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Posted 7/30/08
SNOW POURS

Snow pours down my head it's cold
Trying to hang on to something but nothing to hold.
Is there anyone there to save my from the ice inside me.
All I see is shadows from left to right.
and yet I see no light.
Why does everything have to be so difficult in my life.
When Im alone and one is there to comfort me at times like this.
I wish I can stand on a beach just waiting for a kiss
I wish I was a bird that can fly high in the sky
just looking at the ground without being scared to die.

Snow pours and yet no sound
I see you and I think u are the one I found.
My angel that protects me from darkness.
Yet no matter what I cant help but to say.
that i want u here to brighten up this cold snowy day.
Even though you are a stranger from afar.
I it's seems to me that u can help me from my hidden scars.
Scars that cause me to fall and cry.
Scares that contained so much lies.

~Renji_lova_2007


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Posted 7/30/08
Oh my god...That's the most heart wrenching poem I've ever read... That was a very good poem and you portrayed sadness in a moderately unique way. I give the poem a 10/10 =]
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Posted 8/2/08

azndisaster wrote:

Oh my god...That's the most heart wrenching poem I've ever read... That was a very good poem and you portrayed sadness in a moderately unique way. I give the poem a 10/10 =]


lol thanks I try

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Posted 12/15/08
nice ! I really like it a lot
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