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OKIE IM BORED SO.........Ima haff a avi contest and a writie contest ^0^

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like the our first contest really LOL

Writie:
Okay this one ish new, just make like a one chap storii? like a oneshot if juu dun kno what tha tis its a storii where like uhm -makes a ex:- LOL V V V BTW ooc is like dream character lol xDMKAY ANOTHER RULE XD write as mush as juu want short or longg~ and make it interesting for ppl that want more (:

~Forever With You~

I closed my eyes truely knowing this is how it was going to end. I griped on my sword tighter and glared at the hollow. (Sounds familiar ish? if you don't know this show JUU SUCK lol jkjk love juu guys<3) "Hyouketsu, Tsuki Shiro (SAWRIEE I couldnt think of another name, im like making this as we go xD) (BTW Meaning: Freeze, Snow (y) moon.)." I whispered as Tsuki shiro's blade turned snowy white, along with my hair. I had a white ribbon on my wrist, which was connected to the handle of Tsuki Shiro. The hollow charged at me as I lifted up my sword. Blood trickled down my arms and legs. "Koko-chan...don't do this." My taichou, Hitsugaya said as he tried to get up. "Gomen ne Hitsugaya-taichou." I said slightly looking at him with sad eyes. "First flight, Tsuki no curse.(First flight, Moon's curse)" I whispered as a white light appeared beneath me. I pointed (LOL I typed poked the first time xDD) my sword at the hollow. "Die." I whispered as another white circle appeared beneath the hollow. Within seconds he was gone. I fell to my knees weak. "Koko..." A voice said behind me. I slightly turned my head. "Ashiteru Taichou.(I love you captain(lolol O_O I DIDNT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAYYY xD)" I whispered, as I fell forward. He weakly caught me. "Don't die Koko...don't die...onegai..Watashi no....watashi no...(I....I...)HAHA I made him ooc ish<33 :DDD XDD)" He said weakly as he set my head on he's lap. Teardrops spalshed on my face.

~Months later~

"Toushiro, you really should get some sleep." A familiar voice said. "iie...I wouldn't." He said gripping on my hand alittle tighter. I opened my eyes just a crack. It was still like I was asleep. On my left side I saw Hitsugaya about to fall asleep, and Hinamori sitting with a small worried look.. On my right was Ichigo, Orhime, Tatsuki, and everyone else really. "We should get going.." Orihime whispered not taking her eyes off me. "Un...Ja ne.. (Yeah...See ya..)" They all said leaving the room. "Shiro-chan, get some rest, I'm sure she'll wake up soon." Hinamori said confortly leaving the room. "Onegai...Sumeru..(Closest thing I knew to wake up >_>)" He whispered, then finally fell asleep. I opened my eyes fully. I smiled to myself. 'Tsuki Shiro..' I said to her. 'Yes?' She asked. 'Let's take care of one last hollow.' I told her with a small smile. 'Demo you kn-' She tried to protest. 'I know, I just want to do the one thing I love to do.' I said to her as I quietly pulled my hand away from Hitsugaya's grip. He started waking up. 'Oh shoot...' I mumbled. I gave him a quick kiss on the cheek then jumped out the window before he saw I left.

~No one's POV (Point of view)~
It has been a couple of weeks since Lyoko had disappeared from her room. Everyone looked everywhere at Karakuro (I think thats how to spell it and what its called LOL) town and Soul Society. No one found a trace of her. After what seemed like forever someone found her barely alive on the ground near a dock, in Soul Society. Their eyes widen when they realized where this place was. It was the place Lyoko had met Hinamori and Hitsugaya. As the person came closer to Lyoko. Lyoko's eyes slowly opened. "Shiro-chan..."She managed to say. "Gomen ne (Im sorry)." She whispered with a small smile. Her light brown hair was covered in blood. "K-Koko..." He whispered slowly putting her head on he's lap. "Ashiteru..." he said to her coming closer to her face. "I love...you...too.." She whispered filling in the rest of the gap. As they broke the kiss, Lyoko said her final words. "If I were to die in anyone's arms...and place...I would definitely pick you...and the...place that we..met.... Ashiteru..." She said closing her eyes as she died in he's arms. Hitsugaya held her tightly in he's arms. "Taichou!" His fuku-taichou shouted coming towards him. "Set up a funeral for Izami, Lyoko." He said to her not taking he's eyes off the ground. Matsumoto stood there wide eyed. "H-Hai Taichou! But did you tell her?" She asked alittle nosy =3. "Hai..I did. Now go." He said fermly (SP?). With that he let a single tear drop from he's eyes. "Ashiteru Koko-chan...im going to....miss you." He whispered.

~2389492384729387 years later (LOLOL idc their already like 200 years old LOL)

"Hey, Koko-chan, it's me. Its been awhile. How has it been? Its been strange with out you. Some times I would be yelling at you and Matsumoto when Matsumoto was drunk or forgot her paperwork..Meh. Everyone is doing fine. Momo is still upset about your death and so is Matsumoto. But yeah you can say everthing is slightly normal. We all just...miss you. We've been through so much, and the fact that you left us like this..its...its just sad..*shuts eyes* I shouldn't be crying. I know you wouldn't want me too. So I wouldn't. Im sorry but I need to go..Oyasumi Koko-chan, I'll visit soon." The white haired shinigami said closing hes eyes turning hes back at the tomb. Leaving just a single teardrop on the one flower he placed on the tomb. It was a bright yellow tulip. Koko's favorite.

"Hitsu-kun, you know i'll always be with you. Like we promised, i'll be there, [forever with you]." The white haired shinigami stopped as he thought he heard a voice.

"[Forever with you] Koko-chan."

*************I had now COMPLETELY finished this oneshot! I have also edited it! Lol msg me if you want to know how the events from before this happened like i'll write the storyy chap by chap leading up to this oneshot.**************

LOL That was sucky ish? half n hr work on it n it prob still sucks LOL

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Avi i made:) bored again lolxD:


Did my best xD~IchigoSakura
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Avi i made:) bored again lolxD:


Did my best xD~IchigoSakura


KAWAIII<33 ;D try try writing a storii<3 =3 idc if ju usuck at writing just try! Your'll never know until juu get ppls opinions
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IchigoSakura wrote:

Avi i made:) bored again lolxD:


Did my best xD~IchigoSakura


KAWAIII<33 ;D try try writing a storii<3 =3 idc if ju usuck at writing just try! Your'll never know until juu get ppls opinions :D


Oh i do write stories its on my page but iuno what people will think lolxDmaybe i'll post but ther in chapters:P
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IchigoSakura wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


IchigoSakura wrote:

Avi i made:) bored again lolxD:


Did my best xD~IchigoSakura


KAWAIII<33 ;D try try writing a storii<3 =3 idc if ju usuck at writing just try! Your'll never know until juu get ppls opinions :D


Oh i do write stories its on my page but iuno what people will think lolxDmaybe i'll post but ther in chapters:P


try ta make a oneshot<3
Posted 7/30/08 , edited 7/30/08
Umm here's Chap 1 of my random story~ :D



WIND; a breath of heart.


With a quick glance i closed my eyes back shut, not wanting to see what was coming towards me. I said as i still drew with my red crayon, i was drawing a picture of a rose. As of then i couldn't help but open my eyes i saw a shiny figure approaching toward me saying my name as if the voice was an echo. "Nana-chan...Nana-chan". I spoke to the mysterious lady wielding the shiny powerful sword "W-who are you? What do you want with me" I asked her while she came even closer to me. "Get up, you look like a fool just sitting there." She said to me without hesitation. I got up not knowing where she was taking me. "Hands off!" I yelled with all my might. She took me to a mysterious castle, it looked as if it was up in the clouds! I was gazing up at the clouds. She took my hand and flew to the castle entrance. "Please... tell me what your doing with me!" I asked the lady. "You want to become a hero don't you!? The lady shouted glancing at me. "A H-hero?! More then anything..." I said looking down at the clouds. "Your life was meaningless until now, Nana!" The lady said with a smirk on her face. "She was quite beautiful actually, long bright red hair. And baby blue eyes." I said. As she lifting me to the castle ground. "W-were so high up!!" I shouted looking down while almost falling." "Be careful!" The lady shouted while grabbing my arm. "I-I'm fine now..." I said while standing straight as if nothing happened. "Well my job here is done, go meet the boss!" She says. "Okay!" I said running into the castle. A voice from nowhere says. "Hey, Nana-chan its been a while". "Where are you?" I say in confusion when looking at a fluffy white throne and a man sitting on it. "There!" I yell pointing at him. "It's not nice to point." The man says with a smirk on his face. "We all need your help." The man says while his loyal subjects appear before me. "Hi! I'm Meena, and you are?" "I'm Yuri." Another voice says. "And last but not least, I'm Fiona!" I-I'm... Nana, Its nice to meet you all... I say blushing. "As of today- Nana- chan your quest will begin!" Says the man on the throne. "You'll be treated like royalty!" Meena says with a cheerful looking smile on her face." "Royalty, huh?" I say. "With blond shoulder length hair, and silver eyes, thats Meena. And Yuri with black hair, and golden eyes. And lastly Fiona with long, long purple hair and eyes." A man says from a distance. "Hey!" "That's Toki, my left hand man!" Says the man on the throne. "She's more beautiful then i imagined!" Says the man looking at me in every angle. "H-huh... your!" I say quite surprised. "I'm well known everywhere! Of course you would know about me." The man says.



idk lol, did i do this right?


WELLLL THATS IT FOR CHAP 1.
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WRITE AS MUCH AS YOU LIKE, SHORT OR LONG; MAKE THE STORY GOOD FOR PEOPLE THAT WOULD BE WANTING MORE~
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

Umm here's Chap 1 of my random story~ :D



WIND; a breath of heart.


With a quick glance i closed my eyes back shut, not wanting to see what was coming towards me. I said as i still drew with my red crayon, i was drawing a picture of a rose. As of then i couldn't help but open my eyes i saw a shiny figure approaching toward me saying my name as if the voice was an echo. "Nana-chan...Nana-chan". I spoke to the mysterious lady wielding the shiny powerful sword "W-who are you? What do you want with me" I asked her while she came even closer to me. "Get up, you look like a fool just sitting there." She said to me without hesitation. I got up not knowing where she was taking me. "Hands off!" I yelled with all my might. She took me to a mysterious castle, it looked as if it was up in the clouds! I was gazing up at the clouds. She took my hand and flew to the castle entrance. "Please... tell me what your doing with me!" I asked the lady. "You want to become a hero don't you!? The lady shouted glancing at me. "A H-hero?! More then anything..." I said looking down at the clouds. "Your life was meaningless until now, Nana!" The lady said with a smirk on her face. "She was quite beautiful actually, long bright red hair. And baby blue eyes." I said. As she lifting me to the castle ground. "W-were so high up!!" I shouted looking down while almost falling." "Be careful!" The lady shouted while grabbing my arm. "I-I'm fine now..." I said while standing straight as if nothing happened. "Well my job here is done, go meet the boss!" She says. "Okay!" I said running into the castle. A voice from nowhere says. "Hey, Nana-chan its been a while". "Where are you?" I say in confusion when looking at a fluffy white throne and a man sitting on it. "There!" I yell pointing at him. "It's not nice to point." The man says with a smirk on his face. "We all need your help." The man says while his loyal subjects appear before me. "Hi! I'm Meena, and you are?" "I'm Yuri." Another voice says. "And last but not least, I'm Fiona!" I-I'm... Nana, Its nice to meet you all... I say blushing. "As of today- Nana- chan your quest will begin!" Says the man on the throne. "You'll be treated like royalty!" Meena says with a cheerful looking smile on her face." "Royalty, huh?" I say. "With blond shoulder length hair, and silver eyes, thats Meena. And Yuri with black hair, and golden eyes. And lastly Fiona with long, long purple hair and eyes." A man says from a distance. "Hey!" "That's Toki, my left hand man!" Says the man on the throne. "She's more beautiful then i imagined!" Says the man looking at me in every angle. "H-huh... your!" I say quite surprised. "I'm well known everywhere! Of course you would know about me." The man says.



idk lol, did i do this right?


WELLLL THATS IT FOR CHAP 1.
HOPE YOU ENJOYED!
=]




I THINK THERE SHOULD BE A NEW RULE;
WRITE AS MUCH AS YOU LIKE, SHORT OR LONG; MAKE THE STORY GOOD FOR PEOPLE THAT WOULD BE WANTING MORE~
=}

uhmmm a oneshot ish suppose to be a storyy in one chap xD but ish okieee also koolio! <3
Posted 7/30/08 , edited 7/31/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

Umm here's Chap 1 of my random story~ :D



WIND; a breath of heart.


With a quick glance i closed my eyes back shut, not wanting to see what was coming towards me. I said as i still drew with my red crayon, i was drawing a picture of a rose. As of then i couldn't help but open my eyes i saw a shiny figure approaching toward me saying my name as if the voice was an echo. "Nana-chan...Nana-chan". I spoke to the mysterious lady wielding the shiny powerful sword "W-who are you? What do you want with me" I asked her while she came even closer to me. "Get up, you look like a fool just sitting there." She said to me without hesitation. I got up not knowing where she was taking me. "Hands off!" I yelled with all my might. She took me to a mysterious castle, it looked as if it was up in the clouds! I was gazing up at the clouds. She took my hand and flew to the castle entrance. "Please... tell me what your doing with me!" I asked the lady. "You want to become a hero don't you!? The lady shouted glancing at me. "A H-hero?! More then anything..." I said looking down at the clouds. "Your life was meaningless until now, Nana!" The lady said with a smirk on her face. "She was quite beautiful actually, long bright red hair. And baby blue eyes." I said. As she lifting me to the castle ground. "W-were so high up!!" I shouted looking down while almost falling." "Be careful!" The lady shouted while grabbing my arm. "I-I'm fine now..." I said while standing straight as if nothing happened. "Well my job here is done, go meet the boss!" She says. "Okay!" I said running into the castle. A voice from nowhere says. "Hey, Nana-chan its been a while". "Where are you?" I say in confusion when looking at a fluffy white throne and a man sitting on it. "There!" I yell pointing at him. "It's not nice to point." The man says with a smirk on his face. "We all need your help." The man says while his loyal subjects appear before me. "Hi! I'm Meena, and you are?" "I'm Yuri." Another voice says. "And last but not least, I'm Fiona!" I-I'm... Nana, Its nice to meet you all... I say blushing. "As of today- Nana- chan your quest will begin!" Says the man on the throne. "You'll be treated like royalty!" Meena says with a cheerful looking smile on her face." "Royalty, huh?" I say. "With blond shoulder length hair, and silver eyes, thats Meena. And Yuri with black hair, and golden eyes. And lastly Fiona with long, long purple hair and eyes." A man says from a distance. "Hey!" "That's Toki, my left hand man!" Says the man on the throne. "She's more beautiful then i imagined!" Says the man looking at me in every angle. "H-huh... your!" I say quite surprised. "I'm well known everywhere! Of course you would know about me." The man says.


ATTENTIONNNNNN:

NOT DONE WITH THE "ONESHOT".





I THINK THERE SHOULD BE A NEW RULE;
WRITE AS MUCH AS YOU LIKE, SHORT OR LONG; MAKE THE STORY GOOD FOR PEOPLE THAT WOULD BE WANTING MORE~
=}

uhmmm a oneshot ish suppose to be a storyy in one chap xD but ish okieee also koolio! <3



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im not that bright.
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Here's my story, hope you like it:



My Cherry Blossom

Chapter 1: Let the Cherry Blossoms Bloom

When I was 6, my parents had a huge fight and got divorced because my mother found out that my father was two timing her. It was a fight that I would never forget because….because I saw it right there, front row, a sickening fight that can never be cured ever.
My father left with that other woman and that was the last time I saw him. His face, his smile, everything about him was long gone. Gone, gone, those words echo throughout my head a million times as I wave good-bye to my father with a teardrop falling from my right eye. With a shock, more tears fell and I didn’t even notice. My mother hugged me tightly, but gently with her soft body. I could feel her saying to me that it will be alright, don’t cry now, baby girl, there’s no need to cry.
But I never got over it and one day, I was missing my dad too much that I ran away from home and searched for my dad throughout the neighborhood. He wasn’t there. I was too confused because he never told me where he went, I’m a confused 6 year old running throughout the neighborhood and I don’t even know where I’m going. I just kept running about with tears falling from my eyes until I stopped there. There, right in front of cherry blossom trees. It was so beautiful I thought I was in a dream. The scenery was so beautiful yet so calm and relaxing, I thought of it as my mom and dad when we were all happy. But too late, all of that is long gone, adios, sayonara. Loads of tears kept running down my face. I was in so much pain that I felt like dying.
Until a voice behind me asked, “What are you doing?”
I turned around and there right in front of me was a boy. Brown hair, blue eyes and he looked exactly my age. My tears were still running down my face, I couldn’t stop it.
“Why are you crying?” He asked me with a soft, gentle voice.
“I-I’m looking for my dad…” I answered timidly.
“Do you know where he is?”
“No…”
“Then why are you looking for him if you don’t know where he is?” He stared at me with those soft, worried blue eyes of his.
“B-because I miss him…” I blushed as the wind blows through my long pink hair and as my tears keep falling. I stared at him with my pink eyes and kept thinking, what is he up too?
“Silly girl, even if you miss him so much you won’t be able to find him if you don’t know where he is.” He said as he laughed a bit.
My tears stopped, I was calmed down, I was a bit happy seeing him laugh a bit but in my heart, in my broken heart, it will never stop crying in there for my father whom I seem to love very much. I was a bit happy as well to see him trying to cheer me up.
I wiped my tears and said, “Thank you very much for trying to cheer me up but this great sorrow in my heart will never heal. Thank you though.” I showed him my gratitude by curtsying and smiling at him.
“So,” he said, “what’s your name?”
“It’s Sakura, what’s yours?” Sakura replied blushing.
“Kenta, call me Kenta.” He responded with a smile.
“So it’s Kenta, nice to meet you!” Sakura said and held out her hand so they can shake.
“Nice to meet you too, Sakura.” Kenta said and held out his hand and shook it with Sakura’s.
It was a beautiful day that I would cherish, that I would also never forget. The day when I met Kenta and when he became my best friend, and the day when the cherry blossom trees bloomed. He helped me through the rough times and the sad times and I always helped him through his life too. We were BFF’s, best friends forever. Until 1 year passed and on that day, Kenta had to move. It was the last time I saw him…
“Kenta, please don’t leave!” I yelled out while crying so hard. This reminded me of when my dad was leaving.
“I’m sorry, Sakura. But I have to move because my dad quit his job here and got a new job somewhere else. Please don’t cry…” Kenta said. I felt like I was going to break into a million pieces.
“But, but…” I stammered.
“Come on, Kenta!” Kenta’s dad called out to him.
“Give me a minute, dad!” Kenta yelled back.
My tears couldn’t stop running and I couldn’t stop thinking what would happen if Kenta was gone.
“Look, Sakura, it’s not as easy as it seems but… I have to go. Let’s make a promise, Sakura that we will meet again one day and we’ll be together forever, promise?” He held out his pinky.
“Promise,” I said and pinky swore with him.
“Sakura, I love you.” He said and hugged me tightly with those soft arms and his gentle body. I was so surprised and touched of what he said to me. Is this a confession? I gripped onto Kenta’s shirt.
“I-I…”
“Good-bye, Sakura.” Kenta said and he let her go.
I held out my hand to him but he faded away in my tears… I didn’t even have a chance to say back to him, “I love you too…”

To be continued…



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Here's my story, hope you like it:



My Cherry Blossom

Chapter 1: Let the Cherry Blossoms Bloom

When I was 6, my parents had a huge fight and got divorced because my mother found out that my father was two timing her. It was a fight that I would never forget because….because I saw it right there, front row, a sickening fight that can never be cured ever.
My father left with that other woman and that was the last time I saw him. His face, his smile, everything about him was long gone. Gone, gone, those words echo throughout my head a million times as I wave good-bye to my father with a teardrop falling from my right eye. With a shock, more tears fell and I didn’t even notice. My mother hugged me tightly, but gently with her soft body. I could feel her saying to me that it will be alright, don’t cry now, baby girl, there’s no need to cry.
But I never got over it and one day, I was missing my dad too much that I ran away from home and searched for my dad throughout the neighborhood. He wasn’t there. I was too confused because he never told me where he went, I’m a confused 6 year old running throughout the neighborhood and I don’t even know where I’m going. I just kept running about with tears falling from my eyes until I stopped there. There, right in front of cherry blossom trees. It was so beautiful I thought I was in a dream. The scenery was so beautiful yet so calm and relaxing, I thought of it as my mom and dad when we were all happy. But too late, all of that is long gone, adios, sayonara. Loads of tears kept running down my face. I was in so much pain that I felt like dying.
Until a voice behind me asked, “What are you doing?”
I turned around and there right in front of me was a boy. Brown hair, blue eyes and he looked exactly my age. My tears were still running down my face, I couldn’t stop it.
“Why are you crying?” He asked me with a soft, gentle voice.
“I-I’m looking for my dad…” I answered timidly.
“Do you know where he is?”
“No…”
“Then why are you looking for him if you don’t know where he is?” He stared at me with those soft, worried blue eyes of his.
“B-because I miss him…” I blushed as the wind blows through my long pink hair and as my tears keep falling. I stared at him with my pink eyes and kept thinking, what is he up too?
“Silly girl, even if you miss him so much you won’t be able to find him if you don’t know where he is.” He said as he laughed a bit.
My tears stopped, I was calmed down, I was a bit happy seeing him laugh a bit but in my heart, in my broken heart, it will never stop crying in there for my father whom I seem to love very much. I was a bit happy as well to see him trying to cheer me up.
I wiped my tears and said, “Thank you very much for trying to cheer me up but this great sorrow in my heart will never heal. Thank you though.” I showed him my gratitude by curtsying and smiling at him.
“So,” he said, “what’s your name?”
“It’s Sakura, what’s yours?” Sakura replied blushing.
“Kenta, call me Kenta.” He responded with a smile.
“So it’s Kenta, nice to meet you!” Sakura said and held out her hand so they can shake.
“Nice to meet you too, Sakura.” Kenta said and held out his hand and shook it with Sakura’s.
It was a beautiful day that I would cherish, that I would also never forget. The day when I met Kenta and when he became my best friend, and the day when the cherry blossom trees bloomed. He helped me through the rough times and the sad times and I always helped him through his life too. We were BFF’s, best friends forever. Until 1 year passed and on that day, Kenta had to move. It was the last time I saw him…
“Kenta, please don’t leave!” I yelled out while crying so hard. This reminded me of when my dad was leaving.
“I’m sorry, Sakura. But I have to move because my dad quit his job here and got a new job somewhere else. Please don’t cry…” Kenta said. I felt like I was going to break into a million pieces.
“But, but…” I stammered.
“Come on, Kenta!” Kenta’s dad called out to him.
“Give me a minute, dad!” Kenta yelled back.
My tears couldn’t stop running and I couldn’t stop thinking what would happen if Kenta was gone.
“Look, Sakura, it’s not as easy as it seems but… I have to go. Let’s make a promise, Sakura that we will meet again one day and we’ll be together forever, promise?” He held out his pinky.
“Promise,” I said and pinky swore with him.
“Sakura, I love you.” He said and hugged me tightly with those soft arms and his gentle body. I was so surprised and touched of what he said to me. Is this a confession? I gripped onto Kenta’s shirt.
“I-I…”
“Good-bye, Sakura.” Kenta said and he let her go.
I held out my hand to him but he faded away in my tears… I didn’t even have a chance to say back to him, “I love you too…”

To be continued…



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Posted 8/2/08

kintsuchl wrote:


fireheart753 wrote:

Here's my story, hope you like it:



My Cherry Blossom

Chapter 1: Let the Cherry Blossoms Bloom

When I was 6, my parents had a huge fight and got divorced because my mother found out that my father was two timing her. It was a fight that I would never forget because….because I saw it right there, front row, a sickening fight that can never be cured ever.
My father left with that other woman and that was the last time I saw him. His face, his smile, everything about him was long gone. Gone, gone, those words echo throughout my head a million times as I wave good-bye to my father with a teardrop falling from my right eye. With a shock, more tears fell and I didn’t even notice. My mother hugged me tightly, but gently with her soft body. I could feel her saying to me that it will be alright, don’t cry now, baby girl, there’s no need to cry.
But I never got over it and one day, I was missing my dad too much that I ran away from home and searched for my dad throughout the neighborhood. He wasn’t there. I was too confused because he never told me where he went, I’m a confused 6 year old running throughout the neighborhood and I don’t even know where I’m going. I just kept running about with tears falling from my eyes until I stopped there. There, right in front of cherry blossom trees. It was so beautiful I thought I was in a dream. The scenery was so beautiful yet so calm and relaxing, I thought of it as my mom and dad when we were all happy. But too late, all of that is long gone, adios, sayonara. Loads of tears kept running down my face. I was in so much pain that I felt like dying.
Until a voice behind me asked, “What are you doing?”
I turned around and there right in front of me was a boy. Brown hair, blue eyes and he looked exactly my age. My tears were still running down my face, I couldn’t stop it.
“Why are you crying?” He asked me with a soft, gentle voice.
“I-I’m looking for my dad…” I answered timidly.
“Do you know where he is?”
“No…”
“Then why are you looking for him if you don’t know where he is?” He stared at me with those soft, worried blue eyes of his.
“B-because I miss him…” I blushed as the wind blows through my long pink hair and as my tears keep falling. I stared at him with my pink eyes and kept thinking, what is he up too?
“Silly girl, even if you miss him so much you won’t be able to find him if you don’t know where he is.” He said as he laughed a bit.
My tears stopped, I was calmed down, I was a bit happy seeing him laugh a bit but in my heart, in my broken heart, it will never stop crying in there for my father whom I seem to love very much. I was a bit happy as well to see him trying to cheer me up.
I wiped my tears and said, “Thank you very much for trying to cheer me up but this great sorrow in my heart will never heal. Thank you though.” I showed him my gratitude by curtsying and smiling at him.
“So,” he said, “what’s your name?”
“It’s Sakura, what’s yours?” Sakura replied blushing.
“Kenta, call me Kenta.” He responded with a smile.
“So it’s Kenta, nice to meet you!” Sakura said and held out her hand so they can shake.
“Nice to meet you too, Sakura.” Kenta said and held out his hand and shook it with Sakura’s.
It was a beautiful day that I would cherish, that I would also never forget. The day when I met Kenta and when he became my best friend, and the day when the cherry blossom trees bloomed. He helped me through the rough times and the sad times and I always helped him through his life too. We were BFF’s, best friends forever. Until 1 year passed and on that day, Kenta had to move. It was the last time I saw him…
“Kenta, please don’t leave!” I yelled out while crying so hard. This reminded me of when my dad was leaving.
“I’m sorry, Sakura. But I have to move because my dad quit his job here and got a new job somewhere else. Please don’t cry…” Kenta said. I felt like I was going to break into a million pieces.
“But, but…” I stammered.
“Come on, Kenta!” Kenta’s dad called out to him.
“Give me a minute, dad!” Kenta yelled back.
My tears couldn’t stop running and I couldn’t stop thinking what would happen if Kenta was gone.
“Look, Sakura, it’s not as easy as it seems but… I have to go. Let’s make a promise, Sakura that we will meet again one day and we’ll be together forever, promise?” He held out his pinky.
“Promise,” I said and pinky swore with him.
“Sakura, I love you.” He said and hugged me tightly with those soft arms and his gentle body. I was so surprised and touched of what he said to me. Is this a confession? I gripped onto Kenta’s shirt.
“I-I…”
“Good-bye, Sakura.” Kenta said and he let her go.
I held out my hand to him but he faded away in my tears… I didn’t even have a chance to say back to him, “I love you too…”

To be continued…



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Iuno i cant make a oneshot but i'll just show the first chapter of my story~!If You want to know Lookie on my page hehexD


Here goes Hearted Memories By:Me IchigoSakura
CHAPTER 1: Our Beginning

It is dark everywhere I go. It's dark. I see false faces everywhere….does that mean I have one too??


It has been forever in this rusty old car.
"Are we getting closer Rikku?"
"Be patient Berry-Chan."
"Mou~ Its taking forever…" As I looked out the window I saw so many “Jun Jun LIVE!!!” posters.
"Ughh! My rival Jun Tsuki is copying me again! I came up with the concert's concept first!! How dare he!!"
"Would you calm down?! How do you know he's copying you?"
"It's because he has always been doing this! Grrr…"

The memories flashed back so quickly like lightning.

I saw myself smiling and being cute. I was wearing knee high leg warmers, a short skirt, and a long sleeved sweater.

His smile was so cute he never showed his teeth and his laugh sounded so sweet like that blueberry raspberry ice cream cone I had for dessert. His blonde hair shone with the light; he looked like an angel.

WAIT!!!!

Okay enough of that, well I remember meeting him after the show we were working on called, “We Did It.” It was a game show where famous singers and movie stars would do the craziest stunts and would have to say "We Did It!" I was actually very excited to finally meet a boy. My busy schedule never involved boys, well my age. All I ever did usually consisted of only singing in concerts, shops, etc.

I was in my dressing room removing my earrings and talking to myself. I acted so stupid because I kept forgetting my lines…it was because of him okay?? Geez, what’s wrong with me, it's because of his smile that’s it, isn’t it??!! This has never happened to me!!

"Ha-ha very cute…"

I blushed because I knew who it was. I looked up and there he was leaning on the side of my dressing room door.


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Here's my story, hope you like it:



My Cherry Blossom

Chapter 1: Let the Cherry Blossoms Bloom

When I was 6, my parents had a huge fight and got divorced because my mother found out that my father was two timing her. It was a fight that I would never forget because….because I saw it right there, front row, a sickening fight that can never be cured ever.
My father left with that other woman and that was the last time I saw him. His face, his smile, everything about him was long gone. Gone, gone, those words echo throughout my head a million times as I wave good-bye to my father with a teardrop falling from my right eye. With a shock, more tears fell and I didn’t even notice. My mother hugged me tightly, but gently with her soft body. I could feel her saying to me that it will be alright, don’t cry now, baby girl, there’s no need to cry.
But I never got over it and one day, I was missing my dad too much that I ran away from home and searched for my dad throughout the neighborhood. He wasn’t there. I was too confused because he never told me where he went, I’m a confused 6 year old running throughout the neighborhood and I don’t even know where I’m going. I just kept running about with tears falling from my eyes until I stopped there. There, right in front of cherry blossom trees. It was so beautiful I thought I was in a dream. The scenery was so beautiful yet so calm and relaxing, I thought of it as my mom and dad when we were all happy. But too late, all of that is long gone, adios, sayonara. Loads of tears kept running down my face. I was in so much pain that I felt like dying.
Until a voice behind me asked, “What are you doing?”
I turned around and there right in front of me was a boy. Brown hair, blue eyes and he looked exactly my age. My tears were still running down my face, I couldn’t stop it.
“Why are you crying?” He asked me with a soft, gentle voice.
“I-I’m looking for my dad…” I answered timidly.
“Do you know where he is?”
“No…”
“Then why are you looking for him if you don’t know where he is?” He stared at me with those soft, worried blue eyes of his.
“B-because I miss him…” I blushed as the wind blows through my long pink hair and as my tears keep falling. I stared at him with my pink eyes and kept thinking, what is he up too?
“Silly girl, even if you miss him so much you won’t be able to find him if you don’t know where he is.” He said as he laughed a bit.
My tears stopped, I was calmed down, I was a bit happy seeing him laugh a bit but in my heart, in my broken heart, it will never stop crying in there for my father whom I seem to love very much. I was a bit happy as well to see him trying to cheer me up.
I wiped my tears and said, “Thank you very much for trying to cheer me up but this great sorrow in my heart will never heal. Thank you though.” I showed him my gratitude by curtsying and smiling at him.
“So,” he said, “what’s your name?”
“It’s Sakura, what’s yours?” Sakura replied blushing.
“Kenta, call me Kenta.” He responded with a smile.
“So it’s Kenta, nice to meet you!” Sakura said and held out her hand so they can shake.
“Nice to meet you too, Sakura.” Kenta said and held out his hand and shook it with Sakura’s.
It was a beautiful day that I would cherish, that I would also never forget. The day when I met Kenta and when he became my best friend, and the day when the cherry blossom trees bloomed. He helped me through the rough times and the sad times and I always helped him through his life too. We were BFF’s, best friends forever. Until 1 year passed and on that day, Kenta had to move. It was the last time I saw him…
“Kenta, please don’t leave!” I yelled out while crying so hard. This reminded me of when my dad was leaving.
“I’m sorry, Sakura. But I have to move because my dad quit his job here and got a new job somewhere else. Please don’t cry…” Kenta said. I felt like I was going to break into a million pieces.
“But, but…” I stammered.
“Come on, Kenta!” Kenta’s dad called out to him.
“Give me a minute, dad!” Kenta yelled back.
My tears couldn’t stop running and I couldn’t stop thinking what would happen if Kenta was gone.
“Look, Sakura, it’s not as easy as it seems but… I have to go. Let’s make a promise, Sakura that we will meet again one day and we’ll be together forever, promise?” He held out his pinky.
“Promise,” I said and pinky swore with him.
“Sakura, I love you.” He said and hugged me tightly with those soft arms and his gentle body. I was so surprised and touched of what he said to me. Is this a confession? I gripped onto Kenta’s shirt.
“I-I…”
“Good-bye, Sakura.” Kenta said and he let her go.
I held out my hand to him but he faded away in my tears… I didn’t even have a chance to say back to him, “I love you too…”

To be continued…



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Iuno i cant make a oneshot but i'll just show the first chapter of my story~!If You want to know Lookie on my page hehexD


Here goes Hearted Memories By:Me IchigoSakura
CHAPTER 1: Our Beginning

It is dark everywhere I go. It's dark. I see false faces everywhere….does that mean I have one too??


It has been forever in this rusty old car.
"Are we getting closer Rikku?"
"Be patient Berry-Chan."
"Mou~ Its taking forever…" As I looked out the window I saw so many “Jun Jun LIVE!!!” posters.
"Ughh! My rival Jun Tsuki is copying me again! I came up with the concert's concept first!! How dare he!!"
"Would you calm down?! How do you know he's copying you?"
"It's because he has always been doing this! Grrr…"

The memories flashed back so quickly like lightning.

I saw myself smiling and being cute. I was wearing knee high leg warmers, a short skirt, and a long sleeved sweater.

His smile was so cute he never showed his teeth and his laugh sounded so sweet like that blueberry raspberry ice cream cone I had for dessert. His blonde hair shone with the light; he looked like an angel.

WAIT!!!!

Okay enough of that, well I remember meeting him after the show we were working on called, “We Did It.” It was a game show where famous singers and movie stars would do the craziest stunts and would have to say "We Did It!" I was actually very excited to finally meet a boy. My busy schedule never involved boys, well my age. All I ever did usually consisted of only singing in concerts, shops, etc.

I was in my dressing room removing my earrings and talking to myself. I acted so stupid because I kept forgetting my lines…it was because of him okay?? Geez, what’s wrong with me, it's because of his smile that’s it, isn’t it??!! This has never happened to me!!

"Ha-ha very cute…"

I blushed because I knew who it was. I looked up and there he was leaning on the side of my dressing room door.



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kintsuchl wrote:


IchigoSakura wrote:

Iuno i cant make a oneshot but i'll just show the first chapter of my story~!If You want to know Lookie on my page hehexD


Here goes Hearted Memories By:Me IchigoSakura
CHAPTER 1: Our Beginning

It is dark everywhere I go. It's dark. I see false faces everywhere….does that mean I have one too??


It has been forever in this rusty old car.
"Are we getting closer Rikku?"
"Be patient Berry-Chan."
"Mou~ Its taking forever…" As I looked out the window I saw so many “Jun Jun LIVE!!!” posters.
"Ughh! My rival Jun Tsuki is copying me again! I came up with the concert's concept first!! How dare he!!"
"Would you calm down?! How do you know he's copying you?"
"It's because he has always been doing this! Grrr…"

The memories flashed back so quickly like lightning.

I saw myself smiling and being cute. I was wearing knee high leg warmers, a short skirt, and a long sleeved sweater.

His smile was so cute he never showed his teeth and his laugh sounded so sweet like that blueberry raspberry ice cream cone I had for dessert. His blonde hair shone with the light; he looked like an angel.

WAIT!!!!

Okay enough of that, well I remember meeting him after the show we were working on called, “We Did It.” It was a game show where famous singers and movie stars would do the craziest stunts and would have to say "We Did It!" I was actually very excited to finally meet a boy. My busy schedule never involved boys, well my age. All I ever did usually consisted of only singing in concerts, shops, etc.

I was in my dressing room removing my earrings and talking to myself. I acted so stupid because I kept forgetting my lines…it was because of him okay?? Geez, what’s wrong with me, it's because of his smile that’s it, isn’t it??!! This has never happened to me!!

"Ha-ha very cute…"

I blushed because I knew who it was. I looked up and there he was leaning on the side of my dressing room door.



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