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Posted 7/28/08
I just decided that I'll post all my poems here on this tread so here they are.
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Last one I wrote yesterday.

I Was Wondering.....

And I wonder will you see me
As I stand a thousand worlds away
Will you hear my voice
As I cry for you
Driving the sky wild
Can you feel me
as I stand so far away
Will the touch of my hand fade
Will you forget me
If you do
You surely will hear as I shatter
Into the stars in the sky
Loving you from so far away
As they love the moon

I look in the mirror
Only to quickly glance away
I cannot bear to see me reflected without you
Lonely in love
Driving me from myself
that only a shell remains
I am with you
I don't want any new memories
That drive you further from me
Every smile that I will make
Is a prayer to return to you
When you are with me
Only then am i not
a shell of myself
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Posted 7/28/08

Pandora1203 wrote:

Last one I wrote yesterday.

I Was Wondering.....

And I wonder will you see me
As I stand a thousand worlds away
Will you hear my voice
As I cry for you
Driving the sky wild
Can you feel me
as I stand so far away
Will the touch of my hand fade
Will you forget me
If you do
You surely will hear as I shatter
Into the stars in the sky
Loving you from so far away
As they love the moon

I look in the mirror
Only to quickly glance away
I cannot bear to see me reflected without you
Lonely in love
Driving me from myself
that only a shell remains
I am with you
I don't want any new memories
That drive you further from me
Every smile that I will make
Is a prayer to return to you
When you are with me
Only then am i not
a shell of myself


u did a really good job^^ keep up to good work^^
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Posted 7/28/08
i thought it was amazing and i loved it. great work
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Posted 7/29/08
Thats a really good poem. =] You've done a great job composing it. =D hope to see more of your work soon
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