Help with my manga!
Posted 8/7/08
I currently got into a artistic mood again lately, and need practice for game characters and such. So I decided to make a manga about my two friends (who really are already interesting characters so that saves me some trouble.) With a little thinking I came up with this for a plot.


Aman (one of the main characters) has created a magic potion that makes your boobs grow. Before she is able to use it is stolen by a woman who seeks to profit by selling it off in a huge company brand. So, Aman takes (still don't know what to call second friend yet so we will refer to her as AP) AP with her to get the potion back, because if you release a potion that makes your boobs grow larger naturally, it will destroy the natural balance of the world, causing all chicks to be able to manipulate weak men, thusly destroying the world. So now Aman and AP must go on a mission to stop the evil corporations plans!


Thats the premise, and despite how it sounds, I don't plan to put any nudity or Eechi type stuff in this (not my style hahaha) I really want to just make people laugh, not *** to characters of my friends. So giving me idea's on the story and what you think of the premise will help a lot! (If your idea is big and I use it, don't even worry about me crediting you. I'm no thief, you will be mentioned :3)
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Posted 8/7/08
i lol'd :D
Dude, if you can write this story AND NOT make it ecchi, hats off to you. I don't think I'd be able to make it past 5 pages without panty shots,exaggerated cleavage and other ecchi elements, because,well.... the story depends too much on how perverted the reader is :D
Your friends sound crazy though. Must be fun hanging out with them.
Posted 8/7/08

h4x0rz wrote:

i lol'd :D
Dude, if you can write this story AND NOT make it ecchi, hats off to you. I don't think I'd be able to make it past 5 pages without panty shots,exaggerated cleavage and other ecchi elements, because,well.... the story depends too much on how perverted the reader is :D
Your friends sound crazy though. Must be fun hanging out with them.


Hahaha yeah there really weird and fun to be with. In truth this wouldn't be to far off from something they would do. Also, I'm going to try to make up for the lack of boobs everywhere with good writing, lets just hope I can do it lol.
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dmitsuki wrote:
Hahaha yeah there really weird and fun to be with. In truth this wouldn't be to far off from something they would do. Also, I'm going to try to make up for the lack of boobs everywhere with good writing, lets just hope I can do it lol.


I'd help, but I'm bad at comedy. I prefer seinen and psychological stories
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You might want to start out with those "what-ifs" that people (possibly) might think about. Example: What if a guy drinks that potion (don't wanna imagine )
First of all though, you might want decide what genre this manga is. Is it comedy, suspense etc.?
Posted 8/7/08

h4x0rz wrote:


dmitsuki wrote:
Hahaha yeah there really weird and fun to be with. In truth this wouldn't be to far off from something they would do. Also, I'm going to try to make up for the lack of boobs everywhere with good writing, lets just hope I can do it lol.


I'd help, but I'm bad at comedy. I prefer seinen and psychological stories


I like writing psychological stuff to, but its a BITCH to draw. Some Seinen is nice, but some of it I don't want to write or draw hahaha. (Like I would make my own Trigun but not my own Ah My Godess)
Posted 8/7/08

blackordus wrote:

You might want to start out with those "what-ifs" that people (possibly) might think about. Example: What if a guy drinks that potion (don't wanna imagine )
First of all though, you might want decide what genre this manga is. Is it comedy, suspense etc.?


Already decided its comedy, already drew the characters and started it Really I just want to try to make it as funny as possible so I came to my fellow manga readers with the idea I had for the story to see if it was any good and if you would read it, and possibly some more creative idea's to add to it.

That what if thing is a good idea though, I'm already loling at some of the stuff I can do
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Posted 8/7/08

dmitsuki wrote:


blackordus wrote:

You might want to start out with those "what-ifs" that people (possibly) might think about. Example: What if a guy drinks that potion (don't wanna imagine )
First of all though, you might want decide what genre this manga is. Is it comedy, suspense etc.?


Already decided its comedy, already drew the characters and started it Really I just want to try to make it as funny as possible so I came to my fellow manga readers with the idea I had for the story to see if it was any good and if you would read it, and possibly some more creative idea's to add to it.

That what if thing is a good idea though, I'm already loling at some of the stuff I can do :D


You also might want to consider the age of your target audiences, since you'll probably be basing your comedy on either light-hearted or for mature.
Good luck with your manga!
Posted 8/7/08

blackordus wrote:


dmitsuki wrote:


blackordus wrote:

You might want to start out with those "what-ifs" that people (possibly) might think about. Example: What if a guy drinks that potion (don't wanna imagine )
First of all though, you might want decide what genre this manga is. Is it comedy, suspense etc.?


Already decided its comedy, already drew the characters and started it Really I just want to try to make it as funny as possible so I came to my fellow manga readers with the idea I had for the story to see if it was any good and if you would read it, and possibly some more creative idea's to add to it.

That what if thing is a good idea though, I'm already loling at some of the stuff I can do :D


You also might want to consider the age of your target audiences, since you'll probably be basing your comedy on either light-hearted or for mature.
Good luck with your manga!


I will, and thank you!
Posted 7/15/09
The Anime/Manga HELP Thread
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-10664/the-animemanga-help-thread/

I believe you got what you want now. If there is a need for more, please use that thread
Posted 7/15/09
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