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make your own haiku!
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:D~hee
I don't know any haikus so make your own! (LOL)
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Here's one I wrote for school:

There's a mansion on
a mountaintop somewhere in
that deep and dark hell.
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what's a haiku?
Posted 8/3/08
here's mine:
a cold, chilly night
alone in my room's fire place
waiting for the one

Posted 8/3/08
a haiku is a type of japanese poem with 17 syllables and uses kigo words. kigo words are seasonal words. like cherry blossoms for spring...
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Beautiful cold sky
The distant white moon beckons
Her reflection weeps.
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the waves roar
I leap into the shore
I sing for more
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x-aya-chan-x wrote:

what's a haiku?

its like a poem but with 3 lines
ex:
first line:5 syllables
second line:7syllables
thrid line:5 syllables

Posted 8/17/08

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the waves roar
I leap into the shore
I sing for more

i don't think u have enough syllables in each line
ur missing 2 for the first line (i think)
1 for the second line (i think)
and 1 in the third line (i think)
nice poem tho
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Posted 8/17/08

haruhi-25 wrote:


Zachlied wrote:

the waves roar
I leap into the shore
I sing for more

i don't think u have enough syllables in each line
ur missing 2 for the first line (i think)
1 for the second line (i think)
and 1 in the third line (i think)
nice poem tho


>_< lol i know I din't know there was rules in making a haiku though.
and ermm That was the haiku in my english classs lol
Posted 8/18/08

Zachlied wrote:


haruhi-25 wrote:


Zachlied wrote:

the waves roar
I leap into the shore
I sing for more

i don't think u have enough syllables in each line
ur missing 2 for the first line (i think)
1 for the second line (i think)
and 1 in the third line (i think)
nice poem tho


>_< lol i know I din't know there was rules in making a haiku though.
and ermm That was the haiku in my english classs lol

really, english class eh?... oh well, u know the rules now right O.o

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haruhi-25 wrote:


Zachlied wrote:


haruhi-25 wrote:


Zachlied wrote:

the waves roar
I leap into the shore
I sing for more

i don't think u have enough syllables in each line
ur missing 2 for the first line (i think)
1 for the second line (i think)
and 1 in the third line (i think)
nice poem tho


>_< lol i know I din't know there was rules in making a haiku though.
and ermm That was the haiku in my english classs lol

really, english class eh?... oh well, u know the rules now right O.o



YUP~ thanks to you! X3
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Posted 8/22/08
The season is spring
Cherry-blossoms are blooming
Butterflies soaring
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the cold and mighty winter
the snow falls deep into my heart
and it peers through painful wounds and memories

i'm not emo
i just make sucky emo haiku lol
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Colourful Rainbow
Lies above the great blue sea
what a pretty scene

wrote this for school x.x
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