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Posted 12/18/08
That was really nice! Was it inspired by anyone you know?
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That was really nice! Was it inspired by anyone you know?


One question: Who are you refering to? an individual or some group or everyone?(no offence, just asking to remove my curiousity of your question)
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Posted 12/20/08
It can be any of the choices that you mentioned...
Posted 12/20/08 , edited 1/25/09

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It can be any of the choices that you mentioned...


Okay, I see. If you were asking me, my inspirations are the things, actions or people I noticed or digged into(insight) that I see in my lifetime to create my own poetry. I am a songwriter/guitarist/singer, so I do write poetry and perform them on stage. I was also inspired by many other musicans, other poetry, songs, stories, and people. It depends on your definition of poetry and inspiration, it's different for everyone.
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Posted 12/28/08
That was really deep...
I didn't know that you were a songwriter/guitarist/singer... that's really cool too.
Posted 12/30/08 , edited 12/30/08

digitalized_fangirl_92 wrote:

That was really deep...
I didn't know that you were a songwriter/guitarist/singer... that's really cool too.


Sure, I guess you can say that...
Of course you wouldn't have know that I was, if I didn't tell you or that you haven't looked at my profile. Maybe..I should have not said it in public, but then again you asked a great question and it seems to show proof about how I got my inspirations is to tell the truth. Once again, it depends on your definition of cool. Isn't there a forum about inspiration in this group? And what about you, your inspirations?
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Posted 1/10/09
Inspiration comes to me in different forms. It can be having my dad go abroad in order to work, a friend betraying me but I still stand by their side, or even a simple picture from the internet like the poem that I posted here. I am currently working on another poem about the death of my grandfather. Most of the time, poetry is a way for me to deal with problems and obtacles in life without resorting to violence or digging myself a deeper hole that is even harder to get out of.
Posted 1/14/09

digitalized_fangirl_92 wrote:

Inspiration comes to me in different forms. It can be having my dad go abroad in order to work, a friend betraying me but I still stand by their side, or even a simple picture from the internet like the poem that I posted here. I am currently working on another poem about the death of my grandfather. Most of the time, poetry is a way for me to deal with problems and obtacles in life without resorting to violence or digging myself a deeper hole that is even harder to get out of.


Hmmm...very good. Reading or writing poetry can be a good way to relax after conflicts that get a way with you. Poetry is an art, as the art of expressing of your mood, stories, and imagery that comes to mind. I'm sorry that your grandfather had his concluion in this world. Then again that quote (not exact) "We shall be brought to the world from dust and we shall become dust again" from the bible(sorry if your not religious). Do you need any help? btw what poem type are you writing about? Does it have rhythm (ex: like anapests, trochees, iambs etc.)?It's a free verse, blank verse, or other specific pattern to it?


Posted 1/14/09 , edited 1/14/09
Random Limerick(untitled)

Once upon a time there was a weird cat
who sat there on that coloured mat
he scratched that ball
and heard a phone call
to find out he was turning fat
Posted 1/14/09
there once was a dog named rocky
and somehow that dog like pocky
he ran in circle
to find a turtle
and knew that pocky was with mucky?...bad, but I don't know?
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Posted 1/18/09
Thanks for your condolences. I appreciate the offer but I'm almost done with the poem. I just need to fix the first stanza. Your limericks are really random and funny at the same time.
Posted 1/20/09

digitalized_fangirl_92 wrote:

Thanks for your condolences. I appreciate the offer but I'm almost done with the poem. I just need to fix the first stanza. Your limericks are really random and funny at the same time.


Oh okay, good luck with your poem. Limericks are supposed to be funny and random to summarize that limericks are nonscene.
Try it, it's fun and you can play with your wording.
Posted 1/20/09
One day there was a hedgehog
playing on the log
he went to see
and saw a bee
that was stringing a random frog
Posted 1/20/09 , edited 1/25/09
I walked in the square
trying to find my love there
I looked around
she gain 10 pounds
and thought it was a nightmare
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Posted 1/24/09

You really make me laugh a lot. I really like your proflie pics. Where do you get them? By the way, I don't want to sound like a know it all or anything but you spelled nightmare wrong. I don't know if that was intentional or accidental.
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