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The Diviner
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It seems that the community has been too serious. I made this forum for entertainment. You can read the stories, even if you don't know it from the beginning. . . the rules are simple, write stories using the characters of the story... you can use anyones character, as long as you don't misinterpret the characters personality. . .
it can be any story in any place, you choose anything u want.... as long as the characters personalty stays...
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Patsu ate a damn apple. Then he ate another one. You know what happens next...

Anyway. Five hours later, right? He's in a hospital from cyanide poisonin'. Too many seeds had been eaten instead of bein' spit out.

They gave him a week before he would break. He broke after three days, and was found stealing apples from an old widow's orchard. He got beaten with a broom, but he was a bounty hunter, so he didn't feel it much.

It was then that a smart psychologist introduced to Patsu apple pie. No seeds, see? What he forgot was, extra sugar.

Anyway. Five days later, Patsu enters the hospital again. He has bags under his eyes and he's droolin. Yup...he became an insomniac.
Couple days of therapy and sleepin' pills, he kicks back again. After all, he's young and hale and hearty and all that. So, he goes to beat up the psychologist that did the recommendin' of the apple pies. Turns out, the psychologist had a small bounty on his head from some women that didn't appreciate his peepin' on them.
"A hundred rupees iffen he gets knocked out of town." proclaimed the poster. Patsu did just that, and got some currency from outdated Zelda games.

Anyway. Couple weeks later, he comes back to the hospital with a 12-bit Octorok done stuck in his stomach cause he thought it looked like an apple.

You know him. I don't need to type anything else, do I? Tch-sheesh.
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Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.
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Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.



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Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.


you have disgraced teh name Sirberius........... and you've even managed to disgrace Rubi....... i don't even want to be here anymore............
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blacksheep12 wrote:

Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.


you have disgraced teh name Sirberius........... and you've even managed to disgrace Rubi....... i don't even want to be here anymore............


ok, how did i disgrace it??!!
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Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.


you have disgraced teh name Sirberius........... and you've even managed to disgrace Rubi....... i don't even want to be here anymore............


ok, how did i disgrace it??!!


You made it seem like i was a bad, evil, and ruthless person ~sniff sniff~
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blacksheep12 wrote:


Sirberius wrote:


blacksheep12 wrote:

Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.


you have disgraced teh name Sirberius........... and you've even managed to disgrace Rubi....... i don't even want to be here anymore............


ok, how did i disgrace it??!!


You made it seem like i was a bad, evil, and ruthless person ~sniff sniff~


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blacksheep12 wrote:


Sirberius wrote:


blacksheep12 wrote:

Sleuth Story 1 - Normal Day

An hour has passed, and I'm still stuck here in a hangar of old airplanes. The smell of airplane fuels makes me sick, in the middle of a crossfire of automatics and rifles. Hiding in crates hoping none of them will see me, checking on my magazine if I my desert eagle would be enough to take the one who survives this fight.God damn it, my coat got dirt on it. The Saligia Mob on the right side while the Council on the other, shooting and reloading on both sides. Ezra was still no where to be found, and I think Yugo set me up. I think i should start over in the beginning, cause most of this don't make sense yet. . .

3 days before the incident.

It felt like any other day, Ezra working on some paperworks while my ears listened to the radio in my office. Not much cases sprung up, and my stomach has been begging for steak for a long time. Like I said, it felt like any other day but for some reason, when the sound of creaking of the hall floor, made me wanna hide. "Ezra if anyone looks for me, tell them I'm not here. And if its a woman tell her to leave" I said to her as her face replied with raising one eyebrow . The creaking floor screamed and shouted, a woman in high heels is walking on me. I felt that this might be another "My husband might be cheating on me" case. I hid under the desk hoping that no one will notice that the P.I is available. I heard Ezra welcome a customer even though I told her not to. I got out of the desk, seeing that Ezra won't make the customer leave. I walked out of my office to meet this woman in high heels.

The woman was fine, in a red dress made for queens. She wore large sunglasses and her hand on a Gucci purse. She smiled at me with her rich white teeth. She was as pretty as a doll and could take any mans heart. She held out her hand to me, like any rich trash that act that they're above me. I kissed it to show that I respect her. Well she was fine and P.H.a.T . I looked at her pretty lips as she drank some japanese wine. I sat down at the other couch and open a pack of Malboro. She lit the cigar that I put in my mouth with her high priced lighter.

"So, what can I do to you. . I mean, what can I do for you Mrs. . . ." I said as a inhaled the smoke.
"Ms. Ky" She said as she crossed her legs "I want you to find this man in this picture". She handed me a picture with a man, reading a book.
"So this is your Fiancee?" I asked with the cigarette on my fingers.
"No. He's more of like a big brother to me" It was obvious she was hiding her sorrow "Anyway, Deidore has been absent for about 5 days now. I'm scared that something might've happen, he wasn't in his apartment and hes not answering my phone calls"
"When was this guy last seen? and what does he do"
"Hes my teacher. The last time I saw Deidore was in my room, lecturing me" she gave me a calling card with her name and number "Listen, i gotta go now. I have other appointments. Please find him". The card was also a company card on the back, Kiratchi Industries it said

She left leaving an apple perfume scent. I returned to my office to listen to the radio again. The office phone rang, I picked it up and used my shoulder because i was looking for the missing persons folder.

"Hello, Prophet Investigations. We do any job no matter what it is" with the phone still on my shoulders "Larac here, who am I speaking to"
"Uhm, Hello. . . Is Ky still there" A mysterious voice asked
"No, I'm sorry. She just left, who am I speaking to?" I asked at the same time gave Ezra the signal to track this phone call using a phone tracing device
"My name is not important, tell Ky that she must not look for Deidore. Can you pass that message to her"
"Hello?! Hello?!" It seems he just drop the phone, left it hanging on hold. I watched outside the window thinking of what kind of case this will turn out. Shit! I might get steak but this won't be no easy missing persons case. There was a man outside, looks like he was looking at the office. It pisses me off when someone stares at me, he was lucky I couldn't see much of his face because he was wearing a hat and I was four stories high.*sigh*enough of this. I dialed the number on Ky's calling card, she answered the phone quickly. I asked her some questions about her actions. It seems she haven't notified the police about Deidore, well its understandable seeing that it was only days. I wanted to tell her about the mystery caller but I didn't, I dunno why I didn't. I forgot about Ezra's trace, I sat down on the chair and waited for Ezra. She quickly shouted "Boss!! the call came from outside. A phone booth!"

I quickly leaped off the chair and charged at the door, and jumped at stairs. I occasionally fell but I got up quickly just to get to the phonebooth. I exited the building and ran through the streets to the phone booth. Jesus Christ!, the caller was just there. I saw the hanging phone, and the phone book on the ground. Nothing was unusual except for an empty 9mm bullet casing on the floor. It might be nothing but just to be safe i placed it in my pocket. Hmmm, I see the same calling card is here in the phone booth too. The caller must also be from this Kiratchi Industries. Ezra came down with her double pistols on her pants. She waited for me to come to the car. Ah sweet baby, im talking about the car. It was a 1971 Dodge Challenger, the only thing that keeps me going when the going gets fucked up. I started the ol beauty and grabbed my Desert Eagle(gun) underneath the seat.

Kiratchi Industries was at the far end of the city. Great, I got more time to spend with my baby. I turned the radio to listen to some classical. Ezra noticed a black Monte Carlo car was following us on the way to Kiratchi Industries. I didn't continue the trip to the planned destination. We exited the city near the old town river(This is where mob victims get tossed), the scenery was beautiful, trees bloom and flowers blossom. It's a shame that this river is known for mob body dumping. I planned to lead them there in case a shooting might happen, i wouldn't need to dig a hole. I thought the one that followed us might just be some gangster gangbanging morons, trying to kill a cop or people close to cops just to join some hippidy hop group. I waited for them to show their car, my gun was already in my coat and Ezra was already waiting till we hear the first shot. The Monte Carlo(black) came and stopped, 30 feet away from ours. I told Ezra to hide her guns, we had a few seconds of argument but I won. Ezra tucked in her guns and leaned on the car. If my instincts are correct, the bastard inside that car is. . .

Four people exited the Monte Carlo, three male and one female. Fuck! It's Sirberius Reono, next heir to the Reono Crime family, Jesus Christ!!. Theres only one word to define Sirberius, and thats "Schizo". The girl that held Sirberius's arm is Rubi Delacoure, papas little angel; spoiled brat. And the Cross brothers, with their tight suit and sunglasses, damn bastards act like they're from the C.I.A. God help us if things go according to plan, we only get a few bullets in our heads.

"Larac, what a coincidence" Sirberius said with Rubi clinging to his shoulder
"Yo sirb"Sirb and me go way back, I caught him with my camera murdering Dante. He won the case because The Council(Organized Crime Family) bribed and threatened each of the Jury.
"Are you afraid Larac"Rubi with her devilish grin "You know we're going to kill you right"
"Wait!" I shouted as I saw Sirberius trigger finger started to wiggle "I won't be bothering you no more Sirb". I know, pretty cowardly but If I don't beg now I might get shot, and Ezra too.
"What happened Larac, back in court you were pretty determined to lock me up" he said as his pointing finger twitches at the trigger.
"I won't be investigating you anymore I promise, just please god don't shoot us" Haha, I should win the grammy with this performance.
"No more tricks you bitch!!". . . . I thought it was the end. . . DAMN, I didn't even get the chance to eat steak for my last meal.

Police Siren. Thank god. I forgot cop cars do patrols at this river. Sirberius threw the gun back to his car without the cops noticing. Rubi giggled and laughed, probably thinking that they will get me some other time.

"Hey! Sirberius! Larac!, what are you two doing here?!" It was Aeris, low salary cop but works harder than anyone on the force. Calintz was beside her staring at Sirberius and me.
"No problem officers" Dumb answer "me and Sirberius was just talkin about how everything is hunky dorey between the two of us"
"Yeah, whatever" Sirberius returning to his black Monte Carlo

Sirberius left and returned to the city. Aeris left with a pissed off face looking at me and continued to patrol. I fell down, I didn't even notice my legs we're shaking when Sirb was around. FUckiN!... Im sitting here on the side of my car breathing like theres no tomorrow. Ezra was at close to the river, god knows what shes doing. I walked to her side, she was crying. Both of us thought that was the end of the line. I comforted her, but she babbled about fate and shit. I acted that I listened and went to the car, she sat at the back wiping the tears on her eyes.


you have disgraced teh name Sirberius........... and you've even managed to disgrace Rubi....... i don't even want to be here anymore............


ok, how did i disgrace it??!!


You made it seem like i was a bad, evil, and ruthless person ~sniff sniff~


sirb, its an alternate world story.... this is not tottally u, i even thought ud like it....
ur evil, yes. cause ur part in this story is rich son of a mob
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