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Yatta, it's part 5. Sorry for the quick post! I know lot of you want to read it, so ta-da~!! Here you go. =]]

Part 5
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Ryo's side

Ryo was in the dance room, sitting down on the floor, eating cupped ramen.

Ryo: Ahhhh. So bored. Why do they even like that Michiyo girl. They sure have bad tastes. -slurps up ramen- Ahhh. oiishi.

Then suddenly two people comes up to the door.

Somebody: Is this the way, auntie?

Somebody #2: Of course!!! Do you know trust me?

Somebody: Like I said, I just met you today.
[Sounds familiar, does it? xDD]

Somebody #2: tsk. You. You. YOU! Just wait till I tell your mother, young lady.

Somebody: .................okay. i trust you, auntie.

Somebody #2: Ok. go in. Dozo.

Somebody: Ehhh? Why?

Somebody #2: i'm your elder. SO DO WHAT I SAY!

Ryo goes out: Oi! What the heck do you.....oh.... it's you....

And guess who it was.....

Shige's mom: RYO-CHAN~!! My my. You look so handsome today!! Let me give you a kiss!

Ryo: No thanks.

Shige's mom: Nani??

Amme starts to giggle. then Ryo and Shige's mom stare at Amme.

Amme: gomen?

Ryo: Who's she?

Shige's mom: Oh.. This is Shige's cousin, Koizumi Amane. She's going to stay in Japan for awhile. And Amane-chan. This is Ryo-chan, Shige's bandmate.

Amme: Helllo~!!

Ryo looks at her. Amme looks at Ryo. Ryo looks away. Amme still looking at Ryo. Ryo looks back. Amme stares at him. Ryo gives Amme a glare. Amme gives a smile. Ryo gives a What-the face. Shige's mom smiles.

Shige's mom: oh ho ho ho. You guys already like each other?

Ryo: Eh? [shocked eh]

Amme: Eh? [happy eh]

Shige's mom: Guess i'll leave you guys alone. I'm going to find Shige. okay? Ryo-chan please take care of Amane-chan~!!

Ryo: But....But...But..

Shige's mom: -scary face- YOU BETTER NOT HURT HER.....or else. -smiles- Have fun you love birds~!!

Ryo: But...but...BUT!!!!

Amme: -does a shy laugh-

Ryo: Go in.

Amme: heehhe. Hai~!!!

Ryo: [copies Amme] hehehe. just go in~!!

Amme and Ryo walks in the dancing room. Ryo walks to the floor and starts to lay down. Ryo closes his eyes. Amme looks over and stares at his face. Ryo opens his eyes and sees that Amme is staring at him.

Ryo: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

Amme: Nothing. There's nothing to do here.

Ryo: Just...I don't know..... sleep.

Amme: I don't want to that... Want to here a joke? It's really funny.

Ryo: No.

Amme: Okay well a tortoise and a rabbit are abou....

Ryo: I SAID NO!!!

Ryo gives Amme a go-away loook. Amme looks down looking sad.

Amme:.....Gomen..I'm... just....wanted....to...be...friends....

Slowly tears starts to fall.

Ryo:*Great job, Ryo. You made a girl cry.* Ahh gomen. Don't cry ne?

Ryo gives Amme his hankerchief, but Amme wouldn't take it.

Ryo: Oi. Take it.

Amme:........................

Ryo: OI I SAID TAKE IT! Ah....I mean.. Take it...please.

Amme still wouldn't take it. Ryo, not knowing what to do, starts wiping her tears. Amme looks at Ryo, shocked. Amme couldn't believe it that Ryo was wiping her tears.
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Was it okay? Just to let you know, there's going to be another part of Ryo's side. I thought this part was getting alittle long. hahaha.
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Okay. here's the continued part. Enjoy~!!

Part 5 continued.
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Ryo's side continued.

Amme quickly push Ryo away.

Amme [shocked]: I could -sniff sniff- do it -sniff sniff- myself.

Amme takes the hankerchief.

Ryo: Okay tell me the joke.

Amme: Eh? Honto?

Amme starts smiling again.

Amme: Okay well... A tortoise and hare are about to race......

Ryo: *she sure gets happy easily.*-glare at Amme-

Amme: So the rabbit takes off and is winning by far.

Ryo: -glare-

Amme: But the tortoise doesn't give up, so inch by inch it keeps going. So he's giving his all. And then he looks to the ground and he sees a snail moving its hardest.

Ryo: snail?

Amme: Shut up and listen. So the tortoise sees the snail, feels REALLY sorry for it, and says to the snail, "You! Get on!" And the snail gets on. So the snail and tortoise give their all and keep going.

Ryo: -glare-

Amme: After awhile they see a slug struggling along, too.

Ryo: Slug?

Amme: So the tortoise sees the slug and feels REALLY REALLY sorry for it, and says to it, "Hey slug! You get on, too!" And it gets on.

Ryo: -glare-

Amme: And then when the slug got on, and the snail is there, the slug greets the snail and says, "Hello!" The snail looks back and guess what it says in return?

Ryo:............................

Amme: -hits Ryo- Oi! WHAT DID IT SAY?

Ryo: What did it say?

Amme: "Hey, grab on tight, this dude's fast!" HAHAHAHAHA.

Ryo: -glare-

Amme: You see! The snail tells the slug to hang on tight because THE TORTOISE IS FAST!! HAHAHAHA! -stops laughing- Not funny?

Ryo [sarcastic]: -fake smile- Very funny, insanely funny. -glare-

Amme: Hehehe. Really? But why aren't you laughing?

Ryo: i'm laughing in the inside.

Amme: We are inside.

Ryo: Deep in my heart, DEEP DEEP, in my heart, i find it funny.

Amme: Awhhhh. How sweet!!

Ryo: un. Whatever.

Amme: iloveyou.

Ryo: Say what?
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[Note: I got this joke at a korean drama called Full House on episode 14. And i thought IT WAS HILAROUS~!! So I thought I HAD to put it in the story. You guys should watch that drama. xDD]
That's the end of Ryo's part. You guys like it?
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^____^ I LOVED IT!!!!! hahah I love Amme !! She's hilarious! love the joke too hahaa it made me laugh >.<!! yaaaaaaay so goood! mooooore please?
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^____^ I LOVED IT!!!!! hahah I love Amme !! She's hilarious! love the joke too hahaa it made me laugh >.<!! yaaaaaaay so goood! mooooore please?


I'm glad that you loved it. ^_______^
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ahahhaah..i LOVE IT!! it was my character part!! kyaa its so great!!
ano i've seen the drama full house!! and that part is great!!kyaaa more want more!!
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Mai-Lee wrote:

ahahhaah..i LOVE IT!! it was my character part!! kyaa its so great!!
ano i've seen the drama full house!! and that part is great!!kyaaa more want more!!



I'm glad that you like mai-chan! Hehe.
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heheh why wouldn't i like it!! it was my part ne!! kyaaa..i could really imagine this!! kyaa its great!! if only they could turn this fanfic into a real live drama!! it would be even better and the us actually acting it out!!
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LOL! i love the joooke! !! the tortoise was fast!!! kya~! i loove full house. XD anyway, mooooore!!!!!! i looooove it!!!
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thats hilarious hr glares alot, i really like this, u doing good job
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Mai-Lee wrote:

heheh why wouldn't i like it!! it was my part ne!! kyaaa..i could really imagine this!! kyaa its great!! if only they could turn this fanfic into a real live drama!! it would be even better and the us actually acting it out!!


Yeahhh. That would be SOO AWESOME~ You guys as actresses, me the director. jk. xDD
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thats hilarious hr glares alot, i really like this, u doing good job :D


I'm glad that you like. Thanks for reading my fic. =333
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jally23 wrote:

LOL! i love the joooke! !! the tortoise was fast!!! kya~! i loove full house. XD anyway, mooooore!!!!!! i looooove it!!!


I know. The joke was HILARIOUS~ Yeah Full house was a great drama. hahaha.
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Mai-Lee wrote:

heheh why wouldn't i like it!! it was my part ne!! kyaaa..i could really imagine this!! kyaa its great!! if only they could turn this fanfic into a real live drama!! it would be even better and the us actually acting it out!!


Yeahhh. That would be SOO AWESOME~ You guys as actresses, me the director. jk. xDD


kyaaa yep you would be director!! its ur story of course!! and it will all be great ne!!
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Part 6
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Yamapi's side

Yamapi was walking to the dressing room. Then he opens the door and sees a sea of different kind of flowers and chocolates.

Yamapi: What the.....?

There was flowers and chocolate EVERYWHERE!!!!

Yamapi picked up a box of chocolate. It had a note.

Pi-Tan
I can never forget you.
I can never forget to love you.
Loving you is not a habit.
Blah. Blah. Blah.
I'm not really good at this love poem thing.
So I'll keep it simple.
YOU'RE SO HOT~
I LOVE YOU PI-TAN~
From your secret admirer. [It's not Eri]


Yamapi: It's so obvious that this is from Eri. I bet everything was from Eri. *Why can't she never understand that I don't like her!*

Yamapi throws the chocolate on the floor. Suddenly Kumiko goes in the room, not noticing that Yamapi was in there.

Kumiko: AHHH. That Micky. Just watch what I'm going to do to you. MUAHAHAHHA. -stops evil laugh- Why is there so many flowers? oooh. chocolate. Where's my make-up bag? Err.

Yamapi: Anou.....

Kumiko still not paying attention to Yamapi, tries to find her make-up bag. [Note: Kumiko and Micky are News' makeup artist] Then Kumiko picks up some flowers. That one had a note on it too.

Kumiko: Who the heck is PI-TAN? Oh well. Sorry whoever pi-tan is. I'm going to eat your chocolates. hahaha.

Yamapi: Go ahead you can have them.

Kumiko: oh thanks.

Kumiko take a piece of chocolate and turned around to see who it is.

Kumiko:

Kumiko drops the chocolate.

Kumiko: Ya...Ya...Ya...Yam...Yam...Yama...Yama...Pi.....

Yamapi: Oh domo. Are you a worker here?

Kumiko: Yama...Yama...Pi.... AH. Hai. I do.

Yamapi: Ahh. nice to meet you then.

Kumiko: ahsjkhfajkdgf.

Yamapi: Excuse me?

Kumiko: shakjhfduiaa.

Yamapi starts to laugh.

Kumiko: *Great. First it was Masuda from News and now Yamapi? Next thing you know i'm going to meet Ikuta Toma.*

Yamapi: Are you okay?

Kumiko: GENKI DESU! Err. I got to go.

Kumiko quicky try to find her make-up kit and jolted to the door. BUMP! Kumiko falls backward, but then Yamapi tries to catch Kumiko, but then they both fall.

Eri: Ite.... OI WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING! -looks at Yamapi- Yamapi.......

Kumiko was on top Yamapi. Yamapi had his arm wrapped around Kumiko.

Eri: Yamapi...
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There's going to be a continued one for Yamapi. I'm tired. so I'll write later. ^________^
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omg..this is SO EXCITING!! omg..i really LOVE UR fict!!
it's so funny!! me love it me want more!! kyaaaa i'm so excited!!
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