E21 Fan Fic!!
Posted 8/12/08 , edited 8/12/08
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Suzuna shivered from the cold as she stepped outside on the balcony, staring at the night sky above her. The party inside was getting way too bizarre for her taste, as her brother had started squirting beer out of his nose. Suzuna didn't know why she even bothered, so she decided to distance herself and get some nice fresh air instead.

She heard the door clanking behind her, and Sena walked out to stand beside her leaning on the railing. "Hey," he whispered with a light smile. "Whats up?"

"Nothing much," Suzuna replied, her gaze not leaving the sky. A light breeze blew a few strands of her hair and it was then she shivered. He couldn't understand why he found her so fragile like a china doll when she did that. Maybe it was because of the way she closed her eyes, how she trembled and bit her bottom lip, or maybe it was how she wrapped her arms, almost gracefully, around her own body to try and warm herself up; either way, he found it extremely cute.

"Here..." he said with a raspy tone, as he leaned away from the railing to take off his sport jacket. Wrapping it around her shoulders, Sena began to rub his hand in a circular motion on her back to arouse the warmth of his jacket on her body. "You okay now?"

Suzuna's face turned pink, and she turned her head to smile at him. "Yes, thank you," she whispered. She then realized the weather was getting colder by the minute. "But... What about you?"

"I'll be fine," he said with a small grin, a hand reaching back to scratch at the thick locks of brown hair, making sure to avoid that intense gaze of hers. "I'm already wearing two layers, so I'll be okay." Then he lifted his free hand, pointing at her clothes beneath the jacket. "You're only wearing a tank top, s-so you need it more than me."

Her smile became a genuine one as Sena leaned back on the railing to observe the stars above them. She only recently began to realize how he was completely different from other men; maybe a coward and wuss sometimes, yes, but he was also very reliable, smart, selfless and honest. Sometimes she chose to ignore these traits, but seeing him shiver a little bit from the cold beside her without even asking for his jacket back made her realize why she started to like him in the first place. That, and he was also extremely cute whenever he wore his furious or bold expression on his face.

It was then Sena heard a yawn escaping from her mouth, as she casually rested her head on his shoulders. This caused the boy to blush, as Suzuna sighed under her breath. "I'm so tired..."

Only, she really wasn't. She just wanted an excuse to be close to him.

Still flushing a bit, Sena sighed with exhaustion. He could hear the holler of laughter behind them back inside of his apartment, where the party was still taking place. He smiled weakly, and though he hesitated at first, his hand found a comfortable place on Suzuna's back.

This was going to be a long night.

BY YUKIKAZE AT http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/Yuki-Kaze

THANKS FOR READING :3333
Posted 8/12/08
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Posted 8/21/08
Ya-ha! ^_^ Great story Soooo kawaii XP ^_^ I'm trying to make an Eyeshield 21 multi chapter story right now (still on hard copy) and I'm kinda running out of ideas hehe XP
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Posted 10/3/08
it's so cute! I love it a lot! good job with it
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Posted 12/8/08
nice story, i hope i can wrote a story too..
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Posted 2/9/11 , edited 2/9/11
WhiteWitch ad new character, i suggest a someone a year younger then sena.....make him look like my profile pic


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Posted 2/9/11
i like the story, it does give eyeshield a new romantic tweak but its a good tweak
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Posted 2/21/11
Is it ok if I post mine here? I have the whole thing on fanfiction.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6748899/1/Eyeshield_21_America
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