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@ laotiongirl.. gomene if its short.. I planned to do that hehehehe... anou... there's a really long part on my fic every chapter...
ja, minna-san part 3 is here!!!!!!
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Keiko: Noriko-chan, I know the pain you are suffering from that incident 3 years ago...
Noriko: It's not just that but I dreamt of that accident last night, I just didn't have the right time to tell you and the others...
Keiko: Maji de?!
Noriko: hai...
3 YEARS AGO...
It was winter.. Noriko and Yuma were dating in a fancy restaurant thay were laughing together
Yuma: ja, ikou?
Noriko: where?
Yuma: anywhere its our first anniversary after all....
Noriko: *smiling* ikou!
Noriko and Yuma were walking hand by hand...suddenly... Noriko's hat flew away, Yuma ran to get it, Yuma caught it and held it up, a victory smile was on his face.......... suddenly... A truck was approaching fastly, Yuma didn't saw it coming, a loud wail was heard... Noriko callde an ambulance quickly..... while waiting noriko cried and cried.. keiko came

Keiko: daijoubu??
noriko suddenly hugged keiko
Keiko: the others couldn't come, but they were worried... *keiko looked to noriko* let's sit and wait ne?
AFTER SEVERAL HOURS...

Doctor: I'm sorry to tell this to you, but he didn't survived, we've done the best we could, but we couldn't save him.... excuse me...
Noriko: *her voice was trembling* n..no... th..that cou..couldn't be possible *sob*
Keiko: *in a comforting voice* ssshhhh... stop crying...
Noriko: *still crying* c..can.. we... se..see... hi...him?
Keiko: hai of curse

IN THE ROOM WHERE YUMA IS....

Noriko: ne~ you promised you wouldnt leave me all alone right? why now? this was supposed to be a happy day right? *starts crying again* ne~ right? why did you leave me?
Keiko: noriko-chan we should go now... you should move on...
Noriko: *still watery eyes and sniffinf* h..ha..hai.. i.. ikou...

BACK IN PRESENT TIME...
Noriko: *looking at a picture frame where Yuma and Noriko posed smiling* I just can't believe it... I missed you... a LOT... you left me... *started to cry*
Keiko: noriko-chan stop crying...
Noriko: *wipes her tears* I suppose so...
Keiko: yeah! that's the spirit, anyway, we are going to a new school right?
Noriko: *smiling a bit* hai..
Keiko: well, school's gonna start in a week, we should prepare nene?
Noriko: hai!
Keiko: well, I think Sakura and Erika might need some help cooking I'd better help them okay? come down in a bit
Noriko: hai, I will...

can Noriko move on with her past??
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Posted 8/7/08
uwaaaah kawaiii first part!! ^^
cant wait !! lol

btw... the link is to the top of this page, to link to that post,
right click where it says "Permalink" at the end of the post and select "CoPy link location" ...
and use that one as the link
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Uwahhhh~
THAT WAS SOOOO GOODD~
You're really good. ^_______^
More please~
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kyaaa..that was good!! i really like it!! though its sad how yuma died!! huhuh me can't wait till next part!!
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awww...it's so sad...
that was very good!!!
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wah!! it's short but it's AWESOME!! ^-^
I felt the mood of it!! xD
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have you read part 2 and 3??
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yeah.. I think I only missed part 2 and this one!! ^-^
It's really nice!!
btw..I have a new fanfic too..

WARNING: It's boring.. ^-^
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ahaha.. I should go and check it out..
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kyaa i love it isay chan!!!

its soo dramatic...aww... ganbatte kudasai ne~
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Posted 8/10/08
gosh this is so angsty-ish!! but i luv it!!!

cant wait for the nxt part~~
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Posted 8/13/08
hihihi minna.. I decided to post part 4 and 5 at my birthday dakara...5 days more.. I 'll post it on August 18!!!!
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Posted 8/13/08
ok!!
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Posted 8/13/08
i loveeee this~
hehe^^
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