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Posted 8/2/08 , edited 8/24/08
The sound of the sea, the calming of the wind.
The gleam of the moon and an iniquity sin
Words of smoke to blind you in evilness of hate
The devils words that whisper deep inside you start
to irritate.
A rage that can cause you mad to hurt the ones
that are locked safely in your heart.
Hands that are willing to tear anything apart

Though Eyes of innocent that feel nothing but fear
A light around you that is strong and is not
willing to show a tear.
Been there, done that; still strong in your soul
As your spirit was once evil and now pure and something
that your willing to fight t0 hold.
A chance to believe in something you could n0t long ago
Because u were locked away unable to feel loved.
And was cold like ice and was left alone
A light is with you and so are the wings of fate
To guide you through when you are blind and protect you from hate

~Renji_lova_2007


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Posted 8/18/08
Hmm.. a deep poem I should say, the lines are connected and I seem to understand what your saying. Nice poem! The title is good enough for me.. ^^
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Posted 8/19/08
A deep and meaningfull poem. Its really great !
I like the tittel as it is ^^
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