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Posted 8/11/08
some of em depressing, some of them physical, some of them happy, and some of them cold, but then again i dont know how to label them
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Wow so like mixture of a lot of themes? That sounds interesting
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*nods* people usualy enjoy reading them
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Hm? Can I read one? Please! *looks at you innocently*

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hm..... maybe just one then *gets up and grabs his black book off of his shelf and sits back down with it* the first one should do, even though its kind of long
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Alrighty! *smiles as she crosses her legs and listens* I don't mind the length
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Posted 8/11/08
~~~~ A Dedication to: Crippled Emotion~~~~
by Phillip Meseck



Sitting among gravestones of broken dreams, that are

laden among my field, the chilling breeze pokes at my

wound, as my gray sky vomits onto me, I sit, I stare,

and sulk in silence, as the heavens rain blood onto

me.... and here i sit... watching people. Watching

the poeple walk by, if they look they run away in

fear, but i dont care, for my gates are closed, i

prefere to be alone but, lonelyness is deadly. Under

this condition, for such a long time, my heart lost

its fire, never to burn again, and here i sat in my

field, weeping, sulking, and sad for love is no more

out in the distancem sat a girl who had her own field

as desolat as mine.... mine... mine.. she felt my

glance and stared at me with fear... until we both

got up and took each other's hands, and alked

together as the gravestones glared at us... we have

seen each other's field, and our crippled emotions

rekindled our fires, for now it is no longer my field

or your field it is our field, together we walk, hand

in hand, through our blood and our darkness and hold

each other tight as the red moon rises...

~end~
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*Stares in awe* That was...wow *smiles up at you* That was beautiful!
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Why thank you, its been a while since i've told this poem or any to anyone *closes the book and sets it on his lap* this one is one of my first and favorites
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Posted 8/11/08
Well then I'm honored that you told me that *smiles* I think it may turn out to be one of my favorite poems too *chuckles*
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Posted 8/11/08
Nice *picks up the wine glass and finishes it, exhalling deeply* ahh.. *setting the glass down again and leaning forward resting his chin on his knuckles, grinning at you*
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Hm? *tilts head and watches you* Is there something on my face? *blinks confused*
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oh why no there isnt *streches and cracks his neck* sorry its just a habit *opens the drawer under the coffee table* can i get you anything? *pulls out a glass vial and refills his glass* if you name it i probably have it in here *rummages inside*
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Posted 8/11/08
Hm may I have a pepsei? *watches the vial with curiosity*
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Posted 8/11/08
*takes out a can of pepsei and hands it to oyu, putting away the vial and sniffs his glass, inhaling deeply* ah, much better *sips from it, and smiles at you*
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