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hai!jade san is right!...don't be pessimistic...

ganbatte ne!we're here to support your fic too you know..since its you, the creator who made it...
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Wah!!
thanks for the support jadel and geh!!
I love you girls!! ^-^
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Chapter 1

"The palace is on fire!!"

When Kamenashi heard the cries of the people. He rushed to see if Ryosuke's doing alright. Therefore, he first went to his room. Unfortunately, he saw no sign of Ryosuke there! He hurriedly went out of the room to look for the lost kid. He searched through every corner of the palace to find out where the five year old Ryosuke is..until he reached the last room to seek through. It is Emperor Ryuu's bedroom. He opened the door cautiously. And to his shock, he saw the poor little Ryosuke staring at the emperor who was lying cold on the floor, all bloody, catching his breath!


Kame: No!!..it can't be!!..who did this to you??..Ryuu-sama!!

Emperor Ryuu: Take Ryosuke with you!!..go to a place far away from here!! *holding Kame's arms tight*

Kame: but..I can't leave you here!! *panics*

Emperor Ryuu: No more buts!!..I am ordering you!!.. *coughs blood*

Kame: Ryuu-sama!! *teary eyed*

Emperor Ryuu: Go..now.. *looses his breath*

Kame: *holds up his tears* Hai!! *carries Ryosuke*

Ryosuke: Oto-san!! *whines* *tries to escape from Kame's strong arms*

Kame: Hush!! *covers Ryosuke's mouth* ..they'll hear us!!

Ryosuke: *removes Kame's hand* ..oto-san..oto-san..OTO-SAN!! *cries louder*

YamaPi: *hears Ryosuke crying* Look!! It's the emperor's son!!..minna!!..run after them!!

Warriors: Ikimashou!!

Kame ran as fast as he could, trying to escape thousands of warriors chasing after them. He managed to distance far from them but unfortunately, an arrow hit him on his right foot. He felt the awful pain that's why he was knocked down to the ground helplessly.

Kame: *lets Ryosuke go* Run Ryosuke-sama!!..run!! *lies on the groud*

Ryosuke: Kame-chan!!..I'm scared!!

Kame: Hey!!..you are a brave little boy right?? Stop crying!! *taps Ryosuke's head*

Ryosuke: Kame-chan.. *wipes off his tears*

Kame: That's it!!..now go!! Run as fast as you could!! ..and no matter what happens..don't look back!!

Ryosuke: Hai!! *runs*


Ryosuke did what Kame told him to. He did ran as fast as he could. And though he heard Kame's agonizing voice, as if he was being tortured, he didn't look back! He didn't stop running until he got tripped in a very dark place. Instead of getting up, he laid down. There, he felt safe and sound. He was so tired that he can no longer stand. He laid there until he passed out.


[birds chirping..]

Ryosuke: *opens his eyes* Eh?? ..where am I??

Chinen: *enters the room* Oto-san!!..oto-san!! He's awake!! *jumps happily*

Ryosuke: *hides under the bed*

Chinen: *looks at Ryosuke* Don't be scared.. *smiles*

Ohno: *peeps into the room* *sees Ryosuke hiding under the bed* Chinen..don't bother him..he isn't in good condition yet..

Chinen: Aww.. *stands up* I just wanted to play with him.. *sighs*

Ryosuke: Chotto matte..

Chinen: Eh?? Yo talkin' to meh??

Ryosuke: Ha..hai!! ..btw..why am I here??

Chinen: Ano..my dad saw you on his way home..and..you know what??..you've been asleep for two weeks!!

Ryosuke: two..two weeks?!

Chinen: Hai!!..sugoi ne??

Ryosuke: *his stomach growls loud* Ah..gomen..I'm just hungry.. *blushes*

Chinen: *laughs* ..Sugee!!..

Ryosuke: Eh.. *laughs with Chinen*

Ohno: Chinen!! It's lunch time already!!

Chinen: Oh..come with me!!..let's eat lots ne??

Ryosuke: Yosh!! *excited*

Chinen: *sits on his place* Woah!!..lots of food ne??

Ryosuke: umh..hai.. *disappointed*

Chinen: What's your name btw??

Ryosuke: ..Ryosuke desu..you're Chinen ne??

Chinen: So desu.. can I call you Ryo-chan then??

Ryosuke: Hai!!..umh..what should I call you??

Chinen: Anything you like!!

Ryosuke: is..Chii okay??

Chinen: Sure!! *smiles* ..Let's eat now!!..Itadakimasu!!

Ryosuke: ..itadakimasu..

Chinen: *grabs the food* *sees Ryosuke staring at him* Eh??..what's wrong??..don't you like the food??

Ryosuke: Umh..just not familiar with those..

Chinen: Eh?? Those are my faves!!..here..taste it!!

Ryosuke: *takes a bite* ..yum!!..it isn't bad after all!!

Ohno: *sits with them* ..EHHH?? no more food??

Ryosuke: Ah..gomen!!..don't worry..I'll ask my dad to pay for it..

Ohno: Oh no!! It's okay..we've got lots of food anyway..

Ryosuke: *whispers to Chinen* ..Is he your dad??

Chinen: So desu!!

Ryosuke: Mister!!..Arigatou!! *bows his head*

Ohno: ..for what??

Ryosuke: ..For..saving me!!

Ohno: Ah..that's nothing.. *scratches his head*

Ryosuke: I'll ask my dad to give you a reward as soon as I find him!!

Ohno: Eh??..reward??..me??..who's your daddy btw??

Ryosuke: Emperor Ryuu is my dad!!

Ohno: *throws up*

Chinen: EHHH??..so..yo..you are Yamada Ryosuke?? *shocked*

Ohno: Are you serious?? *big eyes*





--End of Chapter 1--
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LoL
criticisms are always welcome!! ^-^
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waah!ur fic is seriously great!!!

i love it..i can feel every detail of the scene you know!..

cnt wait for the nxt part!!!yay!

applause for the creator minna san!!!

spread some love now..haha. i'm crazy oopz
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T.T

I don't feel it at all!! T.T

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waaaa...sugoi the beginning part was awesome..i love it!!
it was great...part 1..was totally awesome..its so cute how chinen wanted to play with yamachan!!
i love it..next part!! can't wait!!

*applause very loud!!*
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ahhhhh sugoii na~ i honestly liked the first chap alot x)))
n yamada & chii r so friggin cute<333

*excitedly awaiting the nxt chap^^*
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whoaah~~
LOVE UR FANFIC SO MUCH HSJ-CHANN !!
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART !!
POOR YAMA-CHAN~~
EHEEH..
WANNA SEE YAMADA CRY !!
EHEHEH~~
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hahaha!!
thanks everyone!! ^-^

but pls..tell me if it's getting boring okay?? ^-^
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hallooo!!!! hahahaha

im here now!!
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uwaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!

is this THE LEGEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUGGGOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!
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LooooooooooooL

geh-san it's like Jumong..
and now you said it's like.. The Legend!!
xDDD

thanks!! ^-^
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wahahahahhaa!!!!!


loooveeee it!!!!! im sooo happy today with all these fanfics!!!

should i start a new one too?? ahahhahaha!!!

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Posted 7/22/08
yay!! ahahaha... kawaii..
wee.. chii found ryo..
kip post hsj-chan..^^
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