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"Internal Instincts" by yaidoll |
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Warning, this manga is incomplete at the moment.
This was one of the first manga I wrote with the help of my friends and mostly my husband. As of now, there r only 25 eps. Due to the Publication of Kokoro-ni, I will retake this manga once Kokoro-ni has been completed. Hope u enjoy and pls read it, its very different from my other one! Enjoy! Character profiles. Asami Mitsu: ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Age: 15 Blood Type: O Hair/Eyes: Short Brown Hair/ Blue eyes Height: 5'3" Birthday: March 15 Occupation: Agent for the Genjo Agency Love: Koji 15-year-old agent, who works for Heiji (An older man that knows more than he is letting on). Her partners are Yoshin and Chiba. She is quiet, never showing her true feelings about anything. She doesn’t want anyone to know that deep down she cares about everything. (She rarely ever says anything at all, BUT WHEN SHE SAYS WHAT’S ON HER MIND, EVERYONE BETTER LISTEN!!) She is also strong willed, and when she sets her mind to do something, she does it! She knows some martial arts, but she prefers her gun any day. Even though Mitsu might look tough, reality is that she is a scared little girl. She is very fragile and vulnerable. But that is something she does not care for anyone to know, and that goes double about her past. In fact she likes to keep to herself. She is an enigma to the people she works with. (This is a personal battle that she alone must cope with). After she meets Koji, her personality and her life begin to change. Hara Yoshin: ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Age: 19 Blood Type: B Hair/Eyes: Short Brownish Blond/Brown Height: 5'9" Birthday: January 2 Occupation: Agent and partner to Mistu Love: Kimiko 19-year-old agent (partner to Mitsu). He is very handsome!! (The tall dark and handsome type) With short black hair and brown eyes. His personality is a bit extreme! He is always in a overly happy mood that is when he has gotten paid. (Though when he gets angry he lets everyone know just how he feels). He goes to the extreme in everything he does. He loves his job! (That’s not the only thing he likes, HE LOVES WOMEN!!) He is always going out with a woman. He is a “one night stand” man. When he is not with a woman, he enjoys tormenting Chiba when he has nothing better to do. He likes to make fun of people because they are not as good as he is. (I know even though he sounds like a total jerk, deep down he is a good guy) Yoshin is secretly in love with Mitsu and is constantly trying to put “the moves” on her, but he is stopped by Chiba. He soon however, meets Kimiko and realizes that she is the only girl for him. Chiba: ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Age: 17 Height: 5'6" Hair/Eyes: Short Green/Black Occupation: Laboratory assistent at the Genjo agency Love: Yoshin 17-year-old android. He is very beautiful and is usually mistaken for a little girl. His features are not masculine at all!! But Chiba doesn’t mind at all. He is quite happy with the way he is made. He enjoys being with his two best friends Yoshin and Mitsu. And is also quite in love with Yoshin, but he is also attracted to Mitsu (I guess he just can’t make up his mind about his sexuality, go figure!!) and is always watching out for her. Which he has to do constantly, because Yoshin just can’t keep his hands to himself! Chiba normally stays at the base and helps in the lab. Koji a.k.a Ukyo, son of the Aki: ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Age: 21 Blood Type: A Hair/Eyes: Long Blond/Deep Blue Height: 6'0" Birthday: October 17 Occupation: ex-warrior for the Burakuken Foundation Love: Mitsu Who is this mystery man anyway? When he was sent to destroy Mitsu, he was seriously wounded by an explosion, which left him in Mitsu’s care. They soon form a friendship (This is when Mitsu tired of calling him X25 changes his name to Koji) but because he is an experimental project, Nobukazu will do anything to get his super human being back. Nobukazu, who performed many horrible experiments on him, hoping to create an all time killing machine, raised Koji. Koji is 21 years old with dark blond hair and deep blue eyes. He has the ability to change into a horrible creature with fangs and claws. When Nobukazu tries to reclaim his possession, Koji leaves with Mitsu hoping to find out where he came from and try to become human once again. Nobukazu: ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Age: 40 Blood Type: Unknown Hair/Eyes: Short Black/Black Height: 5'7" Occupation: Leader and founder of the Burakuken Foundation Love: Money/power The all time bad guy. This dude lets nothing stand in the way of him ruling the world. He has no emotion except hatred. His main enemy is Mitsu since she took his weapon away from him (that’s all Koji is to him a weapon!!). After finding a baby lying in the street, he took him in, but it was not what I would call a good deed. Nobu began to do experiments on this poor child; he then began training this child to be a killer with no emotions at all. (He would have Koji beaten to make him stronger, he also had a scientist change Koji’s DNA!!! That is why Koji has strange powers) Now he and all of his many followers try to regain control of X25 by having the news and other sources tell the public that a girl has stolen a very dangerous android!!!! (That doesn’t help Mitsu’s situation!! Not only is she being chased by Nobu and his friends, but the rest of the world as well!!! What a mess!!!) |
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Episode #1
** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Mitsu and Yoshin are sent to hack into the computer systems of the Communication’s centre. Once inside they head for the control room. The control room is a huge computer system that covers the entire room. The only place to walk is a metal plank used as a bridge. In the control room, Mitsu, who is suspended upside down by a cord, hacks into the main computer stealing important information as to where Nobukazu and his partners in crime are hiding. Mitsu uses her intellect to find the info needed while Yoshin watches the door. When Yoshin hears the door open he leaps over the side, and grabs a hold of Mitsu’s belt, they then both swing until they are under the plank. Yoshin, with one hand on Mitsu’s belt and the other holding on to metal bar attached to the plank, holds them under the plank until they hear the man walk by. He then lets go of Mitsu and climbs back onto the plank. After getting the info they came for, Mitsu pulls on the cord, and Yoshin pulls her up. They then sneak out of the building without being seen! Once inside their car, Yoshin brags, “Man, that was so easy, I wish all of are jobs were that easy.” Mitsu, then says, “Yeah, it was a piece of cake.” When they reach their home and base, they take their information to their boss. However, before they can get into the door of the Genjo Agency, Chiba runs out asking if all went well. He runs up to Yoshin giving him a big hug, “I was so worried about you Yoshin!” Yoshin pushes the android off and says, “Get the hell off of me!” They then head for the boss’s office. Once in, Mitsu tells Heiji (their boss), “We have found out that Nobukazu is over seeing a shipment of weapons this very night in a run down manufacturing plant.” “Good. This time we should be able to catch the Bastard.” Heiji then adds, “Are you sure no one saw you?” Yoshin replies, “I am sure that we were not spotted.” “Good. Mitsu, you are in charge of picking the agents to go with you on this mission.” “Yes sir!” * * * * (Before I go any further I would like to point out that the Bura Foundation and Genjo Agency have been rivals for a very long time. The Bura Foundation wants to be head of the Nation. {Another note: “President” of Japan is a man by the name of Aki Bunjiro. The Aki family has looked after Japan for 30 years. However, 20 some years ago the last heir vanished.} Now that there is no one to take the place of The Aki, after Bunjiro dies the Bura Foundation are trying there hardest to rule the nation. Almost everyone is in their favor! All except the Genjo agency, who can see past the foundations deceit and trickery.) That night, 10 of the agents prepare to enter the abandoned warehouse where the man in charge of the Burakuken Foundation is sure to be. A bomb is set at the door, and once it explodes, the agents rush in!! They are then all surprised at what awaits them, NOTHING!!! No one was in sight. During this Yoshin says to Mitsu, “I have a real bad feeling about this.” Mitsu however is not listening for at that moment she realizes that it is a trap. However, before she can state her thoughts, the foundation’s men (50 some) enter the warehouse, and the battle begins! The agency’s men are all highly trained in weapons and fighting. Nevertheless, 50 men are just too much. The foundation’s men take out one after the other of the agents. There is no way that the agents will win this battle. However, that does not stop them from retreating. There policy is to win or die trying. Mitsu could hear Heiji know, “Don’t give up until you are dead and even then you should fight!” Neither Mitsu, nor the other agents will give up. Mitsu who does not want to kill anyone tries not to fatally wound anyone. Yoshin gets wounded, making Chiba, who was helping and trying to protect Mitsu, run to his aide. More and more men are dieing or are wounded. The retreat is then called, because the building has caught fire and is now in an unstable condition. Mitsu holds some men back while Chiba gets Yoshin to safety. When Mitsu gets ready to leave as well, A man all in black (mask and everything) blocks her path. A new battle is set to begin!! Episode #2 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Mitsu points her gun at the mystery man, and the man just stands there, looking at her. This makes Mitsu uncomfortable, she does not know if she should talk or just shoot him. Nevertheless, Mitsu stands her ground, and shoots the man. But wait; with a speed that is not human, the man dodges the blast! The man then knocks her gun out of her hand using the same speed. Mitsu can’t believe her eyes, is this man for real? “Who the hell are you?” “That is none of your concern. Now, prepare yourself!” They then begin to fight, using martial arts. They are both good, for they block each other’s moves, but the masked man is faster and stronger!! Mitsu seeing that this man may be better than herself says, “Your not so bad… But you will not last for very much longer.” Mitsu then jumps in the air to do her finishing move that no one could possibly block. She spins in the air coming down so fast that no human would be able to stop the attack. the man grabs her and flings her from him. He then pouches her knocking her into the wall. The impact is so forceful that it knocks the air out of her, and she goes down. When Mitsu falls her hat, that she always wears to hide her identity, falls to the floor. She wears the hat so that no one will know that she is female. The mask figure stands there looking down at her; he seems to be thinking about something. Whatever it is, it is making him hesitant with what his next move should be. Mitsu holds her ribs and tries to stand, but she is only able to get on her hands and knees. The pain from her ribs is too unbearable. She is in trouble now, if only she had more strength, she could perhaps defeat this man. Mitsu, not yet wanting to admit defeat, looks up at her attacker. However, Mitsu is shocked to see inhuman eyes staring down at her through the eye slits in the mask. “What are you?” Her question goes unanswered for at that moment, there is an explosion and part of the roof comes crashing down onto the masked man! Mitsu pulls herself to her feet and looks down at the roof that is now covering the man. In the distance, there is the sound of more explosions as more of the building crumbles down. Still she looks down at the injured figure. At this, her eyes glaze over as she remembers a scene from her past. Mitsu remembers the terrible night that her father was killed. Someone had put a bomb in their house and when the bomb went off part of the second floor fell upon her father. Why was she remembering that now? Was it because this man was in the same predicament? Well, she could not just leave him here to suffer like her father did. She has made her decision; even though he works for the foundation, she will not let him die like this. Mitsu says, “Damn,” under her breath as she begins moving the pieces of the roof off of the man. Then using all of her strength, Mitsu drags the figure out into the night. A few moments later the rest of the building collapses. * * * * At the base, Yoshin’s wound has been dressed and both him and Chiba go ballistic worrying about Mitsu. “Damn it! How could you have just left her there? Damn you Chiba, if anything happens to her, I swear I will kill you!” Poor Chiba flings himself on the floor and starts to cry. He cannot help but to blame himself for leaving Mitsu in so much danger. “I’m sorry, it’s all my fault. I’m so sorry!” During this, Heiji enters the room and says, “You two stop your winning, besides, Mitsu should be back any minute now. Chiba do pick yourself off the ground… I do not like seeing queers cry.” (Both Yoshin and Chiba have their pouting scene for a few more seconds) Mitsu soon comes in dragging a body behind her. Once Mitsu gets into the door and knows that she is safe, she collapses! Yoshin, yells her name as he runs to her aide. Episode #3 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Mitsu awakens to the sound of Yoshin snoring. Yoshin fell asleep in a chair next to Mitsu’s bed as he watched over her during the night. Mitsu thinks that Yoshin looks so cute sleeping in her chair and that she would hate to wake him. She then shakes that thought off and pushes him out of the chair. Yoshin wakes up when he hits the floor. As he rubs his aching butt he says, “Well I see that you must be feeling better. Wouldn’t it seem more civilized to say, ‘Yoshin you sexy thing wake up.’ But no, you have to push me out of my chair! Thanks.” “You’re welcome.” Mitsu smiles at him. “So you were really worried about me? As you can see I am fine, you shouldn’t worry about me. You know very well that I can take care of myself.” “Oh, you can? Nice job you were doing last night, considering that you could have been KILLED!!!!” Mitsu lets his words sink in before she answers, in a sweeter tone, “I know that you care, but it is my life….” Yoshin cuts her off, “By the way, who is that guy you brought in last night?” The man! Of course how could she have forgotten him. Mitsu is no longer listening to Yoshin as he lectures her some more on taking care of herself. Mitsu gets out of the bed and pushes Yoshin out the door. She then gets dressed in her normal attire of black slacks with a white spaghetti strap shirt and a black jacket. Without her hat this time. But she does tuck it into her back pocket. She heads for sickbay, where the man is sure to be. However, she is side tracked when Heiji tells her that she is to place a bug in the phones at the Communication’s Centre. “Oh come on, I was just there! Why do I need to go back?” “Because, the people that work there are in league with the Foundation. And I want to keep a tight leash on them. I will not let what happened last night happen again. Now get going, when you finish this mission you will have the rest of the day off.” “Oh alright, I’m going.” Mitsu then heads outside and goes to the car where Yoshin is waiting patiently in the driver’s seat. Inside the car, Yoshin starts the engine and says, “So what took you so long, I have been waiting out here for at least thirty minutes.” “Lets just get this mission over with.” “Jeez, it sounds like someone is in a bad mood this morning. So what’s the problem?” “Nothing, I’m just tired, can we just go?” “Okay, okay. We’re going.” When the car takes off down the road Yoshin asks, “So what’s are mission anyway?” “We have to place a bug in the Communication’s Centre, so that Heiji can keep track of what’s going on and hopefully we will get a lead on the Foundation.” “That’s all, you mean we’re only tapping their phones? Damn I was hoping for something a little more challenging then that!” “Yeah well, beggars can’t be choosers. Besides after this mission we get the day off.” “Good…I’m going to the bar then. A man’s got to catch on his drinking. Do you want to come?” “No thanks, I have other stuff to do.” “Fine suit yourself.” Before they enter the building Yoshin waits patiently as Mitsu dresses in black so that she can sneak in without being noticed. Inside Yoshin goes to the front desk. The receptionist sitting behind the counter is a woman. Behind the woman’s desk is tiny T.V. showing what is going on in the building. Yoshin looks in one of the screens and sees Mitsu enter into the Centre’s main office. When the woman turns to check the screens, Yoshin distracts her laying on all of his charm. The woman is instantly smitten by him. Yoshin flirts with her until he hears a car horn honk in the parking lot. The mission had been complete. Yoshin kisses the woman on the mouth and says, “It was nice talking to you, thanks a lot.” Yoshin then heads for the door. The woman yells after him, “Thanks for what?” Yoshin just smiles and winks at her. He then leaves the Centre. Mitsu is seating in the passenger side of the car when Yoshin gets in. He then starts the engine saying, “Well that was fun.” “You just thought it was enjoyable because you got to flirt.” “What? I wasn’t flirting.” “Like hell you weren’t. Come on let’s go home.” “Fine, but I was not flirting, besides she isn’t even my type.” “What are you talking about, every girl is your type.” When Yoshin looks upset, Mitsu flicks him in the nose with her finger. Yoshin looks over at her and she sticks her tongue out at him. He then laughs and says, “Alright, so maybe I was flirting a little…” * * * * Inside the agency, Mitsu heads for sick bay to find the man that she had brought in last night. The cots are almost all filled up with injured agents. Mitsu heads to the back of the room, where she sees a man that she cannot recognize. The man is lying unconscious on the cot. She goes to him, as if some unknown force is pulling her to him. When she looks down at him, she is shocked to see a very handsome man. He is He has long blond hair. And scanning her eyes lower, Mitsu can see that he is also very muscular. His shirt was off and he has bandages rapped around his ribs. So, this was the man that had tried to kill her last night? When she reaches out to move his hair from his eyes, his hand shoots up grabbing her arm. He then grabs her gun out of its holder and pulls her to him placing the gun to her temple. Yoshin and Chiba who had just walked into sickbay pull out their guns also. The blond haired man stares at Chiba and Yoshin, no one says anything. Then a voice yells out, “Yoshin, Chiba put your weapons down!” The voice was that of Mitsu. Yoshin looks at her and sees she is serious, so both Yoshin and Chiba lower their guns. At the same time Mitsu with her free elbow jabs it into the man’s wounded side, and he lets her go. She then turns to him and say, “Well it’s a fine thanks I get for saving you, next time I will just let you die!” The man just looks at her confused with his gun pointed at her. Mitsu does some quick thinking, pulling her hat out of her back pocket, she quickly stuffs all of her hair into it as she puts it on her head. “Look familiar?” He then stares at her as he remembers, and slowly puts the gun down. Two agents then jump him from behind; the man does not even fight back as they start to beat him up. Mitsu yells at them to stop. She then tries to break them up but is pushed out of the way by a cocky older agent. Mitsu who is sore from last night tumbles to the floor, Chiba and Yoshin again run to her aide. The blond haired man sees Mitsu fall (He gets pissed. After all she did save him.) He then fights back beating the crap out of the guys, but because of his injured ribs he falls onto his hands and knees. More men along with Heiji hearing the commotion enter the room. In addition, one of the men who were beaten shouts. “He is an enemy. Kill Him!!!” Mitsu not knowing what she is doing flings herself over the blond haired man protecting him, as agents point their guns at him. Episode #4 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** “No! You are out of line Fumio. This man is no enemy!” (She did not have a clue as to why she lied! But if it would save his life she would do anything. But the question that went through her mind was WHY?) Fumio, the man who had yelled for them to kill them is cut off when he tries to speak. “What is going on here? Fumio, do you have shit for brains? Mitsu is my second in command! I trust her judgment. What she says goes! Is that understood?” Fumio glares down at Mitsu, who is still covering the man and says, “I quit, this is a bunch of shit!” With that he walks past Heiji who says, “You better pray that I never see you again.” Fumio leaves. (Talk about foreshadowing, make a note of this.) Heiji than walks over to Mitsu and says, “You don’t have to lay on him now. You can get up.” Everyone goes about his or her business. Mitsu gets up and helps the wounded man as well. She puts his arm around her neck so that she can help him stand. The man then looks down at her with another confused look on his face. Heiji talks to Mitsu as he looks at the man. “So this is the guy you dragged in here last night? Mitsu he is now your responsibility, if he gets out of line he will be killed… Don’t let me down on this one.” He motions for a man to put handcuffs on the blond haired man. Once this is done, Heiji leaves the room. “Yoshin, Chiba,” commands Mitsu, “come help me!” They run over and help Mitsu lay him back on a cot. (At this time, the blond man has again lost consciousness.) She then tells the medic to move a cot into her room. She will look after him from now on. The medic runs to do her bidding. Yoshin looks at her with disgust “Are you crazy, this guy tried to kill you!” “Yeah, but he didn’t know who I was until I put the hat on. He was just confused.” “You make him sound as if he is a lost puppy or something,” replies Yoshin. Mitsu stays silent as they then try to carry the man to her room and lay him again on a cot. (She does not mention the way his eyes looked when she first met him.) Mitsu is then left alone with the man on the cot. She then sits on her bed thinking about what had just happened. What had she done? What if her thinking was totally wrong? What if the man was really evil like Fumio said? She didn’t want to disappoint Heiji. He was like a father to her. She loved him as one, but never let it show. Mitsu then talks to the unconscious man, wishing that he could answer her questions. “Why did I save you? And why didn’t you fight those guys until I was thrown onto the floor.” She then gets closer to the man, so close that she can feel his breath on her face. She whispers, “What are you, anyway?” She then sits down on the bed again and patiently waits until the man wakes up. Night soon falls and the man still does not wake up. Mitsu takes this opportunity to take a bath. Mitsu goes into the bathroom that is connected to her room and takes a bath. As she bathes, Mitsu wonders about the man. Just what is he, surely no human being can have eyes like that. Moreover, why had she saved him, not once but twice? After all, she did not even know him and to make matters worse, this man works for the Foundation. She could not quite figure out what she should do with him. Maybe it would be better to tell Heiji the truth and let him deal with the problem. On the other hand, perhaps she should help this guy and find out what he is. Mitsu gives up, and draining the water out of the tub, Mitsu raps a towel around her and walks out of the bathroom heading for her closet. She then pulls out a robe and quickly changes into it. When Mitsu turns around, the blond haired man is awake and is staring at her. Episode #5 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Mitsu wonders how long the man had been staring at her. She then notices that again his eyes look normal, except that they are an unusual blue color. Had she been hallucinating thinking that she had seen a beast’s eyes when she first saw him? She just did not know. Mitsu stares back at the man, “Now that we are alone, there are some questions that I would like to ask you.” The man gives her a blank stare as if to say, “I don’t understand.” “Great! So I guess you can’t understand me uh? Now what am I to do?” “It would be nice if you would remove these.” Mitsu looks at the man in shock. He spoke! She then looks at what the man had been referring to when he said these. His handcuffs. Mitsu collects herself hoping the man didn’t see her shock. “I will take them off if you will answer my questions.” “Fine, but take these off first.” replies the man. Mitsu then begins her questions, “First you will answer and then I will take your cuffs off. Now, question one…” The man cuts her off. “Yes your first question was why did you save me. Well I can’t answer that one.” He looks up to see Mitsu’s shock. “You heard me? I thought you were unconscious! How?” Nevertheless, the man goes on as if she hadn’t said anything. “Next was ‘Why didn’t I fight back’ that is because I was hoping that they would kill me!” He says this kind of meanly. He then says. “Your last question, ‘what am I’ that I cannot answer either, for I don’t know, all I know is that I have a demon inside of me. Now that your questions are answered, take these off!” “What do you mean a demon?” The man does not answer; instead, he raises his hands to Mitsu. Taking the hint, Mitsu sighs and slowly walks up to the man and types in a code, on the handcuffs, causing them to open. They then fall to the floor as the man roughly grabs her pushing her down on the cot, so that she cannot move. He has her pinned so that she can’t move a muscle. “W-what are...y-you doing?” Mitsu is very uncomfortable with this new predicament. “Now I will ask you some questions!!!! Why did you save me?” He then rises onto his knees pulling her up as well and giving her shoulders a shake says, “Why didn’t you leave me there! I wanted to die and you ruined it!! It could have been finished there!! I needed to die.” He then releases her and looks down at his hands whispering, “Do you know what I am? I am evil, pure evil.” He then looks up at her again and Mitsu sees tears in his eyes. “Kill me.” Pleads the man. Mitsu almost in tears herself does not know what to do. She has never been in a situation like this one. She says under her breath, “Father, please help me know what to do.” after he tells her to kill him, he lets her go and she gets off the cot. The man then screams, “Kill me! If you don’t then your life will be in danger!” He then goes for the door, but stops when Mitsu blocks his path. “Where do you think you are going? You are my prisoner.” “I could hurt you or even kill you right now, if I wanted to.” “You won’t hurt me. You didn’t when you grabbed me and took my gun and you didn’t hurt me when you grabbed me just know.” The man then sighs in defeat and sits on the cot. “So what now. Anytime I could change and you could die. You haven’t seen what this evil is capable of. I have no control when the evil comes calling. It takes over and I am helpless against it.” “What do you mean by the evil inside of you?” The man looks at her and thinks. He then replies, “I change, I don’t know how or why, I just know that I feel something take control of my body, and I can’t do anything to stop it. Even my appearance changes. I have killed more men then I can even count. And the worst part of it is that I don’t even know that I have killed until the evil leaves my body.” “What do you mean, like a split personality or something? There is another being sharing your body with you?” “Something like that.” “Well can’t you go to a psychiatrists or something, I’m sure they have people that can help with this sort of thing.” “Stupid, it is not that simple. It is not just a split personality, there is a real monster living inside me! There is no way to stop it from taking over my body anytime it wants to, don’t you understand?” “So what your saying, is that you have a monster living inside you and it takes over your body when ever it wants to?” “That’s right.” “Well, that is the most preposterous thing I have ever heard in my life. Your crazy! I can’t believe that I am sitting here listening to this.” The man frowns at Mitsu, “So you think I am making this all up! I didn’t expect you to believe, but I know that you must have seen the beast, because when it left my body and I came to, you were on the ground looking up at me. Tell me did you not see the beast?” Mitsu remembers the way his eyes had looked like that of a large cat or something. Could it be that this man was telling her the truth? “Okay, so maybe I did see something weird about your appearance, but that does not prove anything… You work for Nobukazu, does he know?” “Know?” The man then gives an insane laugh, “Girl, he is the one who did this to me!” “What? What do you mean?” “I mean that Nobukazu put a beast inside of me.” This was just too much information for Mitsu to take. She was too tired and her brain was not functioning as good as it should. “All right, we will finish this in the morning. Lets get some sleep. And don’t even try to escape because this place is heavily guarded.” With that said Mitsu lies down in her bed pulling the covers up around her. She soon falls asleep. The man watches her sleep for a few minutes, but he then decides that it is time for him to leave. Nobukazu would be searching for him. He will have a better chance of not being found if he leaves now. The man then walks out of Mitsu room, closing the door behind him. In the morning, Mitsu wakes up and sees that the cot is empty. She then races out of her room and looks all over the agency for the blond haired man. Mitsu then returns to her cot when she realizes that the man is no longer here. Sitting down on her bed, Mitsu says,“I didn’t even get a chance to ask for his name.” (That’s sad…Will she ever see him again?) Episode #6 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Tears roll down Mitsu cheeks. Why was she crying? She never let anything upset her before. Why all of a sudden did she feel so terrible? It was that man! He had done this to her, some how he had gotten past some of her defenses. Mitsu wipes her tears away and gets out of bed. Getting dressed, Mitsu puts on her normal attire, which is the uniform of the agency. This time; however, she puts her hat on. When she heads for Heiji’s office to let him know about the man, she is met by Chiba. “So how’s that guy?” “Don’t even ask. He left last night.” “What! None of us were aware of this, how did he get out? There is no way he could have gotten past our security!” cries Chiba. “Well he did, so please just drop it!” Replies Mitsu. Chiba looks at his friend with concern. “Are you okay?” Mitsu looks down trying to hide her features. When she raises her head to look at Chiba, her expression is back to normal. “I’m fine, I didn’t get much sleep last night. I was too busy trying to get answers from that guy. You don’t need to worry about me.” Mitsu then smiles at Chiba, trying to reassure him. Together they walk into Heiji’s office. Inside Heiji, expecting them, looks up from his paper work, “So I take it that guy is no longer with us, ay?” “How did you know he was missing?” Asks Chiba. Mitsu makes no comment. Heiji continues, “I thought as much. He didn’t look like someone who likes to follow orders. But still…” He then looks at Mitsu, who still looks glum and seems to be interested in the floor, and says, “Are you alright? What happened last night?” Mitsu looks up and tries to look normal, “I’m fine! He told me that he works for Nobukazu and I got the feeling that he does not like Nobukazu that much… I am sorry that I let him get away, it is my fault. I fell asleep. I’m sorry, that I misjudged him.” “Hmm. You must remember this incident for the future. Make sure that you think next time.” Heiji then says to Chiba, “Leave the room, I would like to speak to Mitsu alone.” Chiba leaves looking back at Mitsu trying to give her support, he then disappears out the door, which closes behind him. Heiji then looks at Mitsu, “Now, what really happened last night?” Mitsu replies, “Just like I said, Sir.” “Well, then don’t tell me, but I know that wasn’t all that took place.” He then looks at the floor, because he is uncomfortable saying the next thing. “Mitsu whatever happened changed you in someway. You have let your guard down and that is not like you. From now on please take better care of yourself.” Mitsu, again in shock by this, looks at her boss. He then smiles and tells her, “If you don’t take care of yourself, I will make sure that you regret it! Now get out of my office, you’re starting to piss me off!” Mitsu smiles at him and walks out… As this was going on, Chiba finds Yoshin heading for Mitsu’s room. “Yoshin, if you’re looking for Mitsu is in talking to the Boss.” “Damn! I really wanted to talk to her… So what’s going on with that guy that she brought in the other night?” “What you didn’t hear? Mitsu said that he got away. She said that he left during the night.” “Damn it! I knew that she would not be able to handle a job like that.” “Come on Yoshin, don’t be too hard on her, she isn’t in any mood to take it this morning. She didn’t get much sleep last night.” Yoshin taking this new information in the wrong way, starts to growl, he thinks that Mitsu slept with the man and that was why she did not get any sleep. He gets angry and goes off in search of Mitsu. Chiba stares after Yoshin wondering what he had said to make Yoshin go ballistic. Chiba shrugs his shoulders,”Oh well.” Chiba then heads for the lab to do his daily duties not thinking anymore about Yoshin… However, as Chiba is doing something for the scientist, he realizes the cause for Yoshin’s distress, and knocks over a test tube with chemicals in it. The Chemicals spill all over the floor and the scientist yells at Chiba. Yoshin finds Mitsu in the cafeteria getting some lunch. He grabs Mitsu and puts her against the wall. “Um Yoshin, what are you doing?” Mitsu looks very agitated. “What did you think you were doing? How could you?” Mitsu can see that Yoshin is very upset and angry. “Did I miss something? What is going on Yoshin? Why are you acting this way?” “You know why! How could you sleep with him?” Mitsu looks at Yoshin again and then she shoves him hard so that he lets her go. “What are you talking about Yoshin?” “What? Did you, or did you not sleep with that guy? Chiba said that you didn’t get sleep last night.” Mitsu laughs,“Yoshin! I didn’t sleep with anyone! Chiba was right, I didn’t get any rest. But believe me that was not the reason.” Yoshin then sighs in relief and hugs Mitsu. “What is that for?” Yoshin then looks at her seriously with her still in his arms and says, “Mitsu there is something that I have wanted to tell you for a long time…” Mitsu looks up at him, not knowing where this conversation is leading. Yoshin then says, “I love you.” And with that said, he kisses her. Episode #7 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Yoshin kisses Mitsu. Mitsu pulls away from Yoshin just as Chiba enters the cafeteria. He saw everything. Mitsu glares at Yoshin smacking him across the face. She then takes off nearly running over Chiba in the process. Yoshin tries to go after her but is stopped by Chiba. “Get out of my way!” “What did you think you were doing when you kissed her?” replies Chiba. “That is none of your business! Get out of the way!” When Chiba doesn’t move, Yoshin pushes him down and runs after Mitsu. Chiba then picks himself off the floor and goes to get some lunch. He is very depressed because Yoshin yelled at him… Mitsu needing air leaves the agency. Outside she begins to walk, not knowing where she is going and not caring. What just happened? She just could not believe that Yoshin had actually kissed her. Yoshin was her friend, so why was he now telling her he loved her. Mitsu could not believe that Yoshin loved her, after all wasn’t he always going out on a date? Yoshin was nothing but a womanizer, there was no way that Yoshin actually felt anything for her, or was there? After all, had he not kissed her. He had even told her that he loved her. Could he actually love her? Mitsu walks along the sidewalk, passing many different stores and businesses. As she is walking, she has a flash back about her father’s death. She then remembers her promise that she made to herself and that was to never be attached to another person. If She didn’t love anyone then if something happened to them she wouldn’t have to be hurt. Mitsu continues to walk,” I can’t believe he kissed me!” She then tries to forget about the whole incident. She has an internal conflict within herself. “Maybe I should go apologize. I shouldn’t have hit him.” But she then shakes her head. “No! He deserved it. He had no right to kiss me.” This goes on and on. Back and fourth, she just can’t make up her mind… Yoshin who is now depressed searchers everywhere for Mitsu. Where did she go? He is also walking around the streets looking for her. When he is about to give up, he sees a girl in a slutty dress walk past. Yoshin already forgets about Mitsu and goes after the other girl. He ends up getting a date with her… After they eat dinner in a restaurant, they go to her place. Mitsu realizing that it is late decides to head back. As she is heading back, she gets an uneasy feeling and looks around. She doesn’t notice anything peculiar. So, she continues to walk on, but she is now on her guard. When she gets closer to the agency, she becomes uneasy. What is going on? She walks past a building and a hand shoots out of the darkness covering her mouth. She is then pulled into a darkened alleyway. Mitsu kicks her captor in the leg really hard, causing the man to curse. As Mitsu starts to break out of his hold, she feels the person’s breath against her ear. The person then speaks. “Sshh! It’s me.” Mitsu recognizing the voice, stops fighting to break the man’s hold. It is the blond haired man. The man then releases her. Mitsu turns around and tries to punch him. He blocks her punch. “Why did you leave? And why did you grab me?” He then motions for her to look out to the main street. Together they look around a building and the man tells her, “Look over there by the street light. You see those guys? They have been following you.” Mitsu and the man then go back into hiding so that they will not be seen. “I knew it! I knew something was going on… How did you know I was being followed? You were following me too! Weren’t you?” “I had a feeling that you would get into trouble. You really should take better care of yourself.” “Oh no…Not you too! How many times do I have to say this, I Can Take Care Of Myself! And I definitely do not need your help.” Mitsu then starts to walk away. The man grabs her again, but Mitsu breaks out of his hold. “I have had it!” Mitsu then starts to fight the man. He doesn’t fight her, but he does block all of her attacks. Soon; however, Mitsu gets tired and gives up. She then sits down with her back resting against a building. Looking up at the man, she says, “I hate you!” The man just smiles at her. She then gets up and looks around the corner to see if the two men are still there. They are. “Why are they following me?” The blond haired man walks over to her and says, “I should have told you this before…” He looks at Mitsu and continues, “The night in the warehouse, I was sent to kill you.” “What?” Mitsu looks into his eyes. “Yes, but I was told that you were a boy. Imagine my shock when I discovered that you were no boy. Nobukazu must know that I did not do the job and he is now after both of us.” Mitsu wonders how Nobu knows her then she remembers. The man then asks, “Out of curiosity why is he determined to get rid of you?” “It is a long story, I had broken into his house once, he must have remembered…” The man then begins to think. “So, should we let those guys know where we are?” Mitsu knowing what the man means, smiles and picks up a rock. The man then says, “I’m ready when you are.” With this Mitsu walks to the street and throws the rock hitting one of the men in the head. “Hey guys, looking for me?” “Hey, there she is!” Mitsu runs back into the alley, where the blond haired man is waiting. The two guys follow her in. The guys are then attacked, and are defeated. “Well that wasn’t too difficult. You should really tell your boss that he needs better fighters, don’t you think?” asks Mitsu. The man who doesn’t seem to get her joke searches through the two guys’ pockets. He takes their guns and gives them to Mitsu. Mitsu looks back around the corner to make sure no one else is there. When she turns around the man is no longer there. “It figures, you would run off again.” Mitsu then sighs and hurries to the agency to get someone to help her bring the two guys in. Episode #8 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Heiji has the men brought into his office where he and Mitsu begin to question them. Heiji starts, “Why were you following her?” “Go to hell! We are not going to tell you anything!” yells one of the men. Heiji then calls on his intercom for Chiba to enter the office. Chiba comes in with a syringe filled with truth cerium. He injects it into the two men. Soon after, the two men spill their guts. They tell them that Nobu sent them to kill Mitsu and to get project x-25 back. “What is an x-25?” This question comes from Mitsu. One of the men replies, “It is a project that Nobukazu has been working on, and you stole it.” “I didn’t steal anything.” Heiji looks at Mitsu silencing her. “What is this project?” “We were not told very much about it, but that it was a top secret project about making an unstoppable creature.” Mitsu’s eyes grow wide. The man! She had taken the man. Was he this creature? If what she is hearing was indeed correct then that would mean that the blond haired man was telling the truth. Heiji looks at Mitsu, “Do you know anything about this project?” Mitsu does some quick lying, “No, I don’t know what they are talking about.” Was that it, was that man a creature? His eyes did look different when she first saw him. No, it couldn’t be. People could not turn into creatures. Or could they? The men are then blindfolded and are taken away from the agency. (This is to make sure that they can never find where the agency is located. No one knows that it even exists.) When the drug wears off the men head back to their boss… Mitsu heads to her room. Questions run through her brain. She lies down on her bed but cannot sleep. She needs to find that man and get some answers. She tosses and turns all night……. Morning comes and still Mitsu thinks about the man, or should she say x-25. She gets up and takes a hot shower. (She has her own bathroom. It is connected to her room.) She then puts on a pair of black slacks and a spaghetti strap shirt, and of course, she puts on her hat. She then decides to go look around the city for x-25, or whatever he is. As she is leaving, Yoshin enters the agency. Mitsu moves out of the way so that he will not run into her. He is not watching where he is going. He seems to be exhausted. (Yeah! I wonder why.) He looks up and sees Mitsu. He then tries to act natural; he doesn’t want her to know where he has been. Mitsu trying to make conversation asks, “Where have you been?” Yoshin turns red and tries to think of something to say but Mitsu talks first. “You look like you could use some sleep.” She then leaves. Yoshin watches Mitsu leave with yearning. He then sighs and goes to his room and falls into bed… Chiba is bored as he helps the scientist; he is continually staring at his watch wanting to take a break. He then starts to daydream about Yoshin kissing him instead of Mitsu… Chiba starts to work some more but this time he is in a good mood... Mitsu walks around and talks to herself, “He isn’t going to show up just because you want him to.” She then walks on. A display window catches her eye. Inside is a beautiful dress hanging in the window. It is a long pale green evening gown with spaghetti straps. It is very elegant, something Mitsu is not. Mitsu tries to picture herself in the dress. She then feels stupid and turns away from the window. Mitsu turns around to see x-25 standing behind her and staring. Where had he come from? “I really wish you would stop doing that!” “Doing what?” He asks. “Oh nevermind!” Mitsu replies. The man then looks at the dress then back at Mitsu, “So there is a girl in you somewhere? Under those boyish clothes perhaps. You know, you sure don’t show it much.” Mitsu frowns at him and walks off. The man follows, “I was only…I didn’t mean it that way.” Mitsu cuts him off, “Leave me alone!” His words had hurt her. He realizes this and grabs her arm, turning her to face him. “I didn’t mean for it to sound like that. I’m sorry.” Mitsu looks at the man. “Fine, apology accepted. Now, we need to talk.” She then adds, “in private.” “Okay, but I am not going to the agency.” “Fine.” Mitsu tries to think of a private place for them to go. The man grabs Mitsu’s arm and leads her to the back of a building. “Where are we going?” At the back of the building the man points to a latter. “Up.” Was his response. They climb up. Once they are on the roof the man says, “private enough for you?” “This is fine.” They sit down and Mitsu begins her questioning. “First off what is project x-25?” The man looks at her calmly, “It is a project that Nobukazu has been working on for the past 20 years. He had it in his head that he could make a monster. Something that would be unstoppable. He made me what I am. A monster.” Mitsu looks at the man looking for something that would prove that he was in fact a beast. There was nothing, he looked like a normal healthy guy. The man continues, “As I told you before I change. I don’t know how but I physically change. It isn’t a pretty sight.” “I find it hard to believe that one man can turn another into a monster. How would this be possible?” “I don’t know, but he did and now he will try anything to get me back.” The man looks at the ground. “Will you go back?” asks Mitsu. “No. His experiments were not yet complete. Do you think that I would go back there and let him finish!” “So what are we going to do?” Asks Mitsu. The man looks at her and says angrily, “We are going to do nothing. You are not to get involved with me. You are to go back to your agency and forget about me!” The man then stands up, preparing to leave. Mitsu jumps to her feet and says, “Oh no you not! You aren’t going to just walk away. I won’t let you. And I am not going back unless you go with me. I am in this as much as you are. I can’t just forget.” “You don’t get it do you? If you help me you will be in danger! Go home!” (He doesn’t say exactly what she was in danger of. Nobu or himself.) “No! You are my responsibility remember? I am going to help you!” The man looks at Mitsu in shock, no one had ever talked to him as if he were a human being. What was he going to do now? |
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I have read the first 6 chapters.
I'm not sure what to think. My knowledge of the setting is limited, even after six episodes. I'm not sure exactly what these organizations are fighting over. I know it's the rulership of Japan (and probably more) but that's not what I meant; what kind of lifestyles do the citizens lead? How will their lifestyles change if the bad guys gain control? I'm just not feeling any real sympathy for the goals of the agency, since I don't know what they're fighting for. There are a variety of very distinct, easily identifiable characters. At this point in time, it would be impossible for me to mistake one character for another, or forget who a character is. You've got a little bit of romance in there, I suppose. Mitsu has two options: A suicidal, emo guy, and a sketchy, polyamorous coworker. I have a feeling that romance will play an enormous role, but I could be wrong. You have a lot of text in parentheses that explains stuff we don't know. Most of this text is superfluous, and much of it downright subtracts from the story. The introduction about the Foundation and the Agency can stay, of course, but "She does not mention how his eyes looked when they first met," is unneccesary, and "Of course he had. What Mitsu doesn’t know is that the man ever since he had been brought into the agency had been watching her closely. He could use what he now knows of her to destroy her. But does he?" is downright annoying. It would have been cool and creepy if you had revealed that he had been listening through what he says later, but it completely removes that effect when you state it so unsubtly. Another very important example: "Talk about foreshadowing, make a note of this." Yes, it made me lol, but it's just not worth it. I'm not sure what this comment was meant to accomplish, but I would prefer to quietly make note of foreshadowing on my own, without any help. That's all for now. |
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Lols, thanks for reading!
As for the goals of the agancies is very simple they r like super inteligences of the government, like the old vertion of the C.I.A, or something like it. Theyr goal is to overthrow each other, the one who stands on top is the one who will rule Japan. The siticens live a life much similar to that of the siticens of the U.S. However, if the evil organisation takes control of the country it will b a total comunism and ppl will not have an opinion about their lifes or bodys, they'll toy with their bodies and view them as animals whom they can manipulate. I'll take into noitce the parents, I wrote this many years ago and had not gone threw it again, but I'll re-edit it and take it into considerations for when I post the next chapters. I too felt anoyed by this, but was undeside as if to take them off, or live them since the story does get a little complicated. I was waiting for an opinion on this matter and I'm glad u pointed it out. Thanks! The_8th_Sin wrote: I have read the first 6 chapters. I'm not sure what to think. My knowledge of the setting is limited, even after six episodes. I'm not sure exactly what these organizations are fighting over. I know it's the rulership of Japan (and probably more) but that's not what I meant; what kind of lifestyles do the citizens lead? How will their lifestyles change if the bad guys gain control? I'm just not feeling any real sympathy for the goals of the agency, since I don't know what they're fighting for. There are a variety of very distinct, easily identifiable characters. At this point in time, it would be impossible for me to mistake one character for another, or forget who a character is. You've got a little bit of romance in there, I suppose. Mitsu has two options: A suicidal, emo guy, and a sketchy, polyamorous coworker. I have a feeling that romance will play an enormous role, but I could be wrong. You have a lot of text in parentheses that explains stuff we don't know. Most of this text is superfluous, and much of it downright subtracts from the story. The introduction about the Foundation and the Agency can stay, of course, but "She does not mention how his eyes looked when they first met," is unneccesary, and "Of course he had. What Mitsu doesn’t know is that the man ever since he had been brought into the agency had been watching her closely. He could use what he now knows of her to destroy her. But does he?" is downright annoying. It would have been cool and creepy if you had revealed that he had been listening through what he says later, but it completely removes that effect when you state it so unsubtly. Another very important example: "Talk about foreshadowing, make a note of this." Yes, it made me lol, but it's just not worth it. I'm not sure what this comment was meant to accomplish, but I would prefer to quietly make note of foreshadowing on my own, without any help. That's all for now. |
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All right, the nasty forshadows and coments between parentesis have been fixed and yes, they were very anoying and took a lot away from the story.
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yaidoll wrote: All right, the nasty forshadows and coments between parentesis have been fixed and yes, they were very anoying and took a lot away from the story. Thanks for letting me know! Your welcome. I'll look forward to this once you're done with your first story. |
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Actually my first one still has a long way to go, so I'll post one ep of this one every month till I get to the 25th ep of this one, which is were I stopt writting it. Than I'll continue from there.
The_8th_Sin wrote: yaidoll wrote: All right, the nasty forshadows and coments between parentesis have been fixed and yes, they were very anoying and took a lot away from the story. Thanks for letting me know! Your welcome. I'll look forward to this once you're done with your first story. |
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(Update)
As of next week I'll try my best to post a new episode of the story every week! Please read and enjoy! |
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Episode 9
** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** What was he going to do now? The man looks at Mitsu and again tries to get her to change her mind. “I don’t need your help. Go back to your agency.” He again tries to leave. Mitsu runs in front of him blocking his only exit. “Move.” “No! I told you that I would not leave unless you come with me.” She then puts her hands on her hips. The man then walks up to her and picks her up moving her out of the way. Mitsu kicks him, and he puts her down and again walks to the latter. Mitsu runs after him, tackling him. They both fall onto the roof. “Where do you think you are going?” The man looks at her with agitation, and stands up. “Listen you little brat. I am not fooling around anymore!” At that moment, they hear a noise, looking up they both see a helicopter flying by. They then watch as the helicopter turns around and heads for the building that they are standing on. The gun on the helicopter begins to shoot at them. The man throws Mitsu over his shoulder, and jumps to another rooftop at least 20 feet away. The helicopter follows still shooting. The man pulls out a gun that he had hidden in his clothes and they again jump to another building. The blond haired man sees that the next building is to far away to jump to; it is the end of the line for them. Here comes the helicopter. The man puts Mitsu back on her feet, and she and the man separate as they both dive for cover. X-25 and Mitsu, who has also pulled out her gun, shoot at the helicopter. It then flies on and turns around to make another pass. The blond haired man aims for one of the pilots. When the helicopter passes over them, he shoots hitting the pilot in the chest. The helicopter spins going out of control. That was not a good idea. Mitsu and the man get up and try to get out of the way as the helicopter plummets down toward the building. The man looks down at the street. In the alley is a truck with what looks like tons of fabric in the back of the truck. The man grabs Mitsu around the waist and jumps from the building. They fall into the fabric. They then climb down from the truck and see the helicopter crash into the building. At that moment, the police show up. “Great, it’s the Police! Come on, we have to get out of here!” Mitsu grabs the man’s arm and together they run off. It was too late they had been spotted. “Hey you! Stop!” two officers run after them. (The police do not know about the agency. If they did, they would not approve of it.) Once they are sure that they lost the police, Mitsu stops and says to the man “I think we lost them. So tell me, who were the men in the helicopter?” “Ah, that was the foundation of course. They will stop at nothing to see that I am either brought back or silenced…” “Silenced? But I thought you were important to Nobukazu?” “Well apparently not anymore, since he is trying to kill me.” Mitsu thinks for a second then replies, “Well, now you have no choice, the safest place for the both of us right now is the agency.” The man nods his head in agreement and together they head there…. * * * At the foundation, the two men who had been questioned by the Genjo Agency return to their boss. Inside his office, they explain what happened. “They over powered us.” “They?” Asks Nobu. “Yes, the one you sent us to kill had a friend with her. The friend was very powerful.” “She?” Asks Nobu. “Yes, the boy you sent us to kill is really a girl.” “Interesting...” He then goes on to say, “So she has my weapon after all. Now what am I going to do with the two of you? I do not like failure.” “We won’t let it happen again Sir.” “Of course you won’t, “ replies Nobukazu. After this was said, another man in Nobu’s office turns to them and shoots both of the guys in the head. The men fall to the floor, dead. “Nicely done Jin. Now send some men to silence x-25… and bring me this girl…. And make sure that they do not fail this time.” “Yes Sir.” Jin then leaves but is stopped by Nobu. “And Jin…” “Sir?” “Do get someone in here to clean this mess up.” Jin smiles in response and then leaves the office. Nobu then talks to himself. “So my own creation (weapon) has turned on me? Well don’t worry, you will meet your death soon enough.” * * * * Mitsu and the man enter the agency. “By the way,” Mitsu asks, “What is your name.” “I don’t have a name… Nobukazu always called me x-25.” “Well that won’t do. Now let me think...What about Ennosuke? Or maybe Makoto?” “Can’t you think of anything better?” Asks X-25. “Well… how about Kenji.” When the man makes a face at that one, Mitsu exclaims, “Alright, how about this, from now on your name will be Koji.” “Hmm. Koji, I guess I can live with that.” Mitsu then says, “And we will have to keep everything secret. We cannot tell anyone about what you are.” “Very well.” They then head for Heiji’s office. Inside Heiji, Yoshin, and Chiba watch the news as a reporter talks about the helicopter crash. In walks Mitsu and Koji. Yoshin looks at her and exclaims, “Where the hell have you been? And why is he here!?” “We were attacked this afternoon.” Yoshin looks at the screen and back to Mitsu and the guy. Chiba then says, “ You mean that was you guys who caused that crash? The police are going crazy. They don’t know what is going on.” Heiji then begins to speak, “You two destroyed a very successful business. Lucky for you that I didn’t like them, or you would have had to pay the price.” Episode 10 Episode 10 ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Mitsu and Koji continue to stand in the hall way of the Genjo agency until Mitsu says, “Well come on, I will see if we have a spare room somewhere.” “Actually your room suits me just fine.” Koji smiles and winks at Mitsu. Mitsu’s mouth drops open, “Oh no you don’t…I will find you a room!” She then goes off in search, but is disappointed when she realizes that they do not have any spare rooms. She then goes back to where Koji is standing and says with vehemence “I know! You can share with Yoshin.” “Funning, but no thanks. Don’t worry I won’t try anything… I will sleep on the cot.” He then leaves a fuming Mitsu and walks into her room. Mitsu goes off on a mission of finding Koji some clothes. She gets him the outfit that every agent wears. The black slacks, white undershirt and black jacket. On her way to her room, Yoshin stops her by pulling her into his arms. “Your trying to make me jealous, aren’t you?” “What are you talking about now?” Mitsu gets very agitated at him for she still has not forgiven him for kissing her. “Come on Mitsu I told you how I feel about you! And someday you will realize that you love me too.” Koji, who is hiding in the shadows, hears and sees everything. Koji feeling that he has seen enough goes to Mitsu’s room to wait for her to return. Mitsu glares at Yoshin, she then turns and walks away. Mitsu enters her room to see Koji sitting on the cot. “Here, sorry if they don’t fit. I didn’t now your size.” “They should fit, thanks.” They then have an awkward moment. No one knows what to say. They then end up speaking at the same time. Mitsu tells Koji to go on. “So tell me something about you, something that I don’t know?” “What would you like to know?” At that moment, Koji gets up and walks to the door. “What are you doing?” Asks Mitsu. “We seem to have company.” Was Koji's only reply. He then hits the open button; the door opens causing Chiba and Yoshin to fall through. Chiba tries to think of a good explanation. “We just wanted to check on you.” “Well as you can see I am fine.” Replies Mitsu. Yoshin looks at Koji with anger, “I don’t know who you are, but what I do know is that I don’t like you. You don’t belong here, so why don’t you do us all a favor by getting the hell out!” Koji looks at Yoshin showing no emotion. He then looks at Mitsu and says to Yoshin, “I have permission to stay and if you do not approve then you better go talk to your boss.” Koji then walks off, leaving Mitsu alone with Chiba and Yoshin. Mitsu glares at Yoshin, “Yoshin I don’t know what your problem is but you are acting like a jerk.” Mitsu then grabs Yoshin by the collar and says, “You are making me angry! If you don’t get out of my room I will make you sorry!” She then shoves Yoshin. Yoshin, seeing that Mitsu is actually angry with him, leaves. Once he is gone, Mitsu sits down on her bed and puts her face in her hands. Chiba concerned sits down next to her. “What’s wrong Mitsu?” “I am just so frustrated, Yoshin thinks that he owns me or something! I just don’t know…” “Yoshin is just trying to look after you. I am sure he means well.” Mitsu then smiles at Chiba and says, “How can you like him so much?” Chiba laughs and replies, “He might act like a jerk on the outside, but inside I am sure he is a wonderful man. Wait a minute, what am I saying. He is a jerk. But I like him anyway.” Mitsu starts to laugh, knowing that Chiba was trying to make her feel better. Mitsu then sighs and lays her head against his shoulder. “Mitsu? You really need to get some rest.” “Yeah, I know. It has been hectic around here.” Chiba then gets up saying, “I will leave you, so that you can rest….” “Chiba if you see Yoshin tell him I’m sorry.” Chiba smiles and replies, “I will.” He then leaves. Mitsu, who is exhausted, changes into a baggy shirt and goes to sleep. * * * * Koji walks around the agency. He wanders into the practice room. Leaning against a wall, he watches some of the agents fight. His mind begins to wander, and he begins to think about Mitsu. “So… Mitsu do you love him?” Koji definitely cannot let Mitsu help him now, too much was at stake. After all, she had someone that she loved, and he would not let anything happen to her, if not for him then for Yoshin’s sake. He would not take Mitsu away from him. Koji walks back to Mitsu’s room to discuss the situation with her. However, when he opens her door, her light is off. He makes out her form lying in bed. She is asleep. Koji sits down in a chair. An alarm then goes off. Hearing the noise, Mitsu jumps out of bed, and runs to Heiji’s office to see what is going on. Koji follows and looks at Mitsu wondering if he should mention that she just has a shirt on, covering her underwear. Once in the office Mitsu, Heiji, Yoshin, Chiba, and Koji look at the TV screen. A reporter is saying, “Everyone should take precaution. We have just received information that a very dangerous android as been stolen. The Burakuken Foundation has informed the police that they want to be contacted if anyone has information as to the whereabouts of the android and the thief who stole it.” The TV then shows sketches of Koji and Mitsu. “Great! Now what?” Exclaims Mitsu. Heiji then looks at Mitsu and says, “I know the Foundation lies but why say he is an android?” “I don’t know…” Heiji lets the question stop there. “See I knew this guy would bring us nothing but trouble!” Yells Yoshin. “Quiet! Yoshin hold your tongue.” Replies Heiji. “Chiba. You and Yoshin go to the police station and find out more about this! And don’t make it too obvious.” Chiba and Yoshin leave. Once they are gone, Heiji again turns to Mitsu and says, “I do not want the two of you to step one foot out of the agency until this mess is straightened out.” “I do not want my problems to interfere with this agency!” Exclaims Koji. “As long as you’re here you are our responsibility.” He then looks down at his desk, showing that their conversation is finished. Mitsu and Koji leave the room. In the hall, Koji says, “You have nice legs. I would have never known because you always are wearing pants.” Mitsu looks down, realizes that she has no pants on, she then blushes, and runs to her room, where she franticly puts on a pair of slacks. Koji enters, “Don’t you ever wear skirts or dresses?” “No, I have no need for those things.” “Perhaps someday you will.” Episode 11. ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Yoshin and Chiba saying that they are a married couple go to the police station. Inside they ask questions concerning the stolen android. They are good actors. “Why this is so terrible. How dangerous is this android?” Asks Yoshin. An officer answers, “The Foundation told us that the android has killed many. They were going to destroy it but were stopped when a thief broke in and stole it.” “That is terrible. It is so frightening.” Cries Chiba. “I wouldn’t worry about it Ma’am. We shall have everything taken care of in no time. We have set up barricades; there is no way that they can get away. I suggest you two go home and lock your doors just as a precaution.” Chiba and Yoshin leave. “This is worse then I thought.” Says Chiba. “Yeah. We must think of a plan. We must keep Mitsu safe. If only she hadn’t met that guy! None of this would have happened.” “We can’t change what has been done. Yoshin please don’t take anything out on Mitsu.” “What do you mean? I haven’t taken anything out on her.” “Yes you have. You have been treating her bad ever since she brought that man to us. You have hurt her feelings.” Yoshin feeling bad about that says, “Yeah, I know. I just don’t want anything to happen to her…” They soon head for home. * * * Mitsu sits on her bed and thinks; everyone at the agency is now in danger. If the Foundation finds them here…. “What have I done? It is all my fault!” “It is not your fault. I told you that I would not let my problems affect this agency. I have no choice but to turn myself in.” “No! You can’t, they will kill you!” cries Mitsu. Koji then says, “Well then what do you propose we do!?” An agent runs to the door and exclaims, “The police are searching every building! They are heading this way!” “No! This can’t be happening!” Yells Mitsu. Koji and Mitsu run to Heiji’s office. Inside Heiji hands them fake ids. “Here take these and get out of Tokyo!” Mitsu can’t believe this is happening. Koji takes the ids and pulls Mitsu out of the office telling her to pack some clothes. When Mitsu goes to do his bidding, Koji goes back to the office, “What about you and the others?” “We have everything taken care of, I have sent them away. I will not let the police know about our business.” Koji looks down to see a container of gasoline. “I will leave as soon as you and Mitsu are safely away. Now go!” When Koji turns to leave, Heiji adds, “Please take care of her.” “I will.” Koji leaves stopping at Mitsu’s room to get her. They then go out the back way. They get into a car and drive off. Mitsu doesn’t say anything, she is still in shock. She then looks back to see the whole agency on fire. Mitsu cries out. Koji sees the reason for her distress and tells her that everyone is safe and that Heiji set the fire so that the police wouldn’t find anything. Mitsu again looks at her burning home and starts to cry. Koji drives on. They pass the barricade with no trouble since all the police were called to help out with the burning building. Heiji knew what he was doing when he set the fire. * * * * Police are running everywhere! “Someone put that fire out!” As the police get the fire under control, Jin shows up saying that he is from the Foundation and asks what has happened. “We were searching the building when all of a sudden everything inside caught fire.” Jin then gets back into his car and heads for the barricade. “I’m on to you now. It won’t be long till I will find you, x-25.” * * * * Chiba and Yoshin hide as they watch their home burn. “How much longer do we have to wait?” Asks Chiba. “Heiji told us to make sure everything is destroyed. We must wait until the police put out the fire.” Yoshin then looks to the sky. “Please Mitsu, please be safe.” Chiba pats Yoshin on the back trying to sooth him. They both are depressed as they again watch the building. Episode 12. ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Episode 12 Koji looks at the computer built into the car. The computer shows a map of Japan. Koji looks at the city of Mito. He decides that they will go there. He then types in the location of the city. This way he will not have to drive. The car does everything on its own. After he does this, he looks over at Mitsu and sees that she is asleep. Koji then leans back in his seat and tries to relax. However, because of the stress of all the things that had occurred, Koji feels himself loosing control. He is changing! His eyes start to change. “Not now!” He clenches his fists and closes his eyes, trying to stay calm. He starts sweating, trying to use his strength to keep the beast from coming forth. “This can’t happen, not now!” If he changes, he could hurt Mitsu. His nails start to grow. He can feel the beast taking control of his body; soon Koji will no longer exist as the beast awakens. He takes one last look at Mitsu who is sleeping so peacefully. As he looks at her, he feels himself start to gain control again. Slowly his eyes and nails return to normal. He then breathes in relief. That was the first time he had ever kept the beast under control. How had he done it? Koji then leans back again and mediates. This keeps him calm. While Mitsu is sleeping, she has a weird dream. In the dream, a horrible looking monster is chasing her. When the monster reaches out for her, Mitsu wakes with a start. She then shivers as she remembers the dream. “I hate Nightmares!” She then looks over at Koji. He’s asleep. Mitsu stares at Koji for a few more minutes. She then looks at the computer screen showing that they are headed for Mito. She then thinks about Heiji, was he okay? How could she have just left them all there! She decides that she is going to go back to Tokyo. She reaches out to change the coordinates of the computer. Koji’s hand grabs hers causing her to stop. With his eyes still closed he says, “What do you think you’re doing?” “I’m going back!” Mitsu tries to pull her hand away. Koji then pulls her closer to him and looks at her. “We can’t go back. If you go you will be in danger.” “I have to go back. I have to make sure everyone is alright!” Koji pulls Mitsu into his arms. “You don’t have to act so brave when deep down you are really afraid.” “I am not afraid of anything!” Koji keeps her in his arms and says, “They are all fine. Heiji told me everyone got out safely. You mustn’t worry. Everything will be alright.” Mitsu stays in his arms and silently begins to cry. Mitsu again falls asleep but this time it is in Koji’s arms. Mitsu has a wonderful dream. * * * * Yoshin and Chiba travel to their rendezvous spot. This spot is in a residential house. Here, they are to meet up with the other agents. When they go in, they see all of the agents standing around. They all look nervous about something. “What’s going on?” Chiba asks one of the agents. “Heiji, he never showed up!” Yoshin and Chiba look at one another. Then Yoshin says, “What do you mean he never showed up? Where is he then?” Another agent speaks up, “We do not know! Mitsu is also missing.” Heiji, Yoshin, and Chiba were the only ones that knew about Mitsu. Yet, another agent begins to talk. “If Heiji and Mitsu are gone that leaves you in charge Yoshin.” “Yes that’s right. Sir what are our orders.” Yoshin grabs the back of a chair for leverage. Chiba then tries to calm him. “They are right Yoshin. With both of them gone, that leaves you in charge.” Yoshin then drags Chiba out of the room so that they can talk in private. Yoshin starts. “Were the hell is Heiji? He got out of the building, didn’t he?” “I am sure of it.” Chiba begins to worry. At that time, Chiba’s watch begins to beep. Chiba hits a button and Heiji’s face shows up in the watch. The watch is a communication device. “Sir where are you?” “It is none of your concern. As you can see, I am quite alive and well. Nevertheless, I cannot come back just yet. I must take care of something. I will send you equipment to get things back to normal. You will now use that home as our base. Yoshin I am leaving you in charge. I will send you your orders as soon as your new equipment arrives.” Heiji then signs off. Yoshin looks at Chiba. “I don’t know how to be a leader! What am I supposed to do?” * * * * Koji and Mitsu stop at a mall. “Why are we stopping here?” Mitsu looks at Koji confusingly. “Because, we need some clothes.” “I know you do, but I have clothes packed. Remember?” “Yes I remember but we can’t have people recognizing us, now can we? The only sketch of you that the Foundation has is of you wearing your uniform and hat. You are going to start looking more feminine.” Koji enters the mall with a protesting Mitsu following behind. Inside they head right for the clothing department, on the way they pass many different people. It seems that this is a very popular mall. When they enter the clothing department a woman asks if she can help them with anything. Koji sends Mitsu with the lady telling the lady that she is to find Mitsu some girly clothes. Mitsu glares back at Koji, “You are a jerk!” “Yeah I know.” Koji smiles at her, and then he turns around walking off to do some shopping of his own. Mitsu is given skirts and pretty blouses to try on. After about an hour of trying clothes on, Koji walks over to Mitsu carrying two bags. He then looks at the humongous heap of clothes surrounding Mitsu and says, “We’ll take all of it.” When they pay and head for their car, Mitsu asks, “Where did you get the money to pay for all of this?” “Didn’t I tell you? Heiji gave it to me when he handed me those ids. He gave me enough to last us for awhile.” Mitsu then helps him put the bags in the trunk. Glancing down Mitsu looks into the trunk to see a white box. “What is that?” Koji looks at the box and blushes saying, “Oh, that! That is nothing.” He then puts the bags away and closes the trunk. Mitsu thinks to herself, what is he hiding? They then head for Mito. |
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Here is episode 9. This is a must read episode in order to understand what will come! Please read it and hope u enjoy!
"Or I'll kill u with a piano wire!" lols, just joking! But pls do read! |
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I have finished the series as far as you have created it.
Let's look at our situation. Koji believes that he is the target, but clearly, he is wrong. She was the target from the beginning and she is still the important target now. I can't fathom what sort of value she has. Perhaps she is a more complete experiment; a better version of x-25. By the way, you call x-25 "Koji" in the line before Mitsu names him. Just a little slip up. |
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The_8th_Sin wrote: I have finished the series as far as you have created it. Let's look at our situation. Koji believes that he is the target, but clearly, he is wrong. She was the target from the beginning and she is still the important target now. I can't fathom what sort of value she has. Perhaps she is a more complete experiment; a better version of x-25. By the way, you call x-25 "Koji" in the line before Mitsu names him. Just a little slip up. Very good! in part you r right, in some others your not, but I can't tell you where because that will ruin the story, the only thing I can tell u is that Mitsu is not an android, she is a regular human. Oh, thanks for telling me about the little slip up. I really appresiate your comments they r very helpfull! |
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Well, little mistake has been fixed! Thanks!
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Hey ppl, here is ep 11. Hope u enjoy it! lols.
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Hey ppl, if u like the story, I would like to know what u think about it!
Domo! |
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