Post Reply A Walk to Remember. . . ♥
Posted 8/1/08 , edited 10/10/08
*GET TO KNOW THE CHARACTERS FIRST BEFORE READING. ^^





Chiho, Hima.


Mezuki, Taiso.


Kimiko, Keri.






Chiho Hima, was just your average girl. Once upon a time she came by a village called "Winter Solstice". She decided to live there because of her love for the snow. When it became winter you would see many, many stars and snow flakes. It was the best place to see true snow. As she happily attended every winter festival she met a boy named Star.





On a winter night, full of many stars; i met a boy by the name of 'Star'. It seemed like to me he fell down from the starts above us. I fell in love once again that night. I couldn't help but think of him everyday. I met this boy at a winter festival. With the drop of one sparkling snow flake i saw his face. And there at that moment he looked my way and smiled. He made me think anything was possible. I could live my dreams. That i could be more then i am now- A weak 13 year old girl. A year later another winter festival came; i hoped to see his sparkling beautiful face once again. It was only his smile that made me believe we would see each other again, walking past the flashing lights and beautiful sparkling snow, and dew. A million thoughts popping into my mind. I walked up to him. It was truly a walk to remember. "H-Hi there..." He didn't say anything back unfortunately. But he just gazed at the falling snow touching his face, melting on his lips. He was truly something else. Beautiful white hair, and eyes. "How many stars do you think are up there?" He asked me with a soft tone. "That's hard to figure out." I responded looking up at the falling snow beside him. "If i could freeze time, it would be easy to count all the snow flakes." He tells me while lifting his hands up in the air to catch the falling snow flakes. Moments later everything around me seemed to be slowing down! " A million." "A m-million?" "A million snow flakes." "Y-you froze the time just now did you?" I asked him while he put his hands down and put them back in his pockets. He turns my way lifting my hands up with his soft grip, telling me; "Feel the snow melt on your very own hands, girl." "M-my name i-is Chiho Hima". I tell him as he lifts my hands back down holding my hands beside his as if he didn't want to ever let go. "Chiho Hima, i hope to see you at another winter festival." He says to me with promising eyes as he vanishes. "H-he really is from the stars, up in the sky, countless of them sparkling down on me. "I hope to see you again, m-my s-star..." I say to myself with watery eyes falling down my cheeks as if in slow motion.






~3 Years later.~
"Hima Chiho, She seemed to be the only girl who noticed Star three years ago in the human world." A mysterious man in a black cloke states. "Ah, perhaps we should play this girl a visit?" "Its fine with me." "Its decided then, tomorrow were headed for the human world!" "Chiho chan! Hurry up and get ready for the first day of school! The school bells rings in less then 5 minutes!" Chiho's friend says walking around nervously. "Kimiko, I-is this a fitting school uniform?" "Its kawaii!!" Kimiko yells in joy blushing. -School bell rings- "I cant beilive were late already!" Kimiko yells while grabbing Chiho's hand and running toward school. "K-kimiko!!" I yell in a daze from her fast running. "Were almost there, the school is in my sight! its so big!" Kimiko shouts joyfully. "I-I'm kind of nervous... you know?" "Nervous...? Its not in my vocabulary!" Kimiko says proudly while smiling with a joyful expression. "You never been... nervous before, Kimiko?" Chiho says while letting go of Kimiko's hand gently and stops and stands still. "N-no! There's no really no reason So forget being all nervous! I know! Its because your nervous about the first day of school and meeting new people, huh?" Kimiko says while getting closer to Chiho's face. "N-no its nothing like that!" Chiho says with a sweat drop while nodding continuously. "Then whaaat?" Kimiko says with a lot of energy in the word what. "Enough talk! School!" I yell nervously closing my eyes and i start running away from Kimiko. "C-chiho! Kimiko yells running after Chiho. "Uh Kimiko just forget all about it!" I yell running around trying to dodge Kimiko from jumping on me. "I will never!" Kimiko yells while finally jumping on Chiho. "I-its nothing!"! I shout while trying to get her out of my grasp. "No, I'm your best friend, so tell me now!" Kimiko says with an echo that every student outside could hear. "Y-your making a scene, stupid!" Chiho yells while students start to form a small crowd around Chiho and Kimiko. "Fine!" Kimiko yells getting off of me. "All i wanted to know was what was wrong! Is that so wrong?" Kimiko yells while crossing here arms and walking away. "K-kimiko...!" I got up off the ground i heard the students around me laughing and then they started walking away. "I-i never told you about him... Star." I say with a firm voice while looking up at the many clouds in the sky, shaped like many different things. "What kind of best friend am i?" With my hair blowing in my face, covering my eyes i start to walk to class with a sad expression on my face. "So... room 308 right?" I say getting out a piece of paper with my schedule on it. "These stairs... are so exhausting!" I pant while walking up many stairs. -pant- "Get to class! Or you'll be tardy!" A teacher yelled at me while getting out of his classroom. "I'm... almost there." I say walking up to room 308.

-Room 308-
I slowly widen my eyes and gasp while i see someone in the back row that looks similar to Star! "Hima, Chiho correct?" Please take a seat in the back row. The female teacher says while looking around for her reading glasses. Meanwhile i take a seat in the back next to the familiar looking boy. "H-hi..." I say to him blushing quite a lot. -teacher coughs- "Class! Get out your text books that are on your desk please!" The teacher says while finding her reading glasses and putting them on her face. "I-I'm Chiho, Hima!" I say looking at the beautiful boy, with beautiful eyes while getting out my text book. -snores and falls asleep on the desk- "D-did i bore you?!" I yell out loud annoyed. "Shhh! All the student tell me while glaring at me." "Chiho, why don't you read page 411 about the galaxy and special kind of stars?" -I turn to page 411- "Class please take out your pencil and paper and write down everything Chiho reads!" -Moans- Erm... "There seem to be an enormous number of stars that are visible to the naked-eye at a really dark site but, in fact, the eye can only see about two thousand stars in the sky at one time. We can see the unresolved light of many thousands more when we look at the Milky Way and the light of the Andromeda galaxy which can be seen by the eye comes from thousands of millions of stars." "Yet all of this Chiho has read may be true, but everybody has their very own opinions about the matter. I hope everyone of you took notes, there will be a mini quiz on everything Chiho has read." -Students moan- "Um... teacher? Did i have to take notes?" I ask while raising my hand. "Of course! Just because you read doesn't mean you get away with not taking any notes!" "I didn't take any notes...!" I say thinking to myself while looking back at that boy, still sleeping lazily. "That cant really be him can it?" I say quietly to myself. "You sure like to talk to yourself huh?" The boy says finally waking up and yawning out loud, stretching his arms. "Hm... mm who are you again?" The boy mutters to me. "C-chiho, H-hima!" I say with a fast paste breath while blushing lightly. "Chiho...Hima?" He says while slowly closing his eyes and falling asleep again. "You know... he works way to hard! A girl with a jubilant look on her face comes up to my desk and tells me. "That's why hes always sleeping during class! Let me introduce myself!" I'm Mezuki, Taiso. And that bum next to you is..." "You know i rather you not introduce me to strangers Mezuki." The boy says to Mezuki with tired eyes. "Ah your awake, Kento!" Mezuki says with a cheerful smile, so bright. "You have no manners at all." Kento says with a long yawn. -Second period bell rings- "Well class, I'll see you all tomorrow morning! Remember all your notes you took, you are not allowed to look at them during the quiz!" The female teacher says while leaving the room along with the other students. "Uh... Mezuki can i borrow your notes?" "Ah, you were too busy admiring the popular Kento, eh?" Mezuki asks me with a cute wink. "N-no! N-not at all.. I was reading our loud remember!?" I yell in my defense. -Mezuki laughs- "I was just playing around!" Mezuki says while patting me on the head. "Mezuki, stop acting like a child." Kento says while giving Mezuki a cold stare. -1 minute bell rings- "Oh! Here's the notes for today, Chiho! Make sure to give then back to me tomorrow morning! I already know everything that will be on this quiz, so its okay. See you later you two!" Mezuki says while waving her hand at me while rushing out of the classroom. "D-don't you have another class after this, Kento?" "Don't address me by my name, and no. I only have this class, I'm far more busy with other things." Kento says while putting his head back on his desk. "W-well h-hope to see you and Mezuki tomorrow! I say blushing while getting out of my seat and walking out of the classroom. "Chiho, Hima was it?"

"The hallway clock marks 9:04am, one more minute until period 2... I wonder if Mezuki or Kimiko will be in the same class as me... I hope so." Suddenly when the clock struck exactly 9:05am i saw two men in black cloaks appear before me. "Black cloaks?" I muttered staring at the two men that appeared out of nowhere. "Please, come with us, Chiho, Hima". -Holds out hand- "...What do you want with me?" "Are you scared"? The man in black cloke asks me. -I nod my head- "Why would i be scared?" I asked the man. "Why do you wish to find him?" "Him? Oh... you mean Star...because i want to, why do you ask, it wont benefit you in any way." "It would be best if you stayed in this world." He told me emotionless. "Are you saying he isn't in this world...?" I asked with a surprised look on my face while looking at the clock, the clock struck 9:07am. "Is it just me or is this clock going rather fast?" I thought to myself. "It's not just your imagination." The man commented. "W-what?" I responded as if he knew what i was thinking. "The longer you or i remain here time will go by faster." "It's 9:11am now... why is this happening? What do you know about this?" I asked with a lot of questions. "It'll be easier to figure out once you come with me, Isn't that right? The man asked the other man in the black cloke. "Yes, much easier with Chiho". He responded. "So what do you say?"


~Next chap Soon!~

→Oh, just to let you know first I write my story on a piece of paper, then just type it on here. :] That way I can get better ideas for my story and next chapters, so be patient! Tonight I will work! ^,^←





LYRICS: describes Chiho and Star... kinda o-o
Wish you were here
Me, oh my countryman
Wish you were here
Wish you were here
Don't you know the stove is getting colder
And I miss you like Hell
And I'm feeling blue
Wish you were here Me, oh my countryman
Wish you were here
Wish you were here
Don't you know the stove is getting colder
And I miss you like Hell
And I'm feeling blue
I got feelings for you, babe
Do you still feel the same
From the first time I laid my eyes on you
I felt joy of living, I saw Heaven in your eyes
In your eyes
Wish you were here
Me, oh my countryman
Wish you were here (I wish you were here)
Wish you were here
Don't you know the stove is getting colder
And I miss you like Hell
And I'm feeling blue
I miss your laugh, I miss your smile
I miss everything about you
Every second's like a minute
Every minute's like a day
When you're far away
Wish you were here
The stove is getting colder, baby
I wish you were here
Wish you were here
A battlefield of love and fear
And I wish you were here
I got feelings for you, babe
From the first time I laid my eyes on you
Wish you were here
Me, oh my countryman
Wish you were here (I wish you were here)
Wish you were here
Don't you know the stove is getting colder
And I miss you like Hell
And I'm feeling blue


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