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should I post the new part?? ^-^
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Chapter 2:

Yamada: I won't take the challenge..

Maki: I knew it!! You're a scaredy-cat!!

Yamada: It's not that..If you really are a great soccer player..then you must know that we need others to play the game..

Maki: What if we change some rules..let's do it one on one!! Let's race up to ten goals!!

Yamada: If you win??

Maki: Let me join your team and pass me your throne of being the captain!!

Yamada: But if I win..

Maki: What??

Yamada: *thinks* Let me join JE!!

Maki: It's a deal!! ..Yoshhhhh!!

Yamada: Fine!! I'll take the challenge..but..don't cry if you lose!!

Maki: Don't worry much..I won't lose to you!! *evil smile*

Yamada: You have no chance..you're just girl!! *pissed*

Maki: I'm not just a girl!!

[The game starts..]

Maki: Yosh!!

Yamada: It's just a point!! You shouldn't brag about it!! *mad face*

Maki: Another goal!!

Yamada: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!


*bell rings*

Yamada: Darn it!! I was just about to be in the mood!!

Maki: I scored 5!!

Yamada: What?? but I reached 5 goals too!! Anyway..let's talk about the deal later.. *runs back to the classroom*


@ the classroom..

Yuto: Yama-chan!! Why did you leave me?? *hugs Yamada*

Yamada: What the heck happened your face?? *shocked*

Yuto: I'm miserable!! Yurina wanted to put make up on me..I said no!! But she insisted!! What can I do..she's huge!! *cries*

Yamada: *laughs* Go wash your face before english class starts!!


After classes: @ the bus stop..


[Yuto and Yamada goes home together..]

Yuto: Woah!! Isn't she the new girl??

Yamada: Maki!! Just wait here Yuto-kun.. *comes near Maki*

Yuto: Ehhhhhh??..with Shida!! *follows Yamada*

Shida: Konnichiwa Yamada-kun!!

Yamada: EHHHH?? You're here?? *shocked*

Shida: Hai!! We've decided to go home together since our place is near each other..

Maki: Shida-san..will you excuse us for a while?? *grabs Yamada's arms*

Shida: What's going on with these two?? *wonders* ..must follow!!

Yamada: Eto.. *still in shock*

Maki: About the deal..

Yamada: Oh yes..

Maki: Since we're tie..let me be on your team and I'll let you join JE..

Yamada: But..you can't be the captain because you haven't beaten me yet!! *stubborn*

Maki: Okay then..

Yamada: Are you serious??

Maki: I'm always serious..


back to the stalkers..

Yuto: Awwwwww!! They look so good together!! *day dreams*

Shida: Ehhh?? The loser is here too??

Yuto: Oi!! Don't call me a loser!! *tough voice*

Shida: Shut up!! Their voices are too soft!! I can't hear anything..

Yuto: Whatever they are talking about..I'll support them!! *smiles*

Shida: Ehhhh?? What do you mean??

Yuto: If they're confessing about their feelings for each other..then..I'm happy for them!!

Shida: NOOOOOOOOOO!! *screams* *Yuto covers her mouth*

Yuto: Shut up!! They'll hear us!!

Shida: Don't touch me..loser!!

Yuto: You're the loser because Yama-chan finally found a girl better than you!! He must be so in love with Maki right now!!

Shida: Stop it!! I don't wanna hear further!! just watch me..I'm going to get him back!! *evil smile*

Yuto: I'm not gonna let you..loser!! *evil laugh*

Yamada: Ehhh?? Yuto-kun..were you listening??

Maki: You too Shida-san??

Yuto & Shida: Iie!!

Shida: We were just talking aren't we??

Yuto: hh..hha..hai..hai..HAI!!..Oh!! The bus is here!! Let's go now Yama-chan!!

Yamada: Let's go!! *smiles*


in the bus..

Yuto: *sighs* Seems like..you're in a good mood today!!

Yamada: Of course!! *angelic face*

Yuto: Is it because of Maki??

Yamada: So desu..

Yuto: Don't forget about me..okay??

Yamada: Of course not!! Why is that??

Yuto: Because you'll spend break times with her..moreover..you'll go home with her now that she's your girlfriend..

Yamada: WHAT?!..she isn't my girlfriend!! I don't even like her!!

Yuto: You mean..you weren't confessing a while ago??

Yamada: Absolutely not!! wait.. *thinks* You stalked us didn't you??

Yuto: nnnn..nn..NO!! I was just..Umh..FINE!! I stalked you!!..What did you talk about btw??

Yamada: It's just about a deal we made a while ago.. *angelic smile*

Yuto: Ehhhh?? a deal?? Isn't that illegal?? *wonders stupidly*

Yamada: Bakabakashii!! We just played soccer and made a deal.. *tells everything*

Yuto: Ehhhh?? You'll join JE?? I thought you didn't like to be in showbiz??

Yamada: Well..I changed my mind..

Yuto: Why so sudden?? Anyway..I wanna join too!!

Yamada: You can't!!

Yuto: Why not??

Yamada: You're too thin..

Yuto: Aren't you too fat??

Yamada: Shut up!! I've got backup..and besides..I don't need to lose weight..they'll like me for who I am right now!! *dreams*

Yuto: They'll like me for who I am too!!

Yamada: They won't!!


End of the 2nd Chap..
pls comment!! ^-^
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hahahha yuto so funny....
hahahah can't stop laughing
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btw very kute part
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kawaii!!!!! this fic is exciting! more! MMOOORREE!! haha.
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YOU'RE SO AWESOME~!!
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ahahah...this is great!! yuto is so cute!! and yamahchan with his angelic face!! ahahha me want MORE!!
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kyaa!!!ur fic is soo interesting hsj chan!!!i was reading this during class...oopz its all thnx to my phone i saw ur cool, funny and interesting fic!!!yay!

oh yea, can i also be in ur fic?...if that's ok with you?
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kyaa!!!ur fic is soo interesting hsj chan!!!i was reading this during class...oopz its all thnx to my phone i saw ur cool, funny and interesting fic!!!yay!

oh yea, can i also be in ur fic?...if that's ok with you?


Yeah!! of course!!
just pick among the girls on the first page!! ^-^
thanks for reading!! xDDD
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Thanks pafuoa..bowling1991..laotiongirl..Mai-Lee..Geh-san..for reading my fic!! ^-^

I'll be posting the third chapter now!! ^-^
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Chapter 3


@ Yamada's residence..

*phone rings*

Yamada: Moshi moshi??

Maki: Yamada-kun..

Yamada: Who's this??

Maki: It's Maki..

Yamada: Umh..where did you get my number??

Maki: It doesn't matter.. I just called to say that my grandfather wants to see you tomorrow after classes at Johnny's Jimusho..

Yamada: What?? Why?!

Maki: All aspiring talents must pass his standards..

Yamada: Yy..you mean..Johnny-san??

Maki: So desu..

Yamada: EHHH?? Why so fast??

Maki: Stop complaining!! btw..my grandfather never waits..so you better be on time!! Jaa.. *ends the call*

Yamada: Wait!!..awwwwww!! What should I do?! I don't even know where the jimusho is!! *panics*


The next day..

Chinen: Keito-kun!! You know what??

Keito: ..know what??

Chinen: *whispers* Yama-chan's joining JE!!

Keito: Really??

Chinen: un!! *smiles*

Keito: I can't lose to him!!

Chinen: So..what will you do?? If he joins JE..then he will be the most popular guy at school!!

Keito: I know!! *thinks* ..I'll join JE too!!

Chinen: EHHH?? You couldn't even dance!!

Keito: How could you say that?? You haven't seen me dance yet!!

Chinen: I did....

Keito: bb..bbu..but how?? *panics*

Chinen: Remember when I went to your house??

Keito: Yup?!

Chinen: I peeked into your room..and when I opened the door.. I saw you dancing!! *bursts out of laughter*

Keito: *covers Chinen's big mouth* Stop it!!..

Chinen: You looked hilarious Keito-kun!! *laughs*

Keito: *covers ears* whatever you saw..keep it a secret..onegaishimasu??

Chinen: I will..but you have to let me join JE too!! *evil smile*

Keito: Ohhhh..you got me!!..fine..Come with me later..after classes..

Chinen: *sighs* Risako will surely like me now!! *day dreams*


Yuto: Where's Yama-chan??

Keito: He's not here!! *angry looking*

Yuto: What's wrong with you?? *wonders*

Chinen: Don't worry about him..he's just constipated!! *cute smile*

Yuto: Why not go to the clinic??

Keito: I'm not constipated okay!!

Chinen: *giggles*


Yamada: Yuto-kun!! *grabs Yuto's arm*

Yuto: Why are you late??

Yamada: I didn't get enough sleep..I need your help!!

Yuto: Help you..with what??

Yamada: I would be meeting up with Johnny-san later..what should I do?? ..please help me!!

Yuto: I could..but I won't!!

Yamada: Ehhh?? Why not??

Yuto: Because you won't let me join JE!!

Yamada: Fine!! Come with me later!! Just help me..pretty please??

Yuto: YAY!! *smiles*


After classes..

Maki: Yamada-kun..Let's go..

Yamada: Maki-san..ano..can Yuto go with us?? He's the best singer and dancer in class..he can play drums too!! *whispers*

Maki: Good..He can come with us.. *serious looking*

Yamada: Arigato Maki-san!!..Yuto-kun..You can come out now!! *smiles*

Yuto: Ikimashou!!

Maki: Come on..Let's ride!! *points at the limousine*

Yamada: IIIiii..is that your limousine?? *shocked*

Maki: Hai!!

Yuto: Honto?? *silence* Sugeeeeee!!


@ Johnny's Jimusho..

Yuto: Is this the jimusho??

Maki: Yup..

Yuto: It's so cool here!!..WOAH!! That's Takizawa Hideaki!! *screams like a girl*

Yamada: Stop it Yuto-kun!!

Tackey: Konnichiwa Maki-san!! *smiles*

Maki: Konnichiwa Takizawa-kun!! *bright face*

Yuto: Kakkoii ne?! Takizawa-kun's smile is so sweet!!

Tackey: Arigato!! *smiles more* btw..Johnny-san has a meeting today..he asked me to be incharge here today..

Maki: I see.. These two are from my class.. Yamada Ryosuke and Nakajima Yuto..

Tackey: You two..please sit down..and don't be too stiff..I won't bite you!!

Yamada & Yuto: Hai!! *sits down*

Maki: I'll leave first.. *goes out of the room*

Tackey: Okay..first I would want to ask..why do you want to join JE??

Yuto: Because of you!! You're so talented and I wanna be just like you!!

Tackey: I see..thanks!!..And you..Yamada-kun??

Yamada: Aa..ano..

Yuto: Because of Shida Mirai!!

Tackey: Ehhh?? the young actress??

Yamada: *pinches Yuto's sides* ..

Yuto: OUCH!!

Yamada: Iie!!..I want to join JE because I want to meet Domoto Koichi of Kinki Kids!! *fake smile*

Tackey: ..do you guys know how to sing..dance..or play instruments??

Yuto: I can sing, dance and play drums!!

Yamada: I can sing, dance and play the guitar..

Tackey: Oh good!! *someone knocks* ..I wonder who still has an appointment with Johnny-san today.. well..Come in!!

*Kenichi comes in*

[NOTE: Okamoto Kenichi is Keito's father..]

Kenichi: Takki-kun!!

Tackey: Oh!! Okamoto-san!! Long time no see!! Do you have an appointment with Johnny-san??

Kenichi: Iie..I came here because my son and his friend would want to join JE!!

Tackey: So..Keito-kun have finally decided?? You must be so proud!!

Kenichi: Hai!!

[Keito and Chinen comes in]

Yamada: Oh!! Keito-kun!!

Yuto: And Chinen-kun??

Chinen: Ehhh?? You guys are here too??

Yuto: yup!! Come on..join us!! Wouldn't it be cool if we could make a band??

Tackey: Great idea!! What instruments could you play??

Chinen: I can play the piano..

Keito: I can play the guitar..

Tackey: That's awesome!! All we need is a bass player!! Let's go to the studio..I wanna hear you guys play!!

Yamada: Eh?? ..so fast??

Keito: NOOOOOOOOOO!! [he said to himself]

Kenichi: Okay..I'll go get something to eat.. *smiles*


--The End-- ^-^
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