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lol. thanks for all the really, really great compliments! :3 awww~ i'm sorry i'm making you guys fail. i haven't continued it yet. DDDD: will do it when i have lots of time. since tests are next week, i need to study first. [and maybe write the fic while doing so XDDD] lol.

anyway, here's the next part. :3

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Ryosuke was late for school due to over sleeping. He rode his bike in coming to school and tried to think of the shortest roads going there. As he was about to turn to the street where the school was located, he suddenly crashed to a girl from the same school.

"OUCH!", screamed the girl while holding her knee.

Ryosuke stood up and went over to her. "Gomenasai! Are you okay?", asked Ryosuke as he tried to look at the girls bleeding knee.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Anyway, I better go. I'm already late for school!", said the girl while struggling to stand up.

Ryosuke looked at her face to see who she was. Images flashed through his mind: Two children chasing each other, two children sharing the same umbrella and two children being pulled apart. It can't be...

"M-M-Ma-Maki?", Ryosuke asked, afraid of what the answer might be.

The girl directed her attention towards Ryosuke. "Yes?"

She's still as beautiful as she used to be.
Thought Ryosuke.

Maki's eyes suddenly became as huge as plates. "Ryosuke?!"

"It's been a long time, ne? So you study in this school already?"

"Yeah. I belong to 3C.", she said with a smile.

3C? Could it be...? No, it can't...It's impossible.


The school bell suddenly rang.

"Oh, damn. We're late! C'mon, I'll give you a lift.", he said while getting ready to ride his bike.

They rode the bike together and arrived late together in school. They ran through the corridors and zoomed through the stair cases.

In 3B's class room, Kawasaki-sensei was checking the class' attendance.

"Tanaka?"

"Hai."

"Uchi?"

"Hai."

"Yamada?"

The class was quiet.

"Yamada-kun? Are you here?"

Ryosuke was just in time. He appeared in the doorway of their classroom. "Here!", he said while trying to catch his breath.

"Why are you late?", Kawasaki-sensei looked at Ryosuke with a questioning look.

It took a while before Ryosuke could answer. "Sorry, sensei. I kinda over slept."

"Ah, I see. Well then, please take your seat."

Ryosuke took his seat beside the window. He wrote a short note in a piece of paper and passed it to Yuto who was just in front of him.

The girl you love is named Maki from 3C, right?

Yuto wrote a simple answer and two questions then passed it to Ryosuke again.

Yes. Why did you ask? Do you know her?

Oh, no. It can't be...There are many Maki's anyway. She might be different to the Maki that I know. But, he Yuto said it very clearly. He said the girl was named Uchiyama Maki. It was the same name as my first love.

He thought: Yeah, I actually do. She's the woman I have loved when I still lived in Fukuoka. I was forced to come here in Tokyo so I never got to see her again. But I still love her 'till now. But, he didn't write that. He simply wrote: Yeah, she's an old friend of mine. And passed the paper again to Yuto.

Yuto was surprised. Really?! Yama-chan! Can you please introduce me to her? Please? I promise I'll give you a whole box of strawberries! He passed the note back.

I can't do that. Sorry. But, if you want, I can give you her number. I need to ask her permission first, though.
Ryosuke waited for the teacher to turn his back to them before he passed the paper to Yuto again.

Yuto opened the paper eagerly and read the note Ryosuke wrote. He wrote back a short one. Deal.

--TO BE CONTINUED--

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ne, minna, arashi369 or alex-chan told me to post the next part. haha! so alex-chan, here it is~!

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(I (alex-chan) wouldn't count this in as one of the chapters. It's just an explanation of who Maki really is for Ryosuke and why Ryosuke wants to help Yuto.)

Why am I doing this for Yuto?! I also love Maki, for goodness sake! What's happening to me? Damn it!

On the way home from school, Yuto and Chinen were ranting about a the new version of Tekken that they bought from the video game store a while ago. Ryosuke was just walking beside them, not listening to their rants.

"No! Jin is better at fighting!", Yuto told Chinen.

Chinen rolled his eyes. "Of course not! Kazuya is better! I'll prove it to you if you want!"

(A/N: Jin and Kazuya? Akanishi and Kamenashi? Lol. ^o^ Kidding. They're real characters from Tekken. :3 I'm sure you know that if you play Tekken. XD Back to the story...)

They continued to talk about Jin and Kazuya until they got home. But despite ranting about Tekken all the way home, Chinen knew that something was wrong with Ryosuke. He usually defends that King is the best out of all the Tekken characters but today, he just kept quiet and didn't mind the two of them.

I guess I better call him. I want to know what's wrong.

Chinen dialed Ryosuke's number and waited for him to answer the phone.

"Moshi moshi?", answered the woman on the other line.

Chinen asked Ryosuke's mother, "Anou...may I please speak to Ryosuke?"

"Who is this?"

"It's Chinen Yuuri."

"Ah! Chinen-kun! Chotto matte kudasai. I'll go call Ryosuke"

After a minute of waiting, Ryosuke finally answered the phone. "Chii. What's up?"

"What's up with you? Do you have a problem or something?"

Ryosuke was taken aback with Chinen's straightforwardness. "Eh?! W-wh-what are you sa-sayi-saying?" Of c-cou-course not!"

Chinen shook his head. He could sense that Ryosuke was lying with the way he is talking.

"C'mon. Tell the truth! I know you're lying. Please, I promise I won't tell anyone!"

Ryosuke decided to tell Chinen the truth, since he's one of his best friends.

"Promise? Promise you won't tell Yuto or any other person?"

"Of course I won't! Friends don't blab each other's secrets!", Chinen answered with sincerity in his voice.

Ryosuke trusted Chinen.

"Okay, here's the truth." He paused for a while. "I used to live in Fukuoka when I was still little. I lived there until I was 7. I had a childhood friends who's name is Maki..."

Chinen was shocked. "Could it be...?", he whispered.

"...we used to play together. Go to school together and get into trouble together. The truth is, we loved each other. Too young, ne?", Ryosuke smiled as he recalled the memories. "But one day, my parents decided to transfer here to Tokyo. I didn't know what to do. I wouldn't want to leave Maki...and there was nothing that I can do. Surely you know what happens next?"

Chinen was trying to hold back his tears but he can't. "Oh, I'm sorry, Yama-chan. I didn't know..."

"No, don't be sorry. It's totally fine.", Ryosuke smiled even though he knew that Chinen couldn't see that.

Chinen wiped his tears before aking Ryosuke. "But, do you still love her?"

Ryosuke stood frozen. His heart was saying that he loves Maki but his mind's saying that he can't. Why? Because Yuto loves her too. And friendship is more impotant.

"Yeah..I d-do. But..."

Before Ryosuke could finish his sentence, Chinen interrupted him. "Then why are you helping Yuto?!"

"I...I dunno. Maybe because...friendship is more important?"

Chinen couldn't believe Ryosuke. "If you really love her, then you should fight for it!"

"Chinen! Don't you understand me?! If I do, Yuto will get mad! And I don't want that to happen! There are many more other women in this world! It's not like Maki's the only one left!", shouted Ryosuke.

"But do you really want this? Is it really okay?"

Ryosuke made a decision. "Yes, I'll do it for Yuto. So don't scold me for helping him from now on, okay?"

"O...o...okay", Chinen answered half-heartedly then hung up.

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hey, guys! thanks for the support~~~ XD i really love you all. <333 and thanks, jally-nee, for posting the next part. XD anyway, i'm here to post parts 5 and 6. XD enjoy!

BTW, i was rushing in doing this so, this part happened around 3-4 weeks after. XD

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Ryosuke ran through the corridors and into the class 3C. He promised Yuto that he would give him Uchiyama Maki's cellphone number. He met Maki inside and they exchanged numbers.

"Thanks.", Ryosuke smiled at Maki. He was about to exit the classroom when Maki called out his name.

"Anou, Ryosuke...kun?". Maki remembered that people were around her and would be suspicious if she called Ryosuke only by first name.

Ryosuke turned back to Maki. "Nani?"

"Ah, betsuni...", Maki turned away and fixed the things on her table.

"Okay...? Ja~"

Ryosuke ran back to their classroom. "Oi, Yuto! Wait up!" He picked up his bag and swung it over his shoulder.

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On the way home, Ryosuke gave Maki's number to Yuto.

"Oh, I almost forgot!" Ryosuke got his phone from his bag. "Here's Maki's number.", he told Yuto while trying to avoid eye contact with Chinen.

"Eh?! Hontou ni?!" Yuto was excited and reached for Ryosuke's phone. He almost forgot that he was holding the pot that he made for art class. Good thing Chinen caught it just in time.

"Kya~ Arigatou!", Yuto told Ryosuke as he danced and skipped around his two friends.

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It was Saturday. Ryosuke decided to stay home to watch some DVDs and eat some popcorn. He watched Harry Potter first.

"Aaaaaah! Harry! Don't give in to Voldemort! Nooooooo~", he shouted at the TV screen.

Suddenly, his phone rang. He ignored it, but then it rang again.

Ugggh. Who could it be? He looked at the screen. Yuto?

"Yo~", he answered the phone.

"YAMA-CHAN!!!", Yuto yelled excitedly over the phone.

Ryosuke pulled that phone away from his ear. "Please stop yelling, Yuto!", he said, irritated.

"Oh, sorry.", Yuto appologized.

"It's okay. What's up?"

"Ah! Come here, quick! I've got something to tell the two of you! Be here at 3:15. Ja~"

"Huh? What's with him?", Ryosuke told himself. I bet it's about Maki. I might need Chinen's help after this.

He looked at the clock on the wall. It's 3:10! I better get going. He ran down the stairs and told his mom that he'll go to Yuto's house and that he'll be back by 8.
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Ryosuke rang the door bell in front of the Nakajima residence. Yuto answered the door.

"You're here! Faster! Quick! Let's go upstairs to my room!"

When they got there, Ryosuke saw that Chinen arrived before him and was now eating chocolate cake. He sat beside him and whispered, "What's this all about?"

Chinen glared at Ryosuke. "You shouldn't have come!"

He was confused. "Eh? Nande?"

Yuto looked at them questioningly. "What are you guys whispering for?"

"Nothing!", Ryosuke answered and sat straight. "Er, Yuto? Why did you want to tell us?"

"Mmm, ask Chinen.", Yuto said with a mouthful of cake.

Chinen's eyes went wide. "Why me? It's not like it's my good news. Tell it to him yourself." He didn't want to be the who'll tell the "good news". Not to Ryosuke, at least.

"Okay, fine. I'll do it." Yuto drank water then looked straight at Ryosuke. "Maki said that we could be friends!", he said getting all giddy.

Ryosuke didn't understand why it's such a big deal for Yuto.

Yuto saw that Ryosuke didn't get him so he continued. "And she also told me that I could court her!"

It seemed like the world has stoped turning and everything has vanished from his sight. He couldn't believe what Yuto has just said. How could this happen? He already confessed his love for Maki and asked if he could court her? And..and..and Maki said yes? What? This can't be happening. This must be a dream.

--NEXT PART : PART 6--

"...Yama-chan? Yamada? Ryosuke? Yamada Ryosuke, can you here me? Oi!", Yuto said as he snapped his fingers in front of Ryosuke.

Ryosuke came back to his normal state. "Oh, sorry. Is that true? I'm so happy for you!", he faked a smile.

"Thanks! At first I thought that she had a boyfriend already so I asked her about that. Then, she said that she didn't. So, naturally, I was happy! I then took the opportunity to confess my love for her. It took a huge amount of courage to do that, you know! I thought that she might ignore me after that. But, she didn't. She just thanked me. After that I asked her if I could court her. It took her several minutes before she could realize that i was serious and finally, she said that I could! I was so happy! I jumped up and down the whole time! Can you believe that? Oh, this is the happiest day of my life!" Yuto said it all in one go. He didn't even pause to know what the others thought.

Every word that Yuto said was like a small knife stabbing Ryosuke in the heart. He fought to hold back the tears that are welling up behind his eyes. He wished that he just made an excuse so that he wouldn't have come here. It was really hard to hear those words. Especially when it comes from his best friend.

"Awww~ Good for you. I'm glad that you're happy. Congratulations!", Ryosuke told Yuto. It was like someone just shot him while he was saying all those things. Chinen looked at him the whole time. Ryosuke avoided eye contact with Chinen.

Yuto's ranting went on for two more hours. When Ryosuke already had enough, he made up an excuse.

"Anou, Yuto. I need to go, sorry. I promised my mother that I'll help her in doing the chores at home.", he said as he stood up.

Chinen wanted to talk to him so he made up an excuse too. "Yeah, me too. I need to visit my aunt in the hospital."

"It's only 5:40, too early for you guys to leave. Anyway, see you at school." Yuto said.

When Ryosuke and Chinen already turned at the corner of Yuto's street, Chinen invited Ryosuke over to his house. It took 10 minutes before they could arrive there.

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In Chinen's room...

"Er, Ryosuke? You know...if you have any problem, you can tell me...", Chinen said slowly. He was afraid of what Ryosuke's reaction would be.

Ryosuke shook his head and smiled. "Huh? What's with you? I don't have a problem!"

Chinen was slightly annoyed. "I know that you do, Ryosuke..." He looked down.

Ryosuke can't stop the tears anymore. He can't hide the pain forever. "Fine, I do..." He finally admitted it.

Chinen lifted his head to look at Ryosuke. He was surprised that he saw him shaking and tears were streaming from his oh-so-well-padded cheeks, falling down to his clothes. He didn't know what to do. So, he tried to think of words of comfort. He went towards Ryosuke and touched his back.

"Don't cry, Ryosuke. Maybe...maybe Maki just isn't the one for you."

Ryosuke still didn't stop crying. "I...I...kn-kno-know. B-but, I just c-c-can-can't bel-belie-believe...th-that thi-thing-things...w-wou-would be th-this...f-fa-fast."

"Oh my, I don't know what to say. I better call someone that can help you..."

Chinen went downstairs and called for someone. He got back to the room with a girl a bit younger than him.

"Er, this is my younger sister, Keiri. Maybe she could help you, since she has some experience on love."

Keiri asked Ryosuke what happened. Since Ryosuke can't explain well due to crying, Chinen explained everything instead. When Chinen was done, Keiri turned back to Ryosuke and tried to comfort him.

"You know, love only hurts when God knows that there's someone better for you. There are lots of other girls in this world anyway. Don't give up!", she smiled. :)

Keiri's words really were great. Ryosuke felt loads better. He wiped his tears and stood up.

"Yosh~! Everything you said is true. Maybe she really isn't the one for me. Arigatou, Keiri-chan!"

--TO BE CONTINUED--

there! will post the next part on friday! the long awaited chapter 8! XDDD sorry for the delay~! XD
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