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(alright then!!! let's put these things aside!!! let me continue the story, please!!! ~~~)

It took a long while for Hiroshi to realize that Ame was looking at him. He remembered that she spoke about something.

"Oh... sorry. What did you ask me?"

Ame stared at him in disbelief. "Why did you save me from my past?"

"Did I?" Hiroshi wondered. "Actually, I just saved you from the creature, not your past."

"But you told me a secret no one would ever believe!" Ame protested. "Of course, if I never encountered that creature, I wouldn't have believed you in the first place."

For the first time, Hiroshi frowned. "Ame, I think you should put these thoughts aside and rest. It would be too dangerous if you're planning to come with me on my journey to self-discovery."

Ame looked surprised. "You're going to leave me?"

"No. Not really. I'll always be here for you, but I can't accept it if they find out about you, and turn you into a creature like me."

(please continue!!! I ran out of time... ~~~)
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(aww please continue to write here we're still in desperate need of more writers! xDDD rofl hey ausome.. journey to self discovery...lol)

(Hiroshi's POV [just to make it clear])

"B-but..you did save me when I was young. Going with you could be my way of repaying you! I have various connections and knowledge that might help you in your way!" She reasoned with me.
I smiled wistfully.
Some part of me wanted her to come, but I knew that it wasn't safe. It was definitely not for her.
"I don't want you to be hurt. You would repay me by staying here, where I know where you are, and by being safe."


(Ame's POV [WOOH! coz if you think about it theres been a lot of hiroshi :S])

I was angry. Yes, I was very angry.
Who does he think he is? Does he think I'm just some frail, little girl who can't protect herself? Oh I'll show him some.
"If you say so...." I replied, though inside me was thinking something else.
"When are you leaving?"
"Tomorrow night probably. I have to stock up on supply for the journey and some money. I have to be able to survive until I get to the next city...." He said with a smile, as he ran his fingers through my hair.
I nodded, and settled down on my bed. He gently closed my eyelids, "Sleep. You need rest."
He left after he was completely sure I fell asleep.
Which I was most certainly not.

Inside my mind, a plan has been hatched.


(ooohhh now who can think of a good plan? coz i cant rofl!)
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The Story So Far
(ok i havent done much but copy and paste..but here you are!sorry for the mess..if i have time ill make it better)


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(oh, before I start where we left off, I'd like to apologize to kamikaziblade900... hey man, even I'm not that good as a writer!!! I still have a lot of things to discover in the World of Art (that's what I call it!!! I always create my own reality!!! ~~~). It would be great if you still write here!!!)

(okay, back to the story!!! ~~~)


The next morning, Ame woke up to find a bunch of golden chrysanthemums on her bedside table. The sweet smell of the flowers made her think of Hiroshi. She looked at the open window of her room where she can see the sun starting to rise. No doubt, Hiroshi visited her while she was asleep.

Shortly after breakfast, the nurse checked her for signs of illness. An hour later, Ame was discharged.

As Ame stepped out of the hospital's lounge, she spotted some of her friends running towards her.

"Ame, are you alright?" one of her friends asked. "We skipped class to see you!"

"I'm fine," she replied. "There's no need for all of you to visit me. That was the stupidest thing to do."

"We heard the news from your aunt. It seems that your uncle was harassing you yesterday."

"Where is she now?" Ame asked.

"She's filing a complaint to the police as we speak."

Ame grinned. "Serves him right."

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From across the street, Hiroshi was looking at Ame on top of a tall building. He knew that he must be preparing for his journey, but he couldn't leave Ame for one second.

He clutched his chest, imagining his heart beating for her.

"It has been a long time since your heart has stopped beating, hasn't it?" someone asked behind him.

Hiroshi slashed at the speaker with his claws. The speaker only deflected it with his left arm.

Hiroshi was stunned. "Kieran? What... what the hell are you doing here?"

"Long time, no see, eh?" he replied. "I was trying to find you several days ago."

"You were following me?" Hiroshi asked. "But... why?"

"She's not important, for now," Kieran said, pointing at Ame, who was crossing the street with her friends surrounding her. "She might bring about your suffering, if you're not careful."

Hiroshi looked at her. The soft look in his eyes surprised Kieran.

"Your mind's still sent on avenging yourself from the Corruptors, right?" he asked, changing the subject.

"Y-Yeah..." Hiroshi muttered.

"Good. I found their trail two weeks ago. With a painful price."

He showed Hiroshi his right arm. It was coarse and black.

"You were injured?" Hiroshi said, shocked. To think that Kieran, who saved him from the Corruptors, was injured reeled Hiroshi's mind.

"Yes. Unfortunately." Kieran grinned. "Let's go now. There's not much time left. We'll have to meet someone whom I just saved recently. She's quite vulnerable, but brave enough to join us."

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Ame looked up to the sky. She just saw two shadows pass quickly, yet there was no sign of birds or helicopters around.

"I'm very sorry, but I have to go," she told her friends.

"What? But you're not yet fully recovered!"

"I said I'm fine!" she retorted. "I need to go somewhere! Just tell my aunt that I'll be alright. I'll be in touch with her!"

With that, she ran.

(heheh... this would be great!!! remember the newly introduced characters: Kieran and the girl he was talking about!!! please continue!!! ~~~)
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The Story So Far
(ok i havent done much but copy and paste..but here you are!sorry for the mess..if i have time ill make it better)







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(GAH! NO! KAMI-CHAN! we'll miss you! =S but stay active okkk! yes yes yes? ROFL I call my writing my own little world where I am GOD! MUWAHA! xDD haha i sound psychotic.....LOL if you would accept psychotic me to being mod then woot! get the party started! [read: yes] )

(Ame’s POV)

Earlier this morning…..


"Food, check."

"Money, check."

Everything’s all set! Ready to go!

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I ran like lightning outside of the hospital, catching a glimpse of a red bus. I got on just in time, panting like mad. My heart was drumming madly and it was as if my throat caught on fire. The sudden dryness took me by surprise and I clutched my throat.

"Are you alright?" The kindly bus driver asked me.

"F-fine." I choked and went to sit down gratefully.

Glad for having thought of bringing a chilled bottle of water, I settled down on my seat watching the city race past.
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A nearly empty parking lot came into view, "Stop here please."

The bus screeched to a stop and I got off.

What Hiroshi didn't know about me was that my family is rich. We are quite a powerful group in my country and I, as the youngest daughter, don't have the burden of the family business on my shoulders. And luckily, no popularity, unlike my older brother and sister, which means I'm pretty much inconspicuous and able to walk around anywhere without causing attention.

"Where are my car keys?! I so don't need this problem right now." As I felt through my jeans' back pockets I heard the familiar jingle.

"Found it."

The black Porsche in the parking lot hummed to life.

"Let's ride."

(I love Porsche so don't diss my choice! xD you can ask to change it or add another car of your choice if you wish. Now. Don't use traffic jams so Ame can chase after Hiroshi. Oooh I love car chases. Not that its actually a car to car chase xDD :sweatingbullets:)
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