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Posted 8/1/08
wat would make the story better and i need battle sounds
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Posted 8/1/08
Hmm..you should need describable words and a "hook" in the beginning I guess. ^^
Posted 8/3/08
Try grabbing the reader's attention at the start of the story. I hope this helps. I always think about my stories, but I just can't write those thoughts into words.....Hope your story sounds good!
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