Love you till death part 2
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Posted 8/8/08 , edited 8/8/08

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i woke up feeling tired still. i hugged my 'pillow' more. it was warm. i sighed. i snuggled closer. It was relaxing, my eyes were shut, as i fell asleep with the rythem of a HEARTBEAT. wait- heartbeat?
"Aug! What the? Polka?????" a voice under me said. My eyes shot open.
I slowly looked up to see my 'pillow' staring at me. Red crimson eyes, messy raven hair. No.
"Natsume??????" i yelled while juping off of him. He grunted.
"What were you doing in my room??????" i practically shouted. "This is your room polka?" he said. I looked at 'my' room. skulls, black, posters, these were none of my stuff.
Suddenly i remembered last night. i slapped my forehead.
"Now you remember" Natsume said dully. He pulled the blanket off. i blushed feriously. His top was naked!!! his well built chest, his muscular torso, his 6 pack all muscular. And the worst of all, he was wearing boxers!!!
"GAHHHHHH!!!" i yelled and ran out of his room. i reached my room and slammed the door closed. i was panting, and still blushing. I collapsed on my bed. i stared at the ceiling. I looked at the calender. It was November 27th. (yes, sorry i forgot to tell you that it was in november) Natsume's birthday is today, i better go to buy a present. i thought.
I got dressed pretty quickly. i wore my uniform, with a black coat over, and a black hat? Anyway, i locked my door and scampered to Hotaru's room.
"Hotaru!!!!" i yelled. The door opened and Hotaru was there in perfect condition.
"What do you want baka?" she asked coldly. i smiled.
"Want to come with me to buy a present for natsume??" i asked. Hotaru stood there.
"Fine baka" she said. i jumped for joy. She got her coat and locked the door. Suddenly Ruka-pyon came along.
"Good morning Ruka-pyon" i chriped. "Good morning Sakura-san" he said.
"Mou! i said just call me Mikan" i said while pouting. He chuckled,
"Fine Mikan" he said. "Where are you going Mikan?" he asked.
"This baka wants me to come with her to buy a present for Hyugga" Hotaru replied for me.
"Oh, i see" Ruka-pyon said. "Want to come?" i inquired. "No, i have to take care of one of the animals, it apperently got a cold. he said
"Oh, ok, plese tell them to get better" i said smiling,"bye" i said and dragged hotaru off.
BAKA
i fell and rubbed my sore head. "Mou! Hotaru!" i said teary.
"Who said you can drag me?" She said. "Are you ok?" a kind voice said.
"Yuu!!" i said. I got up. "You sound excited" he said.
"I'm going to Central Town!" i said happily. " I see, have fun" he said smiling.
"Ok! Bye" i waved and walked away with Hotaru.
Once we were at Central town, Hotaru asked, "What are you going to buy for him?"
i thought about it for a few secounds. "Hm, maybe a ____?" i asked.
"Hmmm, maybe we can go there" she said and pointed to this cute shop.
Ding-ga-ling
the doorbell rang. "Welcome" a woman said. i smiled. Hotaru nodded. i looked around and saw what i was looking for. It was so cute!.
"I'll buy this please" i said. The woman smiled. "That is 40 rabbits" she said. "But, isn't it suppose to be at least 70 rabbits?" i asked.
"You'll get a discount, since i know you are buying it for a present" She said.
"Arigato!!!" i said. I paid, then left. "Are you going to buy a present for Natsume?" i asked hotaru.
"I have one already" she said with a evil glint. i sweat-dropped. Once we arrived at the classroom, it was decorated. "Hey guys, Mikan is back with Hotaru" Koko said.
"Where were you??" demanded Permy. "I was at Central Town" i said. "WHAT??" she screamed.
BAKA, yes hotaru fired it.
"Clam down" Hotaru said plainly. "Can you help us?" Anna asked. "Sure!" i said as i trook off my coat and my hat. I helped make food, until it was done. "I'll get Natsume-kun!" Permy yelled.
But, Hotaru said, "No, Mikan will do it" Everyone was staring at her. "Um, ok" i said as i took off for Natsume, but i bumped into this blonde hair girl with blue eyes. "Sorry!" i apologized"
"Don't worry" she said. "Are you new here?" i asked. "Yes, my name is Luna, Koizumi Luna"

i end it here~!!!
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Peppermint264 wrote:


MPOV

i woke up feeling tired still. i hugged my 'pillow' more. it was warm. i sighed. i snuggled closer. It was relaxing, my eyes were shut, as i fell asleep with the rythem of a HEARTBEAT. wait- heartbeat?
"Aug! What the? Polka?????" a voice under me said. My eyes shot open.
I slowly looked up to see my 'pillow' staring at me. Red crimson eyes, messy raven hair. No.
"Natsume??????" i yelled while juping off of him. He grunted.
"What were you doing in my room??????" i practically shouted. "This is your room polka?" he said. I looked at 'my' room. skulls, black, posters, these were none of my stuff.
Suddenly i remembered last night. i slapped my forehead.
"Now you remember" Natsume said dully. He pulled the blanket off. i blushed feriously. His top was naked!!! his well built chest, his muscular torso, his 6 pack all muscular. And the worst of all, he was wearing boxers!!!
"GAHHHHHH!!!" i yelled and ran out of his room. i reached my room and slammed the door closed. i was panting, and still blushing. I collapsed on my bed. i stared at the ceiling. I looked at the calender. It was November 27th. (yes, sorry i forgot to tell you that it was in november) Natsume's birthday is today, i better go to buy a present. i thought.
I got dressed pretty quickly. i wore my uniform, with a black coat over, and a black hat? Anyway, i locked my door and scampered to Hotaru's room.
"Hotaru!!!!" i yelled. The door opened and Hotaru was there in perfect condition.
"What do you want baka?" she asked coldly. i smiled.
"Want to come with me to buy a present for natsume??" i asked. Hotaru stood there.
"Fine baka" she said. i jumped for joy. She got her coat and locked the door. Suddenly Ruka-pyon came along.
"Good morning Ruka-pyon" i chriped. "Good morning Sakura-san" he said.
"Mou! i said just call me Mikan" i said while pouting. He chuckled,
"Fine Mikan" he said. "Where are you going Mikan?" he asked.
"This baka wants me to come with her to buy a present for Hyugga" Hotaru replied for me.
"Oh, i see" Ruka-pyon said. "Want to come?" i inquired. "No, i have to take care of one of the animals, it apperently got a cold. he said
"Oh, ok, plese tell them to get better" i said smiling,"bye" i said and dragged hotaru off.
BAKA
i fell and rubbed my sore head. "Mou! Hotaru!" i said teary.
"Who said you can drag me?" She said. "Are you ok?" a kind voice said.
"Yuu!!" i said. I got up. "You sound excited" he said.
"I'm going to Central Town!" i said happily. " I see, have fun" he said smiling.
"Ok! Bye" i waved and walked away with Hotaru.
Once we were at Central town, Hotaru asked, "What are you going to buy for him?"
i thought about it for a few secounds. "Hm, maybe a ____?" i asked.
"Hmmm, maybe we can go there" she said and pointed to this cute shop.
Ding-ga-ling
the doorbell rang. "Welcome" a woman said. i smiled. Hotaru nodded. i looked around and saw what i was looking for. It was so cute!.
"I'll buy this please" i said. The woman smiled. "That is 40 rabbits" she said. "But, isn't it suppose to be at least 70 rabbits?" i asked.
"You'll get a discount, since i know you are buying it for a present" She said.
"Arigato!!!" i said. I paid, then left. "Are you going to buy a present for Natsume?" i asked hotaru.
"I have one already" she said with a evil glint. i sweat-dropped. Once we arrived at the classroom, it was decorated. "Hey guys, Mikan is back with Hotaru" Koko said.
"Where were you??" demanded Permy. "I was at Central Town" i said. "WHAT??" she screamed.
BAKA, yes hotaru fired it.
"Clam down" Hotaru said plainly. "Can you help us?" Anna asked. "Sure!" i said as i trook off my coat and my hat. I helped make food, until it was done. "I'll get Natsume-kun!" Permy yelled.
But, Hotaru said, "No, Mikan will do it" Everyone was staring at her. "Um, ok" i said as i took off for Natsume, but i bumped into this blonde hair girl with blue eyes. "Sorry!" i apologized"
"Don't worry" she said. "Are you new here?" i asked. "Yes, my name is Luna, Koizumi Luna"

i end it here~!!!

wow! there's this "luna" again make another one!! be fast plzz!
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another chapter please! it doesn't seem finished to me...
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