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Posted 7/21/08
Hi,

I finally decided to actually join the group and post my poem. I just read in the shoutbox you guys all wanted to read the winning entries and you have the right to.
I also wanted to thank this group for making this contest. I had fun writting my first poem in english : kind of a new experience for me I hope you will enjoy it.....

The missing hole…
By Shazeda MADAVJEE
(2504 characters)


The blue horizon is facing her profile
Across the wind, she is in state of denial
The park is facing the cold of the season
She is fighting to keep alive her reason
Remembering what she had just lost
She is fighting not to dive at any cost

Sitting on a bench wondering why
She looks at people around and she can’t deny
Loneliness is at her door, Loneliness is her enemy
She doesn’t want to be alone, she just wants to feel free
Her heart is getting cold, it will soon become like ice
Can’t someone just notice her and warm it, that would be nice

Tears are falling, Tears she can’t contain
This feeling is unbearable, My God, so much pain….

Standing up, gathering courage
She walks back to her carriage
While thinking about it, she understands
The way she lives, no one can hold her hands
Fantasizing, imagining, hoping for
Being with idols, living in a metaphor

Tears are falling, Tears she can’t contain
This feeling is unbearable, My God, so much pain….

She is opening the door and is staring at her room
Books, here, iPod there and here is the groom
Artificial, but her only true friend
On from morning until the end
But also poisonous tool which only knows
That her addiction just grows and grows

Tears are falling, Tears she can’t contain
This feeling is unbearable, My God, so much pain….

Checking at her mails she looks at her desktop
Where are you, where are you she whispers to the laptop
She is burning from the inside, and looking at the moon
It looks like she will evaporate very very soon
She has to overtake her disease
Disease ? She just doesn’t feel at ease

Tears are falling, Tears she can’t contain
This feeling is unbearable, My God, so much pain….

What is it like to be happy ?
Why can’t it just happen to me ?
She just kept on wondering again and again
But something just interrupted her brain
Growing , rising and getting angry
It grumbled and was too much noisy

Tears were falling, Tears she couldn’t contain
This feeling kept on being unbearable, My God, so much pain

The dark passenger ate her alive
Pain, lost, her fall has arrived
Her mind was too confused
And It was getting amused
She needed more affection
Love from someone who was his reflection

Tears stopped on her cheeks, Tears which were visible
The body was being buried but the pain unbearable

Withdrawal symptoms of love aren’t just fiction
About the danger of loving human abstraction
It doesn’t end until you put solid and real wall
Don’t lie to yourself, admit once and for all
He might have been real but he’s not in your world
You loved him but now love you even more

~END~
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Posted 7/22/08
I love the third person view~ ^^ It's a lovely poem-a poem with a moral....a good one too~ Keep writing ^^
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Posted 7/23/08

Bluesander wrote:

I love the third person view~ ^^ It's a lovely poem-a poem with a moral....a good one too~ Keep writing ^^


Thanks a lot. I will.
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