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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fPIrP7uyo1s <--& that would be the ending theme :]
it's too shy by hey! say! JUMP! xD
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wow!!
that's AWESOME!!
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okie i'm gonna type the first chapter now.. err first part so..haha ^_^ mite be able to post todai? or tomorrow..so yay!
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kyaaaaa~
can't wait for the 1st part!
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haha~ so, i finished the first part in like.. less than an hour! how awesome is that? rofl
but yea.. hope you like it!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_6KuYOste8 <--Opening Theme

Ch.1
Part One

One late night, a man named Sanjou Furuta was walking down a nearby alley. He saw a black kitten that was injured, so he bent down. When he did, a shadow came right behind him, and struck him with a crowbar, and ran leaving the man bleeding to death. The kitten hissed and ran into the dark night.

Ryu: *yawn*
Ruri: *poked Ryu’s cheek* Were you up all night again?
Ryu: tch, so what? Who cares?
Ruri: I guess, no one.
Ryu: =__=
Ruri: *giggles* So, how about a date? Are you open tonight?
Ryu: *thinking* Oh no, a date!
Ruri: hm? Ryu, what’s wrong?
Ryu: Oh, haha, nothing! Oh, but I’m sorry I have to investigate… on this crime that happened last night.
Ruri: Oh, that’s too bad. I was wondering if we could go watch “Akai Ito”. It’s about this couple that were destined to be with each other, because they were connected by a red string. Kyaa~! So romantic ne?
Ryu: *sweat mark* eh…sounds, interesting?
Ruri: Are you positive that you can’t watch it with me?
Ryu: gomen.
Ruri: It’s alright, I guess I could go with Yurina and Minako. *sigh*
Ryu: I’m really, really sorry! I’ll promise to go out on a date with you later this weekend.
Ruri: *sigh* That’s what you always say.

Ruri walks away, looking down in disappointment.

Ryu rubs his head.

Ryu: Aye~ that’s why I don’t like relationships… =_=

Ryu turned around and walked to his classroom. When he reached his classroom, he put his head on his desk.

Mayu: Hah, girl trouble again? Ryu-chan?
Ryu: *lifts his head up partly* What do you want?
Mayu: Knew it! Did you say “no” to a date again?!
Ryu: Yes…
Mayu: *sigh* Why? Don’t you love your girlfriend?
Ryu: *blush* …
Mayu: Well, you better make it up to her, or she’ll dump you in no time. *thinking* wow, I am good at giving advice!
Ryu: How?
Mayu: Hm, I don’t know? What does she like?
Ryu: uhm…
Mayu: wow, you don’t even know what your girlfriend likes. =__= this is going to be harder than I thought.
Ryu: It’s not my fault! I’m too busy! I have no time!
Mayu: Time is something you make, so you SHOULD have time.
Ryu: hmph, are you here to give me advice? Or give me a lecture?
Mayu: Fine, fine. Text to her saying, “Meet me in the garden, so we can know more about each other.” Or something like that.
Ryu: Alright.


~~Later In The Garden~~
Ryu: Hi Asagata-san!
Ruri: =_=
Ryu: eh, what’s wrong?
Ruri: I always call you Ryu, but you always call me by my last name. I have a name you know!
Ryu: =__= what is it?
Ruri: GASP! Oh My GAWSH! You don’t even know my name?! We’ve know each other for how long?!
Ryu: Uh, *counts finger* ten years?
Ruri: Yea, and you never knew it?
Ryu: No? I never thought about it.
Ruri: =__= It’s Ruri.
Ryu: What?
Ruri: My first name is Ruri.
Ryu: Oh! I like your name!
Ruri: =__= Thanks.
Ryu: Well, I texted you so we can know more about each other.
Ruri: There’s no need, cuz I already know all about you.
Ryu: O__O YOU DO?!
Ruri: Yeah…
Ryu: *thinks* Oh shiz..
Ruri: *sighs* But, you don’t know anything about me. *cries*
Ryu: Uhh…*thinks* oh crap -_-
Ruri: *crying*
Ryu: *pats Ruri* I’m sorry… please don’t cry
Ruri: Why would you care?! T__T
Ryu: I DO care, because, I…I…I…L…L…*thinks* Dammit! Why can’t I say it?! I…I…LOVE YOU! *blushi*
Ruri: *stops crying* You, *sniff* do?
Ryu: Of course, if I didn’t I wouldn’t have gone out with you.
Ruri: Awwww! Your soo sweet! *hugs*
Ryu: *hugs back* So uhm, can you tell me your full introduction?
Ruri: Okay. *clears throat* My birthday is May 4th, my favorite color is red and it’s my lucky color. My favorite foods are peaches, and I don’t have any dislikes in foods. Hmm... I love shopping for accessories and stuffed animals but not for clothes. I think that’s all? Any questions?
Ryu: *wrote that all down* nope!
Ruri: okay then, well do you want to walk home together after club activities?
Ryu: sure!
Ruri: *smiles* Meet you at the gates then!
Ryu: Okay! *waves*

Ruri walks to where her club activies start.

Ryu: darn, what am I going to do?


~~After School~~
Ruri: Ryu~! Over here!
Ryu: Sorry, the soccer club had a little accident with one of the players.
Ruri: *shakes head* No, it’s okay. Let’s go.
Ryu: Okay.

Ruri and Ryu walk home together. From afar, Mayu watches.
Mayu: Such a good couple~~ *giggles*

Ryu walked Ruri up to her house.
Ruri: Bye bye! Ryu! See you on Monday!
Ryu: *waves* Bye Ruri!

As Ryu goes on his bicycle and rides home, his cellphone rings.

Ryu: Hello?
Voice: The show has begun. *click*
Ryu: Huh? Hello? Hello?!

Ryu had an uneasy feeling.


Ending Theme is Too Shy by Hey! Say! JUMP

~~END~~
What will happen next?
Who is the voice?
What did it mean by "The show has begun"?
find out in the next part!
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omg! *chills* mostly likely when i get goosebumps means i really like it hehe
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aww ryu and ruri are soo sweet!..Now i'm also wondering who's the voice from?...wah! can't wait again!...

when will u post the next part?
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hmm..maybe later? rofl i went out to dinner..eh..but i forgot what i was gonna write about..so.. haha thinking..but i'd probably write it by later this evening..or tomorow
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I edited some stuff on the first post.
so yea..
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wah!!
this is so cool!!
baka Ryu!!
hahaha!!
I love it!! ^-^
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wah!!
this is so cool!!
baka Ryu!!
hahaha!!
I love it!! ^-^


lol thnx
you'll be in the next part haha
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hsj9392 wrote:

wah!!
this is so cool!!
baka Ryu!!
hahaha!!
I love it!! ^-^


lol thnx
you'll be in the next part haha




YAY!!
I'm so excited!!
thanks!! ^-^
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

wah!!
this is so cool!!
baka Ryu!!
hahaha!!
I love it!! ^-^


lol thnx
you'll be in the next part haha




YAY!!
I'm so excited!!
thanks!! ^-^


haha~ your welcome~~! :]
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Ch. 1
Part Two

Ruri walks into the dining room.

Ruri: Dad! I’m home!
Dad: Ruri! Who’s that boy that was walking with you! I hope he’s not your boyfriend!
Ruri: Oh dad, it’s just a friend.
Dad: Ruri! Don’t lie to me!
Ruri: Fine! He’s my BOYFRIEND!!
Dad: WHAAAAT?! *falls back on his chair*
Ruri: Oh, don’t be so dramatic! Oh yea! I’m going to the movies with Yurina and Minako.
Dad: Ruri, your gonna leave your old pops all alone? With no dinner?
Ruri: geesh, you can make your own dinner, and if you can’t, I guess starve? Well, I got to go! Bye!

Ruri runs out the door.
Dad: Nooo~! *slumps in his chair*

Ruri rode the train to the 109 cinemas, and met with her friends.

Ruri: Hey guys! Sorry to invite you so sudden.
Minako: It’s okay! I had nothing to do this evening anyways.
Yurina: Yea, me too. How’s your dad Ruri? Is he doing good at his job?
Ruri: *sigh* You had to ask that question.
Yurina: huh?
Ruri: The other day, he came home crying because the criminal’s daughter yelled at him.
Minako: Hahahahahaha! Wow, your dad is sooo funny!
Yurina: Yea! *laughing*
Ruri: -_- I wish my dad was cooler, like Ryu!
Minako: Ha-ha-ha… that would never happen
Yurina: Yea, it would take about a hundred years!
Ruri: Well, lets stop talking about my dad and go watch the movie.
Yurina & Minako: Okay~!

They buy the tickets to watch “Akai Ito” and enter the 109 cinemas.

~At Ruri’s house~
Dad: *sneezes and rubs nose* I wonder if I caught a cold.

Ruri’s dad was making an omelet, but he forgot to turn the heat down, and when he came back into the kitchen, the egg was all black and burnt.

Dad: T__T RURI~!!!!!


~At the movie theater~
Ruri: *looks back* huh?
Yurina: What’s wrong?
Ruri: Oh, nothing. I thought I heard my dad calling my name. masaka ne...(That’s impossible)

While Ruri and her friends were at the movie theater, something bad was about to happen

Asuma: Ryu, can you think of a logical explanation to this murder case?
Ryu: hmm…*looking at the body* The suspect might be trying to tell us something.
Asuma: What do you mean?
Ryu: well, I got this call a few minutes ago saying “The show has just begun.” But I don’t get it. What show?
Asuma: You should be careful.

Someone walks in the room.

Kisaki: Asuma-san, is my husband here?
Asuma: oh, Eri-san, Mr. Asagata left a while ago.
Ryu: *thinks* Oh no! Ruri’s dad might of seen me walk her home…agh…
Kisaki: I see. *looks at Ryu* Who’s this young fellow?
Asuma: Oh, that’s Ryu.
Ryu: Good Evening Mrs. Asagata. My name is Ichimiya Ryu.
Kisaki: OMGosh! Ryu-chan?! Is that really you?
Ryu: yea?
Kisaki: Asuma-kun! This kid lives on my husband's block! My daughter used to play with him when she was young! You have grown to be a handsome young man!
Ryu: ano~, i'm going out with Ruri.
Kisaki: THAT'S WONDERFUL!
Ryu: o__O
Kisaki: Would you like to go out to dinner with us Sunday night?
Ryu: Uh…sure? *thinking* I guess this will make up for not going to the movies tonight.
Kisaki: Okay, I will tell Ruri to call you the time and place. Buh-Bye now!
Ryu: Bye…?
Asuma: Haha, your in a tough one.
Ryu: What do you mean?
Asuma: Eri-san goes out to dinner with Ruri-san and Mr. Asagata. And they always have a fight.
Ryu: *gulp* you mean, Mr. Asagata would be there?!
Asuma: Yea? Why?
Ryu: WHY DIDN’T YOU STOP ME?!
Asuma: eh?
Ryu: *holds head* Never mind -__-

Ryu’s phone rings again.

Ryu: Hello?
Voice: Hello again, Ichimiya-kun.
Ryu: *motions to Asuma to record the voice* What do you want now? And what did you mean by “The show has begun?”
Voice: That is for me to know, and for you to find out. *chuckles*
Ryu: That’s low.
Voice: Is that supposed to be a threat?
Ryu: No, but are you the suspect that killed that man last night?

Phone hangs up.

Ryu: Tch, he hung up on me.
Asuma: Well, I tracked the phone number, but it was from a public telephone booth.
Ryu: *slams his fist on the table and thinks* ow…
Asuma: Well, it’s getting late, you should go home.
Ryu: Alright.

Ryu takes his bag (like the one in tantei gakuen q) and walks out the door of the police station.
As he was walking to his house, he had many thoughts flashing through his head.

~~Next Morning~~
Ring, Ring!!
Ryu: Ugh…who’s calling at this hour? *picks up phone* hello?

Ryu sits up.
Ryu: Asuma-san got shot?!

Ryu ran to the hospital where Asuma was in.

Ryu: What happened?
Asuma: heh, I was jogging in the park this morning. And someone shot my stomach. It’s just a minor injury.
Ryu: *sigh of relief* Who would do such a thing?
Asuma: Who else?
Ryu: hmm. Could you see who did it?
Asuma: Nope.
Doctor: Mr. Asuma will have to rest now, please go home.
Ryu: Yes’sir, Asuma-san please get well.
Doctor: He will be able to go back tomorrow, but he will have to take it easy, or his injury will open.
Ryu: Okay.

Ryu leaves Asuma’s room and talks to the police officer that went to the place where the crime took place to find any clues.
Ryu: Any clues?
Police Officer: All we could find, was a dagger in the bushes, a few feet from where Asuma-sempai was shot. *shows him the picture*
Ryu: I see. *thinks* I’ve seen this somewhere.
Police Officer: What do you think?
Ryu: I don’t know, yet.
Police Officer: Alright, but the others and I will keep a close eye.
Ryu: Be careful.

Ryu walks away.

~~END~~
What did the dagger mean?
What will happen next?
find out in the next part~~ haha
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btw.. i don't think there is such a movie called "Akai Ito" xD
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