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Posted 8/11/08 , edited 8/11/08

Summary:

This story is about an UGLY girl who had a crush on a particular boy. The boy left her Heart-broken and it almost led her to commit suicide but, another guy saves her. School is back and the girl learned to beautify herself only to meet the guy she likes kissing another girl. Who is there to comfort her? It's a surprise...LOL....



note: i'm gonna continue this if you guys can manage to make me continue it...
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Posted 8/11/08

sounds very interesting ^-^ i vote for it to continue X3
Posted 8/11/08
sounds interestinggg
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Posted 8/12/08
interesttingg~ kyuuu (:
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kintsuchl wrote:

interesttingg~ kyuuu (:


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Posted 8/16/08


Chapter 1: The Meeting

Early one day, a girl tripped and almost fell only to be caught in mid-air.

"Huh?" she wondered. A guy caught her! She had never seen him before but he was really attractive! "Must be a transferee" she thought.

"Careful with your moves Miss Two-Left Feet." he said smirking at her.

"WHAT DID YOU SAY?!?!?" she shouted suddenly grabbing him by the collar of his polo shirt causing her to notice the clock behind him.

"What too scared to hit me?" the boy coolly said.

"SHUT UP JERK! I'M LATE" and she sped off.
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"You're late!" the teacher scolded.

"Isn't that obvious?" she thought and went to her seat. Then it hit her, "My Bag!!!" she screamed mentally.

"Now I shall introduce to you the new transferee." the teacher said.

A student stood before the whole class, she noticed, but didn't care to look.

"I'm Takuto Yuu, nice to meet ya."

"Wait i know this voice.." she thought and looked at the guy in front."...the guy from this morning!!"

"So Takuto-kun, please sit over there beside her." the teacher pointed at the empty seat beside her.

"Oh shit!!! Please tell me he doesn't recognize me! Please!" she screamed in her mind as he sat beside her.
"Oi." he called out.

" Y-Yes?" she stammered trying to face him.

He told her to come closer.

And she did.

" I saw 'it'" he whispered.

"'it?'"

" P.a.n.t.y."

"WHAT?!?!" she almost shouted out loud.

"Shh."

"You saw?!"she asked angrily.

"Ya really wanna know?"

"Yeah."

he got closer to her and she punched the top of his head.

"Pervert!" she said still angry.

"Ow~ ya didn't have to hit me." he complained.

"Serves you right." she concluded.

"Here." he handed her a bag.

"My Bag!!" her face brightened. "Thank you Takuto!" she smiled.

"I-Its nothing to thank for. I just found it on the floor." he said looking away and stammering.

"He IS cute.." she thought.
Posted 8/20/08

azurie_sakura wrote:



Chapter 1: The Meeting

Early one day, a girl tripped and almost fell only to be caught in mid-air.

"Huh?" she wondered. A guy caught her! She had never seen him before but he was really attractive! "Must be a transferee" she thought.

"Careful with your moves Miss Two-Left Feet." he said smirking at her.

"WHAT DID YOU SAY?!?!?" she shouted suddenly grabbing him by the collar of his polo shirt causing her to notice the clock behind him.

"What too scared to hit me?" the boy coolly said.

"SHUT UP JERK! I'M LATE" and she sped off.
_________________________________________________________________________________________

"You're late!" the teacher scolded.

"Isn't that obvious?" she thought and went to her seat. Then it hit her, "My Bag!!!" she screamed mentally.

"Now I shall introduce to you the new transferee." the teacher said.

A student stood before the whole class, she noticed, but didn't care to look.

"I'm Takuto Yuu, nice to meet ya."

"Wait i know this voice.." she thought and looked at the guy in front."...the guy from this morning!!"

"So Takuto-kun, please sit over there beside her." the teacher pointed at the empty seat beside her.

"Oh shit!!! Please tell me he doesn't recognize me! Please!" she screamed in her mind as he sat beside her.
"Oi." he called out.

" Y-Yes?" she stammered trying to face him.

He told her to come closer.

And she did.

" I saw 'it'" he whispered.

"'it?'"

" P.a.n.t.y."

"WHAT?!?!" she almost shouted out loud.

"Shh."

"You saw?!"she asked angrily.

"Ya really wanna know?"

"Yeah."

he got closer to her and she punched the top of his head.

"Pervert!" she said still angry.

"Ow~ ya didn't have to hit me." he complained.

"Serves you right." she concluded.

"Here." he handed her a bag.

"My Bag!!" her face brightened. "Thank you Takuto!" she smiled.

"I-Its nothing to thank for. I just found it on the floor." he said looking away and stammering.

"He IS cute.." she thought.




ohhh~
i likee ittt! =D
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Posted 8/20/08
i likeee more more! ^_^
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Posted 8/21/08
thank you~!!!
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Posted 8/21/08
i luv it! It's so kawaii! I can't wait until the next chapter! <3
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