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Posted 8/31/08
i have brown eyes jen, brown not blue. you are like julie, short term memory loss, though that is probibly long term.
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Posted 8/31/08
.............well now it's blue cause that's what I put down =P.
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Posted 9/1/08 , edited 9/2/08
And as promised, here's the demonic descriptions for the characters that are put for human description so you can't bitch about my lack of description on the peoples later:

Seren: Her fingers become longer and thinner, her eyes turn a deep forest green and can change into different shades of brown. Her hair has green and brown highlights, her body become slimmer and ears more pointed, nose more higher. She can also grow 2 pairs semi-transparent wings with a span of 10 feet.

Lili: .................still thinking. I'll have it down sometime later.

Julie: In demon form, she has black bat-like wings with a span of 14ft. Her wings have sharp claw-like edges at the tips of each wing bone. Her hair grows down to her mid-back with silver and red highlights and her eyes can change into a range of colors between red to brown to gold. Her body, like Seren's, become slimmer and also longer. She also has a long, thin, serpentine tail that's covered in scales that reaches about 5 feet. Her full form (when she's fully a dragon) is about as tall as a two story building and more lizard like then a full scale dragon cause she's a hybrid. She'll also have fangs and claw like nails.

Kat: Her hair grows down to her shoulder blades and becomes wavy with brown and gold highlights. Her eyes (as already described), become golden and her pupils become cat-like silts. Her nails'll become longer and sharper like claws and her body becomes more flexible and better balanced. A brown and black streaked pair of cat ears and tail would pop up, the tail about 2 feet long and ears that are at least 4in in height and width at the base.

Jan: ...........well, since that's suppose to be me right there, I'm only putting the basics cause I'm still kinda thinking about it. Eyes that change colors depending on mood, hair that reaches the ground that covers her like a cloak made of shadows, claws, fangs, the regular good stuff. If I say anymore, they'd become spoilers to the rest of my plot.

Zach: His angles become sharper and his eyes turns silver with violet and gold specs. His fangs just touch the edge of his bottom lips and he'd grow claws too. His body becomes longer and he also has black wings that are feathered and about 15ft in width. Because his demonic blood isn't dominant enough to fully take over, he doesn't have a full form. He's suppose to be a black owl.

Alex: Her eyes become larger and more to the side of her face and her fangs grow out, almost reaching her chin, and her claws also appear. Her human ears move higher up till they were above her temples and grows longer, more flexible and furry. A short, white-brown tail that's only about 4 inches long appear. Her body also becomes slightly slimmer but not enough for her to become skinny. She can disconnect her spine and reconnect them to stretch her body to abnormal lengths like a rabbit's. She's a rabbit demon with poison tipped fangs and claws.

Steve: He's just a demon with no animalistic features. He'd get white, transparent blue eyes, fangs, claws and all of that, grow a few inches but that's it (as far as for looks anyways)

I'm not gonna put what their powers are yet and will after I get down what Lili would be at the earliest. Don't ask me for spoilers cause I'm switching between ideas right now and a few of them are still fighting for first place even now.
Posted 9/2/08
I don't care what color you make my wings, just not something that is not me, such as pink or magenta.
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Posted 9/3/08
They're green. Transparent green like this pic:



The only part that relates to how you're suppose to look are the pair of wings except that you got 2 pairs.
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Posted 9/5/08
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Jan laughed and refused to let go. "HAHA!!! You're stuck in the middle of the air and can't fly for shit!!! You suck Julie!"

"Get your damned weight off me!!!! At least HELP me or something!!!" Julie exclaimed, trying and failing to flap her wings.

"Okay then," Jan said, "Try folding your wings in when you move them upward and put more strength in the tips of your wings when you bring them down so they'll be stiff and can catch the wind."

"Okay but if I die, it's your fault," Julie muttered. She tried it. The first few times, they barely moved but they didn't fall. Julie gained more confidence and moved her wings more rythematic and gave stronger flaps. They started to accend.

"That's more like it!" Jan laughed again, "Flying is always hard the first time but you'll absolutely fall in love with it later on."

"That means you can fly too!" Julie said, "Well then let go and fly yourself."

Julie wasn't facing Jan so she didn't notice. When she said those words, Jan's face became blank and almost sad and wistful. "If only that's possible anymore," she said softly.

"Huh? What?" Julie asked.

"Nothing," Jan said, her face showing pain from certain memories but keeping her voice steady, "We're almost there."

((Short I know but that's all I can think up of right now.))
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Posted 9/6/08 , edited 9/7/08
After they landed back on the ledge, everyone crowded around Julie to touch her wings and see if she's okay. "Holy crap these are real!" Lili exclaimed. Jan snorted.

"O'course they're real you tard." Jan muttered in an insulted voice. "And no, in case you're wondering, you don't got wings. You're earth bound like Kat and most demons. Only Seren and Julie outta this group can fly. Steve can too but takes too much power. I can make wings but they're created using powers rather then grown on me."

"Um, how the hell do I make them go away?" Julie said, "Cause I can't get around very easily with these," she flapped her wings and almost knocked herself off her own feet with the power of the flap, "crap, gonna fall, no, okay, safe, ..........with these wings."

"Fold them in," Jan said with a shrug, "If you make them go away, it'll take too long to get them out again for future training. Now, go practice flying more. Until you can fly like a pro, I'm not gonna let you land." and Jan literally kicked Julie off the ledge........again.

"YOU FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!" Julie yelled after managing to catch an updrift to steady herself.

"Yep, now go practice flying. I'm sending Seren to practice with you soon."

"What?!" Seren yelled, "I don't wanna jump offa a cliff!"

"No you idiot, I use different methods to teach different people. You're going to jump offa a cliff strapped to a boulder. The one that Julie stood on not too long ago."

Everyone stared at Jan, "That's worse." Seren said.

"I know, that's why we're gonna do it."

Everyone thought something along the line of 'We're not gonna die by enemy hands. We're gonna die on her hands.'
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Posted 9/6/08 , edited 9/9/08
Okay. Here's the info on Kat's specie and powers.

Kat is neko no kaze, a wind cat. She's a mix of lynx and jaguar. Her full cat form is a large dark brown cat twice the size of a normal full grown tiger with light brown, white, and black spots. The tail is about 6 yards long with a black tip. The fur also gets darker around the paws. She can control wind like her specie name suggests. She can almost fly (more like run and stand on air), cause huge winds, and cause minor storms by gathering clouds with her winds. If she gets powerful enough, she can even cause tornados but that takes a lot of power out of her.
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Posted 9/10/08
READ ONLY IF YOU DON'T MIND SPOILERS!!!!!

Here's for Seren:

Her full form is just her demon form. As for her powers, she can control plants like Karama from YYH and she can also control earth stuff. She's got the ability to control earth, talk to animals, heal (but not regenerate), fly, and control gravity within a certain range. She can't do anything yet but that's her full potential till I say so otherwise.

Here's the general powers for Jan:

She can control shadows and manipulate and solidify them, give them intelligence, and stuff like that. She has control over the greater elements (light and dark) and can also control a bit of the 4 other elements. Her specialty is mind control and illusions. Because of her powers with shadows, she can create solid illusions and also summon beasts directly from hell. She's a jack of all trades so she can also change her appearence and act as other people. She use to be a thief so her stealth ability is beyond pro level and she can get any sort of information she wants and is extreamly observant. She already can do all of this cause she's an old bitch spiritually. I might add or take away some stuff later on though.

((still working on Julie's and Lili's. Lili's is really hard to come up with without twisting the character to much.))
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Posted 9/12/08
That's it, I'm sticking with my original plan for Lili even if it does twist her character a bit.

Lili's a partial werewolf with a hint of vampire blood. She can obviously transform into a werewolf, drink blood, all that crap. She can walk in sunlight, eat garlic, etc cause she's not a full vampire. She has no special powers other then super speed, power, and regeneration. She's an almost-impossible-to-kill types and can self heal very fast. She can also control her body temperature and the temperature of the immediate area. When in her demon form, her hair becomes streaked with silver and white and her eyes turn deep gray color. In her full form, she turns into a wolf with a slightly human/demon body shape. Her fur is silver with white stripes. She's about twice as big as a normal full grown wolf but thinner and slightly longer.

Julie can fly (duh) and she can also control water because she's a water dragon. It's one of those European versions of dragon cause I can't see her as a serpentine dragon. Her scales in full form is smooth and sharp at the points while soft and round at the place that connects it to her flesh. She can also control her own temperature. She can't drown because she can breath underwater. In full form, she's as big or as small as she wants to be.

That's it for now. I might add stuff later.
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Posted 9/13/08 , edited 9/13/08
((yay! finally continuing the actual story.))

Julie's Pov

'Damned bitch fucking trying to kill me!!!!!' Julie thought as she steadied herself after Jan had kicked her off the ledge. "YOU FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!" I yelled.

"Yep, now go practice flying. I'm sending Seren to practice with you soon."

"What?!" Seren yelled, "I don't wanna jump offa a cliff!"

"No you idiot, I use different methods to teach different people. You're going to jump offa a cliff strapped to a boulder. The one that Julie stood on not too long ago."

We all stared at Jan like she was crazy. The thought of 'She is crazy and we all already know it' passed through my mind right then.

"That's worse." Seren said.

"I know, that's why we're gonna do it."

I gapped at her as did everyone else. I mean, really, what sort of friend shoves a person to their doom even if they don't die and do it all over again with another friend but worse?! While I was distracted, I forgot about flapping my wings and they jerked up too fast while a breeze passed under them. I wasn't able to bring them down fast enough and before I knew it, I was falling again. I gave a yell of surprise and tried to force my wings to open from behind me but the wind pushed my wings right back.

'Why is it always me.' I thought and would've grimised if I knew that I wasn't gonna go splat.

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There was a sudden yell from above them. It was Julie. She had lost control over her wings and was falling rapidly down to the forest floor. Jan cussed under her breath and whistled sharply enough to make everyone cover their ears and cringe in pain. Then she jumped after Julie. She fell faster then Julie. There was a sudden whoosh of air and a huge black bird about the size of a school bus appeared where Jan was. It dove down until it was just a few meters ahead of Julie and it opened it's wings.

The wings were at least 80 meters wide. With a quick half flap, it straightened it's self and snatched Julie from the air with it's talons. Everyone from the ledge over 100 stories above let out a collective sigh of relief.

"Woah," Zach muttered and everyone looked at him questioningly, "Oh, you wouldn't know. That bird's actually Jan wrapped in her shadows to change shape. It's real enough though. I'm just saying that I'm surprised that she's transformed for someone other then herself. You four must be really important."

"What do you mean?" Seren asked.

"It takes a lot of power to make such a huge transformation. Look how big she made the bird. It tires her out like nothing else." Alex answered from where she stood at the edge, still looking down at the bird which was flying up towards them.

The bird, Jan, gave one last powerful flap before dropping Julie onto the ledge and falling there herself, the shadows shooting back to their original places. Jan took a deep breath, let it out, took another and "WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU DOING YOU FUCKIN RETARDED IDIOT!!!!" came out. She breathed deeply and sighed after several seconds of silence. "Seren, try to grasp the concept of flying today and both of you try practicing summoning and getting rid of your wings. I'm going to go hunt something big enough to feed our entire coven for a month to get rid of some of my anger."

Jan jumped off the cliff to land on a tiny ledge barely large enough for a foothold. "Don't try to find me cause if I see any of you before I get back, I'll murder you." She jumped again and disappeared into the dark forest. A second later, a large cluster of brown trees went up in flames after a loud bang that echoed. Everyone flinched.

"Let's practice now, shall we." Alex said brightly with a comforting smile on her face.

((don't forget peoples, brown ones are tree demons. jan has multiple personalities, all the crap. Also, when Jan said "coven", she's referring to the whole entire group of demons that's in the Ruandrayas.))
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Seren's journal entry 1.

It's been well over two weeks since me, Julie, Kat, and Lili were brought to Demon World by Jan. I've decided to keep a journal of the things that had happened so far. Things are starting to get out of control.

Well, either way, here are the crap that's happened so far. I've managed to learn to summon my wings and make them disappear on will and can easily control my flying now. Julie stopped having so my trouble even though she still cusses at her wings and complain that they're too big thus too heavy and very hard to bring up or flap.

Kat can maintain her demon form and learned how to scale walls and ceilings, to hide her aura and powers, to stay silent in every movement, and was trained to battle by Alex. As for Lili? I haven't seen her for 3 days already. All of us tried to ask Jan, Alex, and Steve but they either didn't know or refused to answer.

For the whole time we were here, we see less and less demons everyday. More and more of them were sent to the front lines to keep the so called "Good guys" away from the portal they were building. It's weird. Being here now. Things are getting quieter everyday. Sometimes, a demon or two would suddenly just burst in here and throw a tantrum. I've heard a lot of "WHERE IS MY MATE?" and there were lots of mourners. I understand that it's a war of it's own kind between demons but when they break down as the found out that their loved ones were dead, they seemed all too human.

Maybe it wouldn've hurt as much if they were like the demons that were in stories. Heartless and always alone, not getting attached to anything or anyone. Maybe it wouldn't've hurt me as much as I watch them. I was still somewhat afraid of them. I'm not a demon like the others. I'm a elf fairy. They've accepted me but I still can't accept them. Maybe it's because the first time I actually saw a demon was when they were trying to kill me.

Just yesterday, over 50 grieving demons were here. Their wails and yells were reaching the limit. I guess it was really bad for Kat and the demons with sensitive hearing since only a few of them,including Kat and Alex, bothered to come onto the training grounds. Jan was there as she always were and she just lost it. She blasted a large ball of raw energy through the middle of them. Strangely, it didn't hurt anyone. An illusion? I don't know but it sure killed the noise. She had yelled stuff about how their deceased mates, sons, siblings, and friends didn't die for nothing. They died for the purpose of creating the portal. The living shouldn't mourn for them but feel proud that they're dead for that purpose. The living should support the Ruandrayas because we won't let them die in vain. We will carry out our plan, even if it's just to honor the dead ones.

After Jan stormed out, the mourners stayed pretty quiet so more demons came to the training hall. I wondered about Jan. I remember on the first day we were here, she had said to an almost dead Dray that she was the second in command of the army. If she was second in command, shouldn't she be in the front lines too? I'm glad that she's here and all but that just doesn't make sense.

I've got to ask her that later. Shit. I'll write more later. I need to sleep now or I wont be able to train tomorrow.
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Jan's POV

I sighed in frustration. 'Damned idiots are getting on my nerves with all the 'OH MY GOWD!!!! So-so-and-so is dead. You're in charge here! Do something! Bring them the fuck back.' Who the hell do they think I am? GOD? Fuckin old retard. If it wasn't for him, we wouldn't've even had so many deaths.'

"JAN?" Seren's voice traveled across the grounds, "There you are! What are you doing way up there?"

I jumped down from the high branch on the tree I was perched on and landed near where she stood. I sat down on the grass and looked up at her. "Whazzup?" I said lazily, "If it's not important, go away, I wanna think up of ways that I can slaughter God because he's causing us so much trouble."

"Um, well," Seren said hesitantly, "er....."

"Spit it out already," I sighed, "I'm not in the most patient of moods right now okay?"

"Why?" she muttered.

"Why what? Why did I save you guys but not others? Why I brought you here? Why this place seems so safe? Why we're not fighting? What?"

"Why aren't we on the battlefield? Aren't we suppose to.....no.....didn't you say that you were the second in command? Why are you here? And not on the battlefield?" Seren burst out.

"I got my reasons," I said. She looked at me curiously but I kept my face blank and slightly turned away from her.

'It's because if you go now, you'll just end up killing everyone. Not just angles. Angles, demons, minor gods, beasts, and humans alike. You'll kill all of them. Because you can't hold us back once you've given us a form for battle until there's no one else left.'

'SHUT UP!'

Seren flinched as she suddenly felt the rise of my powers along with my temper. My temper's getting shorter every day. In truth, I want to battle. My lust for blood has grown since three centries back, the last time I've had an all out fight. What do you expect? I'm a demon. I can't change that. Not anymore.

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((Well yeah, I don't feel like posting anymore so I'll stop here.))
Posted 9/27/08
you made me seem like a chicken.
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........okay........hi chicken ^_^. How's da seeds today? or whatever you would ask a chicken about.........

But yeah. You're prolly not gonna believe this (cause i sure as hell don't) but I was inspired by Anne Frank's Diary. WTF!!!!!! I mean, I got's nuthin against that but still. Anne Frank's Diary!!!!! Not sure how that works really but whatever I guess.
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