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Wahhhh~ It was AWESOME!!
Can't wait for the next part. =]]
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yay!new fanfic!!!gomene atij chan<--is it ok to call u that ?

Anyway, it seems like i'm late but at least i read the parts of ur fic!and i like them!!!kip up the good work ne~ Ganbatte!!!

Can i also be one of the chars ?If there are new available ones ne~?
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Wahhhh~ It was AWESOME!!
Can't wait for the next part. =]]


HI!!!Thanks agian^_^ !!I'm posting the next chapter NOW!!
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Hehe really? Yayy~ I can't wait to read it. =]]
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Chapter 3:I hate him!!

The basketball court

Miyuki was stunned by Yamada’s great skill. She never see such a people that can grab ball that fast.And most of all, this is her first time where she lose in a game.
‘Wow,he’s great!’ though Miyuki.
Suki looked over at Miyuki and came toward her.
“Are you okay?”Asked Suki.
“Ofcourse, I’m okay.”
“Both of them were really great, right?”said Suki while watch the new players. Miyuki just nodded her head without she realize it. But suddenly she realized what she was doing and faster shook it away.
“I need to ask him something.Do you want to accompany me?”Asked Miyuki. Suki just nodded her head.
Both of them walked toward Nakajima and Yamada. Nakajima saw them and he nudged Yamada. Nakajima stand up and smile toward the girls.
Suki replied the smile .But different to Miyuki.She just went straight away to Yamada that are still sitting.
“Who are you really are?” Asked Miyuki with curious face.
“Why do you concern about it?”Asked Yamada while stand up.
“I ask you first!”Said Miyuki.
“You want the answer, so you answer my question first,”said Yamada. Both of them seem don’t want to give up.
“So, what you gonna do if I don’t answer you question?”Said Miyuki, tried to challenge the boy.
“Are you a dumb or what?Ofcourse, I’m will not going to give you the answer!”The word that came out from Yamada’s mouth really made Miyuki irritated. She was a bout to attack him but luckily Suki stopped her. Nakajima knew he has to do something to stop the argument between his best friend and Miyuki. He really knew that Yamada with never give a face to a girl.Especially a girl that make him mad or irritate.
“Yamada, we have to go now.There are many things that we have to settle down today,”said Nakajima while pulled Yamada’s hand.
“Okay,I don’t want to waste my time with this irritate girl,”said Yamada before left the court.
“How dare you?!!You the one that annoying!!!”Shouted Miyuki.All people in the court were watching them.Mr.Akanishi just shooked his head in disbelief.

“Thanks, Suki for stopping me just now.If not, I will face many problem,”said Miyuki.
“Yuki, how many years that we have been friend, huh?Ofcourse, I know you,”said Suki while smiling. Miyuki hugged her.Both of them laugh together.
“Oh,ya!Don’t forget about our plan tonight,okay?!”Said Miyuki,cheerfully.
“Ofcourse, I won’t forget.But have you asked your sister?” Asked Suki. Miyuki just shooked her head.
“Don’t worry.She'll come home late tonight because she was busy with her new café that she opened with her friends,”said Miyuki.
“Wow, new café!Hmm..Okay,see you tonight.Jane!”
With that, both of them went to a separate ways.


To be continue….


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yay!new fanfic!!!gomene atij chan<--is it ok to call u that ?

Anyway, it seems like i'm late but at least i read the parts of ur fic!and i like them!!!kip up the good work ne~ Ganbatte!!!

Can i also be one of the chars ?If there are new available ones ne~?


It's fine with me^_^!Ofcourse you call me atichan Thanks for liking my fanfic!!Yup!i will try harder
Ofcourse you can be one of the character!!Yup there will be many charac will came out, ofcourse for the other members of Hey SAy JUMP...don't worry...Anyway, THANK YOU AGAIN!!
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HEEEYY~!! i've read ur fanfic. wow~!! it'sso great love the story.
gomen ne but can i also be part of ur fanfic?? onegaishimasu *bow*

I LOVEEEEE THIS~!! haha. sooooooooo awesome. and i really love basketball. haha.
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hi ! owh we still don't have anything to call each other..>_< love your fanfic so much !
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HEEEYY~!! i've read ur fanfic. wow~!! it'sso great love the story.
gomen ne but can i also be part of ur fanfic?? onegaishimasu *bow*

I LOVEEEEE THIS~!! haha. sooooooooo awesome. and i really love basketball. haha.


Hi!!!Thanks very much^_^ Ofcourse you can!!!!
Oh,really!!You know basketball?!!Hahaha..
Thanks again, and please keep support ke,okay?^_^
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hi ! owh we still don't have anything to call each other..>_< love your fanfic so much !


Thanks kawaiipi-chan for the visit^_^
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dou itashimashite !
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Chapter 4: The Concert!!Yamashita Tomohisa!!

AAAHHHH!!” The loud shout from the fan really drive Miyuki crazy especially the fangirl’s scream. Suki got really excited especially when her favourite singer are about to perform that is Yamashita Tomohisa or known as YAMAPI!



“Suki, we need to find the front place,”said Miyuki as loud as she can to fight the noise.
“What?!I can’t hear you!”Shouted Suki.
“I said, we need to find the front place.So that, I can easily capture his photo.Do YOU GET IT?”
“AAAHHH!!Don’t so loud!You are already near my ear!!”Said Suki while rubbed her ears with her both hand.
“Come onThere no time to lose!”Said Miyuki while grabbing Suki along with her. After the long pushing and pulling,finally they reached the front spot.A nice spot for a photo shot.
The concert started.The scream became louder especially when Yamapi came on the stage. Miyuki quite uncomfortable taking
picture in dark places. But Suki seem enjoying herself and forgot everything that they had planned. But, Miyuki just fine with it because she know her friend really love Yamapi very much.Like all girls in the world do.
“Tonight, for the opening of this concert I would like to sing a song, special for all the fans who always support me! Heard this, Gomen ne Juliet,”said Yamashita.AAaaahhhhh!!

Kimi ni deaeta toki boku wa omoidashitan da
Zutto wasureteta dareka wo ai suru koto
Kono suteki na kimochi torimodoshita toki kara
Mainichi ga totemo azayaka ni irozuita

Jama saretemo nani wo ushinattemo
Kimi wo mamori ai sou to chikatta no ni

Kisu de kisu de ichiokukai tashikame atta kedo
Dokoka nanika mitasarenai
Futari kanjite itan da kono koi no ketsumatsu
Ah gomen ne jurietto

Hoka no dare yori mo fukaku ai shita keredo
Hoka no dare yori mo kizu tsukete shimatta ne

"Sayonara" no kotoba ni mune ga itakunatta
Mou nido to ai shiau koto wa nain da ne

Ai de ai de kizu tsukete suki de tomaranakute
Mabushii egao ubatte shimatta
Futari meguriaeta koto wa machigatte ita no ka na
Ah gomen ne ore de

Moshi me ga mienaku nattemo kimi da to wakaru darou
Sore hodo nandomo dakiatta ne
Tagai ni ai shite ita keredo norikoerarenakatta
Unmei na no ka na

Kisu de kisu de ichiokukai tashikame atta kedo
Dokoka nanika mitasarenai
Futari kanjite itan da kono koi no ketsumatsu
Ah gomen ne jurietto

Ah gomen ne jurietto

Miyuki stopped from taking his picture. For some reason, she felt that the song was just a song. Even she saw him sang with full of emotion but still, she feel something weird with that guy.She don’t know why.But she feel that something seem bugging his mind while he singing. The other songs are also the same. She knew that she don’t have much time left for her to take Yamapi’s picture but she need to catch some picture at lighted place.
She looked around her and openned her eyes as big as she could. A door captured her eyes. A backstage door. ‘Yup! That’s what I’m talking about!’though Miyuki. She looked over to Suki.
“Suki, I need to go to…”she told her planned to Suki.Suki’s eyes grew bigger when she heard what Miyuki just said to her.
“But…”It’s too late.Miyuki already gone from her sight.
“Sir!Sir!There are people passed out in the crowd!!She really need medical help!”Said Miyuki with worry expression.
“Where?”Asked the backstage guard.
“In the crowd.Near the stage!”Said Miyuki. When the guard went to the crowd, Miyuki’s worry expression changed to happy expression.She openned the backstage door and entered it.
To be continue…

Preview:
-“Hey, stop!!!”Shouted Yamapi while chasing after the unknown girl.
-“It’s all your fault!!” Shouted Horikita Maki to Yamashita. “My fault?!You are her sister, you should take it as your own responsible!” Said Yamashita in medium tone.He tried to control his anger.
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I'm really liking your story!
You're doing a great job!
Keep up with the great work!!! =DD
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kyaaa..it's so great!! ahhahae miyuki sure is one nosy girl!!kyaaa
its great!! me want more!!
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Chapter 5: The Accident!!!Oh, NO!!!

“How the school today, boys?”Asked Mrs. Nakajima.
“Bad”said Yamada and Yuto at the same time. They said without looking at Mrs.Nakajima’s face because they were really hungry!!
“Bad?” Both of them stopped eating. They could sensed that Mrs.Nakajima was worry from her tone.
“We mean that, the school wasn’t bad at all.We love the school very VERY much!!Hahaha..”Said Yuto with a fakes laugh.
“Yup!!!The school was GREAT!!”Said Yamada.
‘I hope!’though Yamada and Yuto.Both of them just smile to each other.A meaningful smile!

“WOAAHHH!!Cool,”said Miyuki. This is the frist time she entered the backstage that she always dream of.
No one seem to bother with her present. All crews were so busy with the show. Even she could enter the backstage, still she can’t take any picture since there are no enough light.
‘Hmmm…what should I do now?’ though Miyuki. She went out from the backstage area. She walked around to think some ideas. It was very easy to walk around because, there weren’t many people at there. She walked, walked, walked until she suddenly heard two voices. She stalked behind the wall and looked inside the room at the openned door.Click!She accidently click at the button on her camera.Yamashita Tomohisa!And a crying woman!
“It’s not like you’re thinking. He just a friend of mine, but you.You are my special one!Please, believe me!!”Said the crying woman.
“I don’t want to hear anything from you anymore. Right now,please leave me alone,”said Yamashita calmly. But the woman still begging for forgiveness from him.
It seem like he can’t take it anymore. He pushed the woman out from his restroom…The woman cried even louder...But..
Miyuki was really shocked when Yamashita and the woman were already standing infront of her.What else she can do beside…RUN!!!
“Hey, stop!!!”Shouted Yamapi while chasing after the unknown girl.
“AAAAHHHHH!!!I’m done!!!”Shouted Miyuki while running. She could see many people were chasing after her including Yamapi.
She ran as fast as she could. She smiled when she saw an openned window. Miyuki ran and jumped out through the window! Miyuki though that she already safe, but still, Yamapi were still chasing after her. She ran quickly and acrossed the road. But without she noticed, a car with a high speed came toward her.BANG!!!
Yamashita was really stunned by what he just saw.AN ACCIDENT!!0-O

The Hospital
Horikita Maki, Suzuki Emi, and Iwata Sayuri rushed toward a ward that Miyuki was placed. When they open the ward’s door, they could see Yamashita Tomohisa,
Nishikido Ryo, Akanishi Jin and Miyuki that lie down on the bed. She was still unconscious.
“Yuki!Yuki!Please, wake up!!”Shouted Maki while shaked her little sister’s body.
“Maki, please calm down.I’m sure she will be just fine,”comforted Sayuri. She stopped Maki from shaking Miyuki like that.
“What exactly happen?Please, tell us!”Said Emi, seriously toward the guys. Yamashita told them everything.
“It’s all your fault!!” Shouted Horikita Maki to Yamashita.
“My fault?!You are her sister, you should take it as your own responsible!” Said Yamashita in medium tone.He tried to control his anger.
“She will never do that kind of thing!!!”Shouted Maki. Maki was about to attack him but luckily Emi and Sayuri stopped her by holding both of her hand.
“It’s up to you wheter you want to believe or not.But this will be the proof,”said Yamashita while showed the……

To be continue….
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