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GAHSS. poor yama-chann)):

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awwww! yamachan im the girl for you lol

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i'm here to post the long awaited chapter 7! yey! at last, i've finished it! will be back with it after a few moments! XD
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here's part 1. XD

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Yamada tried to move on. He tried really hard. He went to Chinen's house every Friday just to talk to Chinen's sister, Keiri. He consulted her about the things that bother him concerning Yuto and Maki. He thought moving on would be easy. Seems like he was wrong.

"I didn't think it would be this hard.", Yamada said. "I mean..." He was trying to find the right words to explain what he felt. Keiri was sitting in front of him, waiting patiently for him to express what he was feeling. "...I..."

I think he can't explain well right now, Keiri thought. I better say something. He might get embarrased. "Well, no one ever said that moving on was easy.", she started. "You see...", she, too, was thinking of the right things she had to say. "Well, I understand why it's hard for you. Since, she waqs your first love ever since you were kids. I understand that, really." Yamada nodded at every pause Keiri made. He can't look straight into her eyes. He just kept eyeing the piece of crumpled paper, half-hidden behind the stack of books in the far end of the room.

Keiri waited a bit for Yamada to say something. After a moment of awkward silence, she continued.

"Just remember, PAST IS PAST. And you were still kids back then. Who knows, maybe you little afair was just a product of some game you played called make believe. ;D It's been like, what, 7-8 years? Maybe that affair never really did happen.", she smiled.

Yamada suddenly spoke up. "But I had a dream..." He recalled the happenings and shared it to Keiri. She, on the other hand, sat and listened carefully to the a la romantic movie story. When Yamada was done, she took another tissue from the tissue box beside her and wiped the tiny droplets of tears running don her cheaks.

"Now, that was...", she blowed her nose. "...quite a tragic story. I'm sorry for you." She shoot the tissue into the waste bin. "But, Yamada-kun, has it ever occured to you that it may never have happened? Like what I said, it's been years. Maybe it simply were a dream.", she smiled once more.

Yamada was getting even more confused. He never thought about that.


"Looks like you haven't thought about that possibility...", told Keiri after a short pause. "Maybe it's time for you to talk to Maki about this matter. It's for your own good too, you know. So that you don't have to suffer anymore.", she smiled at him yet again. She loved helping people with love problems. But this one was the hardest problem yet. Especially the fact that it was a boy having all the problems.

Yamada thought about it. He thought that it was a good idea but at the same he didn't think he was ready.

"I'll think about that.", he stood up. "Thank you for all your time, Keiri., he smiled at her and left the room.
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thanks for the comments! deen-chan and jally-nee this is for you! XD
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kyaaa!alecxia chan....its soo nice!!!...

i want more...kyaa....can't wait what will happen next....poor yamada though...
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me agree with everyone..very good!
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awwww. guys, thanks for all the support! i'm here to post the second part of chapter 7. XDDD

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Later that night, Yamada lied down and stared at the ceiling for hours just thinking about what he and Keiri have talked about. He also thought about what she had advised for him to do. Hundreds of visions and situations flashed in his mind. Words, phrases and even sentences rang through his ears.

Two young children chasing each other in the park...
"...a little game called make believe..."
The two of them under a shed, waiting for the rain to stop...
"Maybe it simply were a dream..."
The two children being pulled apart, the boy being pushed into the car...
"...quite a tragic story..."

After hours and hours of thinking, he decided to talk to Maki about the matter.

I think I should do it, Yamada thought. Like Keiri said, it is for my own good anyway...I might even be suffering just because of nothing. Maybe it really were JUST A DREAM...

Lost in his thoughts, Yamada closed his eyes and fell asleep in an instant.

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The very next morning, he messaged Maki.

Ne, Maki-san, can I please talk to you? I have something really important to ask you.

He thought about sending it, once more. Am I doing the right thing? He thought about what will happen if he relived the past.Will it affect his realtionship with Yuto? But wait, maybe there was no PAST anyway. So, without thinking about it once again, he sent the message to Maki.

After about 5 minutes, Maki replied...

Oh, sure, meet at the rooftop after class.

Yamada went to school and waited patiently for the last subject to end. He was quite nervous. He didn't know what to tell Maki first when he got there.

The bell finally rang. It was time.

He pushed his books into his bag and made his way to the door when suddenly, someone called his name.

"Oi, Yama-chan! Wait up~!"

Yuto. Oh no, I forgot about Yuto! What should I do...? Yamada stopped dead in his tracks and turned around to face Yuto. "Hey, Yuto. Er, what's up?", he asked in a slightly nervous voice.

--TO BE CONTINUED--

will post chapter 7 part 3 later. XD just off to finish Gokusen. XD hope you liked it. XD

thanks for all the comments! XD
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thanks, jessee-nee! XD
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here's the last part of chapter 7. XD

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Yuto looked shocked. "Don't tell me you forgot about today!" He waited for Yamada to answer, but all he received was a confused look from him. "Yama-chan~~~", wailed Yuto. "We were gonna go to Karaoke for the first time in, like, 6 months! It's been so long ever since the last time we three spent quality time together!", he had a tone of disappointment in his voice.

Yabai~ I forgot about that!

"Er, sorry, Yuto. This thing's urgent, really. Please, I just need to meet up with someone. I promise, I'll catch up with you two after this! See you there! Ja~"

I wonder what he's up to. Oh well, maybe nothing that concerns me, thought Yuto. "Chii~ Ikou~", they went to Karaoke. Just the two of them.

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In the rooftop...

Yamada saw a girl standing there, back facing him.

"Anou...Maki-san...?"

The girl faced him, quite startled by his voice. "Ah! Yamada-kun...I thought you wouldn't come. What is it you wanted to ask me, anyway?", Maki questioned.

Yamada stood 3 meters away from her. He couldn't get any closer than that. He was afraid of what he might do.

"Sorry, I had to talk to Yuto first." His mind went blank for a second then occupied by thoughts the next. "So, how have you been?"

They thought about lots of stuff. School, friends, even how they have been ever since Yamada transferred to Tokyo. Until at last, they arrived at the subject of "the past".

"Er, Maki-san, about the past...", Yamada started.
"What about it?"
"When we were still kids..."
"Why?"
"I may sound silly but..." Yamada summed up all the courage stored in him. "...did we have an affair or something?"

Maki was surprised. Now that was straightforward. After a while, she laughed.

"What are you saying? Of course not!" Then, she checked the time. 6:20 PM. "Oops, I need to go! Bye!" She ran to the door. Before she went down, Yamada called out.

"Are you sure? We never really did have one?"

With her back turned, she replied, "I never remember anything like that...", then went downstairs. When she was quite far already, tears ran down her face. "...omoidashi taku nai tto omou...". ("...or at least i hope i wouldn't remember it anymore...")

--TO BE CONTINUED--

finished it, FINALLY! XD hope you guys enjoyed it! XD and comments and criticisms are always oh-so-welcomed and loved! XD thanks for all the support! XD
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GAHS SO THEY REALLY DID HAF A PAST RELATIONSHIP><

oh man now yama-chans gona be so confused n maki's gona be distressed... =X
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