Post Reply Forgive me my dying angel
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Posted 8/15/08 , edited 11/16/09
Inoccent love
is lost in this world
let the
tears of blood
run
and
show how
tainted
we have become
as
we killed
the inoccent love
in our
hearts

We watch
as angels
pray for our sins
as they die
and
waste their tears
for our
misery life

Even so
I hold my hands
and pray
for an
angel
to pray for my sins
and protect
the innocent
thats still left

But I know
the angel
will die a wasted death
but
as other humans
I clinging to a rope of hope
that dont
exist

So little angel
forgive my blind mind
and
forgive my sin
whit your tears
of sorrow

Okey mayby some of you guys regonaice the first part of the poem?? I have posted it before when I asked if it was good to have on the profile but as I wanted to pst it in my profile I got a idear to make it longer and here we have it
I hope you guys like it ^^
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Posted 8/18/08
Your poem got me thinking about angels... ^^ it sure did an impact on me.. Great poem Yamira.
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Posted 8/19/08

farfalla_12 wrote:

Your poem got me thinking about angels... ^^ it sure did an impact on me.. Great poem Yamira.


Im happy to hear that and thank you very much ^^
Posted 8/21/08
ur go0od. made me think about angels. rly hit me. loved it <3 ^_^
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Posted 8/22/08

MiSa_AnGeLz wrote:

ur go0od. made me think about angels. rly hit me. loved it <3 ^_^


^///^ thank you Im glad you liked it
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Posted 8/27/08
Wow! It was amazing!
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Posted 12/4/09
Nice
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Posted 3/22/10
Nice poem I really like "So little angel forgive my blind mind" since it can be true.
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