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Posted 7/28/08 , edited 4/7/09
Above the heavens... Numb...


We meet at a young age
We spents days together
We hated being apart
We fell in love
The Stars brightened our lust
The Moon iluminated out passion
The Sun kept our flame of love alive
We could never be seperated
Our hearts were finally one
For years we loved
For years we smiled
We wiped each other tears away when sad
We were in each others dreams
No matter the hardship we made it together
Our love reached beyond the heavens
We wanted to spend our lives together forever
So we did
However forever is a long time
We grew tired
Clouds started to come
They blocked the sun, moon, and stars
Our love slowly grew further and further apart
The flame was being blown out by the winds of fate
We started to fight
Words we didn't want to say came out
You tried to ask for forgivness
I denied
You try and bring our passion back
But I've become to numb to feel your touch
You broke my heart
So I killed it
You may be alone
But I'll be watching you
Above the heavens
Upon a sapphire pillar
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This is my longest poem to date! Hope ya ppl like it! ^-^~
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Posted 8/19/08
Whaaaaa! Its really great and its really deep too ! a really master pice ^^
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Posted 8/24/08

Yamira wrote:

Whaaaaa! Its really great and its really deep too ! a really master pice ^^


Thnx!! I was waiting for someone to respond!! Thnx!!
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Posted 10/13/08
so sad.....
but really meaningful.....
Posted 12/6/08
yeah really sad at d end... magnificent
Posted 6/3/09

CresentDemon wrote:


This is my longest poem to date! Hope ya ppl like it! ^-^~


Such a deep poem,yet so sad

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