsj: HAHAHA! of course it's not true!
Van: Geh... hsj...*smoke coming out of her ears*

Van chases geh and hsj then Inoo suddenly passed by then van stops chasing them

Van: o-o-ohayo, Inoo-senpai.
Inoo: Ohayou, Van-chan! where's your brother?
Van: Which one? Shoon or Takaki?
Inoo: Takaki. i haven't noticed him this morning so i came over your classroom.
Van: Ah. He's absent. He caught cold last night.
Inoo: Ah. oh yeah. I forgot he mailed me that he's going to be absent today. How stupid of me Anyway, Ja~! thanks Van.
Van: o-okay. Matta.

*Inoo leaves*

Van: omg. water water. give me water. *catching her breath*
Hsj: Hai. *gives water to Van then drinks it*
Geh: hehe, Van, thank us. We made you talk to inoo.
Van: didn't you hear what he said? he said he went to my classroom!It's not coincidence! Anyway, WHERE WERE WE?! *evl grin*
Geh&hsj: uhmm... in the classroom? *fake smile then runs*

Van chase them but it was already time for their first class. *school bell rings*

Geh and Hsj: phew! saved by the bell!

*fast forward to lunch break*

Sensei: okay class, we'll continue our discussions tomorrow. Don't forget to do your homework!
everyone: hai.
*teacher leaves*
Yamada: Gyaa~!I can't understand a thing! *streches*
Yuto: me too! i'm sure Chinen understood everything! *looks at chinen* you're the smartest here in this classroom!
Chinen: no , i'm not. it's Keito!
Yamada: Yes, you are!
Van: Yama-chan, did you understand the lesson?
Yamada: Nope!. But Chinen did, for sure.
Chinen: Not really.
Van: gya~! the two of us didn't understood the lesson and hsj did. :((
Yuto: ah! why don't we go to our house and discuss the lesson?
Geh: yeah! that's good! let's have a study group!
Yuto: than after we finish the lesson, let's eat!
Geh: and after we eat, let's watch a movie!
Yuto: yeah! and after we-
Chinen: shut up!
Yuto&Geh: Hai.
Yamada: Yosh.... Let's go now we can finish early! YAAY~!

and they all went to yuto's house. while they were in the house...

Yuto: let's go upstairs
Okaasan: Yuto, who's with you?
Yuto: my friends *then okaasan shows*
Ohno: ooh. i see. make sure you won't mess up the house okay?
Yuto: Hai
Matsujun: we'll be going to the grocery store. it's okay to finish all the food in the fridge.
Yuto: okay. bai bai.
Ohno&Matsujun:ittekimasu!

Ohno and matsujun leaves*

Chinen: yosh! Let's start!
*and they started the study group. after 3 hours... (it's already 7:00 pm)
Chinen: did you get it?
All: Hai!
Chinen. Phew! I almost lost my voice. I'm squeaking already!
All: Kawaii!!!
Yamada: saa... what should we do? we still have 1 hour left?
hsj: uhmm... let's play truth or dare!
geh: yeah. we haven't done that for a long time!
Van: yosh. Let's play truth or dare! *yay!*

van spins the bottle then the bottle points to chinen
All: Chinen!
Chinen: Nandayo~?!
Hsj: chii! truth or dare?
Chinen: truth
Yuto: gimme you hand.
Chinen: Eh?! i don't like you to press my hand! i want hsj~! *hugs hsj. hsj was blushing and they were all shock*
Geh: OMG! hsj's blushing!!!
All: *teases hsj* hsj~! yadda~!
Hsj: Stop it! i'm not blushing! *covers her face*
Van: it's okay hsj. i like the HsjChii loveteam!
Yuto: yeah! go chii! Hsj's a nice girl!
Yamada: yeah! and you look good together!
Chii&Hsj: Stop it guys! *looks at each other*
Yamada: see!
Hsj: stop it! let's just continue.
Chii: yeah. let's just continue. so what's the question megu?
Hsj: *can't concentrate* uhmm... van-chan, can you be the one who'll give the question?
van: eh? nani?
Hsj: i don't feel well today.
Van: okay. chii!
Chinen: hai!
Van:*thinks* the question is: do you like Hsj?

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What will Chinen's answer?
Will someone get heart broken or happy?


Lol. yeah right. it's long and boring. :|

Comments and suggestions will be highly appreciated.

EDIT: gomen to the new readers. i forgot to edit their names. :(( anyway, it's edited now.

anyway, to those who have ljs, please add me! i'm new there and i have no friends. :((

here's my lj: http://jally23.livejournal.com you can also see what's latest about me or my homeworks. i list my homeworks there so that you'd know how busy i am. XD lol.
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waaah!jally san!!!

i love it!...its not dat boring...

are?!i was just wondering if ohno is the okaasan? and matsujun is the otousan!

I hope jally san as the author answer this!...haha....

i wonder what will the next part be...kyaa...yabu is 'not yet hir yet
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yeah. ohno is the mom and matsujun's the dad. lol. i've been dreaming of those kind of parents ya know.! XD

yabu will appear.. uhmm... i guess in chap 3? i dunno. i'll try to insert him in the next chap. XD
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waah!

haha...ohno rily suits being a mom!...haha...i was hoping the dad would be nino..but i'm sure if nino read this..he'll get mad!...

i can see a juntoshi love hir! can't wait to see yabu appear!...and the other members as well
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lol. nino as a dad! kya~! that's good. i'll make ohno divorce jun. lol.

do u wanna be one of the characters? since i need 3 more.
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ahaha...sure!
u can!...hehe....arigatou jally san!...i wonder who will be my partner in this fic..

waah...poor jun..haha...
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hmm... well, if u like yuto, then i'll make u yui, and if you like chii, megumi and if yama-chan, maki. so choose between chii, yuto or yama-chan. :))

lol. i'll try to put that in my fic. *evil laugh* and jun will go to sho. :))
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jally~~
u're fanfic is so GOOD~

i love it~~
cann i be the chars ??
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haha...waah!i'm confused...but i already got chinen in the other fic...i guess i like yuto!!!

yamachan will be reserved for the next fic..haha

ya gud idea....jun will go to sho!
haha...but how about aiba? he's all alone..haha
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okay! u're with yuto! haha!

hmm... i'll make aiba... err... fortune teller? O.o

@vanialestari: sure you can! do u wanna be with chii or yama-chan?
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Jally!!
that's really nice!!
I enjoyed reading all of it!!
yay for the new fanfic!! ^-^
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yosh!...i'm with yuto now!...kyaa!...

EH?!aiba's a fortune teller0_o...dat could be......................good for him...haha
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@ hsj-chan- thanks. actually, i think it's just a typical fic though. :| but i'll try to put extraordinary scenes like alien invasions. :O lol.

@Geh-san.- yeah. i dunno what i'll do with aiba. i think he would help yama-chan and the others. you know. those old men who suddenly blurts their prediction to other people. :|
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@jally23 : geh-chan already took away YUTO .
but nvermind !
there's still yama-chaan~~
can i choose him ??
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I wanna be part of this too!!
OMGosh!!
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