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Posted 8/31/08
(this is getting good xD)

Finally, the firgure turned into a middle age man about 5'7 with a sluggish grin on his face. In his left hand held a half empty wine bottle and on the other a lit cigar. 'there you are Ame, where have you been'
Posted 8/31/08
"U-U-Uncle..." Ame studdered as she shivered in Hiroshi's arms.

"Ame, I've been looking all over forr you." Ame's uncle said in his drunken state, "Let's go home and have some 'fun'."

Ame shook her head furiously, "N-No!"

Hiroshi then caught on to everything and started to hold on to Ame tightly while glaring at the man,
Posted 8/31/08
"get away." he replied with coldness in his voice that could very mean death to men that hears this. But no matter, the stupd uncle stared confusingly at him,"wwhoa are youu." he asked pointing his pointer igure at him, stuggering just a bit as he does.
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Posted 9/1/08
Hiroshi growled and swung Ame on his back protectively. This was done so fast it had shock Ame when she finally realized what happened. w-what was that? she thinks compltely stunned
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Posted 9/2/08
(Is Hiroshi a vampire now?! Growling?! Wahahaha... I'm reading too much Twilight for my own good! Sorry 'bout that! ^^, I must say...You guys are good! I wouldn't ever thought this story would turn in this direction! The names are perfect! Thanks for suggesting and choosing them! )

Anyway, here I go:

"Give her to me. I need to take her home." the tone now was different, full of authority, but not less slurred.

Hiroshi took a quick glance at Ame. Her expression clearly answered his unspoken question. No. And that was enough for him. Without a backward glance, he sped away from the place with Ame securely riding on his back. That left Ame's uncle wide-eyed and dumbstruck.

He was swift on his feet. Ame could barely make out the road and buildings flashing past. It was a frightening and . . . .exhilarating experience.

"Where are we going?" Ame caught herself questioning as the scene of black and gray turned brown and green.
Posted 9/2/08
(lol, ummm what's a twilight?)

He chuckled, his body vibrated underneath her.
"you'll see."
Ame felt like it was only seconds ago when she was standing alone in the street, looking for something she didn't know.
Posted 9/2/08
(((Twilight is a book about a vampire falling in love with a human, right? I never actually read the book.)))

Ame closed her eyes, for some reason she trusted this stranger she just met on the streets. She suddenly felt warm against his back, even in the pouring rain.
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Posted 9/3/08
(( haha yerps thts right.. im actually reading it atm. ^^))

Suddenly he pulled into a slow walk gliding with each step he took. Ame stared at her own surroundings as he led the way gracefully. She had now noticed that the scenery was changing into a meadow filled with full blooming blossoms that grew wildly. The rain had now cleared up and the sun was coming from behind the clouds lighting the world with various colours.
Posted 9/3/08
((ohh I see thanks xD)))

"where are we ?" she whispered awe naked in her words
he chuckled and set her on the floor. Surpirsingly she staggered and almost fell to the ground if not for him catching her.
"whoa there, we a bit clumsy aren't we?" he's voice chimed sweetly in her ears.
She glared at him and pulled away, only to grab is arm for support again,"I don't know what you're talking about."
He smiled and her heart skipped a beat.
"so where are we exactly are we?" she repated again, this time looking around.


Posted 9/5/08
"It's a place that I like to come ever since - " Hiroshi stopped. His face darkened for a second. The next, it was gone, replaced with a smile. "Never mind." Ame could tell it was forced. But she didn't dare ask him what's wrong, partly because, she didn't really want to see his beautiful face upset again. "Hey, come on. Let's race!" Ame looked at him, his boyishness showing, a side of him she's never seen before. She smiled to herself, "The last one is a rotten egg!"


(I LOVE LOVE LOVE TWILIGHT! i read breaking dawn -the last book in the series- ! it is a MUST)
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Posted 9/6/08
(omg! I read Breaking Dawn! it was super duper uber goood xDDDD))))

He's pace was unbelievable. One moment I was in the lead then the next their was a black blur next to me and he was far down the end of the field , he's smile spreading wider on his face as I gasped in shock.
Posted 9/6/08 , edited 9/11/08
"why did he do that?" I mumbled more to myself, and on top of everything it was barely audible..
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Posted 9/9/08 , edited 9/9/08
His smile radiated amongst his facial features mesmerizing me as his eyes dazzled me in the newborn sunlight. I instantly forgot for a moment what i was thinking as his beauty hypnotized my thoughts. As we slowed to a stop i was breathless once again gasping for fresh air.
Posted 9/11/08 , edited 9/11/08
Hiroshi's POV (LOLZ! he deserves some thoughts of his own...XD n also...how did it become almost like the twilight series? XDD)

"Stop! Stop! Ok you win!" She panted.
I grinned smugly. "I knew I'd win that."
"Hey! That's cheating!! If you had known why had you put me through that torture?" She demanded, looking annoyed.
I threw back my head and laughed. She looks so adorable, getting all worked up over it.
I smiled at her. I liked the way her cheeks always turn a light shade of red whenever I smile at her.
"I want to explore!" She piped up, startling me from my thoughts. I had not realized that I was just standing there grinning like an idiot. Embarassing. "Yeah, come on. I'll show you the place."
I walked slower this time, resulting in her being a few paces in front of me. My mind drifted again to our previous conversation.

How did she come up? I promised myself I won't even think about her. Why have I remembered again? I have to accept that she is gone, and she'll never come back.

"Hiroshi? Are you okay?"

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Posted 9/16/08
Right! Right! This is still Hiroshi's POV, okay? And I have no idea how it became Twilight-ish..! But it's probably my fault for being the first to mention it... Anyways, here I go:

"What?" I hadn't really paid attention.

"I was asking if you were okay. Weren't you listening?" she was walking backwards, her eyes fixated on me as she spoke.

"I. . ." her don't-lie-to-me look made me stop and consider whether I should tell her or not. I almost told her. Almost.

Suddenly, she let out a shrill scream. She disappeared before I could finish my statement.

"Ame?"

There was no answer. Panic quickly came over me as I rushed to where she vanished. The forest floor beneath my feet and I hurtled down a steep slope. It was easy to regain my balance and stop before I fell over. But I hadn't got the time to gloat over my prowess.

"Ame?" I called again.

Still, there came no response.
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