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haha its ok...take ur time xD writers' block sucks =X
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AWW It's so SAD!! more please?
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It's super sad but at the same time so good!!
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Posted 8/20/08

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It's super sad but at the same time so good!!


i kno...rofl & thanx
Posted 8/20/08

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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:

It's super sad but at the same time so good!!


i kno...rofl & thanx :D


No prob will be waiting for the next chap!!

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~ne, Yuuki-chan (is it okay to call you dat??)
why is just 8 chapters only??
I wanna look forward to it too~
it's because I know the pain of having an illness like this...
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Posted 10/11/08
Yuuki chan!! Hows the next epi going??
ahahahah! tanoshimi!!!!
ja ne!!
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Posted 10/11/08

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~ne, Yuuki-chan (is it okay to call you dat??)
why is just 8 chapters only??
I wanna look forward to it too~
it's because I know the pain of having an illness like this...


yea~ you can call me that :]
the reason why it's only 8 chapters...is cuz i'm having writers block >.< ahh
:] but i'll try to write the next part tomorrow!
did you hear that?? *talkin to other people who are wondering when next part would be up* lol xD
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WOAH??
ur writing a new chap??
OMGosh!!
can't wait!!
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Ch. 9

Doctor Natsumi looked down, avoiding Ryosuke’s eyes.


Ryosuke: Doctor Natsumi, why can’t you tell me?
Doctor Natsumi: Because, it’s personal. If you really want to know, you will have to ask her yourself.
Ryosuke: Alright.


Ryosuke was having second thoughts about asking her. “Will I hurt her feelings by asking?” were the only thoughts going through his head. But, he wanted to know so badly. He wanted to get to know Tomoki more. He was in deep thoughts, but slowly drifted off to sleep.

The next morning, he walked into Tomoki’s room.


Ryosuke: Good morning Tomoki-chan!!
Tomoki: Oh, hey Ryo-chan! They had your favorite for breakfast this morning!
Ryosuke: Yea! I know! I ate all of my breakfast.
Tomoki: Good boy! *laughs*
Ryosuke: Hey~ I’m not a dog…*pouts*


Ryosuke and Tomoki laugh together.


Tomoki: Why did you come so early today?
Ryosuke: Why? Uh..I missed you?
Tomoki: *blushes* Really?!
Ryosuke: Haha! NOT!!
Tomoki: -_- Don’t you ever…joke around with me…or else…
Ryosuke: *gulp* or else?
Tomoki: I will tell Doctor Natsumi that you wrap the tomatoes up with napkins so you don’t have to eat it!
Ryosuke: O_O! Nooo!
Tomoki: *giggles* That’s what I thought!
Ryosuke: T__T ebil…
Tomoki: =P but really, why did you come so early?
Ryosuke: I …needed to talk to you.
Tomoki: About?
Ryosuke: ettou…I don’t want to hurt your feelings, demo I want to know so badly!
Tomoki. Don’t worry.
Ryosuke: Eh…


Ryosuke was about to ask, but something made him not want to ask. Should he?


Ryosuke: *deep breathe* Can I ask what illness you have?
Tomoki: *surprised, then looks down*
Ryosuke: AH! GOMEN! GOMEN! You don’t have to answer me! Gomen~! >.<
Tomoki: *looked up and smiled* It’s okay. And, the illness I have is spinocerebellar ataxia. (like Aya in one litre of tears =’[)
Ryosuke: Oh…gomen if I hurt your feelings. And, since you told me yours, I’ll tell you mine. My illness is lymphoma.
Tomoki: Ah, souka. But, can we talk about something else?
Ryosuke: Oh! Yea, sorry!
Tomoki: Well, what now?
Ryosuke: I don’t know.


Someone came into the room.


Tomoki’s mom: Tomoki! I brought your clothes! I’ll put it in the drawer for you.
Ryosuke: Oh, Ah! Hajimemashite, Yamada Ryosuke desu. Gomen for intruding. I guess I should go now. Bye.
Tomoki’s mom: Don’t worry about it, I’m leaving anyways. Bye Tomoki.


Tomoki’s mom walked out the door.


Ryosuke: Was it all right for me to stay? Wouldn’t you want to spend some time with your mom?
Tomoki: *silent*
Ryosuke: Ah! Gomen for invading in your privacy again!
Tomoki: It’s okay. *smiles* My mom hates me. So does my dad. It’s all because of my illness! They don’t talk to me anymore. It’s rare if they even talk to me when I’m in the hospital.
Ryosuke: That’s not true!
Tomoki: *yelling* “It Is! You probably wouldn’t know, because your parents love you.” They treat me differently. Like, I’m a bother to them.
Ryosuke: ..gomen..
Tomoki: It’s not your fault…You should go back to your room, so I can cool my head. Gomenne..
Ryosuke: No, it’s okay. And I’m really sorry.


Ryosuke waved bye to Tomoki and left the room. He felt really sorry for talking about her family and illness.


Ryosuke: *sigh*

Ending Theme: Tamaki Nami - Promise
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=zVGLNQEVZRk

~~END~~
OHMYGOSHHHH!!!! hiiii! lol sorry for the very, very long wait!
ohemgee! what will happen to ryosuke and tomoki's friendship???? eek!
ryosuke you baka! girl's hearts are breakable ne?
well, that's what boys are, they don't know lol
i'll write next part, soon?? or maybe not? but yea..
I'll try to write it soon! well...hope you liked it! byyyeeeeee<3
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Posted 10/11/08
OMGosh!!
poor Tomoki!!!!!!!

I really love this fic!!
keep it up!!
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OMGosh!!
poor Tomoki!!!!!!!

I really love this fic!!
keep it up!!


ahaha~~ gomen for the really really short chapter xD i tried =[
and thanks for commenting!!!! love ya<3
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hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
poor Tomoki!!!!!!!

I really love this fic!!
keep it up!!


ahaha~~ gomen for the really really short chapter xD i tried =[
and thanks for commenting!!!! love ya<3



x0x0!! ^-^
I love it!!
please write more!! xDD
not pressuring you though!! ^-^
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Ch. 9

Doctor Natsumi looked down, avoiding Ryosuke’s eyes.


Ryosuke: Doctor Natsumi, why can’t you tell me?
Doctor Natsumi: Because, it’s personal. If you really want to know, you will have to ask her yourself.
Ryosuke: Alright.


Ryosuke was having second thoughts about asking her. “Will I hurt her feelings by asking?” were the only thoughts going through his head. But, he wanted to know so badly. He wanted to get to know Tomoki more. He was in deep thoughts, but slowly drifted off to sleep.

The next morning, he walked into Tomoki’s room.


Ryosuke: Good morning Tomoki-chan!!
Tomoki: Oh, hey Ryo-chan! They had your favorite for breakfast this morning!
Ryosuke: Yea! I know! I ate all of my breakfast.
Tomoki: Good boy! *laughs*
Ryosuke: Hey~ I’m not a dog…*pouts*


Ryosuke and Tomoki laugh together.


Tomoki: Why did you come so early today?
Ryosuke: Why? Uh..I missed you?
Tomoki: *blushes* Really?!
Ryosuke: Haha! NOT!!
Tomoki: -_- Don’t you ever…joke around with me…or else…
Ryosuke: *gulp* or else?
Tomoki: I will tell Doctor Natsumi that you wrap the tomatoes up with napkins so you don’t have to eat it!
Ryosuke: O_O! Nooo!
Tomoki: *giggles* That’s what I thought!
Ryosuke: T__T ebil…
Tomoki: =P but really, why did you come so early?
Ryosuke: I …needed to talk to you.
Tomoki: About?
Ryosuke: ettou…I don’t want to hurt your feelings, demo I want to know so badly!
Tomoki. Don’t worry.
Ryosuke: Eh…


Ryosuke was about to ask, but something made him not want to ask. Should he?


Ryosuke: *deep breathe* Can I ask what illness you have?
Tomoki: *surprised, then looks down*
Ryosuke: AH! GOMEN! GOMEN! You don’t have to answer me! Gomen~! >.<
Tomoki: *looked up and smiled* It’s okay. And, the illness I have is spinocerebellar ataxia. (like Aya in one litre of tears =’[)
Ryosuke: Oh…gomen if I hurt your feelings. And, since you told me yours, I’ll tell you mine. My illness is lymphoma.
Tomoki: Ah, souka. But, can we talk about something else?
Ryosuke: Oh! Yea, sorry!
Tomoki: Well, what now?
Ryosuke: I don’t know.


Someone came into the room.


Tomoki’s mom: Tomoki! I brought your clothes! I’ll put it in the drawer for you.
Ryosuke: Oh, Ah! Hajimemashite, Yamada Ryosuke desu. Gomen for intruding. I guess I should go now. Bye.
Tomoki’s mom: Don’t worry about it, I’m leaving anyways. Bye Tomoki.


Tomoki’s mom walked out the door.


Ryosuke: Was it all right for me to stay? Wouldn’t you want to spend some time with your mom?
Tomoki: *silent*
Ryosuke: Ah! Gomen for invading in your privacy again!
Tomoki: It’s okay. *smiles* My mom hates me. So does my dad. It’s all because of my illness! They don’t talk to me anymore. It’s rare if they even talk to me when I’m in the hospital.
Ryosuke: That’s not true!
Tomoki: *yelling* “It Is! You probably wouldn’t know, because your parents love you.” They treat me differently. Like, I’m a bother to them.
Ryosuke: ..gomen..
Tomoki: It’s not your fault…You should go back to your room, so I can cool my head. Gomenne..
Ryosuke: No, it’s okay. And I’m really sorry.


Ryosuke waved bye to Tomoki and left the room. He felt really sorry for talking about her family and illness.


Ryosuke: *sigh*

Ending Theme: Kiroro - Best Friend
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=KNX-N0TitNQ
~~END~~
OHMYGOSHHHH!!!! hiiii! lol sorry for the very, very long wait!
ohemgee! what will happen to ryosuke and tomoki's friendship???? eek!
ryosuke you baka! girl's hearts are breakable ne?
well, that's what boys are, they don't know lol
i'll write next part, soon?? or maybe not? but yea..
I'll try to write it soon! well...hope you liked it! byyyeeeeee<3


mm..yea okie okie :] i'm gonna change the ending theme song thingy..kk?
it's gonna be
Tamaki Nami - Promise
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=zVGLNQEVZRk
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Yamada's being innocent in here... *hehe*
LoLz!
poor Tomoki, being ignored by her parents...
why're parents so cruel?!
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