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Posted 9/28/08 , edited 9/28/08
((Actually, just kidding. You're just pitying those idiots who are mourning for the dead demons cause of our fucked up God. Ignore that if you're Christian or Catholic. It's actually really pitiful if you think about it. I have officially sunk demons to human level.....emotional wise. When I die and go to hell, they're gonna get me for it but what the hell. It's funny in it's own way don't you think? At least they're not powerless link humans. If I made that come true in my story, they're not gonna wait for me to die to get me. They're gonna bust their way to human world without thought of consiquences and attempt to murder me.))

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~~~with Lili~~~

'THAT FUCKED UP BASTARD!!!!!' Lili thought angrily. 'What the fuck went up his ass and died?! Him and the rest of this world are all fuckin screwed up!!! What's with not letting me outta here?' She stomped down the tunnel toward where her room is. She went in and sat down on her bed. After crossing her arms and legs then uncrossing them, she stood up.

Going to a wall, she punched it with all her strength. A crater appeared where her fist is. Then her knuckes started to bleed. "FUCK!!! YOU ASSHOLE!!! LET ME OUT ALREADY!!! WHAT SORT OF FUCKED UP SPECIAL TRAINING IS THIS?!?! I WANNA SEE THE OTHERS ALREADY!!!"

As always, no one answered her small fit of tantrum. Lili decided that she's had enough of all the BS that's been going on. Three days ago, Jan told her to go with this demon for special training. He's got deep red eyes, waxy white skin, and pale yellow hair that almost seemed white. He was well built and seemingly distant to everyone and everything.

The demon refused all approches at casual conversation and only talks when giving her instructions. All in all, that annoyed her to no end. Sure she's gotten to demon strength and got faster and can do all those basic crap but no transformations.

Lili peeked around the hole that serves as the doorway for her room. Clear. She dashed toward where she knew leads to the training grounds. No one popped up to stop her. Scratch that. There was no one around at all. 'YES!!! I MADE IT!!!' The her heart sank at the sight of Jan staring at her from the other side of the training room with a look that told her that she's trying to not to laugh. That demon was right next to her and he's also looking at her but with a bemused expression.

Jan placed a hand on his arm and shook her head slowly. He didn't try to get to Lili but gave a sigh and turned to another tunned right behind them. After going in, the tunnel somehow closed. Jan gave a small giggle and skipped over to Lili.

"Congrats Lili!" Jan cheered happily, "From this point on, I'll be the one to train you. Now you can dump that emotionless guy and spend some time with us lot!"

"What were you two talking about?" Lili asked curiously.

"Of course we were talking about you!"

'Leave it to Jan to make things alllllllll clear!' Lili thought sarcasticly and was about to say it but Jan beat her to it as if she read her mind.

"Well, seems like you're a pretty hard nut to crack and a damned hard nut for a pain in the ass so I decided that Chase didn't deserve that and took you off his hands." Jan allowed an amuse grin settle into her face.

"HEY!!! What the hell's that suppose to mean?! And so that's his name? Chase!?"

"You mean you've spent three days with him and you didn't even ask his name?! You suck at talking to people then."

"Then how the hell did you find out his name?"

"That's a secret I'll take to the grave. Unless he wants to tell you or he wants me to tell you anyways." Jan said, "Oh yeah, one more thing. All of the demons that went to battle and are from this coven and all of the other coven's are coming here. The ones that are alive anyways. It's gonna get really crowded soon. Hope you've gotten strong cause you smell way too human for most of them and over half of them wont know the rules around these caves."
Posted 9/28/08
nice. demons will murder you. i always though that you would score the shit out of the smaller ones first, then they would go cry to the larger demons and then they would beat the crap out of ya. well. ethier way you get your ass kicked by something.
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((Heh. We'll just see now wont we my dear? But I'm still gonna stick with it cause we're trying to see things from the bad guys' POV of the whole thing. I'm trying to make the demons less of the hated evil ones but just things that humans are stupid enough to fear because they're stronger. In reality, only weak ass demons bother with humans at all while the stronger ones don't give a shit about humans. They only interfear to show the weaker demons who's boss. In the world where it's survival of the fittest, humans actually rank somewhere under the insects. We're not fast, can't fly, don't got venom, fangs, or (sturdy)claws. Without our weapons, we're nothing. Hell, monkeys, apes, gorillas fare better in the wild then we'll ever do. Also, we'd die pretty fast in bad conditions cause we don't got fur or special parts that helps us adapt immediately. We adapt gradually.))
Posted 9/30/08
true. well for the most part
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((XPPPPP!!! Whatever sweetie XD. Either way, I'll update soon. I'm working on version 2 of Huntress and the 2 versions of Hunted. Julie's mean about it all but who gives a damn bout that =D. Those might take a while so this is put on hold until the first chappie of Hunted is finished.))
Posted 10/4/08
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((Okie!!! I'm back!!! anyways, I'm finally gonna update this story.))

"JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jan yelled from across the room while leaping around the training room laughing, "LILI'S TRYING TO MURDER ME!!!!!!". And so she was. The other girl held a huge blade in her hands and slashed wildly at the general direction of where ever Jan landed at.

"What'd you do this time?" I asked monotonously while maintaining a safe distance.

Suddenly, she appeared right in front of me, grinning a Cheshire cat grin, "Nuthin too much! Just pushed her a lil' and off she goes on her rampage. SQEEEE!" she laughed again as she dodged another blow and dragged me along.

"O-OI!" I yelled out in surprise, "I don't wanna be dragged into this!"

"Too late Julie!" I groaned inwardly at her mischievous expression. 'She's totally enjoying this. Probably planned the whole thing with her manipulation abilities. What a demon.'

And as if knowing what I was thinking, she whispered to me, "But I am a demon. The lowest of low, remember?"

"QUIT IT ALREADY!!!!!" a powerful voice boomed through the room, making all of the room's inhabitants freeze. "Jan! I expect better from you! Show some example to the others. Show some dignity and pride and stop acting like some child!"

"How harsh boss," Jan kept her grin but now it looked more like a smirk, "I'm afraid I can't follow that order. You may be the boss but I'm not under your control."

A wave of hushed whisper rose amongst the hundreds of demons that were gathered at the training room and more coming from the tunnels to see what the commotion was about. I caught a few words here and there. "The boss?!" "But.....he's here?" "That's him!" "We've never seen him before." "Why now?" We all looked around the room but there was no one from whom the voice came from.

"Silence!" the voice barked. The room instantly fell silent. Jan giggled, then started out right laughing.

"Oh my," she said mockingly, "What a powerful leader we've got. The ability to silence a room full of fighters. Why don't you show yourself to these innocent fools sir?"

"Don't push me Jan. I'm in a bad mood right now."

"And I suppose I'm supposed to be afraid?" Jan raised an eyebrow and stared straight at a large piece of shadow in the far corner of the room. All of the demons unconsciously moved to clear a path from her gaze to the wall.

The shadows twisted to form a man. No. More like a boy of 16. Is that suppose to be the leader of such a large group? Someone that even Jan will bow down to in respect?
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