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waaaa! so cuuute! maki and yuto!! so compatible!!! XD hahha!! looove it!!
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gomen deenchan for leaving yesterday!! my internet wouldn't work until right now!!!! hehe i hope u understand demo about the song?? hm...i dont know yet!
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---------------CHAPTER 4-----------------

Opening Theme : A day In our Life by Arashi

At Chicharei Jemineki’s Side….


Reiku: ano… yabu sempai…

Yabu: hai?

Reiku: please teach me the other part! Onegai shimasu!! *bows to yabu*

Yabu: *smiles sweetly* sure!

Reiku: *blushes* thank you!

Maki: ne… I bought many lunch today!

All: eeh!! Really?? Yehey!!

Neku: ne yabu sempai you can taste it! Its really great!

Yabu: really?

Maki: no!! its not!!

Yabu: ja.. let me taste it?

Maki: hai..

Yabu: itadaki………..

Yuto: MAKI CHAAAAAAAAAN!!!

All: eehhh????????

Yuto: I heared you made a big obento today!!

Maki: ah.. hai!!

Yuto: don’t forget tomorrow ok!!!

Maki: hai!

Yuto: cho…to… can I taste this one?

Maki: un! If its you hehehe

Yuto: itadaki….

Yabu: oi yuto Im the one who’ll taste this first!!!

Yuto: eeh!! No!! me!! Me!!

Yabu: no! me!

Maki: ano.. I have lots more!!

Yuto: no I want this one!!

Yabu: no that’s mine!

Yuto: oi yabu sempai! Give food to your kouhais!!

Yabu: im your sempai so I will be the one who’ll decide who’s gonna eat!!

Yuto: no! no no no!!

Maki: STOOPPP!!!!!!!!! *yelled*

Yuto & yabu: GOMENASAI!! *bows*

Maki: ah!! Gomen!!!

Yuto: ano.. you can have it yabu sempai…

Yabu: NO its ok… lets just give it to Maki chan..

Yuto: ahh yeah!!! Hai maki chan!! Dozo! *feed’s maki * say aa!

Maki: *eats the food* not good!!!!!

Yuto: eeh? * Taste the food * eeeh!!!! UMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maki: EEEH!!!!

Yabu: honto? Wait… *taste the food*…. EEEEH!!! UMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Miki: I didnt know yabu sempai also likes food!!

Charu: ne minna I gotta go!

Chisato: where are you going??

Jessee: ohh… I remember…. Mwahahaha!!!!

Charu: e… ehh!! That’s why I told you.. IT’S NOT A DATE~~~!!!!!

All: ohh really?

Charu: yeah! Believe me!!!!

Hikaru: *opened the door* charu chan?

Charu: h..hi…

Hikaru: hello charu chan!

Charu: ja minna…

Hikaru: Yabu sempai!

Yabu: hai?

Hikaru: please let me borrow Charu chan!!

Yabu: sure! Were done now anyway… were just eating hehehe!

Hikaru: ja! Arigato!! *grabs charu’s arms* lets go~~~

Charu: eeeehhh

@ the mall

Hikaru: ne charu chan…

Charu: yes hikaru kun??

Hikaru: I feel like….

Charu: you feel like??

Hikaru: I feel like were dating!

Charu: ee…ehh!!??

Hikaru: because… you know… this is the first time I’ve ever dated a girl!

Charu: eeehh!! Well.. me too first time I went out alone with a guy.

Hikaru: so is this a date?

Charu: well you can say that?

Hikaru: yay! Ja lets buy yuto kun a gift?

Charu: un!


@ the school [Cutie Berry]


Kaori: ne megu chan

Megumi: hai?

Kaori: what do you think our dresses will be?

Megumi: well go on a puff mini skirt which is color blue with the out line of yellow then top is…

Kaeri: nani nani nani?

Megumi: 1 sleeve tube…

Yumi: eh! Kawai!

Yuuki: yeah can’t wait to see it!!

Megumi: demo I only made my costume… hahah!!

Kaori: eeh?? Ja hurry up with our costumes ok?

Megumi: ja as you wish…


@ chicharei jemineki…


Chisato: I wonder what charu and hikaru kun are doing?

Neku: they’re dating ne?

Miki: yeah…

Maki: kya~~ im jealous of charu chan! Hahaha!!

Yuto: ah! Your jealous? Wanna go out sometimes?

Maki: eh? Go out?

Yuto: ah.. go out eat? Yeah.. yeah.. like that….

Maki: ah! Were just gonna eat? Then ill just cook you food! Hahaha

Yuto: eeh?? Hahaha! Ma… I love your foods!

Neku: *whispers to Reiku * ne reiku chan… maki chan dosent really know the meaning of love ne??

Reiku: *whispers back* ma…

Jessee: oi oi oi… what am I seeing…. Look at these two…

Maki: eeh!!

Chisato: yeah… looks like their gonna be next to charu chan!!

Yuto & Maki: EHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yuto: no.. its not… e..he..he.. ne ma…maki chan?

Maki: hai!

Yabu: ok ok ok.. back to work!!

All: Hai!!

Jessee: Mabushi~ hisashi ga kimi no namae wo yobu

Chisato: Onnaji kimochi de Sora ga mieru yo~

Reiku: Tsurai toki Hitorikiri de Namida o koraenai de

Yabu: ok lets stop at right…. There….

Neku: nani?

Yabu: hehehe well have to continue this on Monday!

Maki: eh??

Yabu: have you forgotten about yuto’s birthday?

Miki: oh yeah its tomorrow!

Yabu: and we have to buy a gift!!!

Neku: oh yeah!!

Maki: ill give a gift to him!! Hahaha

Jessee: ma of course I have to buy to?? Grr why do I have to?

Chisato: yeah yeah why!!

Reiku: I will only see that boy again!!!! Grrr

Chisato: yeah me too!!!

Jessee: yeah and the boy that is same as me!!! GRRRR

Reiku Chisato Jessee: GRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

Maki: so I will see him again?

Miki: yeah… me too!!!

Neku: so do I!!

Maki, Miki Neku: haaaiii *melts*

@ the mall

Charu: this one!! I think Yuto kun will like this!

Hikaru: yeaah!!! I think so too!!

Charu: should we buy more?

Hikaru: hahah yeah!!

Charu: im sure he’ll love this!

Hikaru: for sure!!

@ school

Chisato: ne yabu sempai..

Yabu: yeah??

Chisato: will we wait for charu and hikaru kun?

Yabu: just call them! Hehehe

Chisato: hai! *calls charu*…… moshi moshi?

Charu: hai? Chisa chan?

Chisato: ill we wait for you guys?

Charu: hmm… no ill just go home! Hehehe

Chisato: ohh okie!! Ja!

Charu: ja!! *Hangs the phone*

Yabu: ja what did she said?

Chisato: she said she would just go home…

Yabu: ohh.. ok then.. Ja.. Guys! Its time to go now!

Maki: haai!!

Neku: ja na!!

Reiku: mata ne ashita!

Miki: mata ne!

Chisato: ja!!

Jessee: chisato chan! Reiku chan!

Chisato & reiku: hai?

Jessee: lets go together!

Chisato & reiku: un!


@ the gate


Chisato: ja im going now!

Jessee: yeah! Me too!

Reiku: ja na!!

On reiku’s way home…. Reiku bumped into a guy and fell down…

Reiku: itai!

Jin: ah..gomen… daijoubu?

Reiku: ah..

Jin & Reiku: EEEHH!!! ITS YOU!!

Jin: why don’t you watch where you going!

Reiku: eeh! Demo sa… I didn’t know u have a good side…

Jin: na… nani!! No! its not!!

Reiku: ohh… soka na….

Jin: nani!!!

Reiku: what ever… im going home…

Jin: where exactly is your home??

Reiku: right here *points the house infront of jin *

Jin: eeeh!! That’s your house??

Reiku: yeah why? Something wrong?

Jin: our house is only at the back of your house!!

Reiku: eeh!! That’s your house???!!!

Jin: yeah.. ah! You should go home now!

Reiku: ah yeah.! Eehh! Why am I being nice to you any way!!

Jin: eeeh!!! Nani!!!

Reiku: wahaha!! Ja ne!! *runned*

Jin: what’s wrong with her… hmf…


CLOSING: Your Seed by Hey say Jump


----------------------END OF CHAPTER 4-------------------

What will happen to Yuto’s birthday??

Will Jin and Reiku be friends?
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KYAAAAAAAA~
OMG~
DEENCHAN
I LOVEEE IT..!!
uwaaaaaa..date wth hikachan~
hehe
i was laughing at ths part
Maki: eh? Go out?

Yuto: ah.. go out eat? Yeah.. yeah.. like that….
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LOVE ur fic deenchan~
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kyaa sugoi! me love it!! me want more!!
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GYAAA .
LOVE IT. .
HAHA~
*maki doesn't really know the meaning of love
pooorr heer !! hahhaha~~

anyway ..
can't wait for the next paartt^^
ganbatte ne deenchan !!
hehehe ..
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I miss out a few parts! gomen!!
THE PARTS WERE AWESOME!!
Great job. hehehe.
MORE~
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thanks for the comments!!!!!!
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haha this is what MEGUMI was talking about!!! huhuhu i hope u like it!


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omg such a kute story ^^

deen chan the outfit is kute ^^
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ahhh gomen i juz started reading ur fic...
so i actually HAVE a character in this...
juz curious, did u juz assign roles? cuz i dun remember.....
not that im complaining(((:

anw, cute fic! ;D
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kyaa cute dress! me like!! no me love it!
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haha hope u like this one

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that's kute too!!
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WOW!!
the new chap is so cute!!
btw..will I still draw Chicharei Jemineki??
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