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Posted 8/7/08 , edited 11/20/08
Eternal Snow

Guess what im bored lol Image heres something i made when I was listening to the song [eternal snow]



Kimi wo suki ninatta Dorekurai tatsu kaNa?

(How long has it been since I fell in love with you?)

"Shii-chan?" "Hai?" "Im...moving.." "Nan...de..?" "My parents wants me to continue my dream of becoming a doctor..and I need better education." "D-demo.." "Gomen ne." He whispered pulling me into a hug. With that he let go and walked away.

Kimochi Fukurande yuku bakari de

(My feelings only in crease)

I woke up with a startle. "A dream about the past..man..this is the 3rd time this week." I mumbled. Hi, Im Hikaru Hoshi, which means bright star! But everyone calls me Shii-chan. I have been having dreams about the past for awhile now. But...they were over 7 years ago. I closed my eyes tightly. As my neko came cuddling into my lap. "Ohayoh, Shii-chan." She purred. "Ohayoh, Kiko-chan." I said smiling gently petting her. Kiko-chan, my er, gaurdian angel. "Shiii-san!" A voice downstairs called."Coming Onii-chan!" I shouted to him geting dressed. My Onii-chan, and my only family member left, Katsu, which means victory. I tied up my white hair into a mid way pony tail and slid down the staircase on the rail. "Whats up Onii-chan?" I asked walking into the kitchen looking for food. "No school today, due to snow." He said siping his hot chocolate. "Hontou?" I asked making some hot chocolate & grabbing marshmellows. I sat down next to him taking a sip of the hot chocolate watching the news.

Kimi wa Kono omoi kidzuiteiru no kana?

(Will you notice them?)

"There has been a cancel of school for the whole week, due to the ice and snow...Now for the weather news..There will be hail, snow, and rain during this whole week."

Ichido mo kotoba ni wa Shitenai kedo

Even though I've never once put them into words?

"Sugoi! No school for a week!" I shouted happily almost spilling my hot chocolate on Katsu. "Ack! Shii-chan watch where your putting that hot chocolate." He shouted slightly jumping up which almost caused his hot chocolate to spill on me. "Me? What about you?! >=O!" I shouted playfully. We both smiled then bursted out laughing. "Want to go play in the snow later Onii-chan?" I asked after I calmed down & was looking outside. "Sure." He answered with a smile. I finished my hot chocolate & ran upstairs to change into some warm clothes. "Hm.." I said looking through my closet. "Where's my winter stuff!?" I mumbled digging into the big pile of clothes. "Maybe it's in the basement." Kiko suggested licking her paw. "GREAT IDEA KIKO-CHAN!" I shouted grabing her running down to the basement. As I opened the door to the basement a cold breeze passed. I shivered. "When was it so cold the in basement Kiko-chan?" I asked her slowly going downstairs. My eyes widen when we came towards the basement. The whole place was covered in snow. Everywhere you looked there was a igloo which looked like someone lived in it. "Kiko..when did we have a snow covered basement.."I asked her staring at the place like 'wth..'

Yuki no youni Tada shizukani

Like the snow, they just




~I'll finished this later~ xO
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"MINNA! INTRUDER!" Shouted someone as I stood there. I blinked cluelessly as people came and tied me up. I finally snapped out of it realizing whats happening. "What?!" I yelled. "You have found our secret hideout." One of the people said. "Now we must destory you." Another one said. My eyes along with Kiko's eyes widen. "I-I-" I stuttered. "Yamete! (Stop!)" Another one said. I stared at the person. She seemed really old, yet wide. "You mustn't destory her. She is the one who will help us through our troubles." She said calmly. "Hai." They all answered untie-ing us. "Now, why don't you come with me?" She said towards Kiko and I. I nod & then followed her. I walked into what looked like a igloo tent and was amazed by how much room there was. "Please sit. I need to tell you many things." She said wisely. (Is that even a word?! LOL). I nod. "I'll start with the story...Long ago there was a girl. She knew nothing about our world nor the world she came from. When she discovered this world. She found out we were in danger. She decided to help us. She traveled towards the master mind who gave us pain. She had 3 traveling partners who were willing to help her on her quest. They were a mage, warrior, and a archer. She herself was a assasin. Along the journey she fell in love with the warrior. But she knew even after their quest, she would have to leave them. So she basicly ignored the feeling and continued on her quest. As they soon reached the final battle. The battle of their life. She managed to assasin the mastermind when he was asleep. But it was at the cost of losing all 3 of her friends. They were to distract the gaurds. But it seemed as if those gaurds knew they were coming and were prepared. So as she came back to our town telling us that our troubles, our pains, and our worries were over. But as soon as she said that. She fell to the ground. Blood trickling down her arms and legs. Before we could do anything. She died. But before she died. One of the kids that was near her, heard her whisper "I have a child somewhere. And I hope she will find this place. Just to protect you all." With that she was gone. Disappeared into thin air. It was as if she was blending in with the snow. Always going to watch us. Right now I think your that child. That child she spoke about. You look just like her. Except for your snowy white hair." She said to me. I closed my eyes. "What do you guys need help with?" I said. "The same reason as the story." The women said. "..Hai, wakarimasu." I said looking at her. "Would you want 3 partners by your side?" She asked geting up. "I would need 2 more partners." I said sharply knowing she must of forgotton Kiko. "Understood." She said walking out of the tent. I looked at Kiko. She nod. I closed my eyes. "Watashi no Kokoro, a-ki.[My own heart, Fall]" I whispered.
My clothes and Hair style turned into the pic. & I had black wings.

"Kiko...can I do this again..?" I whispered to her. "Im sure you can." She said to be smiling. Want to know a secret? That girl the older women was talking about. The girl's daughter wasnt her daughter. It was her reincarnation. She was reincarnated with her memories erased. Until she came here, was then her memories returned. [roflmao that soundded so weird to me ~.~] "Miss..?" A voice said behind me. "Yes?" I answered turning around. "Kimi-sama, would like you outside." He said walking outside. "Hai." I answered walking out. "Y-your..your Nao..?" Kimi, the [old lolol] women that spoke to me whispered. "Nope, im her reincarnation." I said clearly. "My names, Hikari Hoshi." I answered to her. "Hikari-san...that's a perfect name...Anyway here are your partners. Kai and Haru." She said. A memory flashed in my head. "N-Nice to meet you, Kai-kun, Haru-kun." I said smiling, just twitching alittle. 'Stupid memory..but...why did I remember THAT part..?' I thought frowning alittle. "Daijobu, Hikari-san..?" Haru asked walking up to me. I gave him a small nod and then smile. "Yep." I said. "Kiko's no kokoro, a-ki.[Kiko's heart, fall.] Kiko's neko form, went from a cat to a human. "Nyaa! Havn't been out for awhile!" Kiko said smiling, stretching. Kai and Haru stared at Kiko like 'What just happened o.O' "Im Hikari's gaurdian angel!" Kiko stated happily. Then walking off toward the path to the castle, with me trailing behind. Kai and Haru stood clueless for a bit, then ran to catch up. "So...Hikari-chan, your now name means Bright star, nah?" Haru asked, well kind of said. "Un! Demo, Ha-kun! You can call me Shii-chan or Ka-chan!" I said smiling, remembering the 2 nicknames she as given. Haru stared at her a bit at he's new nickname. "Alright Ka-chan." Haru said smiling. "As for you Kai-kun..." I said walking backwards looking at him, tapping my chin. "Kan ore shou yu, Karu-kun?" I said hoping I got my japanese right. [lol i got the japanese from this website o-o'' but its in separate words LOL. Kan=can ore=I shou=call yu=you xD] "Hai, Hai, shua, Ka-chan." Kai said smiling. I smiled then turned back onto a road just before I hitted a tree. "So closeeee." Kiko said, laughing. "Urusaii!" I exclaimed, laughing, also noticing that I almost hitted a tree.
"Waah, it got so dark, so fast!" I exclaimed staring at the setting sun. "It's winter, Ka-chan/Shii-chan." Kai, Haru, and Kiko said boredly, trying to hold in their laughter. "Well, PSHSZSZSZ!" I exclaimed back, then plopped onto a snow covered log. "We needa make camp." Kiko said, dumping a mountain of wood on the floor in front of me.

[Ahaha;; that was only alittle ^^'' but i already said i'd update lil on my old stories o.O'' i'll do more when ifeel like it :3]
[LOLOL o-o i actually went through and reread everything >w< just added a tiny bit~ If i want I might find some way to work on it too :D]
[mann i dont know how many lyrics i missed o-o;;; xD so i'll put like....7 lines? fair enough?

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Furitsumori Tsudzukete yuku

Quietly keep accumulating

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Hold me tight- if this is how it feels

Hold me tight Konna omoi nara

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I didn't want to know

Dareka wo suki ni naru kimochi

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What it was like to be in love with someone

Shiritaku Nakatta yo

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I love you- my tears won't stop

I love you Namida tomaranai

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And so I wish
Konnan ja Kimi no koto

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That I had never met you

Shirazuni ireba Yokatta yo

Wow that was alot o-o trust me it took me awhile to post that up xD]
Posted 8/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:

"MINNA! INTRUDER!" Shouted someone as I stood there. I blinked cluelessly as people came and tied me up. I finally snapped out of it realizing whats happening.


lol. o-o
thats not much buh thanxs! XD
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Posted 8/8/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:

"MINNA! INTRUDER!" Shouted someone as I stood there. I blinked cluelessly as people came and tied me up. I finally snapped out of it realizing whats happening.


lol. o-o
thats not much buh thanxs! XD


im lazii right nao xD
Posted 8/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:

"MINNA! INTRUDER!" Shouted someone as I stood there. I blinked cluelessly as people came and tied me up. I finally snapped out of it realizing whats happening.


lol. o-o
thats not much buh thanxs! XD


im lazii right nao xD


lmao XD
whaa take my become a mod thingy
Posted 8/13/08
yay. =]
yu wrote moooree.
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Posted 8/15/08
lolz thatz a really good story ^^
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Posted 8/26/08
i like it
Posted 8/30/08
that pic is amazingg!!!!! xD
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it was a good story.
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Posted 9/2/08

mtn10216 wrote:

it was a good story.


lmao "was" :[
Posted 9/2/08

kintsuchl wrote:


mtn10216 wrote:

it was a good story.


lmao "was" :[


NOO XD
lmao "IS" is tha right word for it mtn10216!!:]
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Posted 9/4/08
srry ^_^
i just write i don't look at prtenses Xp
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mtn10216 wrote:

srry ^_^
i just write i don't look at prtenses Xp


hehehe!
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That was good! I actually have a pic of a boy w a sword that's named Kai! Here he is!

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