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Episode 3 burning Justice:

In the middle of the night Nuroton gets a call

Nuroton: Hello

?????: Nuroton Darkblade. this is Commissinor Kaoru Ichijo I want to talk to you about a case come meet me at the Police station

Nuroton: Okay [hangs up phone] And I thought it was going to be a good day today.

Nuroton Pulls up to the police station on his bike, is greeted & goes in the brefing room.

Ichijo: as you can see lately there have been murders of people getting cut up in a horrific way. we suspect that someone form america Named Mojojojo and serveal acomplist are behide these attacks.

Nuroton: Mojo? your serious.

Ichijo: You have something to say Mr. Darkblade?

Nuroton: yeah the fact that mojo wouldn't even be the leader of this group. My guess is it's possibly Kamen rider Odin.

Ichijo: Kamen rider odin? hmmmm... even if your right that Mojo isn't theleader of this group I still want you to find out whats kiling all these people. understand.

Nuroton: yeah yeah.

Back at base Sota & Jebbs reactivate the robot brothers.

Artllia: ohohoho what happen It fell's like me's been a sleep for a long time.

Sota: you kinda have Artllia. Jebbs you activated Ninjet & Hoverknight yet?

Jebbs: Yes I have.

Ninjet: Remind me never to get a year vacation from the boss next time he goes on a little trip

Hoverknight: Yes I make sure of that next time my brother. where is the boss anyway?

Sota: he's on a case.

Back in the city Nuroton is getting closed to finding the Murderer.

Nuroton. Come out come out whereever you are. pulls out revolver & Laser pistol.

Just then the thing he's been surching for throws him into a warehouse revealing on what it is.

Nuroton: a mantis?

????: Not just a mantis but a mantis skilled in samurai arts!!

as Nuroton turns around he finds faces he thought he never see again.

Nuroton: so it is you guys again.

????: Immortal hunter. Durge.

????: Immortal Sorccerer: Richard.

????: Hopeless Invader. Zim.

????: Maniac monkey. Mojo.

????: Phinox deck user. Odin

????: Destructive bug. Zorak

all: And together we are.... Darkness sentai. Golanger.

Nuroton with a WTF face: Golanger?? you guys for the past 5 years I fought you guys. you still have that lame ass name...... hey where's Jack Spicer ain't he apart of you little circus.

Odin: that traitor is gone from the team.

Durge: Yeah you talked him into going back to that god-forsaken Island of Girls to be with his loved one

Nuroton: Well what do you expect from me I thought the Island was going to need the boy for you know future needs and all that.

Richard: Oh shut up I don't want to be thinking about that later tonight!

Nuroton: Okay really did you guys come to talk of am I going to have to woops some ass.

Odin: you dare speak to us like that?! no matter you won't be so cocky once are Great leader is revived

Nuroton: Great leader? You don't mean Gol do you.

Demidevamon: No he means that freaky boy Kai from last years rider series. OF COURSE HE MEANS GOL!!!

Nuroton: I won't let you get away with this.

Demidevamon: Why am I not surprise!

Odin: silent. Mantis dispose of this garbage.

As the Golanger disappered The mantis attack Nuroton. Nuroton henshined and started to fight.

King ND: Come on is that the best you got.

Odin: activate the twist world.

Narraitor: The twist world is a dimension used by Golanger. to send King ND & the monster into a battlefeild for them to fight in but the monster has a advantage in this world.

King ND: Dragon Glider!!!!!!

King ND's bike came to save it's master by transforming from bike to dragon for King ND to Surf on.

The Mantis Counter ND rider's moves time and time again.

Mantis: fool if you wish to beat me you must use more then just fancy kicks & punches.

King ND: Then how about fancy swordsmenship. ND smoke.

as the monster is blinded by ND smoke Nuroton pulls out his ND sphere and types in 3473

ND shere: FIRE

King ND then skid the sphere across his sword. where a chinease Dragon on fire comes out of the sword and the circles around King ND. when he emerged King ND intire armor transformed into a samurai like armor with fire all over it.

Mantis: WHAT?!

King ND: THE DRAGON OF FIRE. ND. FIRE RIDER!!

Mantis & fire rider began fighting this time King ND has the advantage with unlimited transportation & able to take on any projectle attack.

Fire rider: FIRE BLADE!

Fire rider pulled pulled ou his sword and the entire blade caught on fire as the monster then foght sword to sword with him mantis begins to run away.

Fire rider: Dragon glider!

Dragon glider. comes to Fire rider help and as soon as fire rider touched his bike Dragon glider transformed into blazer wich the hole bike was on fire. (no I didn't take from Ghost rider). as soon as he caught up he stated shooting fire balls at mantis. in one final effort to kill Fire rider. Mantis charged at him not knowing that He had already begun to preform his final attack.

ND belt: FIRE BLADE READY!

Fire rider threw his sword into mid air and started running at mantis and then jumped where the chinease dragon grabbed onto his sholders and started to push him up as he grab his sword he then started to fall down like a meteor.

Fire rider: Blazing SLASH!!!!

as the the sword toched mantis he was then cut in half & started to melt as mantis died the twist dimension started to disapper.

the next day

Sota: so there going to bring Gol back.

Nuroton: yeah and trust me he is going to be pissed at me when he gets back. he will never forgive what I've done to him. but trust me I will do everything I have to do to stop his ressurection.

to be countinued:

Kamen rider King ND! (preview)

Nuroton: man that guy is huge.

Robot bros: we tried are best to stop it.

Odin: very soon we shall have Gol-sama back!

Next episode. Musical summoning
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it's becoming cartoon. lol. r u serius with this fic?
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Cartoon and Kamen riders...lol lets see who this turns out...
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"Darkness sentai. Golanger." ..

i m having WTF expression as well...hahahaha

i felt tat the 5 GOLANGER felor is interesting
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Episode 4: Musical summoning

The day starts out with Nuroton eatting breakfest at 11 a.m. and haveing his nephew ask him questions

Sota: Hey uncle what are you going to do

Nuroton with food in his moth: What do you mean

Sota: Well Odin & the others are planning to bring back Gol wasn't he like your worst enemy or something

Nuroton going all SD and dressed up like Dr. House: No he was just a guy who was pissed at me for cutting off his hand & Screwing up his face. I beat his ass in 1990 I beat his ass in 2005 & I beat his as last year with the help of a Ninja, a fat guy, A pretty boy, & my atoptive releative from my grandpa.

Jebbs: Is that why he is so evil towards you?"

Nuroton: Yes but nows not the time to dig up old memories I have a case for You & Sota to do

????: And what about me?

Nuroton: What?

Nuroton turns around to see Sieg

Nuroton: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU STILL DOING HERE!?

Sieg: I chose to stay with young Sota for that was his wish

Nuroton: Oh yeah I forgot about that.

Jebbs: I do not wish to work with this pompes bird!

Sieg: Quiet buttler & be a good Servent and bring back some tea..

Jebbs: I'LL SHOW YOU SOME TEA!!!!!! pulls out rockets

Nuroton: Hey Hey HEY! thats enough Like I was saying I want you guys to go to the world known as Halkeginia there you'll find a school for Mages.

Sota: is it another world you've been to?

Nuroton: Yes I want you guys to find my brother Koragg.

Jebbs: Koragg!? Isn't he dead though

Nuroton: No he's been hiding out there for a while disguies himself as a teacher

Sota: What do you want us to do there?

Nuroton: I want you to who these Void users are. I also half to warn you Koragg Befriend a couple of weird fella's

Jebbs: Hm runs in the family it seems.

Nuroton: There are 3 of them a kid, a big quiet Dude and the man I shall never forget..........Jiro.

Sota: okay so when do we go.

Nuroton: Right now oh and becarful Jiro is a bit of a loose cannon.

Sota: Okay

And so Sota Jebbs & Sieg activated one of Nuroton's "boom tubes" to go to Halkeginia but what Nuroton didn't reliese is as soon as they left A monster stated to attack.

Nuroton: oh crap! well guy's time for you to roll out.

In the middle of the city a elephant monster atacks the city only to be stop by King ND and the robot brothers.

King ND: Normaly I only use these guys in a emergency But since I'm alittle Short handed right now I'll make an exception.

????: System Change!! Artillia!!!!!!

????: System Change!! Ninjet!

????: System Change!! Hoverknight!!

All three: together we are the Robot Brothers!!

So they got in a fight which King ND used a rider kick to finish of the monster only to have the monster grow in size.

King ND: well guys lets do this.

All three: yes sir.

King ND got on his bike and the robot bros. transform back into there vehicle forms.

King ND: ND Gattai!

the robo bros. all came around King ND bike. forming ND Striker.

King ND: we're we go!

Starts hopping off buildings trying to get to the monsters heart. unknowingly having something come at them!

????: Final vent.

King ND: what!

Odin then headbutted the striker seperating the brothers from the bike

Odin: I will not let you interfer with my mission so die.

Odin then shot a stream of light At King ND only to hit the robot bros. then all four of them fell to the ground.

King ND: Guys! are you okay!

Artillia: OHohoh we okay

Hoverknight: we are to damage to fight the monster.

King ND: Okay looks like I'm going to half to use my other form after all.

Type's in 27667. ARMOR

King ND: Henshin!

King ND's armpads then ejected with his cape & jetpack His suit is then coverd by the dragon sheild & gains the Zyusoken

King ND: The dragon of protection! ND Armor Rider!!

Armor rider then used the Zyusoken to summon Dragon Ceaser to fight the monster while Armor rider was on his head only to be knock off by Odin.

Odin: let use fight rider to Rider monster to dragon.

Armor rider fought Odin while Dragon Ceaser foght the elephant monster. Armor rider activated his finisher

ND belt: Zyusoken Ready!

Armor Rider then played a tune while dragon ceaser powerd his chest Armor rider the jumped in front of Dragon ceaser only to be blasted and do a deadly Rider kick to the elephant monster.

Odin: this is not done yet Darkblade You haven't seen the last of the Golangers!

King ND: when have I

Odin dissapered and Nuroton unhenshined.

Nuroton: Grat now I cant transform for 32 hours oh well time to watch some tv.

to be continued.

Kamen rider King ND! (preview)

Nuroton you know there are more then just Sentai & Riders. so I'm dedicating my next episode to my dear friends the metal heroes.

Next episode: Remembering the Metals
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GYAHAHAHAHA!!*crying streams*this is sooo funny!!Good job,Kirby !!Though,the story is not done really properly.You already had the allies and villains.Now,try introducing new supporting characters and expand them,together with the main cast .

Oh,and you got some spelling errors.
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i got nothing to say but 1 thing u got some spelling errors
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Kirby007 wrote:
Nuroton with food in his moth

LOL. although it's a typo but this one is kinda make sense. LMAO!



-Koragg.

-Ninjet!

-ND Gattai!

OMG! that's soO~ power rangers. LOL

reading this new episode is like translation using google translate tool. LOL
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plot fillers

Nuroton Darkblade has been a rider for 7 years now and he was born on 1971 then adopted by The Higurashi 3 hours after his birth
In 1988 Nuroton got the item to turn him into a kamen rider a white King stone. in 2002 Nuroton woke up out of a coma and fought as ND also relizing he had a brother Named Koragg. in 2003 he sacrificed his life to stop a medior from hitting earth. at that year he land some where far away from his world believe to be dead he snuke pass Gol's troops while getting more power ups & Becoming stronger. ZX dubbed Nuroton Kamen rider 12. in 2004 Nuroton fought as Kamen rider King ND killing Gol, Nuraku, & Pelzuz (a demon from hell who tortured Him for the past 3 years). In 2005 King ND battle Grevious who turned out to be the true leader of past organzations (Shocker-crisis) with the help of Ichigo-Black RX became a detective. on the same year Nuroton Joined GGG which lead to the creation of the robot brothers. Nuroton's close friend Hojo was transformed into a Kaizo-ningen Named Dynamo by grevious & his original suit design was stolen by Revolver Ocelot to create 12 fake ND's. in 2006 King ND snapped his leg while fighting Zounda and had to stay out of the rider buissness for a while so he became a teacher for the Mahora acadmy {see the rest of this info next episode} in 2007 Nuroton was feeling better and joined the Kira case only to leave after L died. King ND then Joined the vigealent 4 for a while and then left after a Gol (who was resurrected) was defeted. 2008 Sieg comes to posses Nuroton Nephew Sota after he made a wish for Sieg to stay with him He was now able to transform into Den-o wing fom.
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Power Rangers, previous riders and robots???
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well technecle Koragg was the ONLY cool Chacter in Mystic force that I liked so I altered his story line and made him the "twin" prother of Nuroton (Nuroton has a more alien apperence and Koragg has a Human apperence.)

The robots I origanly had them be battle suits but you know since Den-liner, Zeroliner, Castle Dran, & PowerIXA came I decided to make them in to robot allies.

And the past rider characters..... lets face it people like cameo's
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lol you made it with the same time line with death note!
cool!
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this story is getting weirder and less rider alike. sorry, i gave up on your fic.
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Aegis85 wrote:

this story is getting weirder and less rider alike. sorry, i gave up on your fic.


wow so fast give up y??
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