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kyaa.... i like it...^^
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everyone liked it~~
yay for mai-chan~!!
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love ur fic too jane-chan^^
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yaya..thanks everyone!!
janechan..r u in my fic..there are still characters available..but only the bad ones!(gomen all the good ones are taken)
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wah!!
this is too cool!!
Mai!! ^-^

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hai mai chan!keep it up!

we're supporting ur fic!!!just like we support others too!!!
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kyaa...thanks minna!
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kyaa!i just read it now gomene!!!i love it!!!

esp when jun and ame are arguing!!*imagines the scenes*
and matsujun is in every class!!

kip up the good work mai chan!!!
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PART 4

(Ame finally finish dancing..and everyone clapps)

D teacher - thanks Fujimoto-san..that was a well performance..very flawless!
Ame - oh..arigato..
D teacher - I hope you join the dancing competition this year!
Ame - Hai!! I will!
D teacher - great!!
(Ame went to sit down)
Umi - that was so good!!
Keiko - Ame-chan..how do you dance so good??
Meichi - eh! You dance??
Keiko - Meichi-chan have you forgotten!
Ame - ehehe…yeah I do dance!!
Meichi - wait…no..no..i do remember…ame-chan!(smacks herself 3 times)
Ame - its ok..you don’t have to hit urself!!

(jun was speechless when he was watching her..she had the same skill as aya-chan..both were very good at dancing)
Nino - jun…jun…jun…jun…JUN(screaming his name)
Jun - (snaps out of it) uh…nani nino??
Sho - ehm..nino was just being stupid!!(smacks nino’s head)
Nino - ite…that hurted you know
Aiba - well you deserved it!!

(class ends and everyone is walking home..U.K,A,and M walks home)

Meichi - hey..i’ll come pick you guys up at four sharp..ok
Umi - un!
Keiko - yeah!
Ame - ok…but I’ll ask my mom first…and I’ll call you!
Meichi - un..ja!!
(meichi turns right and walkd down the street to her house)

Keiko - ne…umi-chan are u in the volleyball team??
Umi - well..i am not yet in..but I am going to try out for it!
Keiko - ah..yeah..i meant try out for it!
Ame - that’s right..she has to try for it..demo she’ll make it..since she is so good!
Keiko - I agree!
Umi - I am not that good!
Keiko - demo..you are..so stop denying it!!
Ame - she’s got a point!
Umi - hai..hai…I don’t want to start a agruement!
Keiko - well..i guess I’ll see you guys when we get picked up ne!
A & U - un!! Ja..see you!

(keiko turns left to the road to her house)

Umi - ne…ame-chan…are u still mad??
Ame - naa…I don’t think I am!..i think dancing make my stress go away!
Umi - suka..i guess that’s why you like dancing ne??
Ame - yeah..i do love dancing though!
Umi - I am pretty sure we can see that..hehe
Ame - well..hehe
Umi - well here’s the stop to my house…see ya later
Ame - un..see ya!

(umi walks home…ame’s house is about 6 blocks away from umi’s house)
(Ame got to her house..and she was about to open the fence to her door and she heard people talking..she stopped to see who it was)

(talking people)
Nino - ne…jun why did you rent the house that we are going to be living in now??
Jun - well…it was one of the cheapest house around this place!
Aiba - ahaha...well I guess I am going to enjoy my life here now!
Sho - yeah..it seems like a nice neighborhood too ne?

( Ame saw them..demo luckily there was a big tree before the entrance to her house and they didn’t see her…)\
Ame - This is my chance!

(she was about to go inside her house but then a sound of a stick broken was heard..N,J,A,S they all stared at her)

Ame - *great..nice job..now they know this is your house*..ah..hehe..so why r u guys here??
Aiba - this is where we are goin to live from now on until further notice!!
Ame - *great..so this is who my new neighbors were*..ahhehe..i see..
Sho - so you live here Ame-chan??
Ame - ah…ye..no..no I don’t live here..why do you ask??
Nino - how come?? It says Fujimoto on the mailbox over there(points to Ame’s mailbox)
Ame - ..ahhehe…yeah this is where I live!
Nino - then why did you lie to us??
Ame - ah..about that…I was just testing you..(fake smile)
Nino - ah..really…well I guess I am pretty smart(starts pattin himself)
Jun - who cares…lets just go in!(starts walking in)
Ame - he sure has some attitude even when we are not in school!(sticks her tongue at him…demo he doesn’t see her)
Sho - well ame-chan its nice to know that ur our neighbor!! See ya
(walks in)
Ame - hmph…who do he think he is(referring to jun)!

------------[Ame’s house}--------------

Mom - so Amechan how was school??
Ame - HORRIBLE!!!!!!
Mom - it can’t be that bad!
Shin - mom..she probably screwed up her first day of school again!! Ahahahahha!!
Ame - Shut up!
Mom - Shin..treat ur sister better!..well amechan how about some supper…I made ur favorite!
Ame - thanks..demo I am not hungry!
(walks to her room…then falls in her bed)
Ame - …..why..does this have to happen today?..well its kind of hot in here!
(she goes to open her window)
Ame - this feels so good…the wind!!
(while across her room window…jun also opens his window to take a peep)
Jun - waa..the air feels really good!

Ame - ….......
Jun - ……….(both sees each other)
Ame - is that ur room??
Jun - same question??
Ame - well that’s probably the reason why I am here opening my window..and you didn’t answer my question!
Jun - ahaha..of course not..this is not my room!!(closes his window and curtains and walks down sho’s room)
Jun - *must not look at her*….(walks in)
Sho - oh…jun..why r u in here??
Jun - well..i just came in to say..do you wanna trade rooms??
Sho - why?? I already finish putting my stuff in here!
Jun - ok..well nevermind then..i’ll just go ask aiba then!
Sho - ok! (jun walks out)

(Jun walks in on Aiba..he is still practing his english)
Aiba - DANGER! BIG DANGER! HAPPY! HELLO! MY FRIEND!
Jun - ah…
Aiba - oh..jun..what r u doin here??
Jun - oh..nvm..i was looking for nino..wrong room!! I guess I’ll take my leave!
Aiba - ok..well see ya…(goes on practicing his english) BIG BIRD…DANGER…BIG DANGER!!

(jun walks out)
Jun - what was that??<---referring to aiba’s english
Nino - ah..jun just in time..do you wanna help me??
Jun - ano.....(looks at nino’s room)…*it’s already clean and neat*..
Nino - so do you want to help me or not!
Jun - ah sure!*scratches head*
(nino goes on telling jun what to do)
Nino - well jun after this we are going to the mall for some shopping do you wanna come?
Jun - ya..i have nothing better to do!

[Ame’s house]

Ame - ne..okaasan…at 4..Meichi is going to pick up the girls and they want me to go…can I go??
Mom - where??
Ame - oh..shoppin at the mall!
Mom - oh..sure..demo forgot to do something…remember…
Ame - no..nani..what was it??
Mom- remember u made some snacks and you were suppose to give them to our new neighbors
Ame - ah..about that can u give it to them..please okaasan!
Mom - gomen! Me and shin is going to go to the market and watch it!(her mom owns a small market in town)
Ame - honto..why..why?
Mom - well…me and shin is going to get ready..and the snacks u made is on the counter!
Ame - ugh..i don’t want to do this!!
(Ame grabbs the snacks and walks to the other side of her house)
Ame - ….(takes a deep breath)…ok..(rings door bell)

[S,J,N,A house]
Sho - I’ll go answer the door!
(opens the door)
Sho - oh..ame chan what r u doin here?
Ame - ano..my mom told me to give this to you guys..because u are our new..new..
Sho - new neighbors!
Ame - hai…hai..new neighbors!
Sho - well who made this delicious snacks(already chewing the food)
Ame - (surprised look)…oh…that was…me..ahehe
Sho - who??
Ame - ..it was my mom! She’s a great cooker!aheheh
Sho - suka..this is really good..tell her we said thanks..for this delicious snacks!
Ame - ah..its ok!
Nino - who’s at the door sho??
Sho - its Ame-chan!
Nino - oh..that girl who looks like…..still can’t think of her name!
Aiba - well what did she want?
Jun - yeah..what did she want?
Sho - oh..she’s righ here! (Opens the door wide open) see!
(everyone looks)
Nino - ur such a liar sho!
Aiba - there is no one at the door!
(sho looks..and see ame runs to her door and slams her door)
Sho - woah..she was fast!
Jun - well what did she want with us??
Sho - oh she just brought some snacks for us..you guys should try it..its really good!
Jun - why should we..she made it!
Aiba - oOoOo…this is really good!!
Nino – honto…let me try(tries it) wow..this is good..super good..me love..me want MORE!!
(grabs more)
Sho - u know..it wouldn’t hurt to try(gives one to jun)..just take a bite!
(jun takes a bite)
Sho - so how was it??
Jun - not bad….
Sho - so how do you think about giving her a chance..i bet she made it..she probably just don’t want to amit it( acts suspicious of Ame’s cooking)
Jun - whatever!

[Ame’s house]

Ame - gosh…why r they taking so long..its past 4 already!!

(Meichi’s car comes up)(beep beep)
(Ame runs to the car)

Ame - what tooks u guys so long??
Umi - keiko tooks so long…that meichi had to wait!!
Meichi – that’s right
Keiko – well it didn’t want to looks horrible going to the mall..i mean..its like a fashion place..you’ve got to dress nice every where you go especially the mall!
Ame - ah huh..no wonder why!
Meichi - well we better get going ne!
(they leave…Jun and Sho them also leaves to go to the mall)

[THE END OF PART 4]
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What will happen at the mall??
Can Ame and Jun apologize to each other??

[FIND OUT NEXT PART][PART 5 COMIN SOON]

the part about Aiba speaking english i got it from watching this one thing about him!! its pretty funny if you haven't seen them speak english!! here is the url to it..if you want to see him speak english!!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=V8V05rrwP6s
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kyaa!!!

i love it!!!ame is soo lucky that arashi is their neighborhood!!!
It seems like there's an AMExJUN in here....First loveteam ive noticed!!!
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ahaha..thanks gehchan and deenchan!!
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Love it how you make Aiba speaking english there. xDDD
That was an AWESOME PART!
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honto..?? when it watched that.it was so funny so i had to put it in there!!
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