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Posted 8/16/08 , edited 8/16/08

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jadelimrixian wrote:

oooo i wana be part of this fic too xD
i'll be huevers not taken i guess xD
[well...preferbly sumone who ends up wif kame/jin/ryo/pi xDDD]


Gomen. Those parts were taken. But I made you as Tegoshi's wife. is that okay?


HAHA SURE ;DDD oooooo tesshi's in tis fic too? cool! hes my other fav (well other then da 4 i listed) so dats gr8!
though i cant really picture tesshi married...but ah HECK xD

thanks(((:

*edit* ooo chap 1 is out!!! n i love it! xDD this is kinda like dat taiwanese drama....erhhh...Romantic Princess?? cept DIFFERENT! (LOL) cant wait for cherrilly's part((((:
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Chapter 1 Part 2

Kame + Ayumi: .....
Mr. Akimoto: Ayumi, You look just like your mother.
Ayumi: ..Arigatou, people say that often
Mr. Akimoto: ^___^.. Kame
Kame: ..
Mr. Akimoto: I want to Officially adopt you, I want you to be my successor
Kame: anou-
Mr. Akimoto: It's alright, I'll give you a lot of time to thing about it. Ayumi on the other hand.
I want to introduce you to everyone I know. Your 18th birthday is coming up in 3 days.
I'll make it a grand welcoming party for you too.
Ayumi: ...eh?
Mr. Akimoto: Don't be shy hahaha.
Ayumi: A..rigatou
Mr. Akimoto: *Smiles*

~The mansion was very buzy in the last 3 days preparing Ayumi's Welcoming party and Birthday~

Lady: hello, you look so pretty in that dress.
Ayumi: anou.. who are you?
Mrs. Akimoto: I'm your father's wife. it's nice to finally meet you.
Ayumi + Kame: Nice to meet you too.
Mrs Akimoto: I'll be right back. Try it on for now Ayumi. *Walks out*
Ayumi: T____T
Kame: what's wrong with you?
Ayumi: T^T It's so itchy
Kame: haha It's your first time in a dress xD.
Ayumi: Onii-chan >.<
Kame: I can't do anything about it
Ayumi: -___-
Mrs Akimoto: *Comes back* These are my pair of heels, hope you like them.
Ayumi: eh I can't walk in those
Mrs Akimoto: you'll have a escort with you to make sure you won't stumble or trip
Ayumi: Escort?
Maid: You're partner
Ayumi: partner?
Mrs. Akimoto:^__^ your father Found you a partner for the Party.
Ayumi: eh..who?
Mrs Akimoto: I'm not so sure..
Kame: Ayumi, stop it. You're pestering her too much.
Mrs. Akimoto: No I'm fine ^_______^.

~one hour later~
Ayumi: my feet T^T
Kame: I can't move in this tux
Ayumi: That's wat you get for making fun of me
Mr. Akimoto: ^____^ Ayumi you're so beautiful. and Kame you're really handsome.
Ayumi+Kame: Arigatou
Mr. Akimoto: Yamashita Tomahisa, please come in.
Yamapi: *Walks in*
Mr. Akimoto: you two can call him Yamapi for short. Ayumi, yamapi is your escort for the party. Hope you two get along well.
Ayumi: *Doki Doki* -He's like a prince- a..hai *Blushes*
Yamapi: ^__^ O, I have a very kawaii date.
Ayumi: *Looks down*
Kame: *glares*
Yamapi: ^___^
Mr. Akimoto: Yamapi's Aunt is one of my apprentices at work. Yamapi, please take care of Ayumi.
Yamapi: *nodds* Hai, pleasure will be mine.
Mr. Akimoto: Ayumi, please get into your gown.
Ayumi: ah, Hai.

~The mansion was filled with guests. From Movie stars, to Presidents, to Major Business Men. There were Cameras everywhere flashing photos~
Mr. Akimoto: *Takes the Mic* Good evening everyone.
~The Room Went Silent~
Mr:Akimoto: Today is a very special day, and I welcome all of you to please welcome my lovely daughter, Ayumi Akimoto!
Ayumi: *Appears from the long staircase with Yamapi Linked to her*
People: *Gasp* She's so pretty
Paparazzi[photographers for Celebrities]: *Takes a hundred photos*
Guy: Waah Kawaii, So she's Akimoto-sama's Daughter
Guy2:...
Guy3: haha you've fallen for her already?
Guy2: Shut up I'll never like someone like her.
Guy 4: Oishi, have u guys tried the shrimp cocktails? *Talks with mouth open*
Guy 1+2+3: -_________-
Guy 2: ....*Stares at Ayumi*

~Ayumi is Standing against a wall~
Ayumi: T^T my feet
Yamapi: Are you alright?
Ayumi: I just need...Water ^__^
Yamapi: Hai, I'll get it for you
Ayumi: T__T he's too hot.
Guy2: are you talking about me?
Ayumi: eh?
guy2: Nice to finally meet you
Ayumi: *Nodds.Tries to walk away, Stumbles,Trips*
Guy2: *Tries to Catch Ayumi But Ends up Falling on top of her* *And Accidentally Kisses her* (!!)
Paparazzi: *Took photos of them*
Yamapi: ...
Kame: -___-
Mr. Akimoto: Akimoto Shock! :o

~~To Be Continued, by Amy-chan! haha~~

Now that Ayumi is introduced to this new world what will happen to her? And Who is that guy?!



Yaaay I finished Amy-chan! haha I hope you like it xDDDD
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Kyaaa!!! i love it sooooo much!
You're so great!!!!!
Everybody isn't she great!!!!
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T__________T amy-chan Ur GREAAAT! u write waaaaay better than me T^T I was so nervous writing this T_______T.
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WOW!!
both of you are writing ne??
how cool!!
I love it!! ^-^
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BOTH OF YOU WERE GREAT!!!!^_~LOVE it very much!!!!Amy-chan, Cherrilly, GAMBATTE Ne~^_~
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haha. Arigatou for the support!!
I'm excited to write the next part. =DDD
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kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~
IT'S SOOOOOOO GREAT!!
NICE JOB~^^


IT'S AMY-CHAN TURN NE~
HEHEHE
GAMBATTE AMY-CHAN~
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kyaa its great!! u guys make a really great story!! waaaa amychan and cherrillychan r great!! both of u donl't deny it!!! hahah keep it up!!
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Cherrilly, ur part was AWESOME.

BOTH YOUR PARTS WERE GR8. no doubt bout dat^^

GANBARI MASU~
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T^T you guys are waaay too kind.
I think I'm drowning in ur guy's kindness xDDDDDD
I wonder if that's possible T___T. xDDD
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I can't stop reread that part.
I'm too excited and nervous. T^T
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T^T whatever you write will be AWESOME! lol xDD
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ahah yeah! agree with Cherrillychan! hehe
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Ahh Arigato!!
it was good!
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