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Posted 8/15/08
I only see you
I whant
to reatch for you
but
I know
I can never have you
your near
yet far away
as you hold around
her
I feel hate
yet
I feel
happiness
you have one
that wont hurt you
and
make you happy
all that
I wished for you
but still
deep down
I feel the hate
towards her
cuse i want
to be the angel
that
fill
you whit peace
and
happiness

years
have passed
and she`s
still by your side
holding
your shaking form
as you cry
and
loughs whit you
when your
joy is there
she`s perfect
but still
I want to
push her away
as she speaks to me

A angel
that is what she is
as she
wallks
towards you
in a white dress
whit a smile of happines
on her small face
as you
say yes to forever
tears of
happiness run
down my face
but
at the same
time
its tears of sorrow
how I wish
I was in her
place

A perfect life
a home
a beautifull
wife
and children loughing
and running around
a familly
that I love
and
that I hate
cuse it
is the familly I wished for
but still
Im so happy
for you

this love
I feel for you
is forbidden I know
and I know
I will someday
find the right
man for me
but
no man will be like
you
your the first man
I ever had
so close
to my heart
My dear big brother

Okey I know this poem is a little unnormal xD
well as you guys see I took a little forbidden love bethween siblings have no idear why but well I did I hope you guys like it ^^
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Posted 8/18/08
woah.. I didn't expect the ending of the poem.. it was sooo.. O.o But I felt it! Really forbidden love.. >.<
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Posted 8/19/08

farfalla_12 wrote:

woah.. I didn't expect the ending of the poem.. it was sooo.. O.o But I felt it! Really forbidden love.. >.<


Yeah I know what you mean I was a little taken abck myself of the ending when I writedd it Im glad you liked it =D
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