(fanfic) Beloved Little "Thief"
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Posted 7/28/08 , edited 9/8/08
Beloved Little "Thief"
BY:
Lawlietandgiovanne





This fanfic is an IkutoXOC *sry all amuto fans* Ha Ha Ha Please enjoy! (oh and if the grades aren't rite then sry i got rly confused with the grades she's in the smae grade as Kukai) (italics are thoughts) (bold is guardian chara's talking) Oh and if your picky and the authors NEED to have PERFECT CORRECT gramma please don't read this...it's not perfect but you can understand prolly just one or two mistakes. FORGIVE THE AUTHOR!

Chapter 1- Guardian Eggs and the Dumpty Key

I'll end it here. I'm not sure if the ending was a little too much....that last sentence....well whatever. Please Read and Review...or just read. Tell me if it's good or bad. Or horrible.....arigatou!!!!


Chapter 2- Thieves' Fight



Chapter 3- The "Theif" Revealed



Thank you all for reading. I know it's been long but I JUST got back from China and I have been tired and such.


Chapter 4- The Park.



Yeah this one was short and boring but it'll get better.....i hope.

Chapter 5- Invasion



PLEASE PLEASE PELASE PELASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME IF IT'S OKAY OR NOT.
Posted 7/30/08
Wow its so cool ^_^
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Posted 7/30/08

AmuxIku wrote:

Wow its so cool ^_^


ARIGATOU! ur my first reviewer......I'm so happy! Bwahahhaa I shall write more now!!!!!!
Posted 7/31/08

Lawlietandgiovanne wrote:


AmuxIku wrote:

Wow its so cool ^_^


ARIGATOU! ur my first reviewer......I'm so happy! Bwahahhaa I shall write more now!!!!!!


Your welcome ^_^
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Posted 8/6/08

AmuxIku wrote:

Wow its so cool ^_^


i know!! it is cool!! good job on da story so far!!! xD luv it!!

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Posted 9/22/08 , edited 12/15/08
Chapter 6- Nikaido



Sry i procrastinate a lot. it sucks egggs. hope you ppll still read this!
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Posted 12/17/08 , edited 12/23/08
Chapter 7-

"HELP!!!!! THERE'S TROUBLE!!!!!!!" Kei shouted

The guardians looked at each other with worried faces.
"What happened to Hazuki-san?" Tadase asked.
"I don't know but this guy with wierd orange hair was talking on his cellphone and he found us and i managed to escape but please please help kaede!"

The guardians rushed out after Kei. She led the way to the hidden greenhouse that nobody knew about. They passed through the entrance only to fine vines and other greenhouse plants. Nobody was there. Kei searched frantically around the grenhouse but found nothing.

"Kei, what did the guy look like?" Tadase asked.
"Well...let's see. He has orange hair, glasses and....is evil. He said something to some wierd lady about corrupting children's eggs." Kei explained. "Oh and he's a teacher but none that Kaede has."

"Well everyone needs to find Hazuki-san first. So just spread out and look." Kukai said. Everyone nodded and left.
"You got it! Detective Yaya is on duty!"


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Posted 8/9/09
peeps ima post this on my page now so sorry guys, not like u ppl read it anyways
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