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hahaha!!
I'm still loving it!! ^-^
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it's soooo good!!!!!!!!!
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hahaha im going to post part 16 later! thats the last part ive made so i havent made part 17
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---Part 16---

<at deen chan's house...10:00 am>

Yui: deen-chan?
Deen-chan: hai okasan?
Yui: did you saw ur sister Arashi?
Deen-chan: eh?
Tisha: he's with ryosuke kun... at the garden
Yui: ohh... soo early ne?
Deen-chan: yeah... ma.. lets have breakfast!

[The maid served Hotdog, Egg, Rice, Strawberries and Mango juice to all of them...]

Deen-chan: strawberries!!!! kya~
Ryosuke: [runned out to the garden went to the dining room] eh.. [catches his breath] did.. i.. heared.. strawberries??
Deen-chan: ma...
Ryosuke: where where??
Deen-chan: ri..right here....
Ryosuke: whoa! fresh picked strawberries! can i have some??
Deen-chan: su...sure... eh..ehe..he...
Ryosuke: uwaaa! sugoi.. oishi!
Arashi-chan: oi ryosuke kun! [pulls ryosuke's t-shirt] come on lets go....
Ryosuke: demo.. demo! strawberries!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!~~~~
Deen-chan: whoa... heheheh!
Kyu: he really loves strawberries ne? same to you?
Deen-chan: eeh!! hehehe ma...
Yui: after this ready ur self...
Deen-chan: eh? nande?
Yui: lets go shopping!
Arashi-chan: [runned] sho..shopping!!! i wanna go! i wanna go!
Deen-chan: great neechan!!
Yui: men... this girls are soo.... i dunno....
Kyu: oh well.. they're ur daughters...
Yui: *sigh* ma... come on girls.. ready ur self... oh... tisha wanna come?
Tisha: sure!

[after preparing...]

Yui: so girls are you ready?
Deen, tisha & arashi: hai!!
Yui: get in the limo...
Driver: mam, where are going?
Yui: tokyo mall...
Driver: ok..

[they went to the tokyo mall...]

Deen-chan: okasan lets go to the tom's world!
Arashi-chan: yeah!! i wanna play games!!
Yui: ok ok.. both of you go to the tom's world heres the money... me and tisha are gonna go shoping k?
Both: HAI!!
Deen-chan: come on lets go!
Arashi-chan: un!

[ they both went to the tom's world by walking so that they can still window shop hehehe**]
Arashi-chan bummped to a guy

Arashi-chan: itai!!
Guy: oi watch it!
Deen-chan: hey! your the one who's running soo fast!
Guy: what did you say!
Deen-chan: what!
Arashi-chan: oi yamete... ah.. gomen ne old man..
Guy: oi im not an old man!
Deen-chan: hey! just accept the sorry!!!
Guy: grr be thankful because im in a hurry now!!
[the man runned away]
Deen-chan: oi chotto!!!
Arashi-chan: ma ma deen ita alright

[at the tom's world ]

Deen-chan: Kya~!
Arashi-chan: whoa… sugoi ne?
Deen-chan: yeah!!
Cha-chan: Deen-chan!!
Deen-chan: uwaa! Cha-chan!!!

[hugged each other]

Cha-chan: I missed you!!!
Deen-chan: yeah me too! Oh! your with hikaru kun!
Hikaru: hi deen-chan! Come *grabs deen-chan *
Deen-chan: cho…tto! Where are we going!
Hikaru: * went to the basketball booth * right here!
Deen-chan: eh? What are we doing here? Are we gonna play basket ball? Wait! I haven’t bought tokens yet!
Hikaru: oi oi easy… easy… just look around…
Deen-chan: ehh? Hmm… * looking around * hmmm?? Wha….
Cha-chan: hehehe its daiki-kun deen-chan…
Deen-chan: why… is he here?
Cha-chan: we went out! Me, hikaru kun, daiki kun, kei chan and hsj-chan!
Deen-chan: eeh? They are all here??
Ryosuke: oi! Ma… te! Arashi-chan! *catches his breath*
Arashi-chan: eh? Why are you here? I thought ur eating strawberries at my house?
Hikaru: eeh!! Hahahaha!!
Daiki: ehh!!!!!!!! Dee….deen.. chan..
Deen-chan: ah.. dai… daiki kun”…
Hsj-chan: eh.. eh.. eh… whats with the atmosphere??
Kei: eh.. whats wrong?
Daiki: wrong?? Ah.. theres.. nothing wrong!!
Deen-chan: yeah! Nothing wrong!! Ne daiki kun
Daiki: yeah…
Hikaru: hmm….
Cha-chan: ne.. ne.. minna! Wanna go to the park?
Deen-chan: sure!
Arashi-chan: ah.. wait! Ill call mom..
Yui: hello?
Arashi-chan: mom were going to the park ok??
Yui: oh.. ok! Just tell me to pick you up!
Arashi-chan: hai..

[at the park]

Kei: kinda creepy ne??
Daiki: yeah.. were the only one who is here!
Deen-chan: ma… good thing so we can use the swings!
Cha-chan: yeah!! Come on!
Hikaru: men.. this place gives me creeps

Suddenly a girl came to them but bleared…

Hikaru: wha.. whats that!!!

They all screamed when they saw the girl….

Jsbluish: daijoubu yo!
Hsj-chan: oh… hello!
Hikaru: who.. who are you??
Jsbluish: im Jsbluish desu…
Daiki: why is your face so… pale? White?
Jsbluish: ill tell you why… demo…
Deen-chan: demo what?
Jsbluish: please don’t go and help me…
Kei: ok… well help you! Ne guys?
Ryosuke: ma…
Arashi-chan: yeah…
Jsbluish: ok.. can you help me find my sister please?
Cha-chan: why? What happened to her?
Jsbluish: im kinda lost. Please when you find her tell her im alright!
Daiki: demo where would we find her?
Jsbluish: THERE * points inside the kiddie cave *

They all looked there and said “”EHH??”” they went to the girl…

Ryosuke: ano.. oneechan daijoubu?
Kid: go away!
Kei: ne ne.. your sister said to us that she’s alright!
Kid: watashi no oneechan?
Deen-chan: hai.. and he want us to tell you that she loves you!
Kid: demo i hate her! she's dead and she left me thats why i hate her!

They were all shocked because of that!

Hikaru: what... did u just.... said?
Kid: she's dead... my oneechan is dead...
Deen-chan: na...ni...

kei chan went to Jsbluish

Kei: what do you mean Jsbluish? what exactly did happened to you?
Jsbluish: well...its was just a while ago... i died in a sickness... i was bedridden or what u called comatose...
Daiki: so... what happened?
Jsbluish: and thats what my parents tought...
Cha-chan: what your parents thought?
Jsbluish: my sister saw a man went to my room, and he is the one who killed me. not my sickness
Deen-chan: eh? did the police knew that?
Jsbluish: no... thats why i wanted you to help me...
Hsj-chan: this will be a tough job to do... demo...
All: Making impossible to Possible... Hey Say Jump Desukara...
[hahah yukan club]

Arashi-chan: so do you know who's the guy?
Jsbluish: well... you can ask my sister... she's the one who really saw it...
Ryosuke: ne oneechan... you did saw a man went to your sister's room ne?
Kid: hai...
Hikaru: can you tell us what does he looked like?
Kid: well... he was wearing a black bonet, he has a mole in his cheek.
Daiki: what more?
Kid: hmm... i think he was wearing a black watch and theres a chanel accessorie that hangs in his cellphone...
Deen-chan: whoa... u remembered that all??
Kid: yeah.. i have a photographic memory...
Hsj-chan: ah... sugoi!
Kei: ja minna... lets go?
Arashi-chan: chotto....
Deen-chan: yeah... i think....

Flash back

Arashi-chan: itai!!
Guy: oi watch it!
Deen-chan: hey! your the one who's running soo fast!
Guy: what did you say!
Deen-chan: what!
Arashi-chan: oi yamete... ah.. gomen ne old man..
Guy: oi im not an old man!
Deen-chan: hey! just accept the sorry!!!
Guy: grr be thankful because im in a hurry now!!
[the man runned away]
Deen-chan: oi chotto!!!
Arashi-chan: ma ma deen ita alright

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Both: AH! its that guy!
Daiki: eh?
Arashi-chan: a while ago i bumped into a guy! with the one that's jsbluish's sister is talking about!
Kei: honto?
Deen-chan: eyah! and i was arguing with him because he's the one who bumped to neechan but neechan is the one who apologized!
Ryosuke: so... lets go to the mall!
Cha-chan: yah!
Kei: ah wait..

*went to jsbluish *

Kei: ano... well be back! and were sure that we will capture him!
Jsbluish: hai! arigatou!

[they went to the mall to search the murderer]

Ryosuke: so guys keep in touch with cellphone ok?
All: hai!
Kei: ok split into two!

Kei chan is with Hsj-chan, Daiki is with Deen-chan, Ryosuke is with Arashi-chan, Hikaru with Cha-chan... they are still finding the murderer...

Deen-chan: i better call mom now to call the police!
Daiki: un!
Deen-chan: okasan?
Yui: hai? doshite?
Deen-chan: call polices now! tell them there is a criminal here at the mall wearing a black bonet, he has a mole in his cheek.
wearing a black watch and theres a chanel accessorie that hangs in his cellphone...
Yui: eh?? ok ok! ill call them now!
Deen-chan: ja ne okasan!

Daiki: what did she said?
Deen-chan: she said shell be calling the police now!
Daiki: oh! okie! come on!
Deen-chan: un!

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Cha-chan: guard san, do you saw a guy wearing black bonet and has a mole in his cheek?
Guard: gomen i havent!
Hikaru: ah thanks...
Cha-chan: hmm where is that guy?

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Arashi-chan: i know he's around here!!
Ryosuke: lets keep finding ne?
Arashi-chan: hai ryosuke kun! ill give u a strawberrie if u find him!
Ryosuke: eeh! what are we waiting for come on!

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Kei: look! is that him?
Hsj-chan: yeah!!
Kei: oi! matte!
Guy: nande? what do you want from me
Hsj-chan: you murderer!
Guy: murderer? wha... ur mistaken! its not me who murdered Jsbluish!
Kei: chotto... how did you know! we havent told anything yet!
Guy: ehh?? ah..ano..
Kei: no more buts! lets go!

Deen-chan: *phone ringing* moshi moshi?
Hsj-chan: we caught him! were here at the police station!
Deen-chan: ah.. hai.. ja! well see you at the police station ok?
Hsj-chan: ja!
Daiki: what did she said?
Deen-chan: she said they caught him and they're at the police station!
Daiki: ja! ill call the guys... whoa.. Ryosuke! Hikaru kun! ur here! come on!
Cha-chan: eh? come where?
Daiki: Police Station!

At the Police Station....

Police: were gonna detain him forever because of killing Jsbluish!
Guy: eh! nande! nooo!!
Deen-cha: hmf! good thing to you!!!
Kei: come on lets go to Jsbluish!

[at the park]

Kei: Jsbluish?! Jsbluish?!
Jsbluish: hai?
Deen-chan: we have caught him! the one who killed you!
Jsbluish: honto ni?
Hikaru: your the only ghost that is kind! demo... please dont visit me when im alone!!
All: hahahaha!!!
Jsbluish: minna arigatou!! honto ni arigatou!!! i can now rest in heaven safetly! demo i have a problem...
Ryosuke: nani?
Jsbluish: my sister... my parent abandoned her... she dont have a home now!
Hikaru: she can stay with me! with my mom h4cksign!
Jsbluish: eh? honto? i really owe you my life guys!
Hikaru: its ok.. you dont have a life now...
All: hahahaha baka!!
Jsbluish: by the way... her name is Airi!

[suddenly a light appeared towars Jsbluish]

All: whoaa....sugee...
Angel: its time for you to go now....
Jsbluish: hai... Ja minna! Hontoni Arigato desu!! *waves her hand*
All: ja na!!

Hikaru: ma Airi… from now on, im your oniichan!
Airi: honto ni?
Hikaru: hai hontoni!
Airi: yay!! *hugs hikaru *

Voice: don’t get too happy….

Deen-chan: eh? Who… who’s that???
Daiki: I dunno…
Deen-chan: Kowai!!!
Daiki: daijoubu! Im here!!
Deen-chan: *smiles* hai!

Voice: don’t get too sweet co’z you might regret it…

Hsj-chan: oi… who are you!

Voice: *laughing * you’ll know me soon….


------End of part 16-----
Who’s that voice??
Hmm… better know in part 17!!!


kyaaaaaa i hvnt made part 17
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OMGoodness!!!
hikaru so kute hehe
*shocking* who could the "voice" be?? hmmm
that part creeped me out a bit lol
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hahahaha!!!! daijoubu... demo.. thanks for reading pafoua chan!!
thank you!!!
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* tears of happiness* ur welcome!!
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GOMEN FOR THE LOOOONG WAIT!!!!!!~~



---------PART 17---------


@ Hikaru’s house


h4ckrin: airi chan?

Airi: hai oniichan no okasan?

H4ckrin: you can just call me okasan! Besides you’re my new child ok?

Airi: hai! Thank you!

H4ckrin: call your oniichan now, tell him to have breakfast ok?

Airi: hai!


@ deen’s house


Deen: I wonder who’s that voice…

Arashi-chan: she did not show her face ne?

Deen: yeah but, I think ive heared that voice before…

Lexcia(arashi-chan): eh? Really? You did?

Deen: I don’t know but I think so…


@School


-HSJ-

Yuto: vann chan? Vann chan?? Where are you?

Kei: ei ei whats up?

Yuto: im searching for vann chan!

Yabu: oh! Vann chan!

Yuto: eh? Where? Where? Where? Huh? I cant see her where??

Daiki: wahahahahaha!!!!

Ryosuke: hahahaha!! Baka baka baka!!

Takaki: Bkanishi illness!!

Yuto: eeh? Huhuhu maybe I have a bakanishi illness after all…

Chinen: you do have Yuto!!

Ryutaro: tsk.. tsk.. tsk…

Keito: poor yuto kun… being infected by bakanishi illness…


-girls-


Vann-chan: ne minna have you seen yuto kun?

Deen: iie have you seen him cha chan?

Cha-chan: iie, have you seen him geh-chan?

Geh-chan: iie, have you seen him yuuki chan?

Yuuki: iie, have you seen him Pyon pyon?

Pyon Pyon: Iie, have you seen him Lexcia chan?

Lexcia: iie Have you seen him Jessee chan? (hsj-chan)

Jessee-chan: Iie, have you seen him Zura chan?

Zura-chan: iie, have you seen him Anime_delish chan?

Anime_Delish: No have you seen him rurupan?

Rurupan: iie, have you seen him Amal chan?

Amal-chan: iie, have you seen him… errr….

All: hahahaha!!!!

Deen: ah! There he is!

Vann-chan: eh? Where? Where? Where?!!! WHERE!!! Huhuhuhu

All: wahahahaaha!!!

Vann-chan: nandayo!

Geh-chan: Bakanishi illness…

Cha-chan: hai…. Bakanishi illness dayo…

Jessee-chan: poor vann chan being infected by it…

Vann-chan: huhuhuhuhuhuhu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


[school bell rings…..]


Deen: kyaa!! Were gonna be late!

Cha-chan: yeah!!! Lets go! Ja minna!

Vann-chan: jana!

Geh-chan: bye bye!


[at the classroom]


Yuto: Vann chan!!!!!!!

Vann-chan: Yuto Kun!!!!

was about to hug but… the students saw them…

Vann-chan: ah… genki …des…ka yuto kun?

Yuto: hai.. genki desu!!!

Sensei: ja minna hajimeruyo!

Students: hai…


[after class]


Deen: ne minna….

Cha-chan: yeah?

Deen-chan: its almost graduation time ne?

Jessee: ohh yeah…

Vann-chan: ohhh =( me gonna miss you guys!

Yuuki: watashi mo….

Pyon Pyon: IMYA… [I miss you already]

Zura: I hope we still get to see each other!

Geh-chan: demo…. We still have 1 month left ne?

Rurupan: dakedo… its still short….

Anime_delish: huhuhuhu me don’t wanna let our friendship end!

Lexcia: yeah… me to!

Voice: hahahaha graduation ne??

Deen-chan: oi! Who are you!

Jessee: its you again!

Geh-chan: Why don’t you show yourself!

[showed herself]

Pafoua: hahahaha [evil laugh] im pafoua… don’t think you’d be happy in that graduation..

Yuuki: What Do You want!

Pafoua: Ill make sure that graduation will never make you happy!! [w/ an angry look]

[ran off]

Vann-chan: oi chotto!

Zura: what was that supposed to mean?

Lexcia: our… graduation?

Jessee: Yabai….. desu ne?

Pyon Pyon: do we have to save it?

Geh-chan: Of Course!!



-----------------END OF PART 17-----------------
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sorry if its short... hehehe
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kyaaaa sugoi!! it's great!! me love it!! hehe
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hahhah when i saw my name i was shocked hahaha
my heart stopped a bit but it made me laugh hehe
deen chan i LOVE it!!
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waaaaaaaaa~~
LOVE IT .
MOREMOREMOREMORE !!
damn stdents !!
making yuto can't hug me ):
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woahhh..part 17~!!!
hehe
hyperhyper..
cant wait for the next chap!
LOVE IT~
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woahh~ part 17!! kyaa~ :] deen-chan~~ xD
keep up the good work!!
can't wait for the next chapter =]
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minna!!! i cant think of next parts!!!!! huhuhuhuh!!!!!

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