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Episode 1: the dragon return

Nuroton: Good & Evil a thing that has been going on for years. My name is Nuroton Darkblade. I'm a hybrid between a alien & a witch. I am also a Kamen rider for the past few years. I work as a detective and do odd jobs for a living under my families Shrine. I devlope my armor so I can kill the bastard that Killed me and the other guy how screwed me for 3 years.

Jebbs: would you care for something to eat sir.

Nuroton: This is Jebbs. he's my Robotic buttler and friend.

Nuroton: No thanks I'm not hungrey right now.

Sota: You looked bored uncle.

Nuroton: This is my nephew sota.

Nuroton: what makes you say that?

Sota: Well you Killed Gol, & Pelzuz. Grivous is back in jail. and you don't know any Kamen riders that need your help.

Nuroton: Yeah Yeah.

Jebbs: face it sir. you like riders before you have no need to keep fighting.

Nuroton: sigh. I guess your right. Come on lets go see a movie

meanwhile:

Richard: man look at this place it's been scraped since last time

Nuroton: This is Richard he's a mystic.

Durge: Yes exactly why did we come back here any way:

Nuroton: This is Durge he's a bounty hunter.

Odin: because this is where we shall be based again

Nuroton: this is Kamen rider Odin..... yeah don't ask

Zim: Why!? are so called leader is dead! his remains lay scater across worlds.
Gir: And don't forget Jack is gone he left us to be with his Girlfriend

Odin: You dare speak the name of that tradeorist boy to me you hunk of garbage.

Zorak: leave the robot alone he's an idiot remember.

Mojo: yes he is unlike my Super smartness. Me being Gol's most favorite I Mojojojo nominate myself to be leader.

Mr. WA: Like !)$(ing hell you do. You're to ulgly to be leader. Monkey got ownd!

Durge: I ain't taking no orders. from a monkey. or a toy alligator

Odin: SILENCE. No one shal be leader until we bring are leader back from hell and destroy Darkblade. Demidevamon!

Demidevamon: Good new the monster machine we rarly use is still operational.

Odin: Good bring forth a monster that can attack Japan.

In the movies:

Movie: why so serious?!

Sota: Man this movie is way different then the old ones I use to watch

Nuroton: Yeah I know.

after movie.

Nuroton: Well that was a good movie.

Jebbs: It was to brutal for young Sota sir.

Sota: Oh lighten up will ya Jebbs.

Cop cars are speeding.

Nuroton: what the hell? (checks police scaner in his head he's a Cyborg)

police scanner: ALL UNITS ALL UNITS EMERGENCY AT TOWN PLAZA THERE IS A UNKNOWN BEING ATTACKING PEOPLE SUSPECT IS BIG AND LOOKS LIKE A CRAB.

Nuroton: a monster!? YEAH BOY!!! Sota! Jebbs! get back to the shrine and get my belt

Jebbs: What about you sir!?

Nuroton: i'm going to go kick some ass!

Nuroton starts running.

at the town plaza.

Crab monster: Yeah thats it scream you fear makes me hungry for blood!!!!

Nuroton: Hasn't anyone told you its not nice to hurt people?

Nuroton pulls out revolver starts shooting at the monster monster then grabs Nuroton and throws him in to a window. as he got out of the ruble he said one thing.

Nuroton: ID SUIT!!!!!!

Nuroton ID suit is a special suit made for him to fight monster with out the use of his belt.

Nuroton: Come on!

him and the monster ingage in battle again. meanwhile

Jebbs: where is it!?

Sota: Jebbs! I found his belt and sphere. did you find his sword and Lightsaber!?

Jebbs: Yes! lets go!

Back at the plaza Nuroton is getting the crap kicked out of him.

Nuroton: Is that all you got?!

Crab monster: RAGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

Sota & Jebbs: Uncle! Sir! here.

Throw belt and sphere.

Nuroton: Thanks

Type's in numbers on sphere 5464 and saidN D

Nuroton: HENSHIN

Scid the spher across his robotic Eye on to his belt make the sphere shot out lights out of the sphere becoming his armor

Crab: What?!

King ND: The Dragon of Justice! Kamen rider KING ND!

ND rider fights crab monster by cutting his claws off with his Sword & Lightsaber but cant cant pierce his shell so he stats to preform his new kick as his left foot stars to burn & the front of his right foot opens up like a piston.

King ND: ND BURNING HAMER KICK!!

Just then King ND did a flying front kick On the monster heating up his shell and the doing a round house kick with his right foot smash the monster into a wall and blowing up on inpact.

Cop: hay it's a kamen rider

everybody goes around Nuroton as King ND cheering for him.

the next day

Nuroton: aw it fells good to be back.

to be continued.

Kamen rider King ND! (preview)

Sota: dose that mean we're back in business

Jebbs: another monster coming up fast

Nuroton: Time to wake up the Dragon.

Next episode: Sliver Speed.
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wow nice ^^
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it think it's....jimmy neutron
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Aegis85 wrote:

it think it's....jimmy neutron


which word make u think so ??
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VictorBoy wrote:
which word make u think so ??


this
"Nuroton: This is Jebbs. he's my Robotic buttler and friend."

but the intro is kinda wierd...to me..frankly it's kinda dull...i mean...for some reason the fiction reminds me of saban's masked rider. he's an alien too. and he wears cape like a witch. LOL
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ooo no wonder
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btw wat does ND means??
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it's the first letters in his first & last name if you want the full story look for it on deviantart
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Aegis85 wrote:


VictorBoy wrote:
which word make u think so ??


this
"Nuroton: This is Jebbs. he's my Robotic buttler and friend."

but the intro is kinda wierd...to me..frankly it's kinda dull...i mean...for some reason the fiction reminds me of saban's masked rider. he's an alien too. and he wears cape like a witch. LOL


Well excuse me I was trying to make it a fusion between Kamen rider & Metal heroes. I mean yes I watch Masked Rider recently ( and god I want to put a bullet in my head for that.) but trust me I have a WAY different storyline then that bullshit. For example I don't have a mutated duck thing.
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Kirby007 wrote:
mutated duck thing.


LOL. Ferbus...
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lol, there was a digimon, mojojojo and KR Odin...
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i m abit confuse wif d story @_@
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i m abit confuse wif d story @_@


Read the first half at deviantart just look up the name.
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Episode 2: Silver Speed

Kivat: Hey everyone. did you know if you have a demon out to get revenge on you he will keep coming back. so to make that not happen the person should split all of his belonging all over the world to make sure he is not ressurected.

Tachibana bike shop

Nuroton: Hey Shigiru! you get my old bike fixed up.

Shigiru: Just hold on a minute it takes awhile to work on older bikes like this. I still can't believe you want to be a Rider again

Nuroton: Well I was bored. I just been waiting for something to happen.

Just then something ran right in frount of Nuroton's face.

Nuroton: the hell was that!? I'll be back.

Shigiru: wait!

Nuroton starts running unbuttons his Jacket revealing his belt typed in the code on ND sphere.

Nuroton: HENSHIN!

King ND used his Jetpack to catch up with the monster see what it is he attacked only to be flinged away by it.

King ND: well that went well.

Back at base

Sota: so did you get a good look at the monster?

Nuroton: Yeah he looked like a cheeta with car parts.

Jebbs: well whatever it was he sure screwed your Jetpack pretty bad. sir

Nuroton: Yeah I know that thing was bouncing off walls when I fought it.

Sota: what are you going to do the only vehicle you have besides the robot brothers is your bike. and that getting repaired since your last scrap with a monster besides thr crab thing from yesterday.

phone rings

Shigiru: Hey Nuroton your bike is going to need some more repairs. why don't you go meet Hongo. and test out some new bikes for yourself.

Meanwhile.

Odin: Have you brought the the stuff we need to bring our lord back.

Durge: Yeah we got the ashes of Gol from that Ninja villiage you were talking about.

Odin: Good.

Zim: I MANAGE TO BRING BACK THE HELLFIRED SWORD FROM A FEW CULT FREAKS!

Odin: excellent and I have the cloth of the master. all we need is the remaining objects & Are master will be reborn!

Richard: are you sure that monster that you sent will keep the lizard off are tail.

Odin: Of corse I seet this monster to run around the city so that it may cause all sorts of destruction.

Back at the motor ring Nuroton has al ready gone thew enough bikes. and dosen't like any of them.

Hongo: Nuroton are you sure you don't want to try anymore out.

Nuroton: No I'll just have to wait until my old one is fixed.

Hongo: why is that bike so special to you.

Nuroton: because I've been through everything with that bike that and it holds the soul of one of my friends.

Hongo: I see.

Codec goes off in Nurotons head.

Nuroton: Jebbs

Jebbs: sir! that monster is back I've done all I can to hold it back you half to get here right away!

Shigiru: Oi!!! Nuroton! your bike is ready!

Nuroton: Bout time!

seeing his bike Nuroton fells that his soul has just caught on fire.

Nuroton: okay I'm off.

Nuroton then rides his bike out to the city.

Shigiru: should we help him Hongo?

Hongo: no this is Nuroton's moment to shine.

Nuroton henshined and his bike transformed in to a dragon like bike.

Nuroton: good to have you back buddy.

just as the cheetah monster was about to attack a bus King ND shot it with his blaster.

King ND: YO UGLY!!!! YOU WANNA PLAY WITH SOMETHING PLAY WITH ME!

so the monster & King ND start chasing each other around town until King ND corner the monster.

King ND: ND BREAK!!!!!!

Rammed the monster into a wall.

Cheetah: so you seemed to have catch up to me. the boss was right you are a deadly man.

King ND: Who sent you and you crab buddy?

Cheetah: thats for me to know and you to Die!!!

King ND: not much of a good comeback.

King ND fought the monster. when the monster was down Nuroton used his sword & lightsaber to slice up his body in a flash.

Back at base:

Sota: so you think Gol's guy sent him.

Nuroton: yeah it seems Odins got a vendetta on me. well then bring it on I can take what ever that golden bastard can throw at me!

To be countinued.

Kamen rider King ND!

Nuroton so you guys have returned.

Odin: you shall die before Us Darkblade

Nuroton: It's get hot in here

Ep. 3: Burning Justice!.

Momotaros: Ore Sanjou!

Ryutaros: Hey is the story over?

Momotaros: of course it is!

Ryutaros: then why is it still going?

Urataros: because this is the part where the reader will learn about the Golangers

Momtaros: Golangers!?

Urataros: They are a small group of people that is left from death hand army. & there leader Gol.

Ryutaros: Gol?

Kintaros: He is the master of evil & vengence

Momotaros: Are these guy's really what there cracked up to be!?

Urataros: Yes.

Momotaros: No matter I can handle them with one hand tied behind my back

Kintaros: My strength shall make them cry!

Momo & Kin start fighting

Deneb: Be sure to read more of this story when it comes out. please

Ryutaros: Ne what are you ding here Deneb?
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djloi wrote:

i m abit confuse wif d story @_@


Read the first half at deviantart just look up the name.


does that mean u have comic version? btw, ur story is still lacking something. i hate to say this but it's still boring. do you read kr access n kr hercules? the r very well composed. anyway, ganbare...akiramenai yo!
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