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Yes, I'm proud. =)) Credits to deen22 for the mem. card. xD

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While Ryosuke and Yuto were waiting for class to start, Chii entered the room and started shouting, "Where's Yama-chan and Yuto?!"

"Don't be so loud, Chii~ You're too noisy!", Yuto shouted back.

Ryosuke wondered why Chinen was so noisy, calling their names this early in the morning. "What's the matter, Chii? Did Daiki get angry with you or something?"

Chinen shook his head, "Nope..." He rested for a while in order to catch his breath before he started telling them the reason.

"I just figured out that there was a show later, before dismissal. It's called "Battle of the Bands" and anyone can watch it. You just need to pay 10 yen in order to enter the auditorium since it's a fund racing event. Bands from 1st year 'till 3rd year junior high are joining."

"Maji de?!", Yuto asked, interested about the show.

"Hai~ Some of our batchmates will be participating."

Ryosuke rolled his eyes. "You came shouting all the way here just to tell us about that?!", he exclaimed.

Chinen apologized, "Gomen ne~ Classes are about to start in 20 minutes and I was just wondering if you wanna come, since Keito and I will be going."

Yuto wanted to go because he thought that this was gonna be a great way to spend more time with Ryosuke, since they don't get to spend time together anymore eversince 3rd year of Junior High started. On the other hand, Ryosuke wasn't interested in going at all.

"Sure! We'll come!", Yuto jumped up and down getting all giddy.

"We?! Oh no, not "we". I'm not interested in those stuff. You can go, if you want.", Ryosuke smiled at Yuto.

Yuto stopped jumping abruptly and sat down and looked outside window. Chinen noticed that Yuto was very disappointed so, he thought of a plan.

"Ne, Yama-chan, I also heared that they're gonna give away free strawberries after the show~", he said with an evil smile on his face.

Ryosuke's eyes grew as wide as plates. He suddenly spaced out and imagined himself eating all those big, red, juicy strawberries.

"Hontou ni?! Strawberries? You mean big, red and juicy strawberries?"

"It's true!"

"Okay~ I'll come! You're gonna come too, right, Yuto?" Ryosuke said, still thinking about strawberries.

Yuto didn't realize that Chinen succeeded in persuading Ryosuke. He recalled Ryosuke's sentence. You're gonna come too, right, Yuto? Too? He's coming? For real?! Yuto beamed at Ryosuke.

"Hai~! Of course I will!"

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The bell rang. Classes have just ended and it was time for the Battle of the Bands. Chinen and Yuto were waiting for Ryosuke to finish fixing his things. Suddenly, Ryosuke's keitai rang. He took out his phone to see who was calling him at that time. It was his mom.

"Moshi moshi?"
"Hai~"
"Hai."
"Wakarimashita."
"Okay, I'm on my way."

Yuto sensed that something was wrong. He asked Ryosuke, "What's the matter? Who was that on the phone?"

"Gomen ne~ My okaa-san told me that my aunt and my cousins are coming home from the Philippines. We need to fetch them from the airport. Hontou gomen ne~ I promise I'll make it up to you guys next time.", Ryosuke answered while fixing his things hurriedly.

Yuto understood his situation. "Okay~ Tell your aunt I said "Welcome home". And, remember, you owe me one!"

"Yeah, sure. Gotta go! Ja ne~"

"Bye~", Yuto and Chinen called out in unison.

Yuto and Chinen made their way to the auditorium. They presented their tickets to the one in-charge, entered, then looked for empty seats near the stage. Luckily, there were still two empty seats beside Kazama, their classmate.

"Are these seats empty?", Chinen asked Kazama.

Kazama looked at where Chinen was pointing to and said, "Yeah."

"Thanks.", said Yuto, still disappointed with the fact that Ryosuke wasn't there with them again.

Then, the "battle" started. A couple of bands played. Some were good, some weren't. After 4 bands finished playing, an all-girl band came up to the stage.

What are these girls thinking, joining this competition for bands? I'm just wasting my time watching stuff like this. And Yama-chan isn't here anyway. I better go. Yuto thought.

"Sorry, Chii. I need to go. I still have some homework.", said Yuto, about to leave his seat.

Chinen knew that Yuto was lying. He knew that the real reason was because Ryosuke wasn't here, that's why he didn't enjoy it at all.

"Ah, okay. Take care on going home. See you~", Chinen said.

As Yuto was about to make his way out the door, KAT-TUN's "Lips" was played by the all-girl group, apparently called "Paradigm".

"Denwa nari tsuzuketa...Ie wo nuke dashi tetara..."


What an angelic voice! Yuto thought. How could a girl sing like that? Her voice is better than Akanishi-senpai's! Or maybe close to being better than his.

Yuto turned around to see who was singing Akanishi's part. The girl was tall. Not very tall. Just quite tall, about the same height as his. She has silky, shoulder-length, black-ish brown-ish hair. White complexion, like an angel's (Or Yama-chan's). She was...beautiful.

He slowy walked down the aisle, back to his seat beside Kazama and Chinen.

"Who is she?", Yuto asked Chinen, his eyes still on the girl.

Chinen was surprised to see Yuto back, "Oh! You're back? Anyway, her name's Uchiyama Maki from 3C. She's new in this school and started attending here yesterday. She's good, isn't she?"

"She's not good..."

"Eh?! You don't think she's good?!"

"...she's great.", Yuto continued.

I think Yuto's falling in-love with Maki-chan. That's great. At least he won't be sad when Ryosuke's busy anymore. Chinen smiled at the thought.

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"YAMA-CHAN~!", Yuto screamed when he saw Ryosuke entering their class room the next day.

Ryosuke was still sleepy because they had a home coming party for their relatives last night.

Who in the world--?!

"Yama-chan! I..must be..in..love..", Yuto said with a huge smile plastered on his face.

Ryosuke yawned, "Ah...really?"

"Hai! She's heaven sent!"

Chinen entered the room then went over to join Yuto and Ryosuke's conversation.

"...I swear. She must be the prettiest girl in this school!", bragged Yuto.

Ryosuke yawned for the 5 time already, "Oh really? She must be really..." *yawns*

"PERFECT!", exclaimed Yuto. "Right, Chii?!"

"Well, I don't think she's perfect but, I do love her voice and she really is beautiful.", commented Chinen.

Ryosuke has heard enough of all of Yuto's braggings.

"Okay, why don't you just tell me if ever you see her during lunch break so I can also see what she looks like? What's her name anyway?", Ryosuke asked.

"Her name's Uchiyama Maki from class 3C and she's new here. She just attended this school 2 days ago.", Yuto answered even before Chinen could.

Her name's familiar. Where have I heard it before? I know I met her somewhere...but where? Ryosuke was really curious.

--TO BE CONTINUED--

I love comments. :3 Gimme some rabbu~ <333
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waa~~
u posted this fanfic already in another forum right ??
am i right ??
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haha!!
I've read this..and It's AWESOME!!
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I hope you'll be able to make a new part now!!
thanks for posting it here!! xD
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@ vanielestari -- yea, correct. x3 AND I LOVE YOUR AVI. XDDD

@ hsj-chan -- thanks! :3 hope so too. then i'll work on a new one. :3
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I'm looking forward to it!! ^-^
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*chills* it's totally rad!! lol
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ahah it was great!! me want more!!
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I'm liking the story!
You're doing great!!!!
Can't wait for more!
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kyaa!!!can't wait for it!i think i've read this bfore!waah!whats happening to me?@_@...

blame it on the bakanishi illness

but nwey, it was great...lets spread some rabu now!
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thanks for all the comments~ :3 here's the next part. :3

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The bell rang and it was time for lunch. Ryosuke, Yuto and Chinen made their way down the staircases and into the cafeteria with their bentos clutched in their hands. Yuto's head turned in every direction, looking for any sign of a girl named Uchiyama Maki. As they sat at their usual spot in the cafeteria and ate their lunch, while Ryosuke was still trying to figure out where he heard that name before, Yuto still continued to look for Maki but he can't find her.

"Where is she?!", Yuto said, desperate to see her beloved Maki again.

Just then, Hakushika Ryu, a guy from 3C, passed by their table.

Chinen noticed him and asked, "Ne, Ryu-kun, have you seen Maki-chan?"

"Maki?", Ryu was trying to figure out who Maki was. "Ah! You mean Uchiyama? I didn't see her this morning. She must be absent."

"Eh?! Nande? What happened?!", Yuto exclaimed, eager to know more about Maki's absence.

"Sorry, I don't know. Gotta go~", and Ryu left.

Yuto really wanted to show Ryosuke how beautiful Maki is! "Gomen ne~ Yama-chan. I'll show you Maki next time..."

Ryosuke wan't listening. He was still playing with his food, deep in thought. I always remember Fukuoka whenever I hear her name. Why?

"Oi, Yama-chan! Are you listening?", shouted Yuto.

Ryosuke snapped out of his delusions. "Ah..what were you saying? Sorry."

"I said, I'll show you Maki next time, since she's absent today."

"Ah, is that so? Okay, I'll look forward to it."

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It was already 12:39 in the morning but Ryosuke was still awake. He was trying really hard all day to figure out where she had met that girl before and why she reminds him of Fukuoka.

I guess I better sleep already. It's late and I still have classes tomorrow.

Soon, Ryosuke falls asleep and then dreams about something weird. It was a very random dream. One moment you see something, before 20 seconds could even pass by, the next thing you know, you see a different one. And it was all blurry.

Back in Fukuoka, along the seashore, two kids, around the age of 7, were chasing each other. Next, the kids were sharing the same umbrella while walking along Ohori Park. After that, the kids were being pulled apart by two women, apparently their mothers. They were crying so hard and the young boy was being forced to go inside the car.

As the scene became easier to be seen, Ryosuke tried to identify who the kids were. Ah! Is that...me? But, who's the girl?

Before the chibi Ryosuke could be pushed into the car, he shouted, "Maki! Maki! I know..we'll see each...other...again...someday! Maki! I love you...Maki!"

"Ryosuke! Don't go...! Please! I love you too, Ryosuke!", the girl yelled back.

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Ryosuke woke up from his dream in an instant. He finally figured out the reason why he always remembers Fukuoka when Yuto mentions Maki.

Eh? Maki? Why am I dreaming of her again? 8 years have passed already! Darn it! I don't want to remember her anymore...even though I still love her...

--TO BE CONTINUED--

thanks for the comments. <333
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That was GREAT!!
It's getting soo interesting!!
Can't wait for the next part!
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waaaaaaaaaa~~
GOOD ...
can't waiiitt^^
anywaay.
read the 2nd part alreaadyy,,~
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eeeh!!!! this is your sad story ne??

it made me cry!!!! you know i have this story of yours in my USB!!! i lovereading this because it makes me cry!!!


KYA!!! YOU GUYS WILLLL LOOOVE THIS!!
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hahaha if im not wrong...
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THIS IS THE FIRST EVER FANFIC IVE READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!

kya!!!! yeah im right!!! this is it!!! yay!!! got to read this again!!

the last part is chinen's sister i wanna read the new parts!!! kyaaaaaaaa
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alex-chaaaan!!! ur fic in YRC!!! thanks for posting it here! i really missed ur fic!! T_T it's so great. and it's realistic. :)) continue ur fic okay? XD
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