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Posted 8/15/08
Beautiful places, beautiful souls, beautiful things
That can't be sold
Let them lead their own way, with their beautiful wings
So we'll have a happy day!
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ummm i was wondering how many poems can we enter?
anywayss heres mine
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WHY?!
this isn't right
it's not okay
why do u have to make me feel this way?
no matter how hard i try
you're stuck in my mind
you're not even trying
so why is it that i cant keep my mind off you?
even if i know you can never feel the same way i do
these feelings i've never felt before till the day i met you
no matter how much i don't want them to stay
no matter how much i will them away
they wont go away...

WHY?!
its never gonna be us two
i know for a fact that to be true
so why is it when im by your side...
these feelings i can hide
but when im alone...
they emerge from the showdows of my mind?

WHY?!
when i need your help the most
you can't help me through
because the problem...

is you...
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tada?....but yea...i wasnt sure what to call it sooo its still untitled
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Posted 8/15/08

Dark-Butterfly wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:

Beautiful places, beautiful souls, beautiful things
That can't be sold
Let them lead their own way, with their beautiful wings
So we'll have a happy day!


Thank you for your entry! It was simple, short and to the point. I liked it ^^


oh yea...i like short ones.....
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ah thank you ohh okay gottt it haha thank you again
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Posted 8/16/08

Dark-Butterfly wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:

Beautiful places, beautiful souls, beautiful things
That can't be sold
Let them lead their own way, with their beautiful wings
So we'll have a happy day!


Thank you for your entry! It was simple, short and to the point. I liked it ^^


oh..i want to replace this one...i was writing a new one cuz i thought mine was too short...so can i??
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Posted 8/16/08

Bond_of_Darkness_and_Hate wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:


Dark-Butterfly wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:

Beautiful places, beautiful souls, beautiful things
That can't be sold
Let them lead their own way, with their beautiful wings
So we'll have a happy day!


Thank you for your entry! It was simple, short and to the point. I liked it ^^


oh..i want to replace this one...i was writing a new one cuz i thought mine was too short...so can i??


Yeah you can!



ok thanx! maybe tomorrow..
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Posted 8/16/08

Bond_of_Darkness_and_Hate wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:


Bond_of_Darkness_and_Hate wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:


Dark-Butterfly wrote:


MiNi-MuNcHsKiN wrote:

Beautiful places, beautiful souls, beautiful things
That can't be sold
Let them lead their own way, with their beautiful wings
So we'll have a happy day!


Thank you for your entry! It was simple, short and to the point. I liked it ^^


oh..i want to replace this one...i was writing a new one cuz i thought mine was too short...so can i??


Yeah you can!



ok thanx! maybe tomorrow..


Yeah good luck!



thanx!
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Posted 8/18/08
Falling into an emptiness of a no end,
letting happiness slipping from your hands,
loving someone and being betray.

A fragile heart torn apart,
with a faint light of hope
for a new love to find.

Its hard to move on
but what can you do
when the love is gone
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nah!!! anyways thanks!!!
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Posted 8/25/08
Nothing more. Nothing less.



My love is phenomenal .

It may seem quite noticeable in the eyes of others.
All what matters is that if you can see it.
However, your heart is still shrouded by pain and hurt.

I think I'm slowly getting closer to you.
Day by day I see you and you see me.
I'm not trying to make things more obvious.
Sometimes I wish I didn't love you and sometimes
I wish I could have you just for a little bit longer.
Or I can just hide or conceal my feelings like I always do.

I'm actually really happy that I've
been with you these past nine years.
Not only that, we are not really
saying our farewells to each other.
Four more years to come,
and it's just right around the corner

You're too shy to say anything.
In fact, you're too shy or embarrased to do anything.
Not to say or do anything for me but for everyone you know.

But really, you're probably reading this
thinking, "........"
Heck, maybe, that's it.
Nothing more. Nothing less.
I never expected anything anyways.

Just sing me a lullaby.
I will fall straight to sleep,
And I'll love you until the days pass me.


--made by jennifer frances(which is me) COPYRIGHT



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( Yeah i wrote this a long time ago so if it's bad sorry )

Dear Love,

I miss you so much
yet you cheated on me
with one of my bestfriends.

Did you ever
think of how I would feel.
I didn't think so

I want you to know
how I feel yet
you run away from me.

I carved our names
into that tree
where we met.

Does that mean anything
to you if so
talk to me.

So I know
what to do.

If you don't then
be prepared to
say "good-bye" to me
forever.

Sincerly,

me
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Posted 8/30/08

Dark-Butterfly wrote:


jeniebunny wrote:

( Yeah i wrote this a long time ago so if it's bad sorry )

Dear Love,

I miss you so much
yet you cheated on me
with one of my bestfriends.

Did you ever
think of how I would feel.
I didn't think so

I want you to know
how I feel yet
you run away from me.

I carved our names
into that tree
where we met.

Does that mean anything
to you if so
talk to me.

So I know
what to do.

If you don't then
be prepared to
say "good-bye" to me
forever.

Sincerly,

me



Aww, that was very heart-felt. I loved that it was in diary form, yet a poem. So cute, I bet many can relate :)


thanks i'm glad you liked it
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