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Posted 7/29/08
Heres a poem I wrote on my Trip in France. At the moment it still doesn't have a Title. But I'll be glad to take suggestions from you guys =].


Frustration, no.
What is this feeling?
This feeling I have been cradling for some time now
I swore to myself that I wasn't in love with you
I swore to myself I wouldn't even look at you
but as I journeyed throughout this majestic place
this place that wafts with gentle breeze carrying the smell of baguettes
I think of no-one but you, often causing me to remember
those smiles that I looked forward to everyday
the joys and conversations we've had with one another
and all those fun memories that lingers in the past
A tear slowly drops from the bowels of my eye
What is this feeling that torments me ever so?
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Posted 7/30/08
Great poem!! I have a suggestion for a title!! It's probably not good though... how about "Feelings that Linger..."...?
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CresentDemon wrote:

Great poem!! I have a suggestion for a title!! It's probably not good though... how about "Feelings that Linger..."...?


Thats pretty good if you ask me. But I was aiming more for 1 worded titles xD. But I'll most likely pick that if nothing good comes up. Thanks for the suggestion
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azndisaster wrote:


CresentDemon wrote:

Great poem!! I have a suggestion for a title!! It's probably not good though... how about "Feelings that Linger..."...?


Thats pretty good if you ask me. But I was aiming more for 1 worded titles xD. But I'll most likely pick that if nothing good comes up. Thanks for the suggestion


Okayz!! Fine with me!! Great poem again BTW!

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