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Opening theme: Doushite *why did i fall in love* by DBSk
Ending theme: Star time by HSJ
Preview: Hiroko and Riko saw the bullet board, read about the contest (is my fic boring)


Chapter 4



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kyaa! first one to read it!...nwey, there goes yuya's "cool" side again...
and poor yabu though, he's hiding away from Erika...yosh!keep up the good work ne~
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^___^ yaay! hahah lol xD keep it up! T__T that was shorter than ur other ones lol
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F / United states. yay.
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Great work!!!!
It's awesome!!!
Can't wait for more!
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Preview: Mr.T.Yuya was about to pick who's going to help with the boys


Chapter 5



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omg....can't wait!!!
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waaah!yabu got a solo part!...i hope he won't refuse this...
can't wait too...
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T___T another short chapter xDD lol
Keep up the good work!! ^___________^
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Cool!!
more please?? ^-^
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sugoi!! kyaaa i can' wait for it!! to exciting!! hehe omoshiro!! kyaaa me wnat more!! gomen me to demanding!! onegaishimasu
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Preview: Everybody is waiting for Yabu answer


Chapter 6

[Everybody agree with their solo part, but they are still waiting for Yabu answer]

Mr. T.Yuya: “Kota-san, are you going to take it or not?”

[all of them stare at Yabu also Riko]

Yabu: “I don’t want to take this solo part someone can take it”*in a tired mood*

[all the boys was so happy that he didn’t take it]

Student 3: “oh… can I take it”
Student 4: “no how about me”

[all the boys in that class start to fight over Yabu solo part]

Mr.T.Yuya: *trying to make them to be quiet*
Riko: *her anger came out* “SHUT UP”

[all the boys look at her]

Riko: *she got really mad* “Yabu, this time no refuse better take it. All the rest you guys will be the background singers and that’s all”
Yabu: *shouted back* “NO I’M NOT TAKEN IT”
Riko: *turn to him* “stop acting cool, you are embarrassing yourself”
Yabu: *Yabu laugh* “huh embarrassing myself, how about you, you’ll be embarrassed if I told that you fell…”
Riko: *angru back* “YOU, SHUT UP”
Mr. T.Yuya:*yelling at them* “Kota-san and Aida-san, plz quit it you guys are embarrassing yourself”

[then Riko look around and got embarrassed]

Riko: “I think I need to use the restroom” *look away and cool herself down*
*walk out from the classroom*
Mr. T.Yuya: “Kota-san you are taking the solo part, ok today class is done for today” *saying in a angry way*

[While Mr. T.Yuya left]

Daiki: “Yabu, why won’t you take it? I think this lyric is much better than the others one”
Inoo: “Yeah, I think this lyric is much better than the others one too, plus if you don’t want to do it why didn’t you throw the book at the board so that girl will get scared”
Yuya: “Inoo, you are so baka”*acting cool*
Hikaru: “don’t do that to a kawaii girl”
Yabu: “a Kawaii girl, pshh she isn’t that Kawaii” *doing weird face while saying Kawaii*
Hikaru: “Pshh Yabu, why are you so pissed huh? It’s only a solo part, plus like Daiki said this lyric is much better than the others one”
Yabu: “if it’s that girl that choose me to do it, no”
Daiki: “oh yeah, do you guys remember when Erika was helping us with this too, and she told Yabu to take the last solo and he agree to take it, YABU…..” *look at Yabu*
Hikaru: “OH YEAH, I remember, I know why he agree to take it, becuz he like Erika wooo..”
*Inoo and Daiki copy Hikaru*

~BREAK~

[Riko came out from the restroom]

Riko: “that baka uhh so mad at him”

[Aoi and Kiako saw her, ran to her]

Aoi: *shouted* “RIKO-CHAN”
*Riko turn around and saw them*
Riko: “oh…Aoi and Kiako”
*they got to her*
Kiako: “what are you doing?”
Riko: “oh jux came out from the restroom”
Aoi: “I saw your mouth was moving, what’s up?”
Riko: “ah nothing, jux having problem in music class”
Aoi: “eh..really what happen?”
Kiako: “stop it Aoi if she doesn’t want to tell, then just forget it ok, so where Hiroko-chan?”
Riko: “Hiroko, she might be downstair”
Aoi: “let’s go find her then”

[so all three was walking down the stair, then Erika saw Riko was walking downstair]

Erika: “RIKO”
*All three look up*
Erika: “where are you going?”
Riko: “we’re going to Hiroko”
Erika: “oh can I join?”
Riko: “sure”
*Erika ran down stair, Riko saw some milk was on the floor (it was there after Riko and them was walking downstair, two girls walk pass them when Erika saw Riko)*

Riko: *Shouted* “ERIKA?”*shock*
Erika: “ahhh”
*ka boom, twist her ankle and fall on the ground*
Erika: *teary eye* “I twist my ankle”
*all three went to her*
Riko: “are you ok?” *with a worry face*
*Erika didn’t answer, her eye was watering Riko look at her eye*
Kiako: “I think we should take her to the nurse room”
Riko: “ok”

[They lifting Erika up, Aoi and Kiako hold Erika and they went downstair first, then Riko walk after them. When she passed a hallway on her right, she heard 2 girls was talking and laughing about Erika accident. So Riko hide behind the wall and peek out a little bit and it was, Kazumi and Aya that did that. Riko got pretty piss]

Will she go yell at those two girls??
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's great!!!!!!!!!! hehehee
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hai i agree with pafoua chan...this part is great..and now its a bit longer...good job!!!
keep up the good work licous!
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^_________^ awesome!! haha keep it up please! xDD
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Preview: Remeber Erika have twist her ankle and they went to the nurse room


Chapter 7

~In the nurse room~

[Hiroko came in]

Hiroko: “what happen?” *tired becuz she was running*
Aoi: “OH, Hiroko-chan”
Riko: “She fell down the stairs, and her ankle twist”
*Hiroko walk to Erika*
Hiroko: “are you ok??”*worry*
Erika: *look down* “yeah” *with a quiet voice”
Riko: “what’s wrong?”
Erika: “I’m having a contest this week and I don’t know if I’m going to make it becuz my ankle”
Riko: “what contest?”
Erika: *look up* “it’s designing your best on the wall”
*Riko&Hiroko look at eachother*
Aoi: “oh that, that’s so hard why did you sign up for”
Hiroko: “what is it?”
Kiako: “is where you go in front of the wall and try to fill up the wall with pretty design”
Riko: “wah, that’s hard becuz you have to walk back and forth”
Erika: “I don’t want to lose this yr becuz last yr I have lost and this yr I don’t want to lose again” * a sad face*

[Hiroko feels sorry for Erika]

Hiroko: “I’ll take your place” *look at her*
*all of them look at her*
Riko: “Hiroko, are you sure?” *with a worry face*
Hiroko: “no Problem”
Aoi: “Hiroko, you’re good at this too?”
Riko: “she have learn designing stuff when she was like 8”
*all the three look at her with shocking*
Kiako: “really what kind of designing do you do too?”
Hiroko: “well, I’m not that good but I’m good a cake designing, fashion designing, and all the rest is just drawing”
Aoi: “SUGOII”
Erika: *feel more relax* “then you can do it for me right?”
Hiroko: “yeah, I’ll try all my might”
Erika: “I know you will, but the day will be this Friday during school”
Riko&Hiroko: “EH…” *both got shock*(Riko have her appointment that day and Hiroko always goes with her)
Erika: “what’s wrong?”
Riko: “oh nothing, we are just curious becuz it’s so fast haha, right Hiroko?” *fake smiling looking a hiroko*
Hiroko: “Ha..ha…hai” *with a worry face*

~During P.E.~

[Riko and Erika sitting down at the bench]

Riko: “Erika how long have you been doing that wall designing?”
Erika: “I started when I was a freshmen”
Riko: “oh…”

[Hikaru came to them]

Hikaru: “Hey, Erika and Riko”*tired way*
Erika: “oh Hikaru, what’s up?”
Hikaru: “nothing much jux tired playing soccer”
Erika: “oh yeah”
Hikaru: “yeah”
*they was quiet for a while*
Hikaru: “ah~ hope to see her today?”
Erika: “huh who??”
*Hikaru look at Erika with a smile*
Hikaru: “no one”
Erika: “you’re in love”
Hikaru: “NO” *he shouted*
Riko: *cover her ear*
Hikaru: “oh sorry Riko, I shouldn’t shouted haha gomen”
Riko: *laugh* “that’s ok”

[Then Inoo came to them too]

Inoo: “hi Erika and Riko, Erika I heard that you twist your ankle are you hurt”
Hikaru: “Baka, it’s not are you hurt is, are you ok?”
Inoo: “soo… does it matter?”*pissing face*
Erika: “Sorry their group is always like this haha” *saying to Riko*
Inoo: “Riko-chan sorry about awhile ago, Yabu shouldn’t shouted at you he doesn’t act like that at all but I don’t know, after he got..” *Hikaru shouted*
Hikaru: “REJECTED”
*Erika&Riko both cover their ear*
Hikaru: *look at Erika & Riko* “Ah gomen haha”
Inoo: *continue his story* “after he got rejected, he feels pretty bad, so hopefully you don’t mind”
Erika: “eh, so he was upset when I rejected him” *with a confusing face*
Inoo: “hai, I was about to tell him to do those…” *Hikaru interrupt him and took over*
Hikaru: “Inoo, you don’t have to talk about your stupid idea that you told us yesterday, probably they don’t even want to hear it, but anyway Riko who’s that girl that you were walking home with? I want to know her”
Erika: “eh, so you want to meet Hiroko”
Hikaru: “umm…”
Riko: “oh my friend yesterday I went home with, she’s Sota Hiroko”

[When Riko finish saying her name Yuya came over]

*Erika and all 3 of them look up*
Yuya: “hey you two hurry let’s go play soccer”
Hikaru: “ah…so tired, well gotta go Riko and Erika that guy is really scary when he get mad haha”*pointed at Yuya*
Inoo: “yeah”
*so both of them stood up and walk away also Yuya, but then Yuya turn*
Yuya: “Erika, hope your ankle feel much better” *and walk away*
Erika: *heart beat so fast*
Riko: *look at her and look away*

~AFTER SCHOOL~

[Walking toward the gate]

Aoi&Kiako: “CHOTTO MATTE” *both shouted*
*Riko&Hiroko turn*
Aoi: “Can we walk with you girls?”
Hiroko: “uh uh sure”*looking at both of them*
Kiako: “ok kool”

[All of them was about to walk out, but then Riko remember her medicine was in her desk]

Riko: “Ano…Hiroko I forgot my medicine at my desk, you guys go first ok?”
Hiroko: “eh..I’ll get it for you?”
Riko: “no no that’s fine, I’ll go get it ok ja~”
*Aoi&Kiako look at eachother with confusing face*
*Riko ran away*
Hiroko: “umm I guess we should go first”
Kiako: “oh ok”
*they left*

Plz look forward to the next chapter (as you guys see i stop doing those Question at the end of the fic)
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