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oooo i wana be part of this fic too xD
i'll be huevers not taken i guess xD
[well...preferbly sumone who ends up wif kame/jin/ryo/pi xDDD]


Gomen. Those parts were taken. But I made you as Tegoshi's wife. is that okay?
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And btw mods. I forgot to and the 'FANFIC~~'
Edit that please? Arigatou~
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KYAA COOL!! ME WANT TO BE A PART TOO!! HEHE
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KYAA COOL!! ME WANT TO BE A PART TOO!! HEHE


Okiess!
But the good parts are already taken.
You want to be the bad girls?
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waaa..gosh i am so late!! huhu..me always end up being a bad girl!! ahah i guess so! hehe who's availble??
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I'll make you akara. She's a good bad girl. xDDD
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ahhaah okie!! okie!
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thanks for letting me be a part in this fic!! hhe lookin foward to it!! aha
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Hehe. NO PROBLEM! =DDD
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thanks amychan!! really lookin forward to reading it!! hehe also thanks cherrillychan!!
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^________^ haah I'm so excited to work on this xDDD!
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Chapter 1. Part 1.
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Ayumi: Oi. Are you sure this is the right way? -looks at a map-
Kame: How should I know. I never drove to your father's house. -holds on tight on the driving wheel-

Ayumi and Kame were driving to Ayumi's father house. Ayumi and Kame has been living alone with unpaid depts. But Ayumi's father was very kind enough to let them live with his family.

[Flashback]
Ayumi: I'm soooo hungry, onii-chan!
Kame: We only have this cup ramen. Here have it. -gives it to Ayumi-
Ayumi: What about you? You can't starve!!
Kame: Well humans can go to about 5 weeks without food. [I think] But about 2-3 days without water. So all we need it water.
Ayumi: But...but...
Kame: Just hurry and eat it.
Ayumi: But...But...
Ding Dong.
Ayumi: What if it those gangsters again?!?! I'm scared nee-chan!
Kame: Just be quiet.
Ding Dong
??????: Hello? Anybody there?
Ayumi: It's a lady.
Kame: I'm going to open it.
Ayumi: Oi. You never know. She could be a gangster too!!
Kame: Yeahhh right. -goes to open the door-
Kame: Anou... What do you want?
??????: Well.... I am from the Akimoto company.
Ayumi: WHAT?!?!?! -she walks up to the door- WE DON'T HAVE ANY MONE.....
Kame: -covers Ayumi's mouth- Gomen. She's an open-minded girl. Here come in!
Akimoto worker: Ha..hai.

The Akimoto worker looks around the room. The room was very empty and alot of things were broken.

Kame: Gomen. Alot of gangsters have been coming to our house and been taking our stuff. By the way, I'm Kazuya. And she's Ayumi. Okay continue you were saying?
Akimoto worker: Well... may I ask a question?
Kame: Douzo.
Akimoto worker: Anou... Ayumi-chan. Do you know who is your father is?
Ayumi: Ummmm. No. I only know that my birth was a mistake.
Kame: Oi. Don't say that!
Akimoto worker: Well, you father wants you and your brother to live with him.
Ayumi: EHHHH???
Kame: Nani?
AW [Akimoto Worker]: He heard that you guys were living alone. He thinks it's not safe.
Ayumi: How do you know? How can we know that this is not a con?
Aw [laughs]: Well you guys are going to leave tomorrow afternoon in a limo.
Ayumi: I don't trust you guys. Me and my brother will go our self.
Aw [laughs]: If you think that way. Here's the address. -writes it down- Hope to see you guys!
Kame: Wait! Don't.......go. -stares at Ayumi-
Ayumi: What? We better go to sleep early.
[End of Flashback]

Ayumi: I think we're lost.
Kame: We wouldn't be lost, if you agreed TO TAKE THE LIMO!
Ayumi: Oi, you never know. IT COULD BE A PHONY!
Kame: Pshhh.
Ayumi: What would happen if they left us somewhere.
Kame: What?
Ayumi: And then gangsters started to come. They beat you up and take me away!!! We'll never see each other again.
Kame: Gangsters? I don't think they'll be able to beat me up. hahaha.
Ayumi: Yeah, they can. Oh! TURN HERE...................
Ayumi and Kame:
Kame: This is our house?
Ayumi: It's........GIANT!!

Ayumi and Kame had finally made it to their new home. Their giant big rich-looking house. They both get out of the car.

Maid: May I get your luggage?
Kame: Yeahh. It's at the back. Here's the key. -gives her the key-
Ayumi: Oi. You can't just give her the key!
Kame: OI!
Ayumi: Gomen.
Maid: Just go in. hehe.
Ayumi: SUGOIIII!!!!!!!!!!
Kame: It's sooo big.
Ayumi: Sugoi!!!
Maid #2: Welcome Ayumi-sama. Kazuya-sama. Your father wants to talk to you. Please go left, then left, then right.
Kame: Ha..Hai. Let's go.

Kame and Ayumi starts to walk.
Ayumi: Turn right!
Kame: No!!! Turn left!
Ayumi: It's Left, Right, Left!
Kame: NO! Left, left, right!
Yuya: Anou. Are you guys Ayumi and Kazuya?
Kame: Yeahh. Who are you?
Ayumi: You're not going to use my body are you?
Yuya: haha. no. I'm already married. haha. Are you looking for my father?
Kame: Apparently yeahh.
Yuya: Just turn left. Then right.
Kame: Now what!
Ayumi: Shut up, nii-chan!
Yuya: I'll just go with you guys. ^___^

They follow Yuya.

Yuya: It's over here. -opens door-
Kame and Ayumi:
Yuya and Ayumi's dad: Oh you guys are here!
Yuya: Oh. Otou-san. Here they are!
Ayumi and Kame:
Ayumi: You're........ You're...... the owner....of..
Yuya's dad: I'm the owner of the Akimoto company.
Ayumi and Kame:
Mr.Akimoto: And I'm your guy's father!!!
Ayumi and Kame: Ehhhhhh?
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Here's part one!!! Did you guys like it? xPP Now Cherrilly-chan will write the next part! Let's give her a round of applause! =DD
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NICE i want to read more i wonder what's going to happen??
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kyaa nice!! it's pretty good!! interesting!! hehe me want more!!
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Hehe. Well. I don't know what's going to happen next.
Cherrily is going to write the next one. haha.
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