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Posted 7/19/08
A/N: long time no post.. this poem is a half of what i wrote, i cut it out so that everyone can relate..if you want the continuation.. just tell me. till then, Enjoy! :]

Since when this predicament happen to me
The horror of someone getting close to my soul...
I felt it itch in my nerves
No one has ever entered my life that well
So why, mock me with such sweet words??
That I knew I will fell into

Love has it's vengeance upon me, striking when
I was that weak... so inviting
Love kills my inner confidence broking my high senses
But in the end I only persuade myself with nothing

Love breaks my walls surrounding through my body
Engulfing my scraped emotions
Won't it leave me alone for once?
Though it knew I was blinded by insecurity
Love wanted me to surrender, surrender
Until my last breath, until I realize all the space has gone


For one person to occupy the crack in my broken heart
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Posted 7/20/08
I find it really great!
Posted 7/21/08
it's amazing...i'd love to hear the rest of it =3
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Posted 7/22/08

Yamira wrote:

I find it really great!



thank you so much!! >.<
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Posted 7/22/08

kagura4 wrote:

it's amazing...i'd love to hear the rest of it =3


really? i thank you! I'll pm the continuation to you.. is that ayt? ^-^
Posted 7/22/08

farfalla_12 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

it's amazing...i'd love to hear the rest of it =3


really? i thank you! I'll pm the continuation to you.. is that ayt? ^-^


no need to thank me it really is ^^...ya that'd be ok =)
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