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Posted 8/15/08 , edited 8/15/08
This is not my poem but HanaKMori`s I just want to make that clear so that noone get confused or anything like that so enjoy her poem!
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Posted 8/15/08
Reminisce - by HanaKMori

Standing at the tip of a gorge
I don't wanna fall in
But my grip is slipping
Screaming for help won't do
Coz I can only save myself
No one else can assist me
It's strange - this gorge
Falling into it is not a bad thing
But disastrous once hitting the ground
Landing on clouds proves beneficial
Problem is, can the clouds support me?
I have slipped before
The landing was not smooth
My soul was nearly gone
Only hope was my salvation
The billowing winds threaten
To push me into the void
My resistance is somehow weakening
The line between sanity and its opposite
Is thinning...
Help me!!

Lolz...hope everyone likes it! Reviews and honest criticism are accepted :)
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Posted 8/15/08
nice poem!! I do felt what your trying to express here.. but the ending is just so unexpected, but I like it. Anyway, post again.. >.<
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