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INSTRUCTIONS: It's quite obvious from the title, right? Just add on to the story. I won't limit the number of words to make it easier and after a month, I'll post this as a new thread as a story by {Writers Block}..! Ain't that fun..? ^^.

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> The important thing to remember is the paragraphs or lines have to be connected or else we won't be able to make a good story. But of course, you are welcome to add your own twists to keep it interesting too! ^^,

> Watch your grammar and spelling everyone!

> & have fun!


So then, I'll start it off!

She tripped again. And again. And for the third time, she fell. But this time, she opted to stay on the ground. Her drenched body shivered violently against the harsh wind. The rain poured down on her still, gathering strength as time passed by.

Hopeless. she thought to herself.

"Hey. Are you all right, miss?" his voice, like a distant light in the pit of darkness echoed in her ears louder than the storm.


~to be continued by you~
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Posted 8/9/08
His white hair somehow managed to stay dry in the pondering rain. His vivid intense green eyes stared at her with deep concern.
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YAYdudette123 wrote:

His white hair somehow managed to stay dry in the pondering rain. His vivid intense green eyes stared at her with deep concern.


Nice one! ^^,

Con't:

The rude retort she was about to give died from her lips before she could say them aloud. The sight of him rendered her speechless.
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ahah lol thanks ^^

Why is this she wonders, but she quickly shook the thought out of her mind. It's not worth knowing
But the truth was, she wanted to know. It was a desire that burned inside her and grew bigger as each second passed.
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Posted 8/14/08 , edited 8/14/08

YAYdudette123 wrote:

ahah lol thanks ^^

Why is this she wonders, but she quickly shook the thought out of her mind. It's not worth knowing
But the truth was, she wanted to know. It was a desire that burned inside her and grew bigger as each second passed.


"Miss?" his beautiful deep voice cut through her inner turmoil.

"I - I'm fine." at last, she spoke but her voice was barely audible amidst the storm.

"Can't you stand?" the concern in his tone was evident as he extended his hand for her.

A sudden flash of lightning and roar of thunder caused her to jump up immediately. Because of a traumatizing event in her childhood, she'd been afraid of things of this sort. Her fear was greater now that there was no one to comfort her anymore.

A bright red blush crept up her face when she found that she had sought the arms of the stranger.
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Posted 8/24/08
She kept her gaze to the ground and closed her eyes tightly hoping that it was some dream that she was tranced upon. Her thoughts were flooding through her head, her heart was galloping wildly in its confined cage and she was breathless for the first time in her life. His presence ignited her cold body with a sudden flow of warmth.

"Miss?" he repeated softly this time, as if an angel was comforting her.
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Wow! I'm loving this! But I honestly still don't know where this is going..! Hahahaha...

Con't:

Violent tremors shook her entire body and tears streamed down from her icy blue eyes. Despite the warmth engulfing her now, she felt . . . .vulnerable. Anonymity was not anymore an issue. She buried her face in his chest letting go of every pretense she'd put around herself.

"Shhh. . . ." he mumbled, trying his luck on appeasing her.

"S - sor - ry." she hiccuped.

Then suddenly, they're eyes met and . . . .


BOOM!
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Posted 8/26/08
lol yeh this is fun haha

...Untamed sparks twinkled before their very own eyes and for that one splitting second... their hearts intertwined. A special mystifying glow surrounded their delicate bodies outlining their details in clear perfection.
Posted 8/26/08
(i am an amateur but wud try my best at this ><)

It seemed like eternity has went and gone until she looked away from his gaze. She was afraid of this connection that she felt with him. She pushed him away fearfully. He seemed startled with her abrupt movement then realized. A look of understanding passed his handsome face. He gently offered a hand. She seemed reluctant, but accepted it nonetheless.
Posted 8/26/08
"Come on, you might catch a cold if you stand in this rain any longer."

While holding her hand, he led her to the nearest thing to cover themselves from the rain, a simple tree. The girl was about to say something, but suddenly another bolt of lightning struck, and thunder soon came after. The girl, frightened, quickly buried her face in the boy's chest. In his effort to comfort her, he wrapped his arms around her.
After awhile, the girl looked up into the boy's eyes.

"Th-thank you sir."

The boy laughed, "'Sir'? Oh geez you make me sound like an old man. You can just call me......"
Posted 8/27/08
*ah u stopped coz you dont know what to call him! T.T*

"Ok. That's what I will call you." She suppressed a smile at his name.

"And what is your name?" He retorted.

" I'm ....."

*RIGHT BACK ATCHA!*
Posted 8/29/08
(((lol well yeah I wanted to see if you guys wanted to name them instead, or if we still wanted it to be a mystery, he could make something happen to interrupt him. Hmm what should his name be? Should it be in Japanese? If so, how about Yuki, means snow, Hiroshi, generous, or Kiyoshi, quiet?)))

"I'm...."

(((For the girl, how about Hana, means flower, or Ame, I think it means rain. )))
Posted 8/30/08
(I think Hiroshi but hey that's just me ^^ you can change the name if you like though)


"...Hiroshi." he said as his voice once again rung throughout her ears and caused her body to tremble. Hiroshi mistaking it as coldness, shook off his black leather coat and swung it around Ame (I like that name). She stared up at him in confusion but he was no longer looking at her. He was now looking ahead, at a black shadow that was creeping closer...
Posted 8/30/08
(lawl sorry I don't know what I was thinking when I did that ending part...)
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(haha it sounds cool)

She slowly turns her head as the figure came into view. Her eyes grew wide in fright and she clung tightly to Hiroshi and whimpered. He detached his stare and glanced at the cowering Ame,"what's wrong?" he whispered. She clutched onto him refusing to answer. but hiroshi didn't need an answer he had already knew...........
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