First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  Next  Last
Post Reply FanFic
Super Junior
12930 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / My house...Duh!
Offline
Posted 8/14/08 , edited 8/14/08
Goodnight Kiss

Omg...that made me cry!Ai-chan has a sister?!OMG!I didn't know!*emo at one corner*What kind of fan I am~ Say,how old is her sister?

Wonder if there'll be a TanaKamei fic.
Staff
55617 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Philippines... bu...
Offline
Posted 8/14/08
Awww~~~ Goodnight Kiss is nice story but the ending was a bit sad because Aichan didn't give Gaki-san a kiss goodnight...

also this part

"Oh..." She stared out into the crowd playing spin the bottle, the bottle they just emptied.
a long moment passed by, a silent one. i kept glancing to her. Now she sat close
beside me watching Reina and the others playing spin the bottle. I could see, almost
half of them are tipsy.

by "tipsy" you mean by drinking alcohol are they are tired because of the part "bottle they just emptied"
because if Aichan is still the current leader and the year hasn't change... they're not allowed to drink any sort of alcohol...
but if they're drinking some fizzy/soft drinks then its ok hehe ^^

also this part made me laugh heheh ^^

I felt my eyes twitch, "KISS THE PERSON BESIDE YOU!!" amazingly Sayu still managed to say that out loud in english.


anyway, its a nice lil story hehe ^_^
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/14/08

Awww~~~ Goodnight Kiss is nice story but the ending was a bit sad


I think its ok because if this story always end up with a good end, people can get tired of it....
Staff
55617 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Philippines... bu...
Offline
Posted 8/14/08
lol true hehe ^_^
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/14/08 , edited 8/14/08
Ok, this is just a cheesy story. Hoped you guys liked it!~


Sweet Sixteen


Reina and I have been great friends ever since we were just little kids. She helped me out around school when I was new to the neighborhood. We promised each other that we'd be best friends forever and do everything together. And yet…

"Reina-chan, when are you going to leave?" I asked nervously.

"Tomorrow morning," she replied unhappily.

"I thought your new school didn't start yet," I protested, trying to keep the tears from flowing out of my eyes.

"But my mom said we have to move early so we'd get use to our new environment."

I remembered clearly how our last conversation went as we sat on the bench below the "wishing tree."

"Hey, let's make a wish!" Reina suddenly broke through the quietness.

She looked at me with sparkling eyes, those trustful eyes that I could never deny to. I gave her a small nod as she grabbed my hand and pulled me up.

"Since I'm not able to attend your birthday party tomorrow, I promise you I will be back for your sixteenth birthday!"

"Okay!" I gave her a wide grin as we pinky promised each other....
____

"Honey, are you awake?" My mom said as she came over to pull the blankets down, making me come out of my "shell."

"Mmmhmm," I mumbled.

"Well, get ready because everyone is going to get here sooner or later," my dad commanded, but in a softer voice than he would usually use.

I gave out a long sigh after finding out that I fell asleep on the living room sofa. Sitting up, I picked up my wallet that probably fell out of my pockets while I was sleeping. Slowly opening it up, I found myself stare at the picture it displayed in there. It was a picture of me and my best friend back when I was thirteen.

"Honey, Niigaki-san is here!" My mom shouted.

"Coming!"

It was just a dream...

Risa gave me a big hug as I rushed out of the living room, almost making me loose my balance.

"Happy sweet sixteenth birthday!" She shouted as she handed me her gift.

I gave her a warm smile and thanked her as we walked into the living room, ending up playing card games to let time pass while we wait for the others to arrive. Looking up from my cards after it was my turn, I found it amusing to watch Gaki-san choose her cards wisely. Her eyes scanned the cards in her hands slowly, as if she would poke a hole through it any time.

I remember how she became my friend shortly after Reina left. She was a transferred student to our school and we immediately became friends. I know exactly how it feels to be the "new student." It wasn’t long that my friendship with her can somewhat match up with how I felt for Reina before.

"Gaki-san, it's not like you're analyzing suspects in the police station," I laughed as I gave her a poke on her forehead.

"Hey! She looked up from her cards, "That actually hurts!"

We buried ourselves in laughter as we continued the game and ended up in throwing cards at each other. Risa said I "cheated" since she accidentally tilted her cards without noticing; which resulted in me winning. It wasn't long when all the other guests arrived and gathered into the living room as well.

"Time for the birthday song!" My dad's voice was heard among the chattering, almost immediately making everyone rushing into the kitchen.

Everyone gathered into a circle around the kitchen table and sang. Clapping my hands rhythmically and looking around, the familiar faces smiled at me. Time does go by fast.

“Make a wish!” Sayumi nudged my arm and smiled widely at me.

“My first wish is that my family can be healthy,” I made the very “common” wish, “my second wish is that I can maintain my good grades…”

“Mmmhmm,” my mom nodded approvingly.

“As for my third wish…” I started but realized that I’m suppose to the keep the last one to myself.

I wish that Reina will come back.

I blew out the candles and a warm round of applause filled my ears. My mom went to grab the camera so we’d take a few snap shots to remember my sixteenth birthday. Everyone gathered around as many flashes emerged from the camera.

“Why don’t you open your gifts right now?” Risa recommended as she looked around for approving eyes.

With everyone gathered into the living room, I begin to unwrap the first present. It wasn’t hard to realize that it was from Risa, seeing that she wrote her name all around the card and the message to me in the middle. She gave me a star bracelet with blue outlines. Looking up to meet her eyes, I gave a very thankful smile. Sayumi gave me a bunny, telling me that whenever I look at it, I have to think of her. Despite how annoying she can be sometimes, Sayu was also one of the greatest friend that Reina and I would hang around at times.

I picked up the third gift from the big pile and looked down at it. The shape is a small rectangular box, and it appears to be very light. Unwrapping it with extra care, since I’m afraid the small the more important, I peaked into the “mysterious” box and frowned disappointingly.

“What’s wrong?” Risa asked, scooting closer to me so she can take a look too.

“There’s nothing inside,” I pouted, tilting the box towards her.

“Hey, there’s a card attach to it,” Risa took the small envelope that was taped onto the box.”

Opening the card up, mixed feelings started forming into my mind. It can’t be.

“Happy sixteenth birthday.”-R

Snapping my head up and looking around the room frantically, I try to search for that familiar face. The one that I longed for so long. Everyone looked back at me surprisingly, unable to comprehend what I’m doing. I dashed out the door, ignoring all the comments that screamed at me as I took that action. I scanned the streets, running, as sweats dripped from my wet hair. I ignored the weird looks that people passing by gave me, my mind only displaying one thought. She’s back. She’s back. SHE’S BACK!

I don’t know how long I’ve searched, but my legs were already aching in pain. I ran out of breath and couldn’t continue my search anymore. For some reason, I ended up walking into the small park that Reina and I always went to when we were younger. It wasn’t long when the wishing tree came into view. Though, something was different.

There’s so many longsome nights that I’d walk the exact same route that I’m doing right now, with emptiness that welcomed me. However, there is someone standing below that tree tonight. A small shadow that I can somewhat make out by squinting my eyes. My heart stopped beating as I stare at her straight, long hair blow in the wind.

“Reina?”

She turned. I froze. My mind screamed for me to move closer to where that girl was standing, despite how much my feet are complaining. She stared at me with soft eyes, a smile slowly forming onto her lips. A very familiar smile. She hasn’t changed.

I wrapped my arms around her neck. The warmth that I longed for so long.

“I’m back,” Reina whispered into my ears.

“You’re finally back,” I sobbed as I locked my arms tighter around her neck.

“Happy sixteenth birthday,” she whispered again before pulling away to look at my face.

“I thought you’d never come back!” I complained as I hit her lightly.

“Of course I will, I made a promise!” Reina grinned at me.

“Oh by the way, how’d you manage to sneak that present in?” I asked curiously.

“Oh, I told Sayu to sneak it in when she went to your house,” Reina laughed as she stared into my eyes.

Ohhhhh....so it was you all the time. You're soo dead when I get back, Sayu!

“Yeah, that was great,” I snickered, “an empty box.”

“Well…” She paused, “I wanted to give you the present myself.”

Sticking her hands into her jacket pocket, she took out a necklace. It was a half heart that’s silver with a blue star in the middle of it. She put it in the palm of my hand.

“Why is it half a heart?” I questioned again, furrowing my eyebrows together.

Without a word, she pointed to her neck for me to see. Looking closely, it was then that I figured out she was wearing the other half of the necklace.

“We have to be together in order for the half heart to be a whole,” she looked around, a hint of being a bit embarrassed in her eyes.

“Aren’t you going to put it on for me?” I poked her after a long awkward silence.

She took the necklace from my hand as I turned around, waiting to feel the chain around my neck. I have to admit that I’m surprised she can actually be able to do that in the darkness. Hugging me from behind, she rested her chin on my shoulder. I felt warmness flowing inside me again as I smiled.

"You coming back is already the best gift ever," I spoke up, "this is the sweetest sixteenth birthday."

I felt her breath on my neck as she gave a small smile.

I missed you so much, Reina.
Staff
55617 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Philippines... bu...
Offline
Posted 8/15/08
awwwww~~~ that was a really sweet story hehe ^_^
but I'm still wonder who's the main person telling the story here....
for some reason I'm thinking of Eri because of this part

Despite how annoying she can be sometimes, Sayu was also one of the greatest friend that Reina and I would hang around at times.


btw did you wrote this Roro?
its pretty sweet hehe ^_^
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/15/08
bingo! u got it right this time!
Staff
55617 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Philippines... bu...
Offline
Posted 8/15/08
ah i see!! ehe ^^
so its TanaKame this time? hehe ^_^
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/15/08
but, if u wan to be 'I' person....then suit urself as long u are happy

btw, its animationgurl request...
Staff
55617 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Philippines... bu...
Offline
Posted 8/15/08
lol hehe XD
ah i see hehe ^_^
Super Junior
12930 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / My house...Duh!
Offline
Posted 8/15/08

roronoaz wrote:

"Honey, are you awake?" My mom said as she came over to pull the blankets down, making me come out of my "shell."


This gave away the answer!ERI!>.< Awwww...TanaKamei is just so sweet and cute!
Super Junior
12930 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / My house...Duh!
Offline
Posted 8/15/08

roronoaz wrote:

but, if u wan to be 'I' person....then suit urself as long u are happy

btw, its animationgurl request...


*blushes*Hehe,arigatou!^.^ U're great do u know that~!
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/16/08

animationgurl wrote:


roronoaz wrote:

but, if u wan to be 'I' person....then suit urself as long u are happy

btw, its animationgurl request...


*blushes*Hehe,arigatou!^.^ U're great do u know that~!


Lol...hehehe...Im not that great, just wan to spread the love

Super Junior
12930 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / My house...Duh!
Offline
Posted 8/16/08
Spread the love of YoMako~ Uhhh,neh mind.Haha,what do u think of KohaSayu?Do they fit?
Staff
12850 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / Malaysia
Offline
Posted 8/16/08
KohaSayu? ....Gomen nee~ I don like Koha ....For now i think I stick with TanaKame Fic (Love's Fate) Credit to maiha4ever from H!O

Before reading this Fic....please watch this vid first....Its trailer for this Fic








Love's Fate


Chapter 1: Surprise


As the first beam of sunlight shone inside a light pink room, a figure under the covers shifted. The draft of the blanket revealed a cute girl in deep sleep, hugging the pillow with a baby face. As she finally snapped out of her dream and turned around to look at the bedside clock that read 10:30AM, a bell rang in her head.

Nani!??” Eri screamed out loud, for she needed to get to the airport at 10:45.

She put on random clothing, gobbled down some milk, took a loaf of bread, and walked into the car…or rather dashed.

As Eri pulled onto the freeway, she begin to think over the dream she had earlier. A yankee styled girl that’s not so much younger than her was clear in her mind. She dreamed of a warm hug coming from that girl, the nice smelling hair shampoo filling up her nose. However, there was something “fishy” inside that girl’s eyes as she turned around to reveal another girl. “I have someone to introduce to you.”

Flashback

Eririn, don’t cry…please don’t cry.” Reina begged.

What’s with the sudden leave to America?” Sayumi pouted.

“My mom wanted me to study more in another country and maybe find a job there.” Reina explained. “Sayu, this may be the first time I’m asking for this, but please take care of Eririn for me.”

Hey! I can take care of myself!” that was the first thing Eri said all morning.

I’ll miss you Sayu,” Reina said in a very soft voice.

Eh…It’s weird seeing Reina-chan be so goose bumpy,” Sayu joked, which ended up by a blow in the arm from Reina.

Shut up!” The yankee style has returned.

I’ll miss you even more Eririn,” Reina whispered in Eri’s ears while hugging her.

As the beeps and announcements were made from the loud speakers, which are designed to ruin beautiful hugging moments, Reina gave one last look back to her unhappy friends.


Flash

Eri smiled to herself, obviously knowing that a person she missed for three years would be standing in front of her in a few minutes. Though, her dream disturbed her a little.

She couldn’t even keep herself from bouncing up and down while waiting in the airport. Scanning the crowd of people, she spotted someone. Someone with baggy clothes and wore a smile on her face. The girl turned to smile at Eri, who found herself frown back in confusion.

Ohayo!” Reina declared, “What’s with the frown?”

The girl that had smiled at her earlier now stood barely one foot away from her. She waved a hand back and forth in front of Eri’s face.

Oh, sorry. You’re Reina-chan?” Eri finally was able to snap back into reality.

“…”

Gaining back to her normal self, Eri gave Reina a really big hug. Though for some reasons, despite the fact of how close they are now, Reina still seems to be keeping a distance between them. Eri, filled with happiness, tugged Reina on her sleeve and begin pulling her out the door. Suddenly, Reina paused in her tracks and gave Eri a look that she never saw before. It was a mix of concern, seriousness, and sadness.

“I have someone to introduce to you,” Reina said and turned around to reveal the person that’s been watching this for quite some time.

First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  Next  Last
You must be logged in to post.